128. Pupils
Eyes, long, and cold. Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info
These are all very common words, but it is not so easy to write about them when you want to draw something out of them and then compose an article.
To write an explanatory article, you must not only have a good intention, but also be exquisitely crafted.
And writing prose, for high school students at this stage, is most likely to cause the form to be scattered and the spirit to be scattered, and to run away without bounds.
As for the novel, although it is a relatively low threshold, it is not so simple to write and difficult to write.
Ten minutes of thinking time, everyone is thinking carefully, they have all come to this point, naturally they want to make a difference, and no one will feel that anyone is higher than themselves - except for Song Anran, besides, there is more than one place for the first and second prizes, and there are many seats to compete for.
Some people are biting the tip of the pen, some are staring deeply, some are unconsciously turning the pen, while Ning Xue and Ning Yue are supporting their cheeks with their right hands, closing their eyes, and beginning to recall suitable articles.
Write novels.
There is no doubt about it.
They still remember that Ning Xue also has an opponent called Ye Han this time, and that guy is said to be good at novels, this is to get a good ranking, and at the same time surpass Ning Xue, he will definitely not rashly challenge other genres.
So which word to start with?
When it comes to eye-related novels, a little bit of thought is like a fluorescence in the night, Ning Xue and Ning Yue suddenly remembered a novel they had read on the Internet - in fact, it was also published in a magazine, the previous life of the domestic science fiction representative Da Liu's early work "Bring Her Eyes", the eyes here are just a metaphor, in fact, they refer to sensing glasses, which can share the wearer's sense of sight, touch and taste.
Around the eyes, it shows a story that is soothing at first glance, but the twist at the end makes people unable to calm down for a long time.
With a length of more than 8,000 words, at Ning Xue's current writing speed, excluding an hour and a half of rest, it is no problem to write in six and a half hours, after all, she doesn't need to think too much.
Thinking of short science fiction novels, Ning Xue and Ning Yue's thoughts suddenly became active.
It's long, it's cold, and a lot of science fiction can have something to do with it.
Many of Liu Gongzi's novels are related to time, among which Ning Xue and Ning Yue read the "Flashing Life", and the sentence at the end of "Is a hundred years really long?" is endlessly evocative.
Liu Yang, who hesitated and didn't dare to confess, Lei Bing, who was smart in Bingxue, and Liu Yang, a replicant who only had half an hour to live but was willing to love Lei Bing with his life, were only limited to the stories of three people, but they were so evocative.
It is a pity for Ning Xue and Ning Yue that Liu Gongzi's works have an indissoluble bond with time, but in the end, he failed to get the tolerance of time and failed to leave more wonderful works.
The "Father's Resurrection" by the American writer David Morel can be related to the long and cold, after all, it uses cryonics technology as a chain to connect the context. The father who was frozen because he had a strange disease and waited for the treatment technology to appear, the mother who finally gave up his father because of the long wait, the protagonist Amway, who had always wanted to cure his father and finally succeeded, when his father successfully woke up, his father, who was still in his thirties, met Amway, who was actually in his sixties, and the contradiction finally appeared, and a series of stories, when the sentence "God, he didn't give up on me, and I won't give up on him" appeared, it ended in a touching way with a big tide.
There are many similarities between the three novels, they are all science fiction, and they are all warm and touching stories, and the final plot is tear-jerking and lingering.
There are also differences, "Bring Her Eyes" buries the source of doubts at the beginning, making people constantly guess "her" identity, this mysterious way of dealing with it, makes people choke for a while at the moment the puzzle is revealed.
In the early stage of "Flashing Life", Liu Yang's feelings for Lei Bing have been Liu Yang's hesitant character, until Liu Yang accidentally copied a self with only half an hour of life, and the plot suddenly entered a climax and ushered in a torrent-like outburst.
And "The Resurrection of the Father", from the beginning it seems to be a somewhat depressing plot, small contradictions and small conflicts are constant, I thought that Amway worked hard to cure his father, and the plot would be a warm and successful ending, but a son who should be older than his father, this setting makes the contradiction more acute, and the sad atmosphere of worrying is getting stronger and stronger. Until the end, the peaks turn around, and the warmth flows through the eyes like tap water.
There are also differences in language style between the three novels, but this problem has no effect on Ning Xue and Ning Yue.
This is a multiple-choice question, if you can, Ning Xue and Ning Yue hope to be able to write them out. Now I can only choose two of them, and the remaining one can be submitted again.
After much deliberation, they finally chose "Bring Her Eyes" and "Flashing Life", because they are pure enough, they are not intense, very gentle, but still make people feel emotional.
They still remember the plot very clearly, but it is impossible to write down all the words, so they can only spend 20 contribution points in the system to redeem it.
"It's half-past nine, and now everyone can get started. ”
The words of the reminder fell, and Ning Xue and Ning Yue began to write at the same time, writing the words "bring her eyes" and "shining life" in small and delicate fonts on the first line of the manuscript paper.
The tip of the pen rustles on the smooth paper, and then the Chinese characters composed of black lines form a beautiful story.
There weren't many people in the room who started writing when they heard the reminder, and only a few of them had ten minutes to think about it for most people. And Ning Xue and Ning Yue are particularly eye-catching among the people who write.
Something like that has happened before, in fact, even if it is prosaic, they have always been the focus of peeking.
For most people, such a petite Ning Xue and Ning Yue should not actually skip the level to participate in the competition.
Song Anran fiddled with the pen in his hand in distress, and some scattered and condensed thoughts kept swirling in his head, but he could never find a suitable entry point.
She looked to the side, and found that Ning Xue and Ning Yue had already begun to write, it was really worthy of Ning Xue and Ning Yue, they were really powerful, and they could complete the idea in just ten minutes.
She didn't think that Ning Xue and Ning Yue would be because they had no ideas, so they wrote something perfunctory and casually. After seeing it several times, she was very puzzled about how many bizarre stories were in that little head.
I'm going to do it too!
Song Anran clenched his fists and refocused his attention on the manuscript paper.
"Colors in the pupils. ”
Just write this!
You don't need to deliberately cater to other people's ideas, it is enough to write what you want to write most at the moment.
That kind of heartfelt expression of emotions is more relaxed, natural, and wonderful than what is pretentiously written.
In the beginning, the pupils are gray.
At the beginning of the 15th year, at the beginning of the second semester of the second year of high school, the atmosphere has begun to become tense.
On the first day back from home, she quickly got into the state of learning.
Even during the New Year, the family is as deserted as ever, work, work, endless work, and at the end of the year, parents spend very little time at home.
Compared with the deserted home, Song Anran prefers to study quietly in the school and in the bustling crowd, which will make her feel that her blood is still flowing vividly. Instead of sitting in an empty room and letting the heart and blood gradually clot.
On this day's morning self-study, the head teacher Zhang Baiping suddenly walked in and said that there were two transfer students joining the class this semester, and then brought in Ning Xue and Ning Yue, who were standing at the door, and after briefly introducing themselves, let the two of them sit at the back of the classroom first.
Song Anran still remembered the commotion caused by Ning Xue and Ning Yue in the classroom when they first walked in, which was much more exaggerated than the boy just now.
It's just that Ning Xue and Ning Yue didn't react to this at that time, and accepted Zhang Baiping's arrangement Mu Ran, and sat on the seat and ignored the greetings of others, as if everything was treated as air.
Like two small moving Xiaoice blocks!
The gray eyes make people worry about it.
At first, Song Anran remembered that he just glanced at it and then devoted himself to studying.
It's really stupid, if it weren't for Teacher Zhang Baiping suddenly asking her to guide the study of Ning Xue and Ning Yue a few days later, maybe she would have passed by them, and the last memory left was just a few small conversations, and the figure on the graduation photo.
It was with learning as an opportunity that they connected for the first time.
Song Anran really thinks that it's good to study!
Then the pupils rippled, a deep dark blue.
Throughout the second semester of the second semester of high school, the school was very dull, and nothing worthy of special mention happened, but such a blandness, Yu Song Anran said, was the process of her slowly establishing a friendship with Ning Xue and Ning Yue.
The arrival of Ning Xue and Ning Yue caused some small commotion, but due to their indifferent and "unkind" attitude, the heat cooled down like this.
Lori is good, but it's also very uncomfortable to stay around Lori, an ice cube.
Ning Xue and Ning Yue's academic performance is really bad, this is the conclusion that Song Anran came to after contact. Some seemingly simple algebra problems also took them a long time, each time with their hands on their cheeks, on the table, and carefully watching her explain the steps on the manuscript paper with wide eyes.
Day by day.
It's just that as time goes by, the color gradually begins to appear in those two pairs of gray pupils, and Ning Xue and Ning Yue also seem to have come out of their untold predicament.
Ning Yue's health didn't seem to be very good, she took three days off during this period, and Ning Xue would go back to take care of her, the longest time was to take a week off, looking at the empty seat.
Song Anran felt melancholy for the first time at school because of her classmates, and at first she thought it was because the familiar routine was disrupted and caused by the sequelae, but it didn't seem to be the case.
Every morning after arriving at the classroom, I have to take a look at the seats of Ning Xue and Ning Yue, which are still empty.
Well, at that time, although they were not good at studying, they worked hard, and they were the first few people to come to the classroom every day.
The situation at home remains the same, but there is no longer so much free time, to help Ning Xue and Ning Yue study, she will also spend a lot of time reading books, which is the kind of book she read lying on the bed when Ning Yue came to visit the last time.
Then, as the aura spread, the gray color was completely dispelled out of the pupils.
After the summer vacation, a rare one-and-a-half-month vacation was ushered in. After urging Ning Xue and Ning Yue to study hard, they haven't been in touch for a long time.
Because they don't have mobile phones, she doesn't even know where Ning Xue and Ning Yue live.
At what time, around the end of July and the beginning of August, the snow and the moon completed a metamorphosis.
When Ning Yue came to visit the patient, Song Anran couldn't say anything about her happiness.
When they got along in the room, the little frost that was still left on their bodies was finally dispelled, as if they had finally returned to their true nature after unloading a heavy burden.
Clever and a little cunning.
At this time, she realized that Ning Xue and Ning Yue's heads contained countless whimsical ideas, and the stories taken out of the list were so wonderful and unique.
It's very warm, and when I see their cute appearance, I can't help but want to go up and pinch my cheeks.
Until recently, I suddenly discovered that they can not only write stories, but also use their singing to interpret a new world.
After the little depression, Song Anran couldn't suppress his exclamation, how many secrets are still worth digging in their bodies.
Like a burning lamp, it attracted her to lean over step by step.
Finally, it was now, she followed the footsteps of Ning Xue and Ning Yue, and crossed the great mountains and rivers to come here to Haicheng, thousands of miles away.
Sitting in such a historic house in the drizzle, swaying pen and ink.
I want to get closer to them.
The eyes are the windows of the soul, and the change of color is also a testimony of her getting along with Ning Xue and Ning Yue.
Scenes flashed in his mind, and Song Anran felt that he was writing like a god at the moment, and the speed of writing could not keep up with the thinking speed of his brain at all.
It's as easy as it comes naturally.
When she met Kavin, she would observe the movements of Ning Xue and Ning Yue, and found that suddenly there were countless paths standing in front of her, at her disposal.
Ning Xue and Ning Yue, who were quietly writing novels, had no idea that someone would observe them from time to time.
It's just that it's moving forward steadily according to its own layout.
"Flashing Life" is 2,000 words less than "Bring Her Eyes", but its writing is a bit special, which makes Ning Yue feel that it does not fit her style, and she still needs time to carve it.
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[I went to pick up the courier, so the update was late, sorry.] 4000 word chapters, in fact, I'm just here to recommend novel drops, all of them are very good (really). Tomorrow at 12 noon on the shelves, children's shoes, I am very optimistic about you. Today I turned to the end of the next chapter and said,The novel that appeared in chapter 30,Someone finally found out where it came from.。。。 Hey, the foreshadowing was discovered, hey]