178, then you come to hit me [the third more to ask for subscription]

Even in different time and space, Ning Xue and Ning Yue hope that "Dream Eater" can be the same as in their previous lives, break a path with a dignified body, and finally animate. Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info

In order to affirm the value of the classics themselves, it is also the same thing that the highest in manga has always pursued.

With the fighting spirit that was temporarily burning in their hearts, Ning Xue and Ning Yue decided to continue to see what Ye Jingshu said.

Take advantage of this time to do more, otherwise I don't know when they will enter the salted fish state again.

Ye Jingshu said something related to the novel, she has successfully written the first three chapters of "Ten Thousand Worlds Shuttle", a total of more than 8,000 words, this extraordinary efficiency makes Ning Xue and Ning Yue wonder if she will write a bunch of running accounts.

After patiently reading these three chapters, Ning Xue and Ning Yue's eyebrows couldn't help but raise.

It's not that I'm dissatisfied with this, but I think it's unexpectedly good.

The first world that the protagonist crosses is the world of a popular Gaowu fantasy novel, and he travels to the world of online novels, which is one of the selling points of "Shuttle through the Worlds", so it has to be pointed out from the beginning.

As for the single-player unlimited stream, this has to be slowly reflected in the plot.

Of course, both of these points must be pointed out in the introduction of the novel.

Ning Xue and Ning Yue are not professionals, they wrote novels in their previous lives, but they didn't make it to the end of the book, and their insights are a little bit, judging from their opinions.

Ye Jingshu's writing is actually very good, she followed the principle of what she said, and wrote out the identity of the protagonist, the golden finger, and the future direction of the plot in the first three chapters.

This is a very amazing thing, although Ning Xue and Ning Yue shared a lot of experience with her, but Ye Jingshu is just a novice after all, I don't know how many times she has revised it, but she was able to reach this level when she wrote a book for the first time, and when she wrote more, Ning Xue and Ning Yue could already foresee what Ye Jingshu would look like when she became an old Si Ji.

Attractive ideas Ye Jingshu wrote, but the only thing that made people unhappy was that it seemed a little verbose.

Hawkers,Girl author.。

It's a pity that this is not a light novel, and for fast-paced fantasy novels, verbose can greatly affect the reading experience.

"Everything else is good, but the wording seems a bit verbose, and it is best to reduce 8,000 words to about 6,500 words. Ning Xue replied directly.

It didn't take long for Ye Jingshu to reply "okay", and then dived.

"Phew, it looks like everything is going in a good direction. ”

Ning Xue and Ning Yue are very satisfied, as for themselves, they haven't released new songs for a while, more than 20 days is not a long time, and they have only come back from Haicheng, so continue to be lazy for a while.

With such thoughts, Ning Xue and Ning Yue received invitations from "Time" and "Literature and Art" again in the afternoon, this time Ning Yue clearly rejected them, after all, she still wants to use the identity of "warmth" to heal the world, and it will cost a lot of brain cells to use an extra pen name, so let Ning Xue continue to manage the pen name "Gu Yu" well.

"I'd like to think again. Ning Xue replied.

Hearing that Ning Yue clearly refused, but Ning Xue was still thinking about it, "Time" and "Literature and Art" magazines knew that she really wanted to think about it, so they didn't continue to bother, and they were also worried that asking too many questions would make Ning Xue disgusted.

On the other hand, during this time, Wu Ke has officially signed a two-year long-term contract with Time magazine, and will officially start long-form serialization in the second half of October, and the preliminary publicity work has slowly begun.

……

After dinner, Ning Yue was swiping her phone idlely, and a new message suddenly popped up on QQ.

"Warm old thief! Bloody knife .jpg"

"Ha, who is this person?"

Ning Yue didn't react for a while, and the people who would call her warm old thief were all those readers who loved and hated "Lingzhu", when did she expose herself and be approached by them?

Ning Yue looked confused, and was about to click on the message when a glimmer of light suddenly flashed in her mind.

I'm going to call them that, and there's one more person besides those readers.

Isn't that her editor-in-charge of "Let's Listen" magazine, Moonlight Sea?

"Da-"

poked his finger and entered QQ, and found that the person who sent the message was indeed the comic editor who claimed that the president of the magazine was her father and the editor-in-chief was her uncle.

"I was really prescient. Ning Yue never hesitated to praise herself.

In addition to the first conversation, Yueguanghai also called her a warm teacher with resentment, and then the occasional small exchange, which was a joke compared to the editor's "warm old thief".

So Ning Yue has already listed her as the number one fan who was poisoned by "Spirit Bead".

[Warmth]: What are you doing, are you trying to fight with me?

[Moonlight Sea]: Let's not mention the fight, I'm a civilized person, why don't you submit two issues in a row, old thief?

[Warmth]: Huh?

[Moonlight Sea]: I'm talking about submissions, old thief!

[Warmth]: I've been busy lately, so I don't have time.

For the title of old thief, Ning Yue has gradually become a little used to it.

[Moonlight Sea]: Haven't you been on vacation recently, hurry up and write a novel and submit it.

[Warmth]: Ha? Are you kidding me? I'm not light, I've said it all, I'm no!

This kind of more casual words The two of them have already used it handy, in short, they hurt each other, Yueguanghai is tired of this, and Ning Yue is rare to find a good opponent who can hold no guilt, so naturally she does her best.

[Moonlight Sea]: Bleeding knife .jpg.

[Warmth]: Wow, you're threatening me! It's amazing that an editor like you hasn't gone out of business!

[Moonlight Sea]: Submit quickly

[Warmth]: I'm not free, I'm busy. also said that you were abused by "Lingzhu"!

[Moonlight Sea]: Don't talk nonsense, just say whether you write or not.

[Warmth]: I won't write, or you will beat me.jpg!

[Moonlight Sea]: Okay! This is your request, old thief.

[Warmth]: Wow, you're really coming, I'm so scared.

[Moonlight Sea]: On behalf of thousands of readers.jpg, I want to punish you with justice!

[Warmth]: Well, I'll wait for nothing, hahaha. Roll .jpg

[Moonlight Sea]: Angry little yellow face .jpg

[Warm]: Despise .jpg

After posting her expression, Ning Yue found that Moonlight Sea did not continue to reply for several minutes, and couldn't help but feel proud, and in this short exchange of words, she won the victory without surprise.

Young man, you're still far from fighting with me.

So she continued to play with her phone.

After a while......

"Knock knock!"

Suddenly there was a knock on the door.

"Hey, who's it?" Ning Yue was stunned for a moment, stood up and shouted suspiciously.

"I'm delivering a courier, please come out and sign for it. A female voice came from outside the door.

"Express, huh?" Ning Yue walked to the door and looked at the cat's eye, and sure enough, she found a girl standing outside the door, holding a package in her hand.