A dimly lit room filled with smoke and only a computer that shimmered. Pen × fun × Pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 ｉｎｆｏ

Zhang Dongjun is twenty-four years old this year, just one year after graduating from university, and now works as a salesman in the sales department of a real estate company.

The first thing he does after work every day is to open the computer and log in to the starting point network, as a ten-year-old bookworm, he feels that reading books is more important than eating.

As the saying goes, books are food for the soul, and there is no food in the reading world.

"MD, what kind of bullshit is written, the protagonist is dead in the fifth chapter, are you going to go in and be the protagonist? Your brain is too big!" Zhang Dongjun is a senior poisonous tongue, his hands are constantly tapping on the keyboard.

"Click!" a thunderclap exploded in the air outside.

After the thunder, the computer screen went black instantly, and the room was pitch black because the lights were not turned on. Zhang Dongjun took the mobile phone on the side and wanted to turn on the light by its bright light, but the mobile phone did not respond after pressing it for a long time.

"The Celestial Origin Network is linking, and the account is being bound......" A slight voice came from the speaker.

"Won't labor and management just comment, don't you need to be struck by lightning! My 3,000-yuan computer, my 2,000-yuan mobile phone!" Zhang Dongjun hugged the computer and cried with snot and tears, and he didn't hear the sound from the stereo at all.

A minute later, the computer screen slowly lit up, the phone lit up, and everything was back to normal, as if nothing had happened. The screen is still stuck on the page where you commented.

Zhang Dongjun saw that the computer and mobile phone were safe and sound, so he put his mind at ease and continued to browse the starting point network, the great god's book had already been read, and he was idle and bored, looking for good books one by one. When he clicked on the second dimension, he had a confused expression on his face.

"When did you set up the Immortal Channel?" Zhang Dongjun rubbed his eyes and said in disbelief.

With doubts, Zhang Dongjun clicked in, the fairy channel is different from other channels, and there are three sub-channels in it. There are celestial realm cultivators, celestial daily life, and celestial romance.

Zhang Dongjun felt very novel, so he ordered a novel that was ranked in the recommended position. is called "Marriage Record", the author's name is Yue Lao, click 50412, recommended votes: 1524, word count 12645.

Zhang Dongjun looked at the data of this book and clicked to read, and when he read the first three chapters, he couldn't help but retreat, and the webpage was pulled to the book review area to turn on the poisonous tongue mode.

"Author, I have something to say. Your writing really can't be described in words, this book is about the protagonist helping others get married. Is it interesting for you to write hundreds of characters in a chapter? What about a good plot? What about a good scene description?"

After commenting, Zhang Dongjun lit a cigarette to suppress the shock, this novel was too scary to write, and he was dazzled by thousands of names in the first three chapters.

Soon after commenting, the author replied to Zhang Dongjun: "What Daoyou said is very insightful, Xiaoxian will revise it." Can you appreciate your face and collect this book?" After speaking, he also rewarded Zhang Dongjun.

Zhang Dongjun saw that there was a reward, and he felt that the author's character was not bad, but after looking at the reward, he was instantly stunned.

The pop-up window on the webpage popped up: "Reward from Yue Lao: Charm Sachet." Function: Increase your own charm value, duration 24 hours, whether to claim it or not. ”

Zhang Dongjun did not hesitate to order it directly, the white light flashed, and a pink sachet appeared on the computer desk, and a fragrance came to his nose.

"The starting point network is so powerful now, it's high-tech!" Zhang Dongjun looked at the sachet on the table with a surprised expression.

But then I thought about it and thought it was incredible, and the news didn't say anything about the starting point.

"Is it really a book written by Yue Lao? The starting point network has really opened to the sky?" Zhang Dongjun became more and more excited the more he thought about it, and quickly picked up his mobile phone to call his best friend.

A few seconds later, the phone was connected.

"Hey, Brother Li! The starting point network is open to the sky, you can quickly turn on the computer and take a look." Zhang Dongjun said excitedly.

Brother Li on the phone is named Li Wei, Zhang Dongjun's friend for many years, and the two grew up wearing almost the same pants when they were children.

"Drove to the sky?" Li Wei obviously didn't quite believe what Zhang Dongjun said.

Zhang Dongjun saw that Li Wei didn't believe him and hurriedly said, "It's really going to the sky." Let's see if there's a fairy channel behind the second dimension."

"Xiaojun, your illness is incurable, prepare for the future! Dudu ......" The sound of hanging up came from the mobile phone.

"Your uncle, what I said is true!" Zhang Dongjun cursed when he saw that Li Wei didn't believe him.

Zhang Dongjun picked up the sachet on the table and looked at it, thinking about how to test it.

"Knock knock!" Just as Zhang Dongjun was in his trance, there was a rapid knock on the door.

"Xiao Zhang is not there?" said the voice of the landlord Li Aili from outside the door.

Zhang Dongjun put on a shirt and opened the door, and before he could speak, Li Aili pointed to Zhang Dongjun's nose and said: "Xiao Zhang, your rent has been in arrears for half a month, let me get out of here if I don't pay today!." ”

"Sister Li, what did you say last sentence?" Zhang Dongjun covered his ears to resist the landlord's lion roar.

"Your rent has been in arrears for half a month, and your ears have not been good lately?" Li Aili said suspiciously.

"It's not this sentence, the last sentence!"

"Xiao Zhang is not here. ”

"He's not here!" Zhang Dongjun was about to close the door after speaking, Li Aili quickly pressed against the door, and half of her body entered Zhang Dongjun's room.

"Boy, play this trick with your sister, hurry up and get the money!" Li Aili put her hand in front of Zhang Dongjun and said.

Zhang Dongjun is a real estate salesman, and last month the industry was in a recession, and he didn't sell a single house, and his basic salary was only enough to eat himself, and he didn't have money to pay the rent at all.

"Sister Li, are you okay with your little brother for a few days, I'm poor now, and I eat one meal a day. Zhang Dongjun said pleadingly.

Li Aili shook her head and said, "No, if you don't pay the rent today, I'll cut off your water and electricity...... What is so fragrant in your house?"

Zhang Dongjun walked to the computer desk and picked up the sachet and said, "Sister Li is this sachet!"

Li Aili gave Zhang Dongjun a roll of the eyes: "It's not ashamed that a big man still uses such a girl's thing." ”

Zhang Dongjun was a little embarrassed by what Li Aili said, scratched his head and said, "Sister Li, the younger brother will be paid his salary in five days, and you are accommodating." ”

Li Aili was determined to let Zhang Dongjun pay the money, and if she didn't pay, she would let him go. But somehow she changed her mind again, and she even felt that Xiao Zhang was still a little pitiful and wanted to pity him.

"Well, since you've begged me so, it's too unkind if I'm driving you away, so I'll give you five days. Li Aili finally relented.

Seeing that the landlord agreed, Zhang Dongjun hurriedly nodded and said, "Thank you, Sister Li, I can't repay your great kindness, I can only promise it by myself." ”

"Cut, I can still think about it if you post it upside down. After Li Aili finished speaking, she turned around and left, walked a few steps and turned back.

Zhang Dongjun was shocked into a cold sweat when he saw Li Aili coming back again, thinking that she had changed her attention.

"Don't eat one meal a day, if you don't have money to eat, come to my sister's place to eat, young people's bodies are important!" Li Aili glanced at Zhang Dongjun's crotch after speaking.

Although Li Aili is in her thirties, she still has charm, and she is dressed like a girl in her twenties. Zhang Dongjun saw Li Aili staring at him and hurriedly covered it.

"Thank you, Sister Li!" Zhang Dongjun said with a red face.

Li Aili didn't say anything more and turned to leave. Zhang Dongjun closed the door of the room, and the mobile phone on the computer desk rang.

When I picked up my phone and looked at it, Erlang God's "The Days I Live with the Roaring Sky Dog" sent a red envelope for a recommendation ticket!

"Red envelope? Or is it sent by Erlang God?" Zhang Dongjun looked at the red envelope on his mobile phone and hurriedly clicked on it, if there is a red envelope, it is a fool not to grab it, no matter who sent it.

The red envelope on the screen opened, and a prompt said: "Congratulations to Brother Jun for grabbing the dog food specially made by the God of Food for the Roaring Sky Dog, the function is unknown, whether to receive it." ”

"Dog food, what do I want that thing for?" Zhang Dongjun directly ordered no. The screen prompted again: "The dog food of the Howling Sky Dog has been stored in the Qiankun bag, and you can enter the Qiankun bag at any time to receive it." ”

"Bang! oops, it hurts!" Zhang Dongjun felt that he was dreaming, and a big mouth hit him in the face.

"There are really immortals in the world, and they are still writing books on the starting point network. Oh my God! Then why did Li Wei say that there was no fairy channel? Could I be the only one who could see it? Yes, it must have been the thunder that just struck. Zhang Dongjun said to himself that his worldview has been completely subverted.

As a moral and cultivated person, Zhang Dongjun will read the author's book whenever he grabs a red envelope.

"The Days I Live with the Roaring Dogs" author Erlang Shen, click 184210, 4120 recommended votes, 84123 words.

Zhang Dongjun saw that Erlang God's data was much higher than Yue Lao's book, and hurriedly clicked on it to read.

Zhang Dongjun read this book for a long time, shook his head while reading it, and couldn't help but sigh: "These immortals must have stayed in the sky for a long time, and the novels they wrote are not new at all." ”

Pull the webpage to the comment area Zhang Dongjun turned on the poisonous tongue mode again, no matter who wrote the book, even if the Jade Emperor wrote the book, he still had to comment, this is the cultivation that a poisonous tongue should have.

"Zhenjun, the book you wrote is very boring, I have read more than ten chapters, and as a senior poisonous tongue, I have read more than ten chapters. Writing a book is all about attracting the reader's attention, what do you write? Take a walk in the heavenly realm with the roaring dog in the morning, take the roaring dog to inspect the Nantianmen at noon, and sleep with the roaring dog at night, we are watching the plot!" Zhang Dongjun didn't want to comment when he wrote this, because he didn't know what to say.

Just a few seconds after replying, someone commented on the back.

Yue Lao: "Brother Jun's comments are very unique, and the inferior works under have been modified, I don't know if you can appreciate your face and comment." ”

Tianbing Jia: "You dare to comment on Zhenjun's book like this, I don't know which immortal Brother Jun is, I admire it below." ”

King Tota: "Brother Jun, Xiao'er also wrote a book, I don't know if I'm free, if I'm free, please comment, Xiao'er's bad work "Dragon Slayer"

Shunfeng Er: "Li Tianwang, I seriously suspect that you are advertising, I am the deputy moderator of the book review area, I want to ban you, I don't know if you have an opinion? But you can't speak if you have an opinion, because I have banned it!haha~"

Erlang God: "What Daoyou said is, I don't know how to revise the book under Youyou?"

Zhang Dongjun saw that Erlang God replied to himself, and kept tapping on the keyboard with both hands: "Zhenjun, in fact, the plot is very simple, you can write that the Roaring Sky Dog is molesting the pet of a certain immortal, and the fairy comes to take revenge, and fights with the immortal in the photo, so that the plot will not come out." ”

Erlang God immediately replied: "Xianyou, I have the inspiration to change the book first, and next time I invite Xianyou to drink." ”

"Why is this Erlang God so picky, he doesn't even have a reward, and he sends a red envelope or a bag of dog food. Zhang Dongjun thought that Erlang God would have to reward himself a little no matter what he said, but he never expected to flash people directly.

Zhang Dongjun saw that the time was not early, closed the computer, cooked a bowl of instant noodles, and after eating, he went to take a shower and lay on the bed to prepare for sleep.

"Ding Dong" mobile phone emitted another prompt tone.

Taishang Laojun's "Alchemy Master" issued a monthly pass red envelope.

Zhang Dongjun hurriedly opened the red envelope sent by Taishang Laojun, but unfortunately the red envelope was snatched up.

"It's out so quickly, this is a monthly pass red envelope!" Zhang Dongjun checked who received the red envelope.

The ones who grabbed the red envelopes were Tota Heavenly King, God of Wealth, Chang'e, Wu Gang, and Queen Mother. Lao Jun was very interesting, and directly stuffed the red envelope with Eight Treasures Rain and Dew Pills.

Zhang Dongjun felt a burst of regret, put his phone aside, and fell asleep groggy.

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