Chapter 114, please ask the script!
Early the next morning, Jiang Lun rushed to Wang Kai's house.
As soon as the door opened, Jin Chanjuan saw that it was him, and immediately said in surprise, "Xiao Jiang, why are you here? Come in, come in!"
"Professor Jin!" As soon as Jiang Lun entered the door, he put the fruit in his hand on the table, "I'll come to see you, and by the way, I'll find Professor Wang for some things!"
"You!" Jin Chanjuan saw through Jiang Lun's thoughts at a glance, "Are you looking for him, come and see me by the way?"
"Hehe......" Jiang Lun scratched his head in embarrassment.
At this time, Wang Kai's voice came from the back room, "Who?"
"It's Xiao Jiang!" Jin Chanjuan said, and said to Jiang Lun again, "You go in!"
"Hey, that's okay!" Jiang Lun nodded.
Entering Wang Kai's study, he was holding a brush and practicing calligraphy on the table.
The wave was like a dragon and snake dancing, and the power of the words penetrated the back of the paper, so that Jiang Lun couldn't help but clap his hands and praise, "Good words!"
"Hehe......"
After Wang Kai finished writing the last sentence, he put down the brush and pulled Jiang Lun, "Come on, let's see how I write?"
"It's well written!" Jiang Lun said, "The dragon flies and the phoenix dances, and the pen is strong, this must be the foundation that has been practiced since childhood, right?"
"Haha, how can there be!" Wang Kai waved his hand, very proud, "I only started practicing calligraphy when I was forty years old, and I have been practicing calligraphy for fifteen years, which is an amateur!"
"You're still an amateur, huh?"
Jiang Lun was about to say something nice, but Wang Kai interrupted him with a wave of his hand, "Okay, don't be a sycophant, come to me so early today, say something!"
"Hey, hey!"
Jiang Lun said, "I'm here to ask you how to write a script!"
"Oh, you're going to learn now?"
Wang Kai was a little surprised, but he was happy, "Sit down, sit down and talk!"
The two sat down at his desk, and Wang Kai picked up a folding fan. While shaking, he said: "Script writing is not an overnight effort, and there is no quick thing in this world, especially in the creation of this part, from a literary story to a literary script." Deriving a storyboard script and completing a script is a very tedious creative process. ”
As he spoke, he took out some pieces of paper from the drawer and began to write and draw on them.
"What is a literary screenplay?"
Wang Kai wrote as he spoke: "Unlike literary works, thought verbs cannot appear in the script, what are thought verbs, such as: think, know, understand. Be aware, believe, want, remember, imagine, desire, etc., especially the words love and hate, when used as verbs of thought. It must not be used to transform into a description of sensory details, and the five ways of describing sensory details. There is no shortcut to writing a script, and it is necessary to describe them separately from these five points to create a sense of the camera!"
"Oh!" Jiang Lun nodded, "It means that a literary story can be summed up in one sentence, but not in a script." To describe it in three dimensions, in the language of the lens!"
"That's right!" Wang Kai smiled, "You're quite open-minded, so let's give you a question." You're repeated!"
After speaking, Wang Kai picked up the pen and wrote a sentence on the paper: Xiao Ming hates the teacher very much, and tells him to get out of class every time!
Then he handed the paper to Jiang Lun, "That's it, it's easier to practice first!"
Jiang Lun took the paper, grabbed the pen and thought about it, and wrote: "After the class bell rang, the teacher walked into the classroom, Xiao Ming stared at him, and before he could open his mouth to let him out, he whispered 'stupid-hanging'. ”
"Hahaha......"
Seeing what Jiang Lun wrote, Wang Kai couldn't help but laugh and asked, "Your resentment towards the teacher is so big?"
"Uh...... Didn't you ask us to rewrite it?" Jiang Lun scratched his head.
"It's good, the nasty feeling is written, and the cause of the incident is also explained!"
Wang Kai next arranged a few more exercises, this morning, Jiang Lun gained a lot, but to use it thoroughly, it still takes time to master.
After lunch, Jiang Lun took the opportunity to take out the script he had prepared and handed it to Wang Kai for review.
The drama he chose to be filmed is called "Wulin Gaiden".
The reason why I chose this drama is from several aspects.
The first is the small cost, this kind of typical sitcom, whether it is the scene or the service, the cost is very low.
The second is a good reputation, according to the score of Douban in another world, this "Wulin Gaiden" is a rare high-scoring work, a low-cost Chinese drama classic with a score of 9.1.
Finally, the environmental conditions, in a different world, the success of this drama has a lot to do with the germination of the Internet at that time, and netizens are trying to find a breakthrough in the novelty of the Internet.
In this world, although the Internet has been developing for several years, it has been in a state of chaos, coupled with the government's vigorous crackdown on online cultural infringement and other reasons in recent years, resulting in the Internet is in a downturn, many people do not know what to watch on the Internet, except for chatting and farting on social platforms, playing online games, in the entertainment industry, spiritual culture is lacking.
To give a very simple analogy, in another world, QQ Music can already make money by sharing music libraries, green diamonds, selling digital albums, built-in advertising and other methods, and in this world, the easy-to-listen model is still being questioned by industry insiders, and netizens are also in the early trial period.
It is this immaturity that has caused the downturn in the Internet industry.
However, the good thing about this world is that in terms of anti-piracy and infringement of rights, it is more resolute and resolute than in other worlds.
It is precisely because of the downturn caused by this harsh Internet crackdown that this work is now more needed than ever to lift the hearts of all netizens and IT practitioners.
Jiang Lun only took out the scripts of the first three episodes, and all the scripts of the whole show, he couldn't take them all out yet, so he had to sort out the original video.
"This is the script you wrote?"
Wang Kai took it in his hand and began to look through it.
……
The first time, the first scene of "Guo Nuxia angrily smashed the Tongfu store shopkeeper Tong Wonder Point Lost Passerby"
There is a wooden plaque hanging above the door of the inn, with four big words written - Tongfu Inn, there is a wooden pillar on both sides of the door, and a couplet is hung, and the upper couplet is: Business is prosperous and leads to the four seas. The next link is: the wealth is lush and the three rivers are reached. A string of red lanterns hangs from each of the two wooden pillars.
The silence of the night was soon broken by the sound of bangs, and the barking of dogs was loud.
"Anti-theft, anti-theft, beware of fire candles!", ending with a crisp gong sound.
There was a hurried voice from the inn.
The door opened with a "tom", Xing Zhutou rushed out with a knife, and Tong Xiangyu chased him out.
Tong Xiangyu begged: "Lao Xing!"?
Xing Zhutou said resolutely: "I have to go." ”?
Tong Xiangyu continued to beg and said, "Lao Xing." ”
Xing Zhutou said as he walked to the door: "I am on official business, I care about the people, and I ......am on official business."
……
At first glance, Wang Kai couldn't help frowning, but when he looked at it, his brows stretched.
After reading the three episodes, he asked, "Is this a sitcom?"
"Hmm!" Jiang Lun nodded.
"I mean, it's very simple, it's like a stage play!"
Wang Kai said: "I'll tell you the truth, the plot dialogue or something, it's still very interesting, if you want to shoot, it's okay to make a small fuss, but I guess there are not many people who are optimistic about it in the early stage!"
"Why?" Jiang Lun said in surprise.
"There is no big scene, where is the gimmick? And what kind of lineup do you invite? I'm afraid that ordinary big bowls will not come to play this kind of sitcom!"
Wang Kai said, "If this is a stage play, it is estimated that many people will invest, and it is still interesting to listen to such a plot to attract ordinary audiences!"
"I'm going to shoot an online drama!"
Jiang Lun replied truthfully, "I set up a studio with my friend, and there is a video website looking for him to shoot an online drama, so I provided such a script!"
"I'm not necessarily accurate, you can try it!"
Wang Kai said with a smile, "Don't be nervous, you are now the most popular singer among newcomers, with you showing your face, this drama is still very eye-catching!"
"Me?"
Jiang Lun immediately waved his hand, "I don't plan to act, I'm just a screenwriter, and I'll participate in the editing of the shots in the later stage!"
"You're only a screenwriter?"
Wang Kai said unexpectedly, "The screenwriter doesn't just have a script, not to mention that you shoot online dramas, or stage dramas, and the number of screenwriters in a screenwriting team must be at least six or more." ”
"I'll see this then, I provided a literary script anyway, and I have to talk about other aspects!"
"Who's your partner?
"Hmm!" Jiang Lun nodded, "Zhao Rong, you should have heard of it!"
"Hehehe, don't know!"
When Wang Kai heard this, he smiled heartily, "He graduated from our Chinese opera directing department, but I heard that he has not been very good in recent years, and he only takes on some low-cost TV series, alas, in this industry, you can't become the top-notch, so you have to give people backs!"
"Isn't it!"
Jiang Lun smiled bitterly, he was lucky to enter this industry, and naturally he had seen those unfortunate ones, life should be like a song, where not to waste, and disappeared silently after a few years.
Leaving Wang Kai's house, it was already six o'clock in the afternoon.
After Jiang Lun returned home, he continued to be busy with the script, confirming every line and every scene expression in front of the video, striving to be rigorous and rigorous.
At night, the sudden ringing of the phone interrupted Jiang Lun, who was immersed in busyness.
Picking up the phone, it was Zhao Rong on the other end, excitedly telling him that the address of the studio had been selected, in an office building in the East Fourth Ring Road, one hundred and eighty square meters, 5 yuan / square meter / day, calculated as 320,000 a year 4, pay two pressure six, but he found a friend to be accommodating, you can rent it to him at a price of 300,000 yuan a Chinese New Year's Eve, but you have to pay the full amount in one go.
Jiang Lun thought for a while and said, "This matter will be left to you, you can rent it if you see it suitable!"
"That's okay! I'll rent it, get the contract tomorrow and go to apply for a license, buy office equipment, etc., and then prepare for another three or five days, and we can open!"
Zhao Rong on the other end of the phone was excited like a child, and he could feel his enthusiasm through the phone.
Hanging up the phone, Jiang Lun glanced at the script he had made.
After counting the number of episodes, he buried his head and continued to get busy. (To be continued.) )