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Due to the fierce fight in the morning, Zhang Dongjun was tired enough, went to the bathroom to take a shower, and then lay on the bed and fell asleep.

Time flies, two days have passed in a blink of an eye, Zhang Dongjun's life is also very monotonous, protecting Lin Qiandai during the day, accompanying her to various occasions, and returning to the villa at night to desperately code words.

It was precisely because he followed Lin Qiandai for two days that he was photographed by many paparazzi, and he made headlines once.

The title of the headline is: "The most mysterious star, Zhang Dongjun and Lin Qiandai are inseparable and enter the pair." ”

Ning Zhiyun was furious when she saw this news, and Zhang Dongjun only stabilized her mood after a few hours of explanation.

And Erlang God has been busy writing the outline for the past few days, and he hasn't taken a few steps out of the door, and even Zhang Dongjun can't call him.

Until the early morning of the third day, Erlang God pushed open Zhang Dongjun's door with an excited face.

"Brother Jun, Brother Jun! I have written the beginning and outline. You can help me take a look!"

Zhang Dongjun was playing chess with Zhou Gong at this time, and was awakened by the shout of Erlang God. He opened his eyes in a daze, picked up his mobile phone and glanced at it.

"Erlang God, my brother. It's only four o'clock in the morning, can't we talk about it during the day?" Zhang Dongjun said with a look of resentment, and then continued to lie on the bed.

"Brother Jun, my outline and beginning have been written, you can help me take a look. There are still eight days left before the end of the event, and 100,000 words of novels can be contested, and the time is urgent. ”

After Erlang God finished speaking, he directly dragged Zhang Dongjun up from the bed.

Zhang Dongjun really couldn't help him, so he had to take the Xianyu mobile phone and read it.

Zhang Dongjun, who was still a little sleepy, couldn't help frowning when he finished reading the first chapter of Erlang God.

By the time he finished reading the second chapter, his face had become visibly heavy.

Erlang God was beside him, observing Zhang Dongjun's expression all the time, and he was also nervous at this time, after all, this book was going to participate in the competition.

When Zhang Dongjun finished reading the fifth chapter, he put down his phone and sighed.

"Brother Jun, what's wrong, is the novel not good enough?" Erlang God couldn't wait to ask.

"Alas!" Zhang Dongjun just shook his head and did not speak.

"Brother Jun, you are shaking your head and sighing, what do you mean? "Erlang God is anxious now, he just wants to know whether his novel is well written.

Zhang Dongjun looked at Erlang God's appearance and showed a wicked smile: "Zhenjun, I can't believe that this novel was written by you, it's like two people." ”

Erlang God's novel, when Zhang Dongjun finished reading the first chapter, he was already deeply shocked. Although there are shortcomings, the world he constructs in his mind is extremely similar to a certain great god at the beginning.

The writing has also improved a lot, and the plot has changed from monotony to colorful.

When the immortals of the heavenly court write books, they like to write the protagonist as a genius stream. Think about it, the immortals are all arrogant and arrogant, and the characters in the pen must be compared to a little bit, and the scum who writes may have their identity.

And Erlang God's novel breaks the immutable pattern, he portrays the protagonist as a waste material, and it is the kind of waste that can't be scummed.

The protagonist was born into a family of cultivators, and at the age of sixteen he didn't even reach the entry level. And the protagonist's father, when he was not born, ordered a baby for him.

In ancient times, a man of sixteen was allowed to marry and have children when he reached the age of majority. When the wedding date was approaching, he went to the woman's house with his father to propose marriage.

But the woman who set up a baby kiss with the protagonist is a proud woman of the sky, and there are few rivals among the younger generation.

She sees that the protagonist is a waste and resolutely disagrees with marrying the protagonist. also put down his rhetoric, and only marry the strong in this life.

When the protagonist heard this, he angrily kicked over the bride price and rushed out of the door.

Although this plot is very old-fashioned, it is already rotten in the world. However, the starting point of the heavenly realm network writes about this kind of theme, I'm afraid that only Erlang God writes it, and it can't be said that it will set off a craze.

In the second chapter, the protagonist returns to the family and suffers a lot of white eyes and ridicule. It's not a material for cultivation itself, plus the marriage was rejected. makes the protagonist decadent and indulges in fun every day.

One day, when he came to the mountain behind the family to relax, he accidentally picked up a very simple ring, and it was because of this ring that the protagonist's life changed dramatically.

When the protagonist returns home, he discovers that the ring hides the soul of an old man.

Seeing this, he couldn't help but think of the novel of a certain great god at the beginning.

Even Zhang Dongjun doubted whether Erlang God had entered the starting point network of the world, and secretly read the novels of the great gods. However, this idea was rejected by him on the spot.

Erlang God can't even turn on the computer, and the person who can't type on the keyboard for him, how can he enter the starting point network of the world.

The third chapter is to use the golden finger to start improving one's own cultivation. In the fourth chapter, the protagonist begins to embark on the routine of pretending to be a slap in the face.

Erlang God has written a total of five chapters, and the words are like flowing water in the same way, which makes people feel deeply immersed in it. The only drawback is that the fourth chapter is a bit forced, and the plot is a bit stiff, but these are not major problems.

As long as it is modified, it should be a good book that can sell well in Heavenly Court.

The reason why Zhang Dongjun made a very headache expression was to deliberately tease him. Who let Erlang God wake himself up at four o'clock in the morning.

"Zhenjun, then my book, do you have any hope of hitting the top ten?" Erlang God said excitedly after hearing this.

Zhang Dongjun shrugged and said helplessly: "It's hard to say, the current Heavenly Boundary Starting Point Network, there are a lot of good books. And one is better than the other. Take He Xiangu as an example, her second novel is more than ten times better than the first. ”

"There are also Heavenly Soldier Armor, and Alchemy Immortal Child, their success is not accidental. If you want to be in the top 10, you have to think about it and revise it repeatedly. ”

"The outline of your book is very good, but it's one thing that comes to mind, and it's another thing to write it. Imagination is beautiful, reality is cruel. It's just a few small problems at the beginning, as long as you follow the outline, there is at least a 60% chance of being in the top 10!"

After listening to Zhang Dongjun's words, Erlang God nodded seriously.

"Brother Jun, please point out the shortcomings of this book, I should hurry up and revise it. Erlang God said pleadingly.

Zhang Dongjun nodded, pointed out the places that needed to be modified, and asked Erlang God to revise them well.

Then he looked at the time on his phone, and it was already past five o'clock. He planned to ask the little Taoist priest to come over today to protect Lin Qiandai.

And he is going to take Erlang God to the Tiandu Liu family, it's time to talk to their patriarch. (To be continued.) )