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The war in the book review area continued to escalate, and the Five Dou Xingjun was scolded by the gods and goddesses. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info

This incident even alarmed the Jade Emperor and the Queen Mother, and these two Heavenly Court Supremes couldn't stand it anymore, and began to give ideological education to several radical immortals.

The most bizarre thing is that when Nezha heard the Five Dou Xingjun collectively say that Brother Jun's book was full of nonsense, he was so angry that he directly picked up the fire spear and rushed to the mansion of the Five Dou Xingjun, and beat them one by one.

Later, the photo was also posted in the book review area, and many immortals supported Nezha, saying that he played well!

King Tota: "Son, really give my father a long face! These five old things chant poetry all day long, and laugh at me for having no foundation in my belly." ”

Red Boy: "Big brother, play beautifully." ”

Antarctic Immortal: "The Five Dou Xingjun has really gone too far, and some time ago, they came to my book review area to make trouble. Saying that I'm an old thing, shameless, actually wrote such a nasty article. ”

The most puzzling thing is that Sanzun and the Jade Emperor turned a blind eye and pretended not to see anything, and did not blame Nezha at all.

Zhang Dongjun read the book review area and never spoke. He felt that there was nothing wrong with the five star monarchs supporting literature, but their approach was too impulsive.

After reading the book review area, Zhang Dongjun closed the computer and did not continue to write. The novel is not on the shelves yet, and two to three a day is the best choice.

Because once you write more than three chapters, you will enter a period of exhaustion. If you continue to write, the quality of the novel will drop significantly.

Everything is difficult at the beginning, the first 100,000 words are the façade of a novel, and he wants to ensure the smoothness and excitement of the plot.

It is now past seven o'clock, and Lin Qiandai and Erlang God should have returned to the villa.

After a few sighs with a few people in the house, Zhang Dongjun took his suitcase and left the old city.

In October, the autumn breeze in Kyoto is blowing, and the evening is a little cool. He flagged down a taxi on the side of the road and drove in the direction of Lin Qiandai's villa.

In the car, Zhang Dongjun leaned back in his seat, closed his eyes, and fell into deep thought while listening to the traffic broadcast.

They destroyed the stronghold of the Liu family in Kyoto, and they couldn't give up.

There were more than ten people in the factory, and when I went to save Erdeng and the little Taoist, I only saw three people.

Although Scar Man's companions have not seen him, the little Taoist priest and the two monks will definitely be retaliated against.

Therefore, Zhang Dongjun decided to take Erlang God to Tiandu in person, and met this Xiuzhen family who did anything to make money. As for Lin Qiandai's safety, let's hand it over to the little Taoist priest and Mei Du Chuanxin first.

Half an hour later, the taxi stopped in front of the villa, and Zhang Dongjun paid for the car and took his luggage out of the trunk.

Before Lin Qiandai left in the morning, she specially handed over the key to the villa to Zhang Dongjun.

Zhang Dongjun opened the door, Lin Qiandai's car was parked in the courtyard, and it was obvious that several people had returned.

When he came to the hall, Erlang God was knocking on Erlang's leg and sitting on the sofa, holding 56 love crazy in his hand.

Zhang Dongjun put down the suitcase, sat next to Erlang God, and said with a smile: "Zhenjun, how was your experience in the mortal world today?"

Erlang God put down his phone and said with an aggrieved face: "Brother Jun, you are finally back." I haven't spoken for a day today, but I'm suffocated. ”

"Oh, I don't seem to have stopped you from talking, right?" Zhang Dongjun said suspiciously.

Just as the two were talking, Lin Qiandai's agent Li Na walked out, and happened to hear the conversation between the two, she glanced at Erlangshen, and then said to Zhang Dongjun:

"Is he embarrassed to speak? ”

Zhang Dongjun asked with some curiosity: "What's the matter? Did he cause trouble for you?"

Li Na sat across from the two wearing a sexy nightdress and holding a cup of coffee in her hand. began to tell Zhang Dongjun about what happened during the day today.

"It's a cause for trouble, and I guess it will be on the news tomorrow. He actually defecated in public, which is still a small matter. I let this kind of thing go to the toilet to solve it, and this guy got so good that he rushed straight into the women's toilet and started ...... on the floor."

Li Na paused here and didn't continue, obviously saving some face for Erlang God.

Zhang Dongjun looked at Erlang God in surprise, he originally thought that the immortals didn't need to go to the toilet, so he didn't teach him this, but he didn't expect the gods to and pee.

Before Erlang God could explain, Li Na continued: "This guy doesn't know where he got so much gold and silver jewelry, and he bought a bottle of drink and gave someone a gold ingot, which scared the shopkeeper and didn't dare to accept it." ”

"There is another extremely serious thing, when we arrived at the film and television city, he didn't say a word, and kicked an actor away. also said that people are monsters, if it weren't for Qiandai, this guy would be in the police station by now. ”

Zhang Dongjun was speechless for a while after hearing this, he stood up and pulled Erlang God aside, waiting for his explanation.

Erlang God looked embarrassed: "Brother Jun, in fact, I don't blame me, who made that person dress up like a monster, I was afraid that he would hurt the innocent, so I didn't hold back for a while, so I went up and kicked it." Who knew that he couldn't help kicking so much, and fainted directly. ”

", big brother, you are an immortal. Don't say it's the actor with your kick, even I can't bear it. This was just what Zhang Dongjun thought in his heart, and he didn't say it.

Erlang God saw that Zhang Dongjun didn't speak, and said again: "Brother Jun, what is the soft sister coin." Why can't you buy gold, silver, and jewelry in the world?"

After hearing this, Zhang Dongjun took out his wallet, took out a thousand yuan from it, and handed it to Erlang God.

"Zhenjun, this is the soft girl coin. It is a kind of human currency, and you can buy it with whatever you want to eat in the future. And do you immortals also want to urinate?"

Erlang God shrugged: "Immortals don't need to urinate, that's because in the heavenly realm, they don't need to eat." And if I eat the food of the mortal world, I must solve my physiological needs. I couldn't hold it back, and I didn't have a thatched house after looking for a long time, so I ......"

Zhang Dongjun covered his head, and he shouted in his heart: "Jade Emperor, quickly open the Heavenly Passage and call Erlang God back!"

However, if these things happen, I am afraid that Erlang God is in Li Na's heart, and the tall and mighty image has been shattered. It also happened to save Zhang Dongjun a lot of things.

After chatting with Erlangshen, Zhang Dongjun came to the second floor with his suitcase, and when he passed by Lin Qiandai's room, he found that the door was slightly hidden.

Zhang Dongjun felt that he should say hello to her when he came back, so he gently pushed open the door.

The moment the door opened, the scene inside made Zhang Dongjun completely stunned.

I saw Lin Qiandai walking out of the bathroom naked, with snow-white skin and a perfect figure......

Since I had just finished taking a shower, there were still a few droplets of water on the proud twin peaks.

Lin Qiandai hummed a song in her mouth, but the next second she saw a person suddenly standing at the door, and she was instantly stunned.

The two stared at each other with big eyes, Zhang Dongjun swallowed a mouthful of saliva, although it was not the first time he saw Lin Qiandai's jade body, but that time it was only by the light of the fire, how could he see it clearly now.

He faintly felt a hot current on the tip of his nose, and he couldn't help but prop up the tent under his body. The power of the desolation in his body is a little imminent.

Lin Qiandai was frightened by the figure that suddenly got up, was stunned for a few seconds, and subconsciously screamed.

But when Lin Qiandai was about to make a sound, Zhang Dongjun rushed to her in a flash and covered her mouth. (To be continued.) )