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As soon as Zhang Dongjun's words came out, the room was suddenly silent, he nodded with a smile, and thought in his heart: "This group of immortals is quite obedient, not bad!"

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Moreover, Wen Quxing also increased the problem for him, asking him not to talk too much substantive content within two hours, which made Zhang Dongjun feel very embarrassed.

Let Zhang Dongjun talk nonsense for two hours, he really doesn't know what to say. You must know that you have said no more than two crosses in the Heavenly Realm Starting Point Group.

As the saying goes: there is nothing difficult in the world, only people who are afraid of it, this problem was waiting before, Zhang Dongjun spent half an hour meditating and finally solving it.

At this time, he had already planned the content of today's lecture in his mind.

The content of the lecture is divided into four steps.

The first step is to explain to the gods what kind of novel makes a good book.

The second step is to talk about the things to pay attention to when writing.

Step 3: Discuss what you learned when writing.

Step 4: Interactive session.

However, the only thing that doesn't have water is probably the second step.

Seeing that the immortals had quieted down, Zhang Dongjun coughed, cleared his throat, and pretended to be a teacher.

Seriously, this is the first time Zhang Dongjun has lectured to others since he was a child, and he can't help but feel a little nervous.

"Dear immortal friends, I am the instructor of this class: Brother Jun, welcome to the Great God Training Camp. ”

As soon as Zhang Dongjun's words fell, the immortals began to discuss one after another, but it was not too noisy compared to the previous time.

For this situation, Zhang Dongjun can only choose to open one eye and close one eye, drop stones, and wear a cold day.

The immortals all like to live an unrestrained life, and they are restrained by the Jade Emperor in the Lingxiao Treasure Palace, and now they can't speak when they arrive at the Great God Training Camp, and some immortals are still unacceptable for a while.

However, among these hundreds of immortals, Zhang Dongjun felt a fiery gaze, and when he met her eyes, he seemed to feel that the other party had seen through all of himself.

And the owner of this gaze is Fairy Chang'e, who often confesses Zhang Dongjun in the group.

Seeing this, Zhang Dongjun hurriedly shifted his gaze to other places and said loudly:

"Everyone came in with fairy coins, and they all wanted to make their books popular. If you listen to it well, I can guarantee that the level of writing will definitely improve a lot. So let's gossip and get straight to the point. ”

Zhang Dongjun paused when he said this, and the immortals were silent when they saw that they were about to start speaking, they spent so many immortal coins in order to improve the grades of their novels, so everyone listened to the lecture with twelve points of spirit.

Zhang Dongjun smiled, and then said: "For example, a large number of newcomer authors are pouring into the starting point of the world today, and they are very good in terms of writing, plot and conception. ”

"So the question is, I want to ask you, why do they write so well, why do they have poor grades? So what kind of novel can be called a novel?"

After hundreds of immortals heard Zhang Dongjun's words, they actually chose to be silent collectively, which made Zhang Dongjun very embarrassed.

Just when Zhang Dongjun was about to ask and answer himself, Nezha raised his hands.

"Brother Jun, I know, I know! First of all, it must be explicit, and the more things that are written between men and women, the better. And the protagonist must have special abilities at the beginning. ”

Han Zhongli: "I agree with what Nezha said, there is a novel written by an immortal friend at the recent starting point is very explicit, and reading his novel is like being there." I can't wait to find a fairy to marry. ”

God of Wealth: "I will give full marks for Nezha's answer, and that Han Zhongli gave me the title of the book in private, hehe, I'll enjoy it!"

"......" Zhang Dongjun was speechless for a while, he also noticed that the phenomenon of Huang Wen in the Heavenly Realm had become more and more serious recently, and the immortals seemed to be good, whether they were male immortals or goddess immortals.

He hastened to explain: "I have no objection to explicit plots in the text, but that is only a means to attract readers. If you just write about monotonous men and women, one day everyone will get tired of watching it. ”

"Judging the quality of a novel lies in the author's conception, plot, foreshadowing, character portrayal and writing. In the world, those explicit novels on the Celestial Origin Network can be called ****, and it is also a good choice to take a look at it by chance. ”

"There are two reasons why novice authors' books are not popular, one is that they don't know what topics to write about that will attract readers. Second, although the plot is good, it is a bit bland. The idea is very clever, but the cool point is not enough. The writing is good, but it's too contrived. ”

Of course, this is exactly what I am going to talk about below, and I hope that you can find out your own shortcomings and revise them diligently. ”

Tota Heavenly King: "That's it, what's the point of reading those broken novels." It's better to go to the live broadcast room to watch the fairies dance, especially the figure of the Hundred Flowers Fairy, dancing and twisting the buttocks, it's all beautiful to think about!"

After hearing this, Jin Zha hurriedly covered the mouth of King Tota and whispered, "Father ......, this is a class." And the Hundred Flowers Fairy is also here! Can we keep a low profile!"

After a small episode, Zhang Dongjun continued to lecture, in order to enliven the atmosphere of the class, he from time to time brought out humorous jokes in the world to the gods.

About an hour later, the number of immortals watching the lecture suddenly appeared in front of Zhang Dongjun's eyes.

When he saw the numbers, Zhang Dongjun couldn't help but be surprised, he never expected that there were more than 10,000 immortals in his class.

Even if it is a whole number of 10,000, an immortal has 3,000 immortal coins, and he takes 1,000 for himself. Today, I earned 10 million immortal coins in just one class.

Zhang Dongjun was already dumbfounded, and he even began to wonder if the immortal coins of the Heavenly Origin Network were too easy to earn. Why do you feel that you haven't contributed much, and you have already become a rich man in the heavenly court.

But soon Zhang Dongjun recovered from the shock and continued to lecture.

The more Zhang Dongjun talks, the better he becomes, especially the fourth step, the interactive link.

The interactive session is actually that everyone can ask any question like Zhang Dongjun, and Zhang Dongjun can also choose any immortal to ask questions.

God of Wealth: "Brother Jun, are the women in the world beautiful? I haven't been down to earth for a long time, and I don't know how the world has changed." ”

In order to solve the doubts in the heart of the God of Wealth, Zhang Dongjun specially found a photo of "Sister Feng" and sent it to him privately.

As a result, the God of Wealth returned to the surprising thunder man: "Tsk, the beauties in the world are really distinctive." This woman is full of heaven, her face is ruddy, and she has a pair of big red lips, not bad, I still like it. I collected it first, thank you, Brother Jun!"

Zhang Dongjun was petrified on the spot after hearing the God of Wealth's comment, and he could no longer express the heavy taste of the God of Wealth in words. (To be continued.) )