[325 Full Room Moved]
The text of this story is actually very simple, adding up to just over a thousand words, but it brings a sense of turbulence to people's emotions. Liu Hongquan knows that in fact, the simpler the text, the more it can give people the most abundant sense of power.
After a long time, Liu Hongquan's mood slowly calmed down. He pushed up his reading glasses, wiped his tears, and sighed, "It's so old, why do you cry like this." ”
After a while, Liu Hongquan began to watch it a second time. If the first time he completely entered the world constructed by the author with words, and realized that the emotion was conveyed, the second time, he paid attention to the words and sentences of the story and the structure of the text.
"Puyu, this is really Puyu. After reading it for the second time, Liu Hongquan couldn't help but sigh. This article is concise in terms of words and has a complete structure, and although it is a little immature in some places, it is also normal, after all, the person who wrote this article is still a child! If there is no accident, the first prize of the high school group of this New Era Essay Contest has already been born! At this moment, Liu Hongquan even had the urge to accept apprentices.
"Lao Liu, are you okay?", sitting opposite Liu Hongquan was Liang Kaixuan, who was also a member of the jury.
This Liang Kaixuan can be regarded as Liu Hongquan's old rival, the two are of the same age and have the same teacher, so they can be regarded as brothers. But because of Liu Hongquan's temper, these two people have not liked each other since they were young. It can be said that he has become an old gentleman since he was a young man, and this Liang Kaixuan is also the only one who can compete with Liu Hongquan in ancient texts.
Liu Hongquan originally didn't want to deal with Liang Kaixuan, he was very energetic when he was young, but at this age, his mind about not showing signs has long faded a lot. But he is happy now, and when people are happy, there are more words, he glanced at Liang Kaixuan, "I found a good story, it's so well written." ”
"Oh, it's not easy for young people to make you praise you so much!", Liang Kaixuan was also interested. An old rival for decades, he knows Liu Hongquan's temper too well, and he hasn't heard him so satisfied with a story for many years. This is still ...... He glanced at Liu Hongquan's pile of rolls, this is still from the primary school group!
"Hey, show me, which elementary school student is so good that can get your compliment!", Liang Kaixuan smiled and reached out to take the roll from Liu Hongquan's hand.
"Smack!", Liu Hongquan pressed the roll on the table.
Liang Kaixuan was stunned, "What do you mean, why is this still stingy, show me!"
"Old Liangtou, you did it on purpose!", Liu Hongquan's eyes widened. In Liu Hongquan's heart, this old Liang Tou is simply too much, oh, I can see that the good work is a primary school student essay? What kind of mentality are you!
Liang Kaixuan was confused, "What's wrong, you want to quarrel again?"
"Can such a good story be written by an elementary school student? Let me tell you, this story will definitely win the first prize in the high school category!"
"High school group?", Liang Kaixuan smiled, the kind of laughter, laughing so much that he couldn't straighten his waist, "Lao Liu, Lao Liu, you are really old, and your level has also declined, come and show me what kind of elementary school students' works can win the championship of the high school group." ”
At this time, Liu Hongquan finally realized that something was wrong, he opened the logo of the stack of rolls and saw that the three words "primary school group" were very bright.
"This ...... How is this possible, I don't see it as an entry in the high school category?", Liu Hongquan muttered incredulously. Such a story, whether it is love, family affection or life, dreams are written vividly and vividly, even by the standards of high school students, it can be called a genius, and now you tell me that this is written by elementary school students, do you tease me?
The young assistant next to him hurriedly took a look, and then hurriedly apologized, "I'm sorry, Mr. Liu, I made a mistake just now and accidentally gave you the entry in the elementary school group as the high school group!"
"......", Liu Hongquan was speechless, no wonder the level of the few articles I saw before was so poor, it turned out to be a work of the primary school group. But in this case......
In Liu Hongquan's stunned kung fu, Liang Kaixuan snatched the daughter of the sea at once, and then read it seriously. Not long after, Liang Kaixuan also burst into tears.
The judges and assistants around are all lost, what is this special situation, why do you still cry!
"Elder Liang, what's wrong with you?", someone asked cautiously.
"What a story, a good story, reminds me of my first love!", Liang Kaixuan stretched out his hand to wipe his tears.
According to the convention, the essay of the primary school group is either to praise the great motherland and look forward to a better future, or it is the daily life of small animals.
"Mr. Liang, can you show me?", asked a judge in his forties.
So in the following time, the depressed and low mood infected everyone like a plague. Although not everyone burst into tears like Liang Kaixuan and Liu Hongquan, everyone had a sad look on their faces.
For a while, the huge office was completely silent, only the low sighs of one after another.
On the other side, Liu Hongquan slowly came back to his senses, but boundless anger rose in his heart, and there was even a deep and irrepressible sense of shame. He has already found the author of this essay from the list, the first class of the second grade of Yuda Affiliated Elementary School, Du Xiaoxiao.
Hehe, it's still a primary school student, and it's still the second grade of primary school!
Of course, Liu Hongquan's resentment is not aimed at Du Xiaoxiao, what does a child know, it must be the adult behind him, for the sake of fame and fortune to do such a degrading thing, shame, such a good story is actually used to do this kind of thing, it is simply a shame. You're blaspheming that little mermaid who is as pure as the sea!
In any case, Liu Hongquan would not believe that such a touching story that touched his emotions could be written by a primary school student.
The so-called "deep love and deep responsibility" were how much Liu Hongquan liked this daughter of the sea before, and how much anger he felt in his heart at this time! In addition, a deep regret also rose in his heart: What kind of apprentice, do you want to accept a liar as an apprentice? I have been fighting with those plagiarism, piracy, plagiarism, and impostoring in the literary world for a lifetime, should I accept such an apprentice when the time comes, isn't that a big joke!
While Liu Hongquan was full of resentment, the atmosphere in the office slowly became lively. When many judges came out of the deep emotional infection, everyone's attention naturally fell on the work itself.
"What a story, touching people's hearts!"
"Not only is it touching people's hearts, but there is a feeling of joy and sorrow with the characters in the play!"
"Although the writing is naïve, there is already a faint demeanor of everyone at a young age!"
Liang Kaixuan was also amazed, he felt that he might have reached a consensus with Liu Hongquan for the first time in his life. This work is definitely the best candidate for the first prize in the primary school group of this New Era Essay Competition, as for the high school group, it's not that the level is not enough, but that others have not participated in the high school group at all!
"I agree with Lao Liu's opinion, this daughter of the sea is the first prize in this year's primary school group. Liang Kaixuan looked around at everyone and said loudly, "Everyone, what do you think?"
"Agreed!"
"The first prize in the primary school category is well deserved!"
Everyone's judges agreed, and there were twelve judges in the entire New Era Essay Contest, among which only Liang Kaixuan and Liu Hongquan had the highest status. Now that the two bigwigs have agreed, the other judges naturally don't have any objections. And more importantly, this story is really well written, even if some judges have doubts about whether the second grade of primary school can write such a work, but they think that there is no need to refute the face of the two bigwigs because of this kind of thing!
However, at this moment, Liu Hongquan suddenly spoke up, "I object!"
"What?", everyone thought they were hallucinating, and secretly said in their hearts that this Mr. Liu is going crazy again, and we are echoing your proposal!
And Liang Kaixuan's face was even more ugly, you old man Liu is against it for the sake of opposition! When I don't speak, you still propose to give the first prize, and as soon as I agree, you will oppose it, it's not so bullying!
"Why?", everyone looked at Liu Hongquan, and Liang Kaixuan asked what everyone wanted.
Liu Hongquan was stunned, he didn't want to admit that he actually looked away, and actually regarded a work of Li Dai Taozhuang as a rare jade, it was simply too embarrassing!
So he stared back with a stiff neck, "No reason, this work just doesn't reach the level of the first prize!"
Everyone was speechless, and they all said that Liu Hongquan's temper had subsided a lot over the years. It's true, it's not rushing, but it's even weirder!
Liang Kaixuan is also hairy, aren't you arguing with strong words, you really think you can cover the sky with one hand here!
He didn't pay attention to Liu Hongquan, "Since Mr. Liu doesn't agree, then vote according to the rules of the competition, and now you agree that the daughter of this sea won the first prize in this year's primary school group, please raise your hand!"
After that, Liang Kaixuan raised his hand directly, and at the same time, seven or eight judges raised their hands without hesitation, and the remaining few hesitated and also raised their hands, only Liu Hongquan was alone and slightly lonely.
"You guys, you are really insulting!", Liu Hongquan scolded!
Now everyone is even more unhappy, what do you mean, we agree that it is insulting to Sven?
"Lao Liu, this result has been decided, isn't it even more insulting for you to jump your feet and scold like this?"
"You, are you blind? Can't you see that this story wasn't written by a child in the second grade of elementary school at all?"