However, a few days later, when "Immortal Sword" was updated with six or seven chapters, he was surprised to find that the results of this book were soaring wildly, and even slowly approached the first group where "Blood Sea" and "Makino" were located. Pen "Fun" Pavilion www.biquge.info

And the most unbelievable thing is that a teacher he respects very much in the circle actually posted a short article recommending "Immortal Sword" in the WeChat circle of friends, and also made all kinds of beautiful words:

“…… During the lunch break, the student recommended and accidentally read Gu Wen's new book "The Sword of Eternal Life".

The story is atypical, but particularly successful.

Because the length is not long, the rhythm is bright, with ups and downs, and the layout and details are particularly comfortable, and the interlocking deception, betrayal, and reversal are dizzying.

Gu Wen's previous problems in stability and endurance when dealing with the long story in "Shenzhou" and "Peerless" are completely unfelt when creating such a novella, but his twists and turns in the plot, linguistic scattering and cultural philosophization and other characteristics are vividly expressed in this story. Exceptional.

Writing drawings for buying and selling peacock feathers, the momentum is grandiose and the sharp turn is down;

writes the love story of Bai Yujing and Yuan Zixia, which is peculiar and beautiful, elegant and fresh;

Write a drawing of the competition for the peacock feather, circle and circle, rigorous and loop;

The truth of writing the peacock feather drawings is unexpected and secretive.

In fact, the whole story is still very fresh, the love that is set in the scheme and out of the scheme, the charm of the 'smile', the comfortable and humorous language mood, and the somewhat sparse atmosphere.

However, writing skills are certainly one aspect, and the reason why I recommend "Immortal Sword" to everyone is that I think it reflects to some extent the vigorous, optimistic, upward, and full of 'positive energy' emotions and creative state of the creator himself at that time, which is what really cannot be faked, or even conveyed to readers only through text skills.

The ending of the book is very unusual and quite different from ordinary martial arts novels:

That's the first story I'm talking about, the first weapon.

The lesson of this story is that no matter how sharp a sword is, it can't compare to that touching smile.

So the first weapon I am talking about is not the sword, but laughter, and only laughter can really conquer people's hearts.

So when you understand this, you should put away your sword and smile more!

It feels novel and unique, but I can't help but think, is it really just Yuan Zixia's 'smile' that solves all problems?

It is not so much Yuan Zixia's 'smile' as her 'wisdom', and it is not so much Yuan Zixia's 'wisdom' as Bai Yujing's 'sincerity'.

In the novel, those 'smart people' who are accustomed to deceit, greed and viciousness, finally died under the calculation of the smartest Yuan Zixia, but Bai Yujing, who was blinded from beginning to end, and his shrewdness was completely inconsistent with his reputation and martial arts, because of his 'sincerity' and 'sincerity', he conquered Yuan Zixia, who is wise and close to demons, smart and laughing, and became the final winner in the real sense.

Such an innocent but moving, fairytale-like story setting and theme idea, not to mention in martial arts novels, even in the current category of popular literature, can be regarded as a touch of heterogeneity, in my opinion, it can almost be selected into a teenager's textbook or reader's spiritual comfort column as a model for moral spiritual education.

For authors of popular genre novels, most of the short and medium stories are only the accumulation and preparation of long stories, and only a few writers will prefer the creation of short and medium stories, and these people are often geniuses who are full of talent and are not stingy with stories and inspiration.

Otherwise, focusing on the creation and publication of novels can often bring greater benefits in terms of influence and economic income, so why waste time and effort in short- and medium-length stories?

In view of this, please cherish "The Sword of Eternal Life", please cherish the story of the series "Seven Weapons", as a rare famous novella, it is very worthy of readers' cherishing and perusal.

Especially when you are in a low mood and have lost faith in love or sincerity, you may wish to read "The Sword of Eternal Life".

I know it's not real enough, but when we read martial arts, aren't we hoping for a fairy tale that belongs to us?!"

After reading it, Shao Chang was extremely surprised, how could he still be optimistic and sincere, if it was true or false, what he said in this article was the same as what I had read before...... Is it a book?!

When he was free, he was curious, and then reopened the third chapter, and this time he couldn't put it down.

The dead man lying in the coffin in the courtyard was Gongsun Jing, the owner of the Blue Dragon Hall who lost the treasure in the first chapter, the old woman who was crying was dressed by his wife, and the child was a born dwarf named Poison Nail, who was a disguise of Gongsun Jing's comrades...... Shao Chang was dumbfounded.

When I saw my friend Fang Longxiang suddenly turn against him, his real identity was actually a member of the Blue Dragon Society, and he learned that the cowardly Yuan Zixia was the real person who stole the picture behind the scenes...... Rao is Shao Chang has read countless books, and he is covered in cold sweat!

Thinking that Yuan Zixia is a woman, her martial arts are not very good, but she can steal the peacock feather blueprints, go away and spin in a real way, using Bai Yujing as a cover, from beginning to end, with a fake peacock picture, so that the people who come to rob each other kill each other and kill all their subordinates.

But seeing her smile like a flower, her clever plan is buried deeply, and her slender jade fingers thread the needle, which is really clever.

Zhu Dashao, a fat pig-like Wanjintang, is the wisest one among the four groups of people who are "green dragons with red hair and white horses".

Behind him, a man in black followed like a shadow.

Others don't understand why Zhu Dashao has first-class martial arts, so why should he hire a second- or third-rate bodyguard.

The man in black always had a mockery in his eyes. Most of the time, Shao Chang believed the explanation in the book - he was mocking himself, because he followed Zhu Dashao not to protect Zhu Dashao, but to let Zhu Dashao protect him.

But it was this seemingly pitiful person, after Zhu Dashao and others fought for the drawings and killed each other, he seemed to have won the battle, and he actually cut off Zhu Dashao's head from behind!

At this moment, the mockery in his eyes was even deeper, it turned out that he had been ridiculing others.

Shao Chang read it in horror.

What made him even more unable to close his mouth was that at this moment, Yuan Zixia actually opened her mouth and shouted: "Second Brother Wei." ”

It turned out that she was also a member of the Blue Dragon Society, and this man in black was the "magic sword" Wei Tianying in the legendary "Twelve Evils of the Green Dragon". The two of them came out together to fill the gap.

Many people were used in this treacherous plan, such as Fang Longxiang was forced to join the Blue Dragon Society, so that he betrayed his friends, and finally died under Bai Yujing's sword. and Gongsun Jing, who was used as a joke as an introduction, finally died of defeat as planned.

But Shao Chang is most concerned about the protagonist Bai Yujing.

Because at this time, after the truth was revealed, Bai Yujing was using several unique techniques to point at dozens of acupoints all over his body, unable to move, and his "Immortal Sword" was still a few feet away.

In front of him was the magic knife "Wei Tianying", and above his head, the knife of Wei Tianying's fellow party Yuan Zixia had also been cut off.

Shao Chang's heart was really sad and angry, complicated, indescribable, and cold sweat was dripping on his forehead: Bai Yujing in the sky, knotted hair and immortalized, is it just a legend after all?

Yuan Zixia's knife finally slashed at Wei Tianying without hesitation, but unfortunately failed, but in the end, it was neither Bai Yujing nor Yuan Zixia who died, but Wei Tianying.

Just because, Bai Yujing is the master of the "Immortal Sword"! There are only dozens of acupoints, and there are three acupoint techniques, why bother?!

Yuan Zixia's already pale face showed a charming smile again, she smiled very sweetly and beautifully.

She claimed to be the lone Red Flag boss in the "Green Dragon Twelve Evils" of the Blue Dragon Society, and came out to clean up the scum of the portal for the Blue Dragon Society.

Now, Gongsun Jing, who has repeatedly forcibly robbed people's daughters, Fang Longxiang, who is greedy for hundreds of thousands of taels of public money, and Wei Tianying, who is addicted to gambling and takes risks, have all died in her plan...... However, she suddenly decided not to return to the Blue Dragon Society, she wanted to go with Bai Yujing, bury all the original intentions and secrets behind her, and return to the dust.

Is she the Red Flag boss of the Blue Dragon Society?

Bai Yujing knew that he would never guess himself, but it didn't matter.

The important thing is that she is right there for him and will never leave him again. That's enough.

……

The interlocking stories are certainly interesting and brilliant, but Shao Chang prefers the wisdom of life revealed in it, and the most impressive place is:

Bai Yujing put on his boots, which were old and comfortable.

He also felt comfortable knowing that he had made the most difficult decision and that he would change it for the rest of his life.

Strangely, the most significant changes in a person's life are often decided in a split second. ”

At that time, the male protagonist Bai Yujing had just made up his mind very willfully to be with Yuan Zixia, who met in Pingshui.

"Love is sudden, and only friendship will be deepened by accumulation. ”

And in order to leave peacefully with this woman, he was decisively ready to give up the property and jewelry he had accumulated for a long time, and go to negotiate with the "wolves" in the yard.

"You know who I am. ”

"What you want, it's on me. ”

"After taking such things, go away immediately, and don't come to me again. ”

But as a result, he was choked back by this group of people who were not rare at all, and they were not coming for him at all.

The most ridiculous thing is that not only did they not accept his treasures, but everyone also took out a sum of treasure that was only a lot more than his, saying that they would give it all to him, and there was only one request, asking him to leave as soon as he was in the morning, as far as he could, provided that he went alone.

A martial arts boy who was originally majestic, plump as jade, chic and dignified, and holding the "Immortal Sword" has become a "confused and embarrassed" like the reader in a blink of an eye.

The fun and ingenuity of this conception and description, with a little processing, can become a comedy movie full of highlights, which is definitely a stroke of genius.

However, this does not make people look down on Bai Yujing, because those heroes of the wise and martial arts have seen too much, this kind of appearance was originally as a wise and martial posture, but because of the sincerity of the heart, softness and kindness, for the love that burst out of the water and willing to make a desperate bet, and, the point is that the protagonist who is still deceived is really not much.

Fortunately, as seen at the end of the end, he was rewarded with kindness and sincerity:

"Looking back at the most difficult decisions of our lives is often our wisest decision. ”

……

Chapter 8 of the book, at the end.

After turning off the computer, Shao Chang acquiesced for a long time, and suddenly he really wanted to drink with his wife.

Share the book with her, drink and talk, and get drunk while talking. (To be continued.) )