Jiang Zhipeng was stunned for a while, gave a thumbs up, and sighed sincerely:

"Brother, fortunately, brother, I don't write martial arts novels, otherwise, I am afraid that I would have spurted out three feet of old blood and died of depression!

Sun Tiankong, Duomeng, and Lao Wen nodded again and again. With a high mountain on his face, he thought it was true.

Deng Zheng waved his hand and said, "This is not something that I came up with in three or two hours. Many of the materials were conceived as early as the creation of "Ping Trace", but they are not so mature. Haven't you been learning screenwriting with Xiao Sun recently, and when you have free time, you think about it again. ”

Xiao Sun hurriedly stood up, waved his hand and said, "Don't dare, don't dare, it's me who asks Teacher Jin Liang for advice." ”

"Where do you come from so much vain politeness! You teach it, you teach, what, it's a shame to teach me?"

Xiao Sun hurriedly waved his hand again, looking embarrassed, and everyone laughed.

Jiang Zhipeng said: "What I just said, will it be written in the future?"

Deng Zheng shook his head: "No." Speaking out is to open up ideas for the next creation of "The Legend of the White-Haired Witch", straighten out the relevant background and the context of the main characters' personalities, so that everyone can have a little more reference and grasp when creating. ”

Mr. Liang's book series is deeply related, well-structured, and majestic, and there is a sense of distress, but because he is on the right path, there is little room for writing.

Therefore, many books often have familiar plots and similar characters, although there are many works, but there are not many characters that can be remembered. Choose one or two representative ones.

The four of them didn't know what he was thinking, and when they thought that so many such good materials and structures were just to be used to deconstruct "The Legend of the White-Haired Witch", they couldn't help but smack their tongues together, if this drama is not good. Then you really don't have to mess around in this business!

Deng Zheng said again: "Next, I'll talk about the character design carefully." Lao Wen, Xiao Sun, and Duo Meng, you try to remember it as informatively as possible. Especially Duo Meng, the image and character of Lian Nishang are the biggest highlights of this play. It is also the vortex point of all plots. You have to grasp it. ”

The three of them saw that Deng Zheng meant to let them try it, and they immediately perked up. Don't dare to slack off. Sit upright and give your attention.

"Let's talk about practicing neon clothes first. Let's not talk about the peerless face. First of all, this is an extremely unruly woman, you can say that she is temperamental, or that she is moody, in short. It is difficult for ordinary people to get close to it. Laughing and scolding are all up to him, what others think, she must not care in her heart. She is the freest soul in the world. A qiē human sentiment and secular norms are like clouds of smoke to her, and she never bothered to look at them.

She only obeys her own heart.

is competitive, so he looks for someone to compare swords; he is so strong, so he recruits a group of female soldiers to occupy the mountain; he has a similar temperament with the martial arts hero Tie Feilong, so he simply does not fight and does not know each other, and turns the enemy into a relative; knowing that the righteous sister is devoted to others, he is reckless as a matchmaker.

understands her humanity, she is honest and unpretentious, and her heart has no city, but in the eyes of the world. She is a female demon of the mixed world, but she acts according to her preferences, and she is arrogant and arrogant. No reason.

For those who love and care, the words can still be heard, and the irrelevant people have always been sneered.

You scolded her for being ruthless, she still didn't tolerate mercy; you regretted that she was a beautiful woman and a thief, she still talked and laughed and committed a strong beam; you despised her for being shameless, she still broke into Wudang Mountain with a sword, and defeated the four elders of Wudang, just to strengthen her lover!

She lives her own life. If you dance a dance that is flying freely, you don't need to dance with it. Also take care of yourself wonderful. ”

Duo Meng was a little shaken when he heard it, and recorded it word for word. He muttered, "Is this as burning as fire, pursuing absolute freedom?"

Deng Zheng shook his head decisively: "Wrong! She disdains the limitations of the so-called 'pursuit', she has always been enjoying and enjoying the freedom of her personal spirit and even her whole life." ”

After speaking, he paused, and after a few people digested it, Deng Zheng continued: "Let's talk about the actor Zhuo Yihang." If the Jade Rakshasa is a natural person who has escaped the shackles of the world, then relatively speaking, Zhuo Yihang is a civilized person who is deeply trapped like all of us here. Zhuo Yihang's setting is that he is a son of an official family, and at the same time he is also the future head of Wudang, and his identity determines the responsibility he should bear. He is a person in the normative system and a sincere gentleman. Of course, this attitude of honesty is undoubtedly semi-deceitful hypocrisy......

One is a young master of an official family, the other is a witch in the mountains; the other is a son of a famous family who has high hopes for decency and decency, and the other is a bandit leader, who has a change of style and color when he hears black and white Taoism; one is knowledgeable and well-versed in literature and martial arts, and the other is only a rough understanding of literature and ink, and is good at martial arts and bravery.

One is a chivalrous man, one summons a demon, no matter the identity, portal, status, or knowledge, they are all like clouds and mud, not to mention that the martial arts of the Jade Rakshasa are much higher than Zhuo Yihang, which is a taboo for strong women and weak men.

It can be said that the gap between them is thousands of miles, and the only thing that can maintain them is the love for each other.

And the Jade Rakshasa tenderness is also attracted by Zhuo Yihang's righteous posture. Of course, the natural charm of the Jade Rakshasa is even more attractive to Zhuo Yihang.

Civilized people want to abandon civilized society and return to nature, and in the end it is difficult to resist the powerful high pressure of civilization, and the two collide with each other, after all, they are incompatible, so tragedy is inevitable.

…… Zhuo Yihang couldn't withstand the pressure and took the position of the head of Wudang, but because he was concerned about practicing Ni Dress, he was like a fool, so everything was handled by the uncles. The worried uncles blamed this qiē on Lian Zhuo's temptation, and regarded her as a public enemy of their own sect. Lian Nishang ignored it, and ran to Wudang to meet the lover single-handedly, and the two sides confided, Zhuo Yihang finally decided to put down Yiqiē and go with Lian. But at this time, Zhuo's four uncles joined forces to form a sword formation to besiege and practice Ni Shang, and a vicious battle was darkened. The four elders of Wudang were all injured, and at the critical moment, Zhuo Yihang could not get along with himself in the face of the dispute between his lover and his teacher, and was instigated by others to send a secret weapon to help the battle.

Lian Nishang was heartbroken by this, with a mixture of love and hate, and woke up with white hair.

She was extremely proud of her peerless appearance, who knew that overnight, she turned from a beautiful girl to a white-haired old woman, and she was extremely disheartened and uncomfortable, and since then she has withdrawn from the Central Plains martial arts and gone to the southern peak of the Tianshan Mountains. Since then, she has been called the 'white-haired witch'. ”

Because the synopsis and ending of the story were only through Sun Tiankong's mouth, the four people present already knew it. At this time, there is a deeper and more three-dimensional substitution, and the mood is a little gloomy and heavy for a while.

After being silent for a moment, Duo Meng turned his face away, gritted his teeth, and said indignantly: "Sure enough, it's 'Lang Yi is hard to be strong'." This Zhuo Yihang is also too cowardly, so indecisive, not likable at all! If I were practicing Ni Shang, I would have been slapped to death earlier!"

Lao Wen disagreed: "...... I think that this Zhuo Yihangzhi's character is not simply 'cowardly'. As Mr. Jin Liang just mentioned, he has too many responsibilities on his shoulders, and the social pressure caused by the love between the two is almost entirely borne by him alone. To paraphrase a modern phrase, Jade Rakshasa is outside the system, and she has a temperament that doesn't care about heaven and earth, and the evil words outside her have nothing to do with her. But Zhuo Yihang is different, he was born in an official family, he inherited poetry and books at an early age, although the etiquette is disgusting, it is inevitable that it will go deep into the bone marrow. At the same time, he was favored by his teacher and was promoted to be the head of the family, and it was even more difficult to suddenly ask him to betray his kindness. The master and his lover are enemies of each other, and under the conflict between the two parties, he is caught in the middle, which is equivalent to bearing all the wind and waves head-on. It is difficult to disobey the teacher, and if you want to love people all, how can the four words 'dilemma' be summed up?!"

Jiang Zhipeng also nodded in agreement: "Yes, it's just weird, our guy who provided the story is too cruel! According to the character he gave, the tragedy was doomed from the beginning." Neither of them complains, the so-called is not in their position, and they don't know their suffering. The Jade Rakshasa hated his lover and hated him as a matter of course, but Zhuo Yihang needed great courage to break free from the shackles and go after love. You can't blame him if you can't do it, if you do it all at once, it won't be him!"

Xiao Sun raised his head and said, "What about the end?"

Duo Meng was surprised: "One night of gray hair is not the end?!, and the end?"

Jiang Zhipeng and Lao Wen also paid attention.

Deng Zheng nodded, and then said, "...... After Lian Nishang left, Zhuo Yihang was like crazy, like an idiot. One day he was suddenly awakened, and the melancholy in his heart was like a volcanic eruption, and he finally rushed down Wudang Mountain regardless of a single qiē, chasing the traces of Lian Nishang. Ran Lian was disheartened and refused to understand and reconcile. Zhuo Yihang heard that there is a legend that can make white hair blacken, and finally found it after a long search. But because the flower has already bloomed, it still needs 60 years of waiting. Since then, Zhuo Yihang has been wandering in the north and south of the Tianshan Mountains, grasslands and deserts, and at the same time he is determined to wait until the next day when the fairy flowers bloom......"

His words were backward, and the four people present were silent for a long time, and everyone was silent in this extreme sadness of "looking at each other at the end of the world, each keeping its original intention", and couldn't extricate himself for a while.

For 60 years, one has guarded the fairy flowers and kept the promise that was once a joke, and the other has kept the persistence, rejected the compromise after the right and wrong, and insisted on not forgiving.

In the middle of the sound, Deng Zheng broke the silence and said: "How about it, you three, do you have any confidence in winning this script now?"

"Absolutely!"

Lao Wen stood up first, patted his chest excitedly and said: "You have told the story to this point! What do you want! If you can't chew something decent, then my old Wen can just roll up and get out!"

Sun Tiankong, snorting and dreaming with red eyes, also got up together, like the military order, and said seriously: "It's absolutely no problem." ”

Deng Zheng shook his head and said very strictly: "It's not enough to be just presentable." I'm going to do it to the extreme. Next, all three of you put aside the rest of your work and go all out on this. If I can't get the book out to my satisfaction, I'll keep changing it until I can't help but fire you guys! But if I'm satisfied, then I'll consider adding the names of the three of you after my name. Do you have faith?"

There is still a name for it?!, and it is after Mr. Jin Liang!

The three of them were ecstatic, looked at each other, and shouted, "Yes!" (To be continued) R580