Xu Wenhui decided to revise Dragon Ball. Pen @ fun @ pavilion wWw. ｂｉｑUｇE。 ｉｎｆｏ

As I said before, the early stage of "Dragon Ball" was an ordinary funny treasure hunt comic, although he has many advantages, but the flaws are not ordinary, although it is wonderful, it is often complained about!

What Xu Wenhui has to do is to publicize the merits, cover up and make up for the shortcomings.

After some careful consideration by him, the basic modification is: to increase the degree of brilliance of the supporting characters.

This is to avoid passers-by!

Then, the gap between the coherent bosses is narrowed to avoid the gap between them.

Then it is to increase the description and portrayal of love, especially Boomer and Vegeta, Gohan and Kiki, their love development process could have been ignored!

Don't add some emotion, so as not to make people feel abrupt.

In fact, Xu Wenhui personally doesn't like Boomer and Vegeta together, just like watching "Crayon Xiaoxin" before thinking that Xiaoxin should be with Nini, but the more the author draws, the more speechless he becomes, and Nini is drawn from a cute little girl to a violent woman with a dual personality!

But there's no way.,If this comic is modified, it's going to be overhauled.,So it's still according to the original book.。

As for the fact that the earth warriors are too weak in the middle and late stages, Xu Wenhui has no way to modify them, otherwise they will all be overthrown, and he can only let the earth warriors fight more soy sauce!

Finished thinking.

Xu Wenhui then began to do it.

While drawing, he said to Akina Nakamori.

"Akina, let me tell you a story. ”

"Once upon a time, there lived a twelve-year-old child in a mountain on earth. He didn't know anything about the world, and his daily work was to eat, practice, and sleep, until one day, a girl named Boomer broke into his life......"

Later, Sun Wukong defeated Vic Demon King II, and he eventually became the strongest man on earth. With Kiki, he returned to the Flaming Mountain. As for Dragon Ball's next story, that's five years later. ”

Xu Wenhui calmly painted, while calmly telling the content of the previous story of the Saiyans in "Dragon Ball" to Akina Nakamori.

Saiyan fierce battle, I guess I am not very interested in girls like Akina Nakamori, they are all fighting and killing, and Xu Wenhui doesn't want to say more about girls.

After listening to the early story told by Xu Wenhui, Akina Nakamori was fascinated and thought it was very interesting.

"Boss, if it's like what you said, as long as you draw it, it must be very good! Dragon Ball, the superhero who can make a wish, saves the earth from the Great Demon King, Son Goku. I just listened to the story and knew it was supposed to be good. ”

"But it's hard to draw a story, and it's hard to draw it well. ”

It's the same as movies and novels, the audience looks at the plot of the movie is quite simple, and the novel looks very easy to write, but it is very difficult for you to really practice.

Acquired effort is important, but talent is even more important.

Akina Nakamori glanced at Xu Wenhui, who was focused, and said in her heart: But this is my boss, if it is him, there will definitely be a way.

She still remembers that the day before yesterday, when Xu Wenhui was in this company!

When those professional editors and cartoonists were desperate, it was he who stood up again and again and created miracles one after another!!

Therefore, Akina Nakamori, who has become a staunch fan of Xu Wenhui, at least thinks that he is a genius unparalleled in the world in terms of comics! Even now, he has not published a comic......

Xu Wenhui talked to Akina Nakamori and passed the time, while getting out the characters of "Dragon Ball", and then sorting out the sketches in order!

It didn't take long for him to complete 8 chapters.

It seemed that seeing Akina Nakamori's greedy look, Xu Wenhui smiled lightly.

"If you want to see it, you can see it...... But don't fold it, take a look here. ”

Xu Wenhui patted his thigh and gestured to Akina Nakamori.

It seems that she is really attracted by the charm of the little Monkey King, and Akina Nakamori, despite her shyness, does not refuse. First of all, put aside the plump body that can grow taller quickly by yourself, and then let the boss like it, and the milk that can grow quickly!

Then she carefully arranged the drawings in a neat stack.

“......”

Akina Nakamori glanced at the milk on the table, hesitated, ran over and put the milk in the quilt outside the office, and then trotted in and closed the door!

She was afraid that the milk would fly up and drip onto the drawing.

"In a big mountain a long, long time ago, there lived a child, and this child was called Monkey King. And that's where our story begins. ”

At the beginning of the Dragon Ball manga, there is such a narration.

At the beginning, Wukong, who was a teenager, held a serrated horse chopping knife that was taller than his entire person, and the vehicle turned out to be a huge round log, rushing quickly over the rugged and narrow mountain road, and the fans of the comics who read it were terrified, which was also too strong.

Akina Nakamori knew that he was Goku because she had just seen his character.

In Xu Wenhui's comics, Sun Wukong stepped on a log and transported the wood back to his small home.

Then Wukong was like a personal ape, Tarzan, violently threw the wood into the sky, jumped himself, and actually split the wood with his fist in the air!

"Wow, is this kung fu?"

Looking at the Monkey King's agile skills in the comics, Akina Nakamori thought to himself.

Although Akina Nakamori doesn't like fighting, I think this action is so handsome!

Suddenly, Akina Nakamori couldn't help but glance at Xu Wenhui, who was painting on the side, and his figure.

At this moment, Akina Nakamori is sitting on Xu Wenhui's lap... Sticking to his chest muscles, he has a sense of security and a strong feeling, the boss is from the mysterious Huaxia, and he will definitely have magical kung fu?!!

Akina Nakamori thought wildly.

Because she is very petite, she sits on Xu Wenhui's lap and doesn't feel like she can't do it with her hands together.

Akina Nakamori continued to look down with a red face, in the comics: After chopping the wood, Sun Wukong walked back to his small house. He actually bowed to a bead on the table: "Grandpa, I'm going to eat." ”

"Grandpa, this bead is his grandfather?"

Akina Nakamori felt that this bead was very familiar, with four stars in it.

Could it be that the boss just said earlier, it's one of the seven dragon balls.

Just two or three pages.

attracted Akina Nakamori to the world of "Dragon Ball", which is not magical, but has become interesting because of Monkey King, her bright eyes are staring closely at the drawing, and giggles come out of her mouth from time to time.

"It's so funny! Little Wukong is so simple!"

Immediately after Akina Nakamori, she became interested in the new Boomer and the Dragon Ball Radar in her hand, and she didn't know what this thing was and what kind of function it had?!!

Because when Xu Wenhui learned to draw comics, it was already decades after the development of technology, and his painting skills were in the new era.

So his Boomer has obviously been beautified and has become more attractive, causing Akina Nakamori to mistakenly think that Buma is the heroine.

"Ah......h

Akina Nakamori was suddenly startled, and her face was as red as a monkey's ass: "How can Goku even dare to reveal a girl's skirt!" Hey, Boomer's underwear is white like me, but her style is so good......"

Her self-talk naturally listened to Xu Wenhui's ears from beginning to end, and someone suddenly bit her ear when she heard the words and said: "My famous dish, if you like it, I will design a small pair of pants for you another day, and I will put them on for you?!!...