Volume III Capuching Words
This is the end of the third volume, or rather, the end of the first volume. Pen @ fun @ pavilion wWw. ļ½ļ½ļ½Uļ½Eć infoThe two volumes of Twilight and Traces of Holly are just mischievous by the author, dividing a prologue that should have been 20,000 words into four chapters and marking two volumes with titles, but the author himself likes this division.
Nearly 180,000 words, a little more than expected. Maybe some people feel that the plot is a little dragged, but because the author doesn't like those irrelevant face-slapping plots, he spends more time on descriptions, and readers who like face-slapping plots can make up some of their own brains. For example, on Morin's airship from the royal capital of Lothar to Zororumi, there was an eyeless person who wanted to grab a room with him, Morin retreated slightly, but the man pressed forward step by step, and then was reprimanded by Morin for showing his noble identity, and as a result, the man was angry and wanted to hurt people, and was easily taught a lesson by Morin, and then drove the man back to the airport with his noble status. For example, on the airship from Zororumi to the Holy Royal Capital, Morin had a conflict with Aeno and people of the same age, who were freshmen in another school, and looked down on Morin, a remote nobleman, and Eleno as a commoner, and made sarcastic remarks, and then Aeno lightly revealed his identity as a freshman in the Illuvita Academy, which immediately made those people speechless, and could only bring their elders to come forward, but was easily solved by the red-haired Mike, and then shook his red hair. And so on and so forth. If you want to add this kind of plot that increases the so-called pleasure of reading, there are so many options to choose from, and readers who like this kind of plot can imagine it at will, as long as it fits our character's own personality and behavior pattern.
And if you join this kind of plot, I believe that it will not be a problem to easily reach 200,000 or even 300,000, but the author does not. It's not to pretend to be tall or anything, but there are already a lot of novels that describe this kind of plot, and the reader's choice is already very large, and I don't need to add another book to it. The author prefers a plot that is related to the main story, and as I said before, this is a long story, this is a great world, and it doesn't need too many irrelevant plots to add to the length.
There's a lot more to the end of the book, and there's a lot more to it, but I think readers who have read the story patiently until now won't mind listening to the author's nagging for a while.
The main content of our third volume, as summarized, is that the young Maureen entered the school alone, and along the way, there were difficulties and ups and downs. Compared with the fights and killings, divorce and revenge, extermination of the family, and competition for money and hegemony in many books, enrollment seems to be such a bland goal. But I think it's more real, or rather, warmer, and I hope that Maureen will look at the world with a kind eye. It can be said that I haven't been able to expand a big ** in this volume, but I have done a lot of foreshadowing and buried a lot of threads, and I will slowly expand it in the future. The main purpose of this volume is that I hope that the reader can feel this fantastic world, the width and thickness of the world, its outlines and its details.
This magnificent world contains all the author's imagination of fantasy, and I hope to share it with you.
Some readers may have read a few clues, and readers who read here in one breath should have no problem, but readers who read with them may have faded some impressions, so the author will sort them out a little bit here. The Pupilless Eye Mark, which first appeared in the contest with Strayer, was noticed by the teenager on the broken cane of the vicious old man, and at the same time related to the origin of Xiao Hei and the appearance of Roserinde in the first two volumes, and there are two burning sensations related to the ink ring marks, respectively, because of the touch between Blood-Eyed Brand and the vicious old man, which is the most important clue. The second is Morin's background, Baron Pike's past, this clue is connected to the majestic general who is investigating Morin, including some of the situation in the Duchy of Lothar, Strayer's plot against Morin, etc., which is considered a second clue. Then there is the life story of Aewenor, the changes in the land of the dead, the druids, the star of Ilekepeia with only the flower handle left, the aftermath of Merin's headache, the shimmering crimson sword constellation of Elendil, the sleeping Roserinde, and the high priest, these are foreshadowing, and there will be more in the future.
I haven't talked much about cultivation yet, but Merlin's memory talent and the impact of not being able to use cards will be quite important in the next volume. The college part of the book will not end soon, but it will be interspersed with many other main contents, which will be developed through holidays and adventures, which is equivalent to a parallel development to the life of the college.
That's probably it.,180,000 words are not long.,It's not short.,But anyway,The author has put a lot of thought into it.,At least review the previous text.,I didn't find any logical problems.,(If a reader finds it, you can tell me secretly~). The part where the little vampire Aeno escaped from the land of the dead, she may have had a lot of better options, but she was still young, and she didn't read as many books as Morin, so it was quite natural that she couldn't be too thoughtful.
Finally, thank you again to the readers who have always been with you, you have made the author more motivated to tell this story. Diving readers can bubble up a comment once in a while, and a simple refueling can keep the author motivated to spend the whole day.
Well, say to yourself, come on, persevere.
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