The next day.

Hua Yingxue revised the novel "Black Shadow Man vs Feng Manlou" again, adding what happened in the secret cave of the cliff last night.

Although "Black Shadow Man vs Wind Full Building" is a non-fiction novel, and the materials are ready-made, it is very difficult to create.

It doesn't work to just record the material as it is, it's just a press release, not a non-fiction novel.

The biggest difference between fiction and journalism is that journalism only needs to narrate facts, while fiction stimulates the reader's perception and, especially, the reader's imagination.

Fiction should not only allow the reader to see what is in the text, but also what is not in the text.

Only by arousing the reader's thinking and stimulating the reader's imagination can the novel be fascinating, and it is also a non-fiction novel that can be used to solve the case.

When creating, writers need to consider not only authenticity, but also how to use the text to summon structure to guide the reader's imagination, which requires a very creative skill that transforms decay into magic.

It is precisely because of this that Hua Yingxue encountered a lot of difficulties when writing "Black Shadow Man vs Wind Full Building". For ordinary fictional novels, she can write at a four-star or five-star level, but this non-fiction novel has been repeatedly revised for more than half a month, but it only reaches the three-star level.

"Shadow Man, I've changed the novel again. ”

"I'll take a look. ”

After taking the manuscript of the novel that Hua Yingxue had corrected, Liu Xing quickly flipped through it.

Title: "Black Shadow Man VS Wind Full Building"

Genre: Non-fiction

Rating: 3 stars

Match11.3%

The level is still three-star, and the matchmaking has only increased by 0.3%.

The lower the match, the lower the accuracy of Liu Xing's pre-reading technique. Only novels that can be engaging, with a high degree of matching, can really play the role of pre-reading.

"I didn't write again, right?" Hua Ying's snow-white cheeks showed a hint of shame, and confessed, "There are too many things involved in this novel. The clues are very cumbersome, and I have never written a non-fiction novel with such a large framework, so it is a bit difficult to write. ”

Liu Xing comforted: "Everything is difficult at the beginning. In fact. Your text, characters, details, etc. are impeccable, and the only thing that falls short is the overall structural layout. I suggest you read Yang Baichuan's "Shooting Down Nine Heavens" and Tai Xingchen's "War of a Hundred Kingdoms". These two novels can be called the pinnacle of the layout of human logistics, and they can be borrowed. ”

""Shooting Down Nine Days"?"?""Hundred Kingdoms War"?" Hua Yingxue frowned slightly, "What kind of novel is this, I seem to have never heard of it?"

Liu Xing had also not read these two novels before, but after entering the god "The Master of Pre-Reading Technique of the Black Shadow Man", he transplanted the memory of the master of pre-reading, and he had more than a million reading memories of novels in his mind.

""Shooting Down Nine Days" and "War of a Hundred Nations" are two banned books. Liu Xing said according to the memory of the master of pre-reading in his mind. "They were created more than 40 years ago, and you can look for them in the forbidden library in Huaxia. ”

"Oh. Hua Yingxue immediately used her laptop to open the website of the Huaxia Reading Alliance's forbidden library and logged in with her own reader account.

Not everyone can log in to the forbidden library, Hua Yingxue is one of the top ten writers in the Xiaoyao Cup Novel Competition, so she enjoys this privilege.

"Black Shadow Man, forbidden-library doesn't have "Shooting Down Nine Days" and "War of a Hundred Kingdoms"?" After searching for a while, Hua Yingxue said, "I searched several times, but I didn't find it." ”

"How could it not be?" Liu Xing thought for a moment and said. "Maybe you don't have enough permissions, I'll try it with my account. ”

The forbidden books in the forbidden library are also divided into grades, with the first level of forbidden books being the lowest. The fifth level of prohibition - the highest book. The higher the level of the ban, the higher the authority required to qualify

Hua Yingxue's current permission can only read banned books below level 3, while "Shooting Down Nine Days" and "War in a Hundred Kingdoms" are level 4 banned books, so she has no right to read them.

Liu Xing is now the king of books in eastern China, and he has the highest authority to read all the forbidden books.

When he logged in to the website with his book king reader account, he quickly searched for information on "Shooting Down Nine Days" and "War of a Hundred Kingdoms".

"Found it, you can read it. Liu Xing said.

Hua Yingxue was stunned for a moment and whispered, "Black Shadow Man." I don't have permission to read these two forbidden books, and now it seems to be ...... with your account Violate...... The rules of the Reading Alliance, right?"

Liu Xing said: "You look at it secretly, just don't spread it." ”

Hua Yingxue smiled lightly. Nodding his head again and again: "Hmm." ”

After that, she began to use Liu Xing's account to read "Shooting Down Nine Days" and "War of a Hundred Nations".

Both novels are historical novels, telling the story of the most chaotic Warring States period in Chinese history, with a grand background, many characters, and an overall layout that can be called a model of human logistics.

It's just that there are a lot of secrets involved in the novel, so it is listed as a fourth-level banned book, and most readers don't have a chance

Hua Yingxue's learning ability is very strong, and after spending a day reading two novels, she quickly found the trick of human logistics layout, and applied it to "Black Shadow Man VS Wind Full Building".

After revision, the novel has taken a qualitative leap.

Title: "Black Shadow Man VS Wind Full Building"

Category: Non-fiction

Rating: 4 stars

Match20.4%

"Yes, the progress is very noticeable. Liu Xingdao, "The shortcomings in the layout have basically been made up." ”

Hearing this, Hua Yingxue's face showed joy: "This is all your help, the two forbidden books you read to me are too useful." After a pause, he asked with concern, "Is there anything else that needs to be improved?"

Liu Xing looked at the manuscript and said: "The biggest deficiency now is the portrayal of Feng Manlou, especially the description of Feng Manlou's martial arts, you wrote a little distorted. ”

Hua Yingxue was a little helpless: "I haven't seen the martial arts of Feng Manlou, and it is difficult to write a sense of realism." ”

Liu Xing thought for a while and said, "I can show you a look." ”

"Really?"

……

Huashan thinks about the cliff, in the secret cave.

Zheng!

With the sound of the sword, a branch in Liu Xing's hand stabbed out quickly, threading the needle like a golden needle, and cutting an unbelievable arc in mid-air. The toes touched the stone wall a little, and the figure suddenly folded back.

Liu Xing's sword move is the "Golden Needle Tribulation" of the Hengshan faction in "Smiling Proud Jianghu". It is one of the sword moves carved into the stone wall of the secret cave.

From the morning to the present, Liu Xing used the branches as his sword. began to practice the martial arts on the stone wall of the secret cave, and he had successively practiced the Huashan swordsmanship, the Taishan swordsmanship, the Songshan swordsmanship, and the Hengshan swordsmanship.

At this moment, he practiced the Hengshan Sword Technique again, and mastered the swordsmanship of the Wuyue Sword Sect.

Just as Liu Xing was practicing her sword, Hua Yingxue sat in the corner of the secret cave and watched, watching the incredible moves of the black shadow man while silently recording the material on her laptop.

The reason why Liu Xing practiced these martial arts in the secret cave was to facilitate Hua Yingxue's creation of novels.

These martial arts in the secret cave may have been learned, and Hua Yingxue wants to write the character of Feng Manlou. It is necessary to have some understanding of his martial arts.

When looking at the kaleidoscopic moves displayed by the black shadow man, Hua Yingxue looked surprised, if she hadn't seen it with her own eyes, it would be hard to believe that such a wonderful martial arts would exist in the world.

Airplanes!

After practicing the sword of the Wuyue Sword Sect, at this time, a soft sound suddenly sounded in the secret cave, and I saw the branches in Liu Xing's hand turning rapidly, drawing a series of circular sword shadows in mid-air, and circles of sword qi swung around like water waves, under the agitation of sword qi. There was a light wind blowing in the cave, and fine dust was flying.

The swordsmanship that Liu Xing is performing at this moment is the Wudang School's "Taiji Sword"!

Like the waves of the sea. Bursts of sword qi surged in all directions, hitting the stone walls of the secret cave again and again.

Zheng!

Suddenly, as soon as Liu Xing's mind was closed, the branches suddenly stopped, and the entire cave fell silent.

A set of "Tai Chi Sword" has been rehearsed.

Throwing the branches aside, Liu Xing was ready to rest for a while, and walked to Hua Yingxue in the corner.

"Black Shadow Man, you martial arts practitioners should be very hard, right?" Hua Yingxue remembered something and asked curiously. "How long does it take for a martial artist to practice before he has 'internal strength'?"

"It depends. Liu Xing explained, "If you have the opportunity to practice the superior internal strength of the mind. In a year and a half, the internal force can be slightly small. If it is simply to practice swords, it may take several years or even more than ten years. ”

"More than ten years?" Hua Yingxue bent her eyebrows. "In this way, it is very difficult to develop 'internal strength'. The last time you lost to me so much 'Jiuyang True Qi', did it hurt your vitality a lot?"

Liu Xing smiled: "Don't worry, I only lost less than a quarter of the internal force in your body, and the loss is not much." ”

Hua Yingxue thought for a while, and then asked, "Can I return the 'Jiuyang True Qi' in my body to you?"

Liu Xing was puzzled: "What, don't you want it?"

"Jiuyang True Qi is both self-defense and physical fitness, and I deserve such a precious thing. Hua Yingxue said, "These internal forces are what you have worked so hard to cultivate, but they are lost into my body, I don't think it's suitable." Black Shadow Man, can the Jiuyang True Qi in my body be infused back into your body?"

"Absolutely. Liu Xing pointed to a string of words on the stone wall of the secret cave and introduced, "This set of "Star Absorbing Great Method" is a set of martial arts that can absorb the internal force of others, as long as you learn "Star Absorbing Great Method", I can absorb the internal force in your body back." ”

Hearing this, Hua Yingxue's eyes lit up slightly, looked at the mental method on the stone wall, and said: "Black Shadow Man, you hurry up and learn the "Star Absorbing Great Method", and after you finish practicing, you will suck my internal force away." ”

Liu Xing didn't expect this girl to be so kind, so he deliberately teased her, and said: "If I really learn the "Star Absorbing Dafa" to absorb your internal force, you may regret it." ”

Hua Yingxue affirmed: "No, I really want to return the internal force to you." ”

"If you knew the way the Star Absorbing Dafa absorbs people's internal force, I'm afraid you won't say that. Liu Xing reminded, "If you want to absorb people's internal force, you need to have physical contact between the two sides, do you know which part of the "Star Absorbing Dafa" is used to absorb people's internal force?"

"Which part?" Hua Yingxue frowned, pondered for a while, and asked cautiously, "Hand?"

Liu Xing shook his head and lied: "It's the mouth." ”

"Mouth?"

"Not bad. Liu Xingdao, "When you want to use the "Star Absorbing Great Method", you have to kiss the other party's mouth, and then sink into the dantian and suck the opponent's internal force out of the mouth. ”

"......" Hua Yingxue was suddenly a little speechless, didn't this "Star Sucking Law" turn into kissing?

The pink cherry lips pursed, and Hua Yingxue asked weakly: "If you use the "Star Absorbing Great Method" to absorb people's internal force, how long will it take to suck?"

"This score situation is discussed. If the opponent's internal force is weak, the sucking time will naturally be short. If the opponent has deep internal strength, the sucking time will be longer. Liu Xingdao, "You have pure Jiuyang True Qi in your body, if you want to use the Star Absorbing Great Law to absorb it all, it is estimated that it will take an hour or two!"

"One or two hours?" Hua Yingxue's heart tightened, this time is too long, right? If it is only a few seconds of kissing, she can basically accept it, but kissing for two hours in a row, this is a bit ......

"Do you have to use your mouth to "Star Absorbing Law"?" Hua Yingxue verified again.

"Yes. Liu Xingqing coughed and asked, "How is it, do you want to give me back the internal force now?"

"......" Hua Yingxue was speechless for a while, she didn't know what to say, her cheeks couldn't help but be hot, and she promised to be sucked by the black shadow man, wouldn't it be the same as agreeing to be kissed by the black shadow man?

How can a girl agree to such a request?

What's more, it's kissing for two hours in a row!

However, if you don't kiss, you can't return your internal strength to the black shadow man, does this mean that you are too careful?

Hua Yingxue was secretly entangled in her heart.

"I'm kidding you. At this time, Liu Xing suddenly said.

"What?" Hua Yingxue didn't understand.

"You don't have to use your mouth to perform the Star Absorbing Method, you can also use your hands. Liu Xing explained solemnly, "It depends on personal preference." ”

"......" Hua Yingxue frowned, and asked again, "If you use your hands, do you have to hold hands for two hours?"

Liu Xing couldn't help laughing, and suddenly felt that the woman in front of him was a little silly and cute, and said, "Don't think nonsense, I was teasing you just now." My strength has long since recovered, and the Jiuyang True Qi in your body is of no use to me, so I won't suck it back. If you want to thank me, just write the novel. ”

After a few small talks, Hua Yingxue sat in front of her laptop and continued to refine the novel. After two hours of hard work, she finally wrote what happened today into "Black Shadow Man VS Wind Full Building".

After that, Liu Xing read the freshly revised novel again.

According to the book's eye test, the matching degree of the novel has reached 25%.

When he finished re-reading the novel, Liu Xing's pre-reading technique began to work, and an inspiration came to mind.

""Star Absorbing Dafa"?" Liu Xing looked at the manuscript of the novel and was stunned.

Hua Yingxue was puzzled: "Black Shadow Man, what did you say?"

"According to the speculation of the pre-reading technique, in order to find out the truth of this secret cave, it is necessary to use the "Star Absorbing Great Method". ”

After speaking, Liu Xing suddenly stood up, walked to the stone wall of the secret cave, and read the mental method of "Star Absorbing Dafa" on the stone wall.

Hua Yingxue was a little stunned, she didn't know what was going on at all, but after a while, she saw that Liu Xing suddenly started to use internal force, and a strong wind suddenly blew in the cave, and all the wind force was directed at Liu Xing.

Liu Xing has already performed the "Star Absorbing Method", a steady stream of internal energy is sucking up the surrounding items, due to the strong suction, many stones in the cave rolled up, rolling in the direction of Liu Xing, Hua Yingxue was almost unsteady, holding on to the wall with both hands.

Wow!

Under the pull of the suction power of the "Star Absorbing Great Law", suddenly, the stone wall of the secret cave fell off, and countless stones fell one after another.

When the stone rolls down, a golden wall is revealed behind the stone wall......

…… (To be continued)