Chapter 561 of the text "Golden Jade Relationship" The truth and the dark shadow man appear

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Everyone recommended Liu Xiaoer to conceive the protagonist of the novel "The Book King", but Liu Xiaoer refused to build this building.

Because the novel "The Book King" is weird, it seems to be related to the real world.

The world Liu Xiaoer is in now is Hell Story City. Liu Xing came to this world because of the novel "Hell Story City 3 Central Area" and the role of Liu Xiaoer.

And now, the people of this world have created a novel "The Book King", and the world described in "The Book King" seems to be the real world.

Many of the characters that have been designed in "The Book King" are characters from the real world, such as the Four Book Kings of Xiaoyaoke, Reincarnation, Dream into the Divine Universe, and Soul Burial Fairy.

At the same time, the character "Eighteen Emperors of China" created by Ye Baizi, the character "Proud Jianghu" created by Gonggong Hai, and the character "Fire Phoenix" created by Concubine Lu Ji are also characters in the real world.

Huaxia Kingdom, Tianhai City, Yufeng Mountain, Novel Street...... These real-world locations also appear in the novel "The Book King".

There are all kinds of signs that the novel "The Book King" that everyone is creating is the real world.

So, who is the protagonist of the novel "The Book King"?

The first person Liu Xiaoer thought of was naturally Liu Xing.

In Huaxia, the most beautiful character is the black shadow man, that is, Liu Xing. If the real world is really a novel, the probability of the dark shadow man becoming the protagonist is still very high.

However, Liu Xiaoer refused to conceive the protagonist for "The Book King".

Liu Xiaoer excused himself and said: "Everyone, I used to work in the inn and didn't read much. I have never written a novel, and the protagonist of the novel "The Book King" is so important. It's really not for me to design. ”

Alpha Dog said: "Brother Liu, you are too modest. You can tell that the alias of "Dream of Red Mansions" is "Jin Yuyuan", which shows that you have a huge brain......"

Liu Xiaoer waved his hand and interrupted: "The novel "Book King" is related to the lives of more than 5,000 of us, so we can't be careless. I don't think the protagonist of the novel "The Book King" needs to be designed for the time being. Each of us first designed a character, and when all the characters were conceived, we chose the most suitable character to be the protagonist, which is the most reasonable. ”

Everyone thought about it and felt that it made some sense.

"Okay. Let's follow Liu Mengzhu's method! Each of us conceives a character, and whoever conceives the best role will become the protagonist of "The Book King." ”

After the discussion, more than 5,000 people were divided into dozens of groups, and everyone was thinking and discussing with each other. After all, for them to co-create the novel "The Book King", each of them has to conceive characters that have a certain connection and need to communicate with each other. Complement each other.

In addition, after each person conceives a character, they have to submit it to Alpha Dog for review. Because Alpha Dog is able to quickly calculate the "blank spots" of the novel and evaluate the quality of the novel.

"The Book King" is a big white text. The more blank spots, the better, which has also become an important basis for Alpha Dog's audit.

"Alpha Dog, I designed a character. You can review it. ”

At this time, the black girl and the white arrow find the alpha dog together. "I designed a couple with White Arrow. The character I designed is called 'Black Eagle', and the character designed by White Arrow is called 'White Dolphin', they are both killers and live in Bohai Book City, Novel Street, Tianhai City. As a result of their long years together, Black Hawk and White Dolphin became lovers. ”

"Black Eagle, White Dolphin?" Alpha Dog looked at the characters designed by Black Girl and White Arrow, shook his head, "The character design is okay, but the plot is not well conceived." You describe the process of the Black Eagle and the White Dolphin from acquaintance to love, which is a classic routine of romance novels, and many bestsellers write like this, and it is so good to read it, which is really terrible! Remember, "The Book King" is a big white text, and you should not write the plot that is easy to understand, let alone the plot that the majority of readers like! If you write the plot of "The Book King" too beautifully and fascinatingly, what if the reader accidentally falls into the mind and opens the perspective of God? , it is to make people incomprehensible, to make people unable to fascination. If the reader doesn't give full play to his imagination, he will never know what this novel is about, you know? The plot you have conceived now is too simple, the difficulty of reading is too low, and there are too few blank spots to read, and you don't need to use your brain to read it. Remember, the more strenuous the plot of the novel "The Book King" is, the better!"

"Oh. ”

The black girl and the white arrow looked at each other.

For a long time, they wrote novels to be understood, hoping that the novels would be exciting and engaging. Now, they have to work hard to create a novel that no one else can understand, which completely turns their creative philosophy upside down.

"In short, you have to forget all the best-selling writing techniques. Alpha Dog advised, "Delete all the plots that can make the reader feel good, and delete all the plots that the reader can understand without using their brains." If the novel "The Book King" makes most readers unbearable and confused, we are halfway there, understand?"

"Hmm. ”

After listening to the construction of the alpha dog, the black girl and the white arrow began to re-conceive, adding blank spots for the killers of "Black Eagle" and "White Dolphin".

After more than an hour, more than 1,100 characters were conceived, and Alpha Dog reviewed all the characters and estimated the total number of blank spots in the novel "The Book King".

"Alpha dog, how's the situation?" asked Gu Gray, "How many blank spots are there in the Book King?"

Alpha Dog introduced: "At present, there are 1,178 characters that have been designed for "Book King", and after preliminary estimates, the total number of blank spots has reached 987. ”

"987 empty?"

Everyone was shocked.

In a typical novel, there will never be more than 200 blank spots. Because there are too many blank spots, the novel is obscure and confusing. In most of the small white texts, the blank dots are below 50 empty.

Now the blank spots of "The Book King" have reached 987 empty, and it is basically impossible for normal people to fully understand it.

"The blank spot in "The Book King" is so big, how can we get into a trance?"

Alpha Dog explains: "The Book King is a novel with a network structure and many reading perspectives. When we entered the "Book King". You just need to read one of the perspectives and get into one of the characters. There is a limit to the blank space for each character in "The Book King". If you only get into one of the characters, it's not difficult. We add blank spots in The Book King. I just want to prevent someone from falling into all the characters of the god "Book King" and open up the perspective of God. ”

The sling suddenly realized and said: "The blank spot of "The Book King" is now 987 empty, no one should be able to open God's perspective, right?"

Alpha Dog waved his hand: "No, don't be careless. Ben Dog's imagination used to reach 555 empty, and if he could read more novels, Ben Dog's imagination could be improved. The current blank spot of "Book King" is only 987 empty, which is still not very safe. Judging from this dog, the blank spots of "The Book King" must reach at least 10,000 empty to be safe. ”

"10,000 empty?"

Everyone was stunned. How do you conceive such a large blank spot?

Gu Gray said: "If you want to greatly improve the blank spots of "The Book King", I think you can start with the background of the novel. We can increase the time span of the novel "The Book King", from modern times to prehistoric civilizations. ”

"Prehistoric civilizations?"

"Yes. "We can set it in this way, hundreds of millions of years ago, the world of "The Book King" existed ancient humans, they were prehistoric civilizations. Due to an unknown catastrophe, ancient humans became extinct, and prehistoric civilizations disappeared forever. Ancient humans before extinction. Eight crystal book coffins were left behind, and these crystal book coffins contained the novels of ancient humans. Hundreds of millions of years later, archaeological experts from the Huaxia Kingdom discovered a book tomb in Yufeng Mountain, Tianhai City, and found one of the crystal book coffins. This crystal coffin comes from a prehistoric civilization. This crystal coffin has gone through hundreds of millions of years, and such a long time span can be designed with a large number of blank spots. ”

The Heavenly Machine Divine Monk added, "Since there are eight crystal book coffins. Then you can add another clue from "Book Tomb Notes". The burial sites of the eight crystal coffins are all written in the eight "Book Tomb Notes". In order to find these book coffins. You have to go to the eight "Book Tomb Notes" first. In addition, the eight crystal coffins also needed to be designed. Only by cracking the code of the coffin can you get the books in the coffin. ”

Xiao Yichen asked: "How to set up the collection of books in the coffin, and what novels should be hidden in the crystal coffin?"

The Heavenly Machine Monk pointed to the novels floating around and said, "We can put these Tibetan books into eight crystal coffins. Like "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", "The Legend of the Sky and the Dragon", "The Eight Divisions of the Heavenly Dragon", "Smiling Proud Jianghu", "The Legend of Chu Liuxiang", "The Peerless Shuangjiao", "The Legend of the Tang Dynasty Double Dragon", "Dream of Red Mansions" and other novels, we will first sort them out, divide them into eight categories, and then store them in eight crystal coffins. Each coffin houses a different type of novel. ”

Gu Ash nodded and praised: "The old bald donkey's idea is good. Write these novels of Ma Xingkong into "The Book King", and after we enter the "Book King", we can continue to read Ma Xingkong's collection of books in the world of "The Book King". ”

As a result, the crowd had an in-depth discussion around prehistoric civilizations and crystal coffins, perfected the relevant details, and added more than 1,000 characters, including tomb robbers, coffin makers, archaeologists, historians, computer experts, police officers, killers, writers, booksellers, book connoisseurs, and so on.

More than four hours later.

"Now the total number of characters in "Book King" has reached 2,677. "Alpha Dog said," After a preliminary assessment, the blank spot of "The Book King" is about 4,000 empty, which is still a little far from the goal of 10,000 air. ”

Tianji Monk said: "If the protagonist of "The Book King" can be designed, the blank spots should be improved. It's a pity that among the 2,677 characters designed so far, except for the four book kings, there are no roles that are particularly suitable for being the protagonists. The structure of the novel "The Book King" is too complex, and it is a bit difficult to conceive a protagonist who can dominate the overall situation. ”

Gu Gray said: "Old bald donkey, isn't your brain very big, you rack your brains to think about it, see if you can have a flash of inspiration and conceive a protagonist." ”

The Tianji Divine Monk said: "This kind of thing 'flash of inspiration' is unavoidable, how can you say that it will come......"

Airplanes!

As he spoke, suddenly, a golden light lit up in the coffin.

"Huh, old bald donkey, your brain...... It's really bright!"

Gu Ash said happily, only to see a golden light on the bare head of the Heavenly Machine Divine Monk, which seemed to be a flash of inspiration?

"Old bald donkey. Tell me, what do you think?" asked Gu Shen urgently.

The Heavenly Machine Divine Monk frowned slightly: "The old man didn't think about anything. ”

Gu Gray said: "Don't sell it! Your brain is glowing." Who else can you fool?"

The Heavenly Machine Divine Monk touched his head: "The old man's head is really glowing? impossible, I really didn't come up with anything!"

Listen to him. Gu Shen looked at it again, and suddenly realized that he seemed to be really wrong. Although there was a golden light on the head of the Tianji Divine Monk, this golden light was not emitted by the head of the Tianji Divine Monk, but a golden light shot right on the door of his head.

If you look closely, this golden light actually shot out from Liu Xiaoer's chest!

"Strange, why is the golden light on the chest of the Liu League Master?"

Gu Ash, Xiao Yichen, Tianji Divine Monk and others got up one after another, walked towards Liu Xiaoer, and asked, "Master Liu." Why is your body glowing golden?"

"Golden light?" Liu Xiaoer looked down, only to see a golden light scattered from his chest, he touched it in his arms, and took out a novel, the novel exudes a golden light, which is particularly eye-catching, and on the golden cover, you can see four golden words Jin Yu Liangyuan!

"Strange, why did this "Golden Jade Relationship" suddenly shine?"

See this scene. Yin Shushu was full of doubts, this "Golden Jade Relationship" has been by her side for many years, and she has never seen it shine.

"Master Liu Meng, is this novel the "Golden Jade Relationship" left by Mrs. Jin?" Xiao Yichen asked with concern.

Liu Xiaoer nodded.

Gu Ash was curious: "Many people are looking for "Golden Jade Relationship". Nothing, how could this novel fall into the hands of Liu Mengzhu?"

Liu Xiaoer said: "This copy of "Golden Jade Relationship" was picked up by my proprietress. ”

"......" Everyone was speechless for a while: Picked it up?

Gu Gray said: "Legend has it that "Golden Jade Romance" hides secrets about the Book Mountain. I don't know if it's true or not?"

Liu Xiaoer said: "I don't know. Because there are no words on it at all, it is a blank book...... Huh?"

Speaking of which. Liu Xiaoer noticed the abnormality, when he turned the first page of "Golden Jade Relationship". I was surprised to find that lines of text appeared on the blank page!

At the beginning of the first page, there is a headline "Chapter 1 - The Shadow Man Born"

Obviously, this is the title of the first chapter of "The Golden Jade Relationship".

"Why does "Golden Jade Romance" suddenly have words?"

Liu Xiaoer opened "Golden Jade Romance", and everyone also gathered around and read the content of Chapter 1 of "Golden Jade Romance" together.

The main plot of this chapter is that a mysterious man in black suddenly appeared in Tianhai City, Huaxia Kingdom, with an unknown identity, extremely high martial arts, and a haunting man, because he was too fast, so he was called "Black Shadow Man".

In the first chapter of "Golden Jade Relationship", the Black Shadow Man appeared in Tianhai City and rescued a woman named Lu Yuxin. Lu Yuxin is not a member of the Lu family, but a descendant of the Jin family, and her grandfather's name is Jin Santong. Therefore, Lu Yuxin's real name is "Jin Yuxin".

Jin Yuxin was persecuted by the Lu family, but fortunately, the black shadow man came to the rescue in time, and the two formed an indissoluble bond.

"Jin Yuxin, the Black Shadow Man?" Reading this, Xiao Yichen frowned, "Who are these two people, the old man has never heard of them." Judging from the description in "Golden Jade Relationship", the black shadow man has extremely high light skills, and he has excellent light skills. ”

"What's even stranger is that the Black Shadow Man actually appeared in Tianhai City. The Tianji Divine Monk reminded, "The place where the Black Shadow Man and Lu Yuxin met is Tianhai City, Huaxia Kingdom, isn't this location just a location in the novel "The Book King"? Why does the place name Tianhai City appear in "Golden Jade Romance"? Could it be that the Black Shadow Man is also one of the characters in the novel "The Book King"?"

Everyone was stunned.

Gu Ash analyzed: "This "Golden Jade Relationship" is said to have been left by Mrs. Jin, and the content in the novel may have been written by Mrs. Jin. Could it be that Madame Jin is also conceiving the novel "The Book King" like us, and the two characters of "Black Shadow Man" and "Jin Yuxin" were created by Madame Jin?"

Xiao Yichen asked: "However, the novel "The Book King" was just conceived by us today, and the location of Tianhai City was also just designed today. And "The Romance of Gold and Jade" was written by Madame Jin a long time ago, so how could she think of it with us? Could it be that Madame Jin already knew the content of "The Book King" that we conceived many years ago?"

The Heavenly Machine Divine Monk said: "This matter is indeed very strange. However, Mrs. Kim was able to come and go freely in the Book Mountain. She must have something special. If the "Black Shadow Man" and "Jin Yuxin" are really the characters in "The Book King", then the weight of these two characters may not be light. Let's hurry up and read the later chapters of "Golden Jade Relationship". ”

Everyone continued to flip through the contents of "Golden Jade Relationship".

In the process of reading. Everyone found that the novel "Golden Jade Relationship" was very trivial, and many plots jumped very much. There is also no logic between the plot and the plot.

In the first chapter, the Shadow Man rescues Jin Yuxin, in the second chapter, the Shadow Man appears in Baihua Mountain, and in the third chapter, the Shadow Man comes to Cradle Island again.

These chapters are not related to each other, or even in order, they are like fragments one by one, and the cause and effect are not clear, and there are many blank spots.

When I saw the fifteenth chapter, the Dark Shadow Man appeared on the outskirts of Tianhai City again. Stole the first crystal book coffin in Yufeng Mountain.

Seeing this, everyone was surprised.

"The Black Shadow Man actually stole the crystal book coffin of Yufeng Mountain!" Gu Shen said in surprise, "This book coffin was designed by us just now, and it was actually snatched by the Black Shadow Man?"

"The Black Shadow Man seems to be really a character in "The Book King"!" Xiao Yichen was also surprised, "The crystal book coffin is so important, but it was obtained by the Black Shadow Man, could it be that the Black Shadow Man is the protagonist of the novel "The Book King"?"

"That's what the old man suspects. The Heavenly Machine Divine Monk analyzed, "First of all, the Black Shadow Man's martial arts are extremely high. There is a clear golden finger, which is one of the characteristics of the main character. Second, the origin of the dark shadow man is unknown, and his identity is mysterious. There are a lot of blank spots, which is completely in line with the setting of the novel "The Book King". Third, the Black Shadow Man first formed an indissoluble bond with Jin Yuxin. I got the crystal book coffin again, and I was haunted. The sense of storage zài is too high, which is also one of the characteristics of the protagonist. ”

Then. Gu Shen turned the page of "Golden Jade Romance" and reminded: "In the 44th chapter of "Golden Jade Romance", it is written that the Black Shadow Man met an imperial concubine named 'Fire Phoenix', and the Fire Phoenix betrayed the Book Emperor for some reason, and has followed the Black Shadow Man ever since. Isn't the role of 'Fire Phoenix' just conceived by Concubine Green Hime?"

Hearing this, Concubine Lu Ji was a little confused, walked over quickly, and carefully looked at Chapter 44 of "Golden Jade Romance", which really contained a plot about the Black Shadow Man and the Fire Phoenix.

"This ...... How is this possible?" A chill suddenly appeared behind Concubine Lu Ji, the role of "Fire Phoenix" was designed by her just an hour ago, and it really appeared in "Golden Jade Relationship".

"The Black Shadow Man is the protagonist of "The Book King"!" Gu Gray said, "The 'Fire Phoenix' designed by the Green Ji Shufei is a strange woman with both talent and appearance, but she is willing to follow the Black Shadow Man unconditionally. If the Black Shadow Man is not the protagonist, how can she have such good luck? Also, Jin Yuxin is also a peerless beauty, she only came into contact with the Black Shadow Man once, and she secretly fell in love, if the Black Shadow Man is not the protagonist, this kind of plot is unlikely to happen, right?"

Everyone agreed, they were all writers, and they were all too familiar with the problem of the protagonist's aura.

The Heavenly Machine Divine Monk exclaimed, "Madame Jin seems to be really able to predict the prophet. She may have expected that we would create "The Book King", so she left this "Golden Jade Relationship" to help us conceive the protagonist of "The Book King" in advance. Since the protagonist of "The Book King" is the Black Shadow Man, then we will continue to improve "The Book King" around the Black Shadow Man. ”

The crowd got busy again and continued to work on the novel.

Concubine Midorime sat in the corner, her brows furrowed, looking sullen.

"Ai Fei, why are you sad?" Liu Xiaoer walked over.

Concubine Lu Ji sighed: "The beautiful female character 'Fire Phoenix', which I finally conceived, why did she run away with the Black Shadow Man? I am also going to arrange a love affair for the Fire Phoenix, but as a result, she has already made her own decision and took refuge in the Black Shadow Man, and she is depressed to death!"

Liu Xiaoer said with a smile: "Isn't it good for the fire phoenix to take refuge in the black shadow man? The black shadow man is the protagonist of "The Book King", the fire phoenix follows the black shadow man, and she will definitely be indispensable if she eats and drinks spicy food in the future." It's always impossible to go wrong with the protagonist. ”

Concubine Lu Ji said: "I'm not a rare protagonist, I just want the fire phoenix to find a man she loves, and then live a happy life plainly." ”

Liu Xiaoer said: "The fire phoenix and the black shadow man can be happy for a lifetime." ”

Concubine Lu Ji shook her head: "The Black Shadow Man already has a leg with Jin Yuxin, and the two of them will be together sooner or later." The fire phoenix is at most a small-three. What's more, the black shadow man may still cause trouble in the future, and the ghost knows that the black shadow man will eventually marry a few wives, and I don't want the fire phoenix to compete with a group of women for the black shadow man. Alas, it's useless to say anything now, the fire phoenix has already run away with the black shadow man by itself, what else can I do?"

Liu Xiaoer smiled, hugged the slender waist of Concubine Lu Ji, and said, "Look, what makes you depressed is not just a novel? ”

Concubine Lu Ji said: "However, it took me a lot of brain cells to conceive of 'Fire Phoenix', I invested a lot of emotions in this role, and she is now running away with the black shadow man, which really makes me speechless." ”

Liu Xiaoer said: "If you are unhappy, reimagine a female character." ”

"Don't!" said Concubine Midorihime, "If I conceive a big beauty-woman again, this beauty-woman is likely to be seduced by the Black Shadow Man again, and I don't want to help the Black Shadow Man establish a harem group ......."

"Dizzy!"

As she was talking, at this time, Lin Ajiao suddenly screamed softly, and her delicate face was full of depressed expressions.

Concubine Lu Ji walked over and asked, "Miss Lin, what's wrong?"

Lin Ajiao frowned and said, "I was originally going to design a relationship for the Soul Burial Fairy, so that she could find a man to fall in love with." As a result, in Chapter 99 of "Golden Jade Romance", there is actually a plot that describes the encounter between the Soul Burial Fairy and the Black Shadow Man in the Valley of Despair in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes". The Black Shadow Man and the Soul Burial Fairy seem to be quite in love, the two of them play the piano and flute together, eat and drink together, talk and laugh, according to this rhythm, they will be together sooner or later, right?"

Hearing this, Concubine Lu Ji said to Liu Xiaoer: "How about it, I'm not wrong, right? If a new beauty is conceived, it will definitely become the harem group of the Black Shadow Man." Jin Yuxin has fallen, the fire phoenix has fallen, and now even the Soul Burial Fairy has fallen, and I don't know how many beauties will fall into the clutches of the Black Shadow Man. This dark shadow man seems to be a big pervert-ghost! Alas, there is really no good thing about men!"

"......" Liu Xiaoer.

At this time, Concubine Lu Ji turned her head, looked at Lin Arou, and said seriously: "Rourou girl, you must take caution, be careful when conceiving female characters, and don't conceive female characters too beautifully. ”

Lin Arou was puzzled: "Why?"

Concubine Lu Ji introduced: "The beautiful-female fire phoenix I conceived was seduced away by the black shadow man, and the beautiful-female burial soul fairy conceived by Lin Ajiao was also seduced away by the black shadow man. You must not conceive of any more beautiful women, otherwise, you will definitely be dragged by the black shadow man to be a concubine again. ”

"Can't you conceive of a beauty-woman?" Lin Arou frowned slightly and asked weakly, "But I have already conceived a beauty-woman character." ”

"Isn't it?" asked Midorihime, "what role do you have in mind?"

Lin Arou said: "I just conceived a strange woman who is both talented and beautiful, she can play the piano and play the flute, she is very gentle, especially empathetic, her name is 'Hua Yingxue'......"

…… (To be continued.) )