The first volume is finished, and there are still many shortcomings, including the structure of the world and the arrangement of the story, which have great drawbacks, which makes this novel a bit half-dead. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info

If it was an original novel, I would be very happy with this result. But as a fan, the results of this book can only be said to be very average. Of course, it's more of my own problem, which means that I have to continue to work hard.

Saying all this, it's not that this book will cut anything. How could it be cut?

First of all, although the results of this book are not too outstanding compared to other books, it is already a big improvement for me, so this book is very important to me, just like my own son. My own son can cut it, I still have to watch it grow up.

Secondly, the book has a long, long way to go. The protagonist has just failed, and he still has to work hard to succeed and create his own future.

Although it is impossible to say explicitly, the plan for this book is relatively long.

More importantly, with everyone's support, it is also my responsibility to write this book well.

Special thanks to Kamen Angel 555 for your long-term reward and support, I have always been embarrassed, I feel that I have not done well enough, and the most important thing is that the speed has not been raised. Therefore, I can only work hard in the future, hoping to be worthy of your reward and support.

Thanks to Jerwell for his silent support, thanks to the suggestion of 20, thanks to Xiaotian, Haotian's reward, and many more, such as passing by diving soy sauce, Shen Wuwen, hehe2b, dragon pupil 4, f6c21...... There are other readers who have always supported me, including those in the Beginnings and Genesis and elsewhere, who let me know that this book is still being read.

In fact, after writing this volume, I don't have any other meaning, but I just feel that the first volume has ended, and writing this thing can be regarded as a farewell to the first volume, right? In addition, I also hope that the new volume will have a new beginning, and I will also cheer myself up.

With so many people supporting me, I will definitely write this book, so you don't have to worry about that.

As for the follow-up of the fried chicken nuggets, if you write it carefully, you will have to sprinkle five or six thousand words, but it will not help to promote the plot. So I'll give some explanations in the next volume, so I won't delay everyone's time (a lot of words are too much less water).

Regarding the ending of the first volume, well, I think it's a good thing that the protagonist suffers some setbacks, after all, the protagonist has to have the determination to become stronger, and the later stories will be good. This result is also more in line with the original book, because Mozu House completed three consecutive championships in the chicken nugget contest. There is no mention in the manga of what the chicken nugget contest looks like, everything is made up in the brain, if the manga and anime come out with the scene of the chicken nugget contest, that ...... After all, we're the same people.,Or take the original book as the standard.。 One more point. At present, the protagonist is really not the opponent of Eizaya, and I think it is understandable to lose.

There may be people who spit out things that the protagonist will cry and feel that they are not manly enough. What I want to say is that I just want to express the unwillingness of the protagonist's heart. There was a chance to defeat Eizan but he didn't take it. This kind of regret and not wanting to lose, or a strong character, is the driving force for the protagonist to move forward. Moreover, Mitsui Shou also cried and shouted, "Coach, I want to play basketball"? So, this shouldn't be considered a poisonous point, right?) (If everyone finds it difficult to accept, they can say it, the minority obeys the majority, and if too many people feel uncomfortable, I will delete some words.) ）

Readers who feel too low about the level of the protagonist,Please don't worry.,The protagonist has just entered the Far Moon Academy.,Even if Kohei comes in person,,It takes a process.。 Moreover, I think the protagonist can compete with the future ten masters with only 100,000 words from a transfer student, which is actually quite fast.

Many of the protagonists of Japanese comics have also been struggling to move forward, but they are also growing. For example, in "Dragon Ball", the opponents at the beginning are Leping, Turtle Immortals, and Tianjin Rice, and the opponents at the back are Piccolo, Vegeta, Feliza, Shalu, and Majin Buu. Although Sun Wukong still has to go through a hard battle if he wants to defeat the opponent, the opponent has also changed.

The protagonist upgrades too quickly, which may lead to a consequence, that is, it is easy to collapse in the later stage. If this is just a novel of hundreds of thousands of words, of course I can make the protagonist invincible, but the book should have a certain length.

The rest of the story will unfold one after another, and the characters in the original book will appear more and more, and the world will get bigger and bigger. I believe that the follow-up story will get better and better.

By the way, I would like to explain the problems that arise in several articles.

The first, about Chapelle's translation. This should be the transliteration name, and there is no unity in several translations I have seen, for example, Tencent comics are Chapelle, and some encyclopedias are Chapelle or Sheppel, all of which are different, and should not affect reading.

Secondly, about the question of whether junior high school students live in Polestar Liao, in fact, I also had doubts at the beginning, but it is not difficult to see some clues from the article. In episode 6, which is the page of Kohei and Tanzo Megue's "honest meeting", Tansoko Megumi has this narration (Tencent version): "Since I started junior high school, the only place I can relax is the bathroom in this dormitory...... Although Mrs. Wenxu is a little scary...... "It is not difficult to see that when Tian Suzumi was in junior high school, he lived in Polestar Liao. Moreover, it took 3 months for Megumi Tasho to pass the exam of the Great Mido Buno, and the opening of the higher school was pushed forward by 3 months, and Megumi Tadoko was still a junior high school.

In addition, Polestar Liao is not the only one who has Kohei, when Isshiki held Kohei's welcome party, Isshiki said that some people did not come. This part should be considered a hidden area.

Finally, I'm reading everyone's suggestions. Well, if the change is small, I will try to change, such as the unreasonable, I am trying to change, if the change is large, the ...... After all, it still needs to be updated normally......

That's all for the first time, thank you all for your support, thank you. Then, see you tomorrow in the second volume!