In the cell, the old bookworm sits in front of a computer, reading a criminal investigation novel called "The Secret Girl". [ads:This site has a new URL,Shorthand method:,.]

This "Secret Girl" was just created by Ouyang Wen, and the novel has a word count of 200,000 words.

However, it took the old bookworm less than 20 minutes to read them all, and the number of words read in one minute exceeded 10,000.

"Hahaha! It's kind of interesting! This "Secret Girl" uses the technique of a criminal investigation novel to write a love story, which is quite creative. Especially the layout of several women's emotional lines in the novel, the peaks and loops turn, half virtual and half real, the structure is extremely ingenious, but it's a pity that ......"

The old bookworm shook his head and commented, "This "Secret Girl" can only be regarded as a combination of criminal investigation novels and romance novels, and with the layout of the human flow school, I am tired of reading it for a long time! I want emotional twists, not emotional twists!"

Ouyang Wen asked curiously, "What do you mean by 'distorted feelings'?"

The old bookworm replied: "It's very simple, it's abnormal, that is, perverted, hahaha!"

"......" Ouyang Wen.

Ouyang Wen has actually added some psychologically unhealthy character descriptions to the novel "Secret Girl", but in the eyes of this old bookworm, these unhealthy characters can only be regarded as normal.

"I'll give you a maximum of 3 points for the novel "The Secret Girl". The old bookworm said, "I originally wanted to give you 2 points, but for the sake of your use of the characters of the novel to lay out, this kind of layout technique is the first time I've seen it, it's very novel, just give you 3 points so-so, hahaha!"

The highest score for the evaluation is 5 points, and someone must reach 5 points to succeed.

"The Secret Girl" was rated 3 points, which obviously did not meet the standard, which means that Ouyang Wen needs to continue to revise the novel.

Although he was vetoed by the old bookworm, Ouyang Wen secretly admired the old bookworm.

Because the old bookworm understands the layout in "The Secret Girl"!

In the novel "The Secret Girl", Ouyang Wen adopts a layout technique called "character chain", which connects the characters of the novel into a chain, and then the character drives the plot of the novel, reflecting the theme idea of "character determines fate".

This is Ouyang Wen's self-created human logistics creation technique, and it is also one of his most proud novel layout skills. The average connoisseur may not be able to see the beauty of it.

To Ouyang Wen's surprise, this old bookworm actually saw it!

What's even more incredible is that the old bookworm only spent less than 20 minutes in total reading "The Secret Girl", which is almost ten lines at a glance. Such a fast reading speed can also discern such a hidden layout. The old bookworm's ability to distinguish has surpassed that of ordinary book connoisseurs.

"What the hell is this old bookworm, is he really just a prisoner?"

Ouyang Wen had a question, the forbidden book area is the most mysterious forbidden place in Story City, and the people detained here should not be simple.

Without thinking too much, Ouyang Wen sat back on the ground. Started revising his own novels.

At this time, the old bookworm read the second novel, which was the novel "The Daughter of the Palace" that Hua Yingxue had just written.

"The Daughter of the Palace" is a romance novel describing the emperor's harem, with a total word count of 200,000 words.

As a result, it took the old bookworm less than 10 minutes to read it all, which is faster than watching "The Secret Girl".

Read nearly 20,000 words in one minute!

"Hahaha! It's a bit interesting! This "Daughter of the Palace" is worthy of being written by a female writer, and the description of beautiful women is really a must! Under the rendering of beautiful words, every beauty in the novel is vividly portrayed, and I can even clearly make up the appearance of each beauty. The author's description of emotions is also quite natural and delicate, and among the hundreds of thousands of romance novels I have read, this "Daughter of the Palace" can be ranked in the top 100!"

The old bookworm was intoxicated for a while, and suddenly changed his words, "It's a pity that the plot of "The Daughter of the Palace" still can't escape the routine of regular romance novels, there is really not much new ideas, I am tired of reading it! Also, the emotional description of this novel is too natural and not perverted enough!"

There was a pause. The old bookworm emphasized again, "I emphasize once again, the description of feelings must be distorted! I have read more than 100,000 normal emotional novels, can you please write a novel with perverted emotions? What I want to read is a forbidden book! The kind that wants to be perverted! Hahaha!"

"......" flowers reflect snow.

She really didn't know what to say. Sit back in front of your laptop and silently revise the novel.

"Perverted?

Hua Yingxue fell into deep thought.

After thinking about it, Hua Yingxue found that the old bookworm had already started reading the third novel, which was "Flower Pot" just written by Wu Guoqian.

"Flower Pot" tells the story of a farmer who raises flowers, and every pot of flowers that the farmer raises is a flower fairy.

It only took 10 minutes, and the 200,000-word "Flower Pot" was read by the old bookworm.

"Hahaha! This "Flower Pot" is still very creative in the means of collecting the harem!"

The old bookworm commented with a fluttering eyebrow, "Every pot of flowers is a fairy. If the male protagonist sprinkles a soak of urine in the flower pot, wouldn't it mean that he has a skin-to-skin relationship with a beautiful woman? This setting is really a bit perverted, hahaha! I like it, hahaha!"

"......" Ouyang Wen.

"......" flowers reflect snow.

"......" Wu Guoqian: God...... Brain supplement?

After a burst of laughter, the old bookworm's face sank slightly, shook his head again, and commented: "Although this novel "Flower Pot" is a bit perverted and gives me a lot of surprises, the description of beautiful women in the novel is really unsatisfactory! I don't feel the sense of beauty! Don't think that perverts are ugly, perverts can also be beautiful. If there is only pervert in the novel, but there is no beauty, then it can only be regarded as a third-rate vulgar work, and it is difficult to reach the hall of elegance!"

"......" Wu Guoqian was speechless for a while: An old bookworm who likes perverted plots actually talked about aesthetics?

Isn't it difficult for a strong man to be perverted and aesthetically pleasing?

"What kind of metamorphosis is 'perverted beauty'?" Wu Guoqian asked strangely.

"Alas, you writers are all brainless! You can write normal novels at your fingertips, and all kinds of orthodox routines and creative techniques are perfectly played! However, if you are asked to write a perverted novel, you will be stretched thin!"

The old bookworm let out a long sigh and said with a little hatred, "Speaking of which, the culprits are the old book connoisseurs who are as stupid as stupid donkeys! These fools have studied one set of self-righteous laws of fiction, as long as they are beyond these laws, as long as they are beyond their comprehension. It's all illogical! It's a complete fart!"

"The premise of logical analysis is complete information, but the analysis of logic is not nonsense? Who is qualified to talk about the topic of logic except the creator? Imagination is the vitality of the novel, and logical analysis is not even a fart under the condition of incomplete information!"

"Just have the imagination. There is no logic that doesn't make sense. Only a person who lacks imagination thinks that something that does not conform to existing logic and common sense is wrong. The more unimaginative people are, the more they like to criticize abnormal things and add their own insights to other people's works! These unimaginative connoisseurs, like stupid donkeys, don't know what imagination is. They're a cancer in fiction!"

"Novels are meant to be imaginative, with so many rules and regulations, sooner or later the novel will become a cocoon and bring about its own destruction. This can't be written, that can't be touched, writing a novel is tied, and the novel will inevitably go to a desperate situation. Too many writers and connoisseurs don't understand the meaning of imagination for fiction, otherwise, I wouldn't have been in a book famine for so many years, alas!"

After listening to the words of the old bookworm. Ouyang Wen, Hua Yingxue, and Wu Guoqian didn't know what to say, so they just silently revised the novel.

At this time, the old bookworm's eyes fell on Liu Xing, who was still immersed in the code, and asked, "Young man, why are you writing so slowly, you haven't written it yet?"

Liu Xing didn't look up, and continued to type desperately: "Perverted beauty novels naturally have a perverted way of writing. ”

"You write a novel of perverted beauty?" said the old bookworm with a smile, "young man, write well! If you can write a perverted work that satisfies me." The old man has a big gift for you. ”

Liu Xing didn't have a bird, what kind of gift could an old guy who was imprisoned in a prison cell have?

Liu Xing's typing speed is too slow, although he has secretly performed the "Two-handed Fighting Technique", but he can only type more than 200 words per minute.

Just as Liu Xing was still typing hard. Ouyang Wen, Hua Yingxue, and Wu Guoqian have already changed the novel again, and showed the revised novel to the old bookworm.

"It's still not good, the relationship pattern between men and women is still normal, not perverted enough!"

"This book doesn't work, this perverted relationship lacks beauty!"

"Alas, your understanding of 'perversion' is too superficial!"

……

It took less than 10 minutes. Three novels were killed by old bookworms again.

Helpless, the three of them could only revise the novel again.

Ouyang Wen, Hua Yingxue, and Wu Guoqian have all received professional writing training in the School of Fiction, and they usually write orthodox positive energy novels, and have never written forbidden books, let alone perverted harem emotional stories.

Therefore, it is really not very easy to write, and it is a bit difficult to let go.

The trio revised it twice later, but it still didn't satisfy the old bookworm.

After a few hours of tossing, they all realized how difficult it was to write a novel for an old bookworm.

Ordinary best-selling novels and orthodox star novel writing methods can no longer satisfy the taste of this hardcore old bookworm.

Because almost all of these novels have been read by old bookworms, they are already aesthetically tired.

Only abnormal or even perverted novels can make old bookworms fall into the eye.

So the question arises: how to write a perverted novel?

Ouyang Wen, Hua Yingxue, and Wu Guoqian frowned and thought about it.

"Whew-"

At this time, Liu Xing on the side suddenly stopped, and wiped the fine sweat on his forehead with his arm.

After 7 hours of fighting, I finally pieced together a novel.

"Young man, have you finished writing?" urged the old bookworm, "hurry up and let me read the novel." ”

Liu Xing explained: "I still have to proofread the text of the novel again, there may be typos in it......"

"No, making typos in my brain is one of my personal hobbies. The old bookworm laughed, "Some novels are unsightly written, and there are many typos, and it's still very interesting to make up these typos in the brain, hahaha!"

"......" Liu Xing.

Liu Xing understands how hard the old bookworm is, he has been forced to make up typos in his brain as the pleasure of reading novels, and the severity of the book shortage can be seen.

Since the old bookworm has this special hobby, Liu Xing also saves trouble and directly passes the novel to the old bookworm.

"My sister can't be so much?"

When he got the novel, the old bookworm immediately read it.

The novel written by Liu Xing is called "My Sister Can't Be So Much". It is adapted from the love experience of Duan Yu, the male protagonist of "Dragon Babu".

Duan Yu's love experience is still quite tortuous, when he fell in love with Zhong Ling, he found that Zhong Ling was his sister, when he was about to marry Mu Wanqing, he found out that Mu Wanqing was his sister, and when he fell in love with Wang Yuyan. found out that Wang Yuyan was still his sister.

All the beauties that Duan Yu fell in love with were all his sisters, and the hit rate was 100%, which was due to the fact that he had a father Duan Zhengchun with great powers.

Of course, there is an explanation in "Dragon Babu". Duan Yu was not born to Duan Zhengchun, so none of the beauties that Duan Yu met were actually Duan Yu's own sister.

However, in "My Sister Can't Be So Much", Liu Xing deleted this plot, and Duan Yu is still Duan Zhengchun's biological son.

The reason why Liu Xing made such a modification is because such a plot is more perverted......

"Hahaha! This book "My Sister Can't Be So Much" is really perverted enough, it's actually a brother-sister relationship!"

Five minutes later, the old bookworm suddenly laughed and said, "The three beauties that the protagonist loves are all his own sisters." It's so twisted, it's so frustrating, I like it, hahaha!"

"......" Ouyang Wen, Hua Yingxue, Wu Guoqian.

The three of them all cast strange glances at Liu Xing, and a question arose in their hearts at the same time: He even dared to write incestuous novels?

"Yes, yes, "My Sister Can't Be So Much" has a lot of highlights! The portrayal of the three beauties is quite standard, Ling Ling (Zhong Ling) is lively and clever, and is a Lori type; Qingqing (Mu Wanqing) likes to beat people, and is a queen type; Yan Yan (Wang Yuyan) Bingqing Yujie is a goddess type. Each of the three beauties has its own characteristics. It's really pleasant to include the protagonist's harem at the same time. The most rare thing is that the protagonist and the three beauties are still brothers and sisters, they change from love to family affection, and then reach the realm of love and family affection. This emotional experience is really perverted, hahaha!"

After a burst of laughter, the old bookworm then commented, "I have read tens of thousands of novels like this kind of unethical brother-sister love, and it is not new. But. This "My Sister Can't Be So Much" has something unique in terms of layout. The protagonist's father messed around with flowers, included all the beauties of the previous generation in the harem, and gave birth to a group of beautiful daughters, who eventually became the protagonist's wife. ”

"The father monopolized the beauties of the previous generation, and the son inherited the mantle and monopolized the beauties of the next generation. The father and son cooperated seamlessly, and they caught all the beauties in the world. It's the first time I've seen such a perverted harem layout, it's quite creative and open-minded, hahaha!"

However, the biggest highlight of "My Sister Can't Be So Much" is the statue of the fairy sister. The protagonist sees the statue of the fairy sister in the cave, falls in love with the statue at first sight. Later, the protagonist meets Yan Yan (Wang Yuyan) and finds that Yan Yan looks exactly the same as the statue, so he also falls in love with Yan Yan. In fact, what the protagonist really loves is the statue of the fairy sister, and Yan Yan is just a substitute for the statue. In other words, the protagonist has a tendency to 'fetish-object-fetish', which is really perverted. I like it, though, hahaha!"

"......" Hua Yingxue, Ouyang Wen, Wu Guoqian.

The three of them cast strange glances at Liu Xing again: even the plot of "love-thing-fetish" was written?

"The statue of the fairy sister can be regarded as a stroke of genius, which not only makes the novel more perverted, but also more connotative!"

The old bookworm seems to be quite touched by this book "My Sister Can't Be So Much", and continues to interpret, "The protagonist first met the statue and liked it, but he transferred this love for the statue to Yan Yan. So, the question arises, does the protagonist love the statue or Yan Yan? This involves a very old philosophical proposition -- what is existence? A statue is exactly the same as your appearance, is the statue you? Is your picture really the same person as you? Is the protagonist in love with Yan Yan, or is he in love with the fairy sister in his mind? According to the existential point of view, existence is not based on human subjective perception......

The old bookworm gushed endlessly, first from existential philosophy to fiction, then from the theory of phenomenological analysis to the psychology of memory, and finally back to perverted aesthetics.

"Although the novel is all-encompassing, in the end, it is all about beauty. The old bookworm said, "As long as it is beautiful, you don't need to care about the form, let alone common sense." It is a pity that too many writers have been bound by the so-called laws of creation, lack the ability to create beauty, and just keep repeating the existing beauty. As everyone knows, people are aesthetically fatigued. Writers do not want to forge ahead and cannot break through, and the reader's aesthetic taste will also be rigid, forming a vicious circle, and the final result will be ...... It's just a book shortage! Alas, it's all tears when it comes to it! If it weren't for the book famine, the old man would not have fallen into such a sad place. ”

After sighing, the old bookworm suddenly became excited again, and said, "Fortunately, today's book "My Sister Can't Be So Much" has made me addicted to books again, I haven't read such a perverted and beautiful novel for a long time, hahaha!

"......" the crowd.

Hearing this, Hua Yingxue and the others roughly understood.

The book "My Sister Can't Be So Much" written by Liu Xing not only has the exquisite layout of Ouyang Wen's "Secret Girl", but also the vivid portrayal of female characters in Hua Yingxue's "Daughter of the Palace", as well as the perverted emotional line in Wu Guoqian's "Flower Pot", and at the same time, the idea of the novel is also intriguing.

It is equivalent to combining the best of the three in one.

Of course, Liu Xing didn't think so much about coding words, he just wanted to adapt "Dragon Babu" into a perverted novel.

Click!

Just then, there was a crisp sound, and the iron door in the passage suddenly opened.

A new passage is in front of everyone's eyes.

The first level has finally passed!

Now that the iron gate has been opened, Liu Xing packed up and prepared to continue on the road.

"Slow down, young man. At this time, the old bookworm said with a smile, "I said before, as long as you can write a perverted and beautiful novel, I will give you a big gift." ”

…… (To be continued.) )xh118