Chapter 223: Hanfu
Simply said, "Yes...... This is really an attempt to break through myself, and I am also very nervous, I don't know if today's performance is good or not. ”
Wan Qin's words changed: "The stage performance is good, and I don't have any singing skills." But I still have to point out your shortcomings, the lyrics of your song are too ordinary, and I don't see the slightest bright spot, and I think this is something you can improve in the future......"
Simply smiled: "Okay, after the show is over, I will definitely improve it seriously and strive to present it to the audience in the best way." ”
After the show is over, many creators will make appropriate arrangements for the songs they wrote in the show.
After all, there are only twenty-four hours in the show, and the time is limited. Subsequent improvements can make the work reach a better state and gain more recognition from the audience.
Of course, Chang'an's version is already the best in the show, and there is no need to make the slightest change.
Wan Qin continued: "Yes, the style of music is still very good, but the lyrics are a little lacking. But it's true that time is too tight, come on!"
He nodded simply, "Okay, Teacher Wan Qin." ”
"Based on the melody and lyrics of this song, coupled with the simple and beautiful typhoon and blurry singing, I am willing to give this song a score of 9.0 for the tune and 8.0 for the lyrics. ”
A simple bow of thanks.
At this time, Wu Yue followed Wan Qin's words and said: "My views are quite different from those of Teacher Wan Qin. I think the typhoon, singing voice, stage performance and music are all good, but the processing of the lyrics is still too sloppy and not detailed enough, which needs to be simple and you will work hard in the follow-up!"
He smiled simply, "Thank you, teacher, I will try to improve." ”
Wu Yue continued: "But in terms of facts, we still have to look at the work as a whole. So after my careful consideration, this time I gave the simple song a score of 8.8 for the song and 8.2 for the lyrics. ”
"I think that although the expressiveness of the scene is very good, and the simple expression is almost perfect, I think there are still a few shortcomings in the lyrics of the work. ”
A simple bow of thanks.
Zhang Yang then said: "Indeed, the evaluations of the two teachers are very appropriate. The simple and breakthrough performance really seemed to let me see the contemporary Su Daji, and this one was really too charming. ”
"It's hard to imagine that the person on stage today is the simple, blurry voice I know with an uplifting melody that holds my heart firmly from the first note to the end. ”
After listening to the Zhang Yang evaluation, he smiled heartily, and his blushing face was very beautiful.
Zhang Yang said: "So I gave this work a score of 9.0 for the song and 8.0 for the lyrics. It's really a high-quality work!And the expressiveness of the stage is fantastic! I don't know what others think, anyway, I enjoyed watching it, I hope you can continue to work hard!"
He bowed briefly and thanked, "Okay, thank you, Mr. Zhang Yang." ”
Simple got a score of 8.5, although this is a score that would have been eliminated in the previous periods, but it doesn't matter if it's simple, because she sang happily and happily today, and she thinks she's in the best shape to present this piece on stage.
Although this score is likely to be eliminated, she is already satisfied with the fact that she has been in the show for so many episodes.
As for the final stay, let it be natural and leave it to God to decide.
He said simply, "Thank you for your comments. I had a lot of fun singing today, maybe I focused more on the expressiveness of the stage, so I ignored the lack of lyrics. ”
To put it simply, this is a competition about creation after all, and it is a competition about how good the song is and how well it is created, not how well it is presented on stage.
But there is no regret about simplicity.
He bowed briefly and thanked: "Thank you, judges, teachers, audience, friends, thank you." ”
The male audience in the audience shouted simple names, and the wife next to him looked at him with disgust.
After simply stepping down, Chang'an is about to appear.
The host Wang Hai said: "Wow, this one is really enjoyable, I want to travel to Shang Zhou, to the mediocre tyrant Shang Wang." ”
"Below, our creator will take us from the Shang Dynasty to the Three Kingdoms era. Everyone must be wondering which of the Three Kingdoms characters our creator will write songs for?"
"I think Teacher Zhang Yang seems to have something to say, what do you think, Teacher Zhang Yang?"
Zhang Yang rubbed his beard and said, "Eh...... Personally, I like Zhuge Liang more because he is resourceful. ”
Wang Hai said with a smile: "I can reveal a little bit to you, the creator who will appear next is Chang'an, which Three Kingdoms character do you think Chang'an will write songs for!"
Hearing that Chang'an was the next to appear, the audience suddenly became interested, and some viewers shouted: "Zhou Yu!"
"Liu Bei!"
"Zhang Fei!"
"Big Joe, Little Joe!"
There are really all kinds of speculations under the stage, but there is no Cao Cao.
Wang Hai said with a smile: "I listened to it for a while, and I can only say that I regret that none of the audience guessed correctly!
Chang'an was dressed in Hanfu and slowly walked to the center of the stage.
It was the first time for the audience to see Chang'an wearing ancient costumes, and they were all stunned!
"Is it so handsome? It is worthy of being the male god of the whole people, the Chang'an of the husband of the whole people, no matter what he wears, he is so handsome and stylish, this Hanfu is really handsome!"
"This antique Hanfu is really amazing! I didn't expect it to be a song about Cao Cao! I'm looking forward to it!"
The viewers who are receiving the live broadcast on the Internet have long gone crazy!
"Oh my God! My brother Chang'an is wearing an ancient costume! Wearing Hanfu! Is it so handsome, okay! I really want to go to the scene to see my brother Chang'an!"
"Let's go together! Let's go together to see Brother Chang'an! I've only seen Brother Chang'an once from afar at the airport! I really want to look good at close range!"
"Does everyone care about Chang'an's ancient costumes and Hanfu? Does no one care that Chang'an actually wrote a song for Cao Cao, a traitorous male? This is really an unexpected choice!", you are lonely, and the young lady warms you with a movie