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This book has been written for two months, stumbling, and has been tepid, but the editor still gave me a lot of support and made a few good recommendations, so I have today's results. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info
The first time I wrote a book, I didn't know what was poisonous or not, I just came according to my own ideas, so when you think it is poisonous in the future, you can write it in the comments.
When shooting the condor, the protagonist just crossed and was very weak, after all, where can a rooster be strong, although he has intelligence, so he arranged for him to meet Huang Rong, and then out of his own bad taste, let Huang Rong and Guo Jing separate, and then wrote the death of the Seven Monsters of Jiangnan, and made Guo Jing and Huang Rong turn against each other, and finally harmed the Tomb Sect and the Quanzhen Sect, but all of this is done by taking advantage of the situation, not the protagonist's own strength, so some readers say that the protagonist is too weak and should go to the side quest, that is, the killing mission.
The reason why I set this side quest is to show that the demon system is not a pure system to help the host of the host, not a pie falling from the sky, but has the creator's own intentions, they hope to use the demon system to subtly reshape the host's three views, and transform it into a real demon race, and at the same time, it is also to pave the way for some of the later cruel hearts and become the host of the monster from the inside out.
But I don't want the protagonist to be such a demon.
Some people say that the protagonist is hypocritical, he has become a chicken demon, and he is still thinking about what he is doing for others, won't people kill people? It's nothing to kill the wicked or the alien!
I just want the protagonist to be not the Virgin, and he will definitely kill people in the future, but the reason why I said in the Condor World that the protagonist must stick to his own bottom line and can't kill people at will, just to give the protagonist a time to slowly adapt to the role, and he was a chicken demon at the time, not a person, as long as he kills, no matter whether he is a wicked person, a good person or a foreign race, it will make him subconsciously lower his bottom line, which is not what I want.
Personally, I think that no matter the shemale, regardless of good or evil, if you want to become a strong person, you must have your own firm beliefs and unshakable bottom line and persistence, the protagonist used to be an ordinary person, and now he is a chicken demon, and it is inevitable that the three views will be destroyed, but there is still a process to re-establish it.
So, he may start naïve, but he will grow.
Besides, there is a paragraph in the middle that has been criticized by many readers, it is that after the protagonist went to the palace with Huang Rong to the pit viper, in the chapters of the inn, the protagonist inadvertently killed someone, and after exchanging the cultivation exercises, he had to fly to the highest place to practice, and he left Huang Rong for this reason, thinking that the protagonist was very naïve.
I want to say two things: one is that the protagonist has never been exposed to cultivation, in fact, I don't know what the difference will be a few meters higher, he just wants to do his best for the first time, not naïve, and the second is that the protagonist did not leave Huang Rong for a moment of brain fever, in fact, before going to the palace, there were signs, because Huang Rong had begun to suspect him, thinking that he was a monster, the protagonist had been a chicken demon for a few days, and he was very weak, I don't think it's strange to have this idea, these are actually written in the article.
Let's talk about the gourd baby world.
My original intention in this world was to make him a world where the protagonist transitioned.,I want him to improve some cultivation.,Change some concepts.,A few foreshadowing.,But it's generally written.,Plus the Hulu Brothers animation plot is short.,The characters are simple.,So that the plot is very bland.,Even I'm not very satisfied.,I feel that it's a bit hasty to choose this world.,But,This world is about to end.,The protagonist is also going to start a new world experience.,I won't think about the gourd baby so plain and boring.。
Moreover, although the protagonist is not strong yet, he already has the seeds to become stronger, and he will no longer be subject to restrictions everywhere like the first two worlds, so if readers don't want to see it in the back of the gourd baby world, just skip it.
And what I want to say is that there is only one protagonist, that is, Zhao Shenping, as for us in the title of the book, in fact, I just want to express that the host is not only him, Su is really not the heroine, because of the practice of shemale skills, but she is an important supporting role, and she is calm and witty, there will be great achievements in the future, and there will be some strange relationships with the protagonist in the future, as for the heroine, there will naturally be, and it is also a host, but it has not yet appeared, and the other is the problem of the host reincarnation in various worlds, of course, he can't do anything before he transforms, and after the transformation, he is not a normal person, (well, I have already thought about what he looks like, not a normal person) , but there will still be some plots that everyone is looking forward to, and I think it's inevitable and natural.
The overall style of this book, not hot-blooded, is semi-cheerful, the protagonist is not only the fate of the system, he will gradually have his own style, characteristics, ways of doing things, and finally a little spoiler, the protagonist still has a lot of fairy world to try, like what white snake is pushed to Leifeng Tower, Journey to the West and Sun Wukong work together to fight the heavenly soldiers, a Chinese ghost story to save the tree demon grandma and the like, in short, the literary style is not enough, the brain hole to make up, you must have a lot of plots in this book that you have never read.
I hope you can expect something from him.
Finally,I want to say that I built a readership some time ago.,QQ:175637104,You can add it.,The update time and some discussions of the plot in the future are in it.,You can talk about a good plot or a good world that you think of.。 Of course, you can also express your opinion in the comment section, and I will read it every day. A few characters and plots written by the boss of the demon building are coming soon.
It's just, I really want to ask, the boss of the demon building, are you still there?