101 On Writing (67) "The Great Climax (Medium)"
Recently, I have seen "The Legend of Deer and Ding" a lot, and I just discussed the "Duplex Climax" with someone in the group, so let's share it here!
The best metaphor is a woman's orgasm, which is duplex, intertwined, wave after wave, and you can't blindly piston movement, but also pay attention to skills, pay attention to mood, and pay attention to tricks......
You can experience it for yourself when no one is around
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101st rejection (630268437) 14:05:31
Really, I watched Lu Ding Ji recently, and the climax was really cool
101st rejection (630268437) 14:05:37
The climax came in waves
101st rejection (630268437) 14:05:49
The orgasm should not be blown out all at once
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:05:57
In the climax, there are many turns
Mu Mu (609050508) 14:06:02
That was Jin Yong's last book......
Burning Love (304193492) 14:06:09
101st rejection (630268437) 14:06:16
It's like a woman's orgasm, there are shallow and high
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:06:25
What the G-spot, what **. Pen × fun × Pavilion www. biquge。 info。。
Burning Love (304193492) 14:06:31
Dare to ask, my sister-in-law is not at home today, right?
101st rejection (630268437) 14:06:41
Connecting makes you tall for a while
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:06:47
At the end, the aftertaste is endless
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:06:59
She goes to work
Burning Love (304193492) 14:07:30
I said so
101st rejection (630268437) 14:08:09
I saw the invincible Divine Fist yesterday, Gui Xin Shu
In Wei Xiaobao's mansion, if he wants to find someone, where the little emperor is, he will assassinate him
101st rejection (630268437) 14:08:39
This is the prelude to the climax, right? But it doesn't start, and it starts to foreshadow
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:09:32
Wei Xiaobao tried his best to gamble with Gui's son again
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:09:45
It's gibberish again
101st rejection (630268437) 14:10:11
Especially betting on dice, it is extremely exciting, and it is due to the low IQ of his son, and he is more accurate than the head
101st rejection (630268437) 14:10:23
With a bang, the dice were thrown out and hit the door
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:10:38
Another slap on the table, all 6 dice are 6 o'clock
101st rejection (630268437) 14:10:56
It's interesting to watch, and Xiaobao is sweating
101st rejection (630268437) 14:11:31
This shows that the protagonist pretends to be cool or not, depending on the opponent's ability, the stronger the ability, the cooler the win
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:12:04
Later, he threw the dice, Xiaobao cheated and won steadily, but who knew that Gui Xinshu also cheated, and used internal force to blow and win for his son
101st rejection (630268437) 14:12:21
This is a turning point, everyone thinks that the protagonist wins, who knows if it is biased
101st rejection (630268437) 14:13:01
Then he was forced to draw a map of the palace, and he was heavily guarded, preventing him from sending people to deliver letters
101st rejection (630268437) 14:13:43
Xiaobao once again showed his cleverness, drawing a pictorial letter, the word was written with laughter, humor, and the crisis lurked
101st rejection (630268437) 14:14:18
Then Gui Xinshu broke in, and the reader's heart was hanging, but he didn't see anything, and his heart was put down
Seeking Mystery (232592747) 14:14:27
There is an assassination scene that leads the reader in the back
It depends on the author's play
101st rejection (630268437) 14:14:49
Then pie
His subordinates sent the letter, thinking that the plan had succeeded
101st rejection (630268437) 14:15:09
But when it was almost dawn, someone came to report that the man was fainting outside
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:15:22
The protagonist is in a hurry, the letter is not delivered, and the reader's heart rises again
101st rejection (630268437) 14:15:52
Hurry up and send the letter again, it's dawn, and I don't know if the assassination will be successful, so I will bury a button
101st rejection (630268437) 14:16:23
Don't untie the button first, let Xiaobao enter the palace to see the emperor, and the two monarchs and ministers are harmonious and have a good discussion
101st rejection (630268437) 14:16:55
This is a wonderful technique, the crisis is written enough, let it go first, and write a peaceful plot
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:17:07
But the crisis is even more worrying
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:17:47
The reader has been wondering, when will the three turtles jump in and assassinate?
101st rejection (630268437) 14:18:31
And this performance paved the way for Wei Xiaobao and Kangxi, and the monarch and ministers to start a gap below
101st rejection (630268437) 14:19:11
Before the two fall out, you might as well let the two of them get as good as possible, and then fall from the apex to cause a dramatic impact
101st rejection (630268437) 14:20:02
Next, Xiaobao sent Mao Dongzhu to the Queen Mother, and after sending him out, three turtles stopped him
101st rejection (630268437) 14:20:26
After some stratagem, he killed Mao Dongzhu and Slender Toutuo, and temporarily resolved the crisis
101st rejection (630268437) 14:20:59
At this time, Kangxi's accountability came, revealing the identity of Xiaobao Tiandihui, and the emperor turned over the hole cards
101st rejection (630268437) 14:21:55
In the reader's heart, there are three worries, one is how Kangxi will deal with Xiaobao, the second is what will happen to the heroes of the Heaven and Earth Society, and the third is how to resolve the crisis of the three people of Gui Xinshu?
101st rejection (630268437) 14:22:42
Not to mention it later, the crisis set the crisis, resolved one layer, and then another, until I arrived at Shenlong Island, put away the major beauties, and finally went to the all-eating island
101st rejection (630268437) 14:23:02
After watching this large climactic plot, I realized a lot
101st rejection (630268437) 14:23:46
The first is the compound climax, which is the foreshadowing of another climax, one is not untied, and then another climax is set, staggered with each other, and a wave of ** high
101st rejection (630268437) 14:24:15
This requires a few more contradictory relationships to be laid out in advance, which are detonated here and used many times in the Lu Ding Ji
101st rejection (630268437) 14:25:08
For example, Gui Xinshu killed Kangxi, Kangxi and Xiaobao Junchen crisis, Mao Dongzhu and the Queen Mother, Tiandihui and Kangxi, Shenlong Island and Xiaobao
101st rejection (630268437) 14:25:24
One by one, they are all concentrated here
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:25:38
It's all worn by the main character
101st rejection (630268437) 14:26:21
Then as an opponent, you have to be brilliant, such as the young master who returned home at the beginning, the fool is funny, and Gui Xinshu's martial arts are strong and cunning
101st rejection (630268437) 14:26:35
Kangxi's wisdom and intelligence, the emperor's majesty
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:27:06
The princess in the middle was pregnant with Xiaobao's child, and asked her to take her away, and inserted a touch of color in the crisis
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:27:20
The character of the princess greatly enlivens the storyline
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:27:06
The princess in the middle was pregnant with Xiaobao's child, and asked her to take her away, and inserted a touch of color in the crisis
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:27:20
The character of the princess greatly enlivens the storyline
101st rejection (630268437) 14:28:13
Sect Master Hong is insidious and extreme, as well as strong in martial arts
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:28:55
The soldiers who Xiaobao made friends in the middle were released, which not only highlighted the brotherhood, but also highlighted the awesomeness of the protagonist
101st rejection (630268437) 14:29:38
That's the design of the duplex orgasm, it's so fucking awesome!
I'm afraid I'll have to think about it over and over again
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:30:08
The eight women of Yangzhou Yichun Courtyard work together as a husband, and there is also such a duplex climax
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:31:10
Jin Yong's book is really amazing, after I read Lu Ding Ji, I will continue to read other books and thoroughly understand it
Silently roaring (347073290) 14:31:44
It seems to be a huge domino, and from the time the first piece is placed, you know the scene of the detonation. This control really has to be grinded out
101st rejection (630268437) 14:32:06
Well, this kind of climax can't be written without a program
The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:32:17
The climax was conceived first, and the plot was designed in reverse
101st rejection (630268437) 14:32:39
For example, the three of Gui Xinshu appeared, and there was something abrupt, right? The three old monsters had never come out before
101st rejection (630268437) 14:32:57
suddenly came out and killed Wu Liuqi
101st rejection (630268437) 14:33:29
This shows that there the author is already preparing for the great climax of the palace
101st rejection (630268437) 14:33:44
The image of the three characters needs to stand in the reader's mind
101st rejection (630268437) 14:33:57
Then the dice in the Earl's Court are exciting
101st rejection (630268437) 14:34:33
The main thing is to disgust the reader with the three of them, and it is comfortable to turn back and slap them in the face when the protagonist turns around
101st rejection (630268437) 14:35:21
If you think about it carefully, Slender Tou Tuo just infiltrated the palace at that time, which was deliberate enough, and it was obviously the author's arrangement
101st rejection (630268437) 14:35:53
Sect Leader Hong led people to block Xiaobao, which was also unreasonable, and it was also a deliberate arrangement
101st rejection (630268437) 14:36:30
Only Kangxi and Xiaobao turned over the hole cards, I really didn't expect it, this is a stroke of genius, and the other contradictions are all pulled to make up
Silently roaring (347073290) 14:41:14
The compound orgasm requires a rigorous outline, which is not something that one or two inspirations can achieve.