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Let's take a look at this post, half a month

Motivational post

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The mood written in it is very good, I take it as one

Urban fragments to analyze it

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The theme shared today is how to make the text of a novel full of emotion

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I analyze this fragment as a novel, and everyone should read a story

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First of all, the synopsis of this story is that the hero faces all kinds of ridicule, difficulties, and pressure in order to realize his dreams, and finally struggles to succeed

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So, why do you feel a very strong sense of repression and resentment when you watch it?

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Today I'm going to break it down

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In general, in order to suppress the protagonist, we arrange some supporting characters to taunt

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For example: look at that garbage, how and how.

yes, yes, what rubbish

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So, direct verbal taunts of the supporting characters are the easiest way to do it

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The second approach is that the protagonist himself keeps talking in his heart, such as: I'm not garbage, how am I going to be

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The language, demeanor and actions of the supporting characters + the protagonist's mental activities, reactions + specific scenes can achieve the purpose of suppressing and suppressing the protagonist

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However, this is only the easiest way to do it, but why is the oppressive atmosphere in this article so strong?

The Wind Has Frost (862070352) 20:26:51

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What else are we missing?

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Here it is

Determine the inner straw of the protagonist

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The inner straw is the most of a character

Cherish things, you can lose everything, but you must not lose the straw in your heart

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For the characters here, it's "self-esteem and dreams"

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He can have no money, no friends, or fail exams, but he can't throw them away

Self-esteem and dreams

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So, the next step is to design a series of

The plot is to hit the protagonist hard

Inner straw

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Stick a knife in the most vulnerable place in your heart

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The first step is to taunt your friends

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For example, the class reunion, everyone else is doing well at the class reunion, but the protagonist is embarrassed to mention himself

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For the best effect here, it must not be a deliberate mockery of the protagonist, but a feeling of simply ignoring it

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Like a former best friend

Ignore you

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Or you talk about a novel, and the other person twists his face away

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Or the other party mentions that it's not good now, and the protagonist is just happy, and the other party has said a problem that is not very difficult, such as being entangled

Where to go on weekend vacation?

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This kind of pair

The blow to the protagonist's self-esteem is completely invisible

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An invisible blow of disregard is the most severe

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The second step is to arrange for the protagonist's closest people to continue to strike

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Such as parents, such as girlfriends

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And this blow is out of complete incomprehension, and I don't listen to what you say

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There is no pain more painful than the people closest to you who don't understand you

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In order to increase the pain here, the author did not directly arrange for his parents to hit him at first

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Instead, take the lead role

concealed the reality and lied to his parents that he had found a job and could support his living expenses

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I want to make my parents happy

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As a result, parents will be skeptical

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When the plot arrives at this point, the reader will be very worried and have a sad feeling

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Self-esteem uses

A rope that is too slender to hang can be more slender is a lie

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Lies can be exposed at any time

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At that time, the protagonist's precious self-esteem will be exposed and trampled on

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In the third step, sure enough, the lie was exposed, and the teacher complained to his parents, reflecting that the protagonist did not study and wrote novels every day

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This is where the climax of the plot is reached

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The protagonist is called to the office, and the office is very bright, but the protagonist's heart is cold, because all the teachers and parents are there

Criticize him

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Self-esteem is nakedly exposed and trampled on

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Next, the protagonist simply ignored it, and in order to pursue his dreams, he moved out to live on his own and wrote his own novels

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The oppressive atmosphere seems to have eased somewhat

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However, the fourth step

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Continue to create depression with the cruelty of reality

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For example, there is no money to eat, such as living in a cold place, such as walking on campus and watching other people's couples is very sweet

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The buddies in the dorm all watched like monsters

The main character, who thinks he's crazy

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even

The protagonist gets a seal push and announces the good news to his family, and the family is numb, right?

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In the fifth step, a most inconspicuous sling was arranged, which was not as good as the protagonist, and he came to give the protagonist food to him

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Persuade him to turn back

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Although the sling is well-intentioned, it is also a mockery in disguise

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So, have you seen it, this oppressive atmosphere is divided into 5 steps, and the effect of one layer is stronger than the other

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At the end, when the protagonist screams madly in the bathroom: The life you arranged for me is not what I want!

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But ironically, others still looked at him contemptuously, like a college dog

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There, I shouted along

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No one has gone through 5 layers of blows and can withstand it

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In addition to the objective 5-layer blow

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Here the author also uses a subjective descriptive technique

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The so-called subjective description is

If I am happy, then I see that the sky is blue

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If I'm sad, I'll see

Blue sky

It's cold

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The protagonist is in the whole text, and everything he looks at is a mockery

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When someone else smiled, he thought it was a mockery

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Someone else turned his head to talk to someone else, and he felt that the person didn't care about him

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He has a girlfriend who loves him, he feels that it is a burden, he is not confident, and he is afraid of his girlfriend leaving every day

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If his brother fetches him, he feels that he has no money and cannot afford to pay it back

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This kind of subjective description is very awesome

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Objectively, there are 5 layers of blows, and subjectively it is still a gray tone

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The reader will feel as if every word is shouting: I want to succeed!

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At this point, and then arrange a successful climax, the reader will naturally be very happy

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Well, let's talk about a very brilliant supporting role in it

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The sling that feeds the protagonist for food

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That sling is actually very sad, and he doesn't think this path is suitable for him, but he doesn't have the courage to pursue his dreams as well as the protagonist

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His only self-esteem is by scolding the protagonist

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Or give the protagonist food to eat, favor him, and find self-esteem

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This pathetic sling, when the protagonist is about to drop out of school and go home to concentrate on pursuing his dreams

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He is very reluctant, because the protagonist is the only friend he can talk to, and it is also the support of his self-esteem

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The protagonist is gone, he is undoubtedly at the bottom, and he has no self-esteem at all

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At that time, I saw something, and my heart was very sour

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Then I thought about it for a long time, why is this happening?

The Wind Has Frost (862070352) 20:53:53

Why?

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It turns out that in reality, everyone has a disguise

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We hide what we care about most in our hearts

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When the things you care about most are revealed

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Or about to lose

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The characters suddenly come alive and can touch the soul of the reader

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For example, in the smiling and proud rivers and lakes, Yue Buqun painstakingly pursued the first place in martial arts

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Bad things are done

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When he found out that it was empty, then the character burned up, which was particularly sad

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and Murong Fu, who finally sat on the grave, went crazy, and his dream of recovering the country was shattered

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The figure also burned

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Whether a character's inner straw is turned into a towering tree or destroyed, it will have a shocking effect

The Wind Has Frost (862070352) 20:57:37

……

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So this supporting character is very cleverly designed

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From the perspective of supporting roles, he can't do without the protagonist

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On the other hand, although the protagonist regards him as his only friend, he does not understand the protagonist

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So the protagonist has to leave him in pain

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Only by leaving the only friend and forcing yourself onto the lonely road of breaking the kettle can you become a benevolent person if you don't succeed

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Cut off everything from the past

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Shut yourself off, retreat and break through the cocoon and turn into a butterfly

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By the way, if you want to create a special iron buddy

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Iron buddy

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Remember, this person must be willing to share his dreams and pains with you

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In this article, all the characters are indifferent, but this sling shares his dreams and pains with the protagonist

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So all of a sudden, the reader feels that this person can be trusted

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Although he has also scolded the protagonist, he looks down on the protagonist and does not think that the protagonist will succeed

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But he trusts the protagonist and becomes the protagonist's brother

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If you write an enthusiastic brother character in the future, then this person must be chattering, willing to talk about his dreams and pains, and in doing so, the character will definitely be alive

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Also, before the climax of the design, arrange 3-5 heavy blows, suppress the protagonist layer by layer, and finally explode suddenly, which is the coolest

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Whatever the protagonist cares about the most, he hits

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If you care about women, you will fight women

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If you care about your brother, you will kill your brother

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cares about money, so that the protagonist has no money

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Finally, the subjective color of the protagonist, sadness, looks gray in everything

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Be happy, see everything bright

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Numbness, he can't see anything, he can't hear, and he doesn't know that it hurts when others hit him

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Well, that's all, if you can understand it thoroughly and use it well, then the text must be full of feelings, and the emotions must be on the page

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Sharing.

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I feel that the article of Full Moon is so well written because it is a personal experience

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The deepest experience

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What we need to do is to analyze and refine the principles and techniques in it, and apply it to our own novels in the future

Heavenly Dao has constant (771633788) 21:09:03

Awesome, taught

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The first time I write about myself, I must feel the most, but I can't write on instinct

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The next time you write someone else's story, can you still feel like you're burning your life?

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In addition to entering the play, substitute into the character situation

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The rest is to have principles and skills in mind

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It's not about some instinct or feeling to write

The Wind Has Frost (862070352) 21:11:11

Can I ask you a question?

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Well

The Wind Has Frost (862070352) 21:11:22

How long do you write?

Wind and Frost (862070352) 21:11:50

I mean serious, continuous, purposeful

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It started in mid-September this year

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In mid-September, I began to consciously study the principles and techniques

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When you see a wonderful article, you will study why

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Junk text, also study why it's bad

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I can't write my own essays, and I also study how to improve them

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I learned a lot slowly

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One movie per night, analyze the tricks inside

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The last time I went to Shanghai, in the subway, I observed strangers

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Through their movements and demeanors, guess their psychology

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A woman handles

The handlebars of the car, the thumb keeps tapping

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I guess she was at the time

Either it's in a hurry, or it's boring

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So I made a note of this trait so that I could use it in my writing

The Wind Has Frost (862070352) 21:16:13

How much effort did it take you to sign a?

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3 years

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……

Belated Lai 21:16:46

…

The Wind Has Frost (862070352) 21:16:52

Not to say

Is there a serious continuous purpose

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No one pointed me out

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I wrote books in '07

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The eunuch had 18 copies, and he couldn't sign a contract

The Wind Has Frost (862070352) 21:17:27

How many thousand words?

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More than 1 million words

Wind and Frost (862070352) 21:17:50

……

Belated 21:17:45

If I had written it for the New Year, it would have been 3 years

The Wind Has Frost (862070352) 21:17:55

Are you sure you're writing with your heart?

Belated 21:17:57

Female frequency does not count

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Of course, with my heart

The Wind Has Frost (862070352) 21:18:27

……

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A peasant in the countryside said with his heart

How many chickens and ducks have been raised this year, how much harvest can be made, even if you are careful about it, do you think the people in the city are interested in listening?

The Wind Has Frost (862070352) 21:19:18

forehead

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Putting in the heart doesn't mean you'll be successful

The Wind Has Frost (862070352) 21:19:42

But at least not this sense of language

Wind and Frost (862070352) 21:20:59

It shouldn't be like this

Belated 21:21:29

101 studied the layout skills of the whole article, and I studied the picture text skills...

The Wind Has Frost (862070352) 21:24:29

It's not easy to find a way to improve

Belated 21:25:21

See more, learn more, analyze and compare, and ask for more masters...

Belated 21:29:36

Express your thoughts in words... In the past, I didn't know where to start, but now at least I can

Belated 21:29:46

Finish the sentence logically

First Courtyard Maple Leaf (793146373) 21:30:19

There are not many geniuses like Half Moon

Flying Alpaca (2605549630) 21:31:49

101 Your analysis today is really great

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By the way, when it comes to the sense of language, I have improved a lot this time

Belated 21:53:01

There is a sense of language

But when it comes to character interaction

Or the psychological description of the characters is enough.

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Look at the full moon part

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Later, I learned that land is not so easy to sell, and it is not something that can be sold if you want to, with the little bit of land in his family...... You know, the fields in the remote countryside are not valuable, let alone in an economically underdeveloped province like Shanxi

"My second sister graduated from Shaanxi Normal University, and she was a copy, and after graduation, she mixed in Shanghai for two months, and submitted fifty or sixty resumes to find a job, and it has been two years, and she is only three thousand eight!"

He said to me, then looked me up and down, and said with a smile:

"Your brain is stupider than me, let alone compared to my second sister, she is not doing well in Shanghai, what about you? With your ability, you can make money writing books to support yourself? Hey, don't talk about your income of one or two thousand yuan, even if it is three thousand, maybe you won't be able to write it soon, even if you can write it, maybe no one will read the next one, dead pig's head, wake up!"

The best roommate is a little pervert with a bit of psychological distortion, and his favorite thing is to sarcastically mock me and look at my bitter gourd face

What is the saying?

Why bother to sling

This sentence is very vivid and vivid, but ...... The sling can only take pleasure in bullying the sling, after all, the poor creature of the sling can only find superiority from other slings

The best roommate, too, I know him as a person, and I know that he likes to take advantage of his words to show that he is extraordinary...... But I've never complained about him, and even today, I regard him as the best buddy I've had in years, and it's my blessing to know him

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The first paragraph is:

The author explains

The second paragraph is

Character dialogue

Third paragraph

Pick up the demeanor of the characters

Fourth paragraph

Continue the character dialogue

Fifth paragraph

Author Explanation + Character Psychology

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It's all interspersed evenly

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In terms of narrative, how to achieve natural and smooth, you can take a look at this analysis

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The characters should speak with feeling, such as: Hey, dead pig's head!