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Do you have time?I'll send you one, can you take a look??

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See what the downsides are

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What's the point?' sent you a window jitter. Pen, fun, and www.biquge.info

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Chapter 30: Counterattack

"It's this treasure. Qian Xue affirmed Lin Fan's guess.

Next, the two of them were silent for a while, and the causes and consequences of all this became clear.

"It is rumored that when I sent the ancestor to establish the Xuanqing Gate, it was because there was a valley of life and death in this mountain range! Could it be that tens of thousands of years ago, the ancestor had insight into the place where Jiuding Zhenren suppressed demon cultivation back then?

"Presumably so, now that the war between humans and demons has passed for 100,000 years, I am afraid that the demon cultivation that was suppressed at the beginning has long been wiped out. And when I got Chixiao, the whole body of this sword was already rusty, but it was only after I cultivated it that it became what it is today. Lin Fan said that Chixiao was an ordinary magic weapon, and he had refined it later. After all, this matter is important, and if it is leaked, he will definitely be coveted by high-level existences. At that time, I am afraid that I will not be able to escape the catastrophe again.

"Maybe this sword isn't really Chixiao, if it's really that kind of powerful treasure, with my original cultivation in the Gathering Spirit Period, how can I suppress it?" Then Lin Fan led Qianxue with words and walked towards his own train of thought.

Qianxue stared at Chixiao for a moment, and felt that this sword was very ordinary, and nodded: "This time it makes sense, let's not talk about the matter of Jiuding Zhenren's relics, as far as the current situation of the Valley of Life and Death is concerned, I'm afraid it is unlikely that there will be a demon cultivator! Qianxue was puzzled at first, but finally affirmed.

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In the Xuanqingmen trading market, a person wearing a burqa and couldn't see clearly. While walking in the market, a spirit rune suddenly flew in the air, and this person waved one hand and took it down. After looking down, his body suddenly froze. Then he fled, and sped away somewhere.

Lin Fan didn't know at the moment that when he was talking to Qianxue, a black rabbit on the mountainside was leisurely eating grass, and his black eyes were constantly looking into the distance.

After about ten minutes, a white light suddenly appeared in the distance. The man approached the hill, stopped, and pinched a trick in his hand. I saw him glance towards the stone pavilion and quietly fall. At the same time, the black rabbit burrowed into the ground and disappeared.

"Hmm, someone!" The next moment, Lin Fan's expression was solemn.

Qianxue also sensed a murderous aura surging in.

Then Lin Fan closed the red sky, turned his head to look somewhere, and saw a figure in front of the hill looking at him.

"Lin Fan, you finally appeared. He even met Qianxue here!" When Sun Cang saw that Qianxue was also here, his heart was already aroused with anger, but at this moment, he no longer concealed the appearance of the slightest.

Chong Guan was angry, and it was perfect to use this sentence to describe Sun Cang's mood at this moment. He could have covered his aura and continued to monitor Lin Fan, but he could have waited for Sun Wangu to come and deal with Lin Fan together, so that he would have a much greater grasp of catching Lin Fan, but he has always been arrogant and domineering, and his self-cultivation is far beyond his peers, and he has also developed an attitude of looking down on others.

"It's you, why are you here?" When Lin Fan heard this voice, he didn't know that it was Sun Cang.

"Sun Cang, you are not missing!" Qian Xue looked surprised, since she talked to Lin Fan, she was more surprised than ever.

"Hmph, I'm going to capture you alive today. Sun Cang glanced at Qianxue and replied to her. Instead, he glared angrily at Lin Fan.

Seeing this, Lin Fan's heart moved, and a counterattack plan took shape. Said to himself: "I'm worried that I can't find you, but I don't want you to show up by myself!"

The two shook each other, and after a moment, Lin Fan rushed up, turning into a frightened rainbow and sweeping towards Sun Cang, as if he wanted to pierce him.

Seeing this, Qianxue was sure in her heart that what Lin Fan said was true, and at the same time affirmed his statement, so she also fled together and flew towards Sun Cang.

Seeing this, Sun Cang put away his robe, summoned his natal magic weapon, the cold light sword, and pointed directly at Lin Fan with the sword.

A shocking rainbow and a sharp sword collided together in an instant.

With a sound of "smack", the two of them made a move to each other, and then they each retreated.

The two were a few feet apart at the moment, Lin Fan was holding Chixiao in his hand, looking at Sun Cang expressionlessly.

Qian Xue flew forward and said angrily at Sun Cang: "Sun Cang, you have made a big mistake now! You have framed Lin Fan repeatedly, today you and I will return to the master's door, like the master of the sect to admit your mistakes, you can still be forgiven, otherwise you will be punished." ”

She thought that Sun Cang had just mistaken Lin Fan's Chixiao and just wanted to win people's favor. She was not sure in her heart that what Lin Fan was holding was the Chixiao of Jiuding Zhenren back then.

"Unless this person dies in front of me on the spot, you must obey me!" Sun Cang was domineering, and at the same time, he had already sneaked into the black rabbit to inform Elder Sun that Lin Fan had indeed appeared.

He just needs to drag the two of them at this time and wait for Sun Wangu to come and capture Lin Fan in one fell swoop, and Qianxue will be like erasing Qi Huan's memory when he arrives.

Lin Fan stopped talking when he heard this, and his eyes just looked at Sun Cang coldly at this moment. In his heart, Sun Cang dared to speak to Qianxue like this, he couldn't bear it anymore! Then the previous resentment was also suddenly aroused, and the scenes of Sun Cang's pursuit and persecution of himself also came to mind.

Lin Fan no longer suppressed his cultivation, and suddenly released an aura that was sufficient to exist at the peak of the mid-stage foundation building period! However, he himself had not yet reached the peak, but his own spiritual power was becoming more and more powerful, and his current aura was comparable to the peak of the mid-stage period.

Sun Cang sensed it, and there was a sense of oppression coming over him, and at the same time, he also felt a sense of killing intent!

"How is that possible! You...... You're actually in the middle stage!" Sun Cang was shocked, he had previously sensed that Lin Fan only had an initial aura, but now his aura suddenly soared. How could he not be surprised, his current cultivation was only at the peak of the early stage!

"Nothing is impossible, you are too arrogant!" Lin Fan said coldly, and suddenly a burst of five-colored divine light emanated from his whole body, and he suddenly attacked Sun Cang.

"Impossible, how can it advance so quickly now!" Sun Cang still couldn't accept Lin Fan's strength as an outer disciple, even though Lin Fan was recognized as an inner disciple after building the foundation, but in his heart, he still regarded Lin Fan as an outer disciple. That's exactly what he had in mind.

But fortunately, he was only shocked for a moment, and then his whole body burst out with white spiritual light, and the sword in his hand also became frenzied, meeting Lin Fan's attack.

Qianxue's face was embarrassed at the moment, she didn't want the two of them to just say a few words and make a move, she couldn't stop it, so she watched the two fight.

I saw that Lin Fan didn't use any spiritual skills, but just quickly slashed with his sword, and one after another sword qi burst out, like a torrential rain. Sun Cang was just able to dodge the fierce sword qi, Rao was like this, and the clothes on his body were also torn a few times.

"I didn't expect that I had only been separated from him for less than a year, and today my strength has grown to such a level. When Qian Xue looked at Lin Fan's agile posture and lightning-like attack, she was sure that Lin Fan's strength was already above Sun Cang now. What's more, the cultivation has already surpassed him.

A boy in the Gathering Spirit Period who was toyed with and hunted by Sun Cang at the beginning, but today he is more than a step above that person, and she doesn't know how much blood and sweat she has paid during this period. The painstaking effort of infiltrating the Three Spirits Sect to track down his father's whereabouts, was used and even wanted to take away his immortal root, at that time his unyielding and his grief and indignation, she never knew, and others didn't know.

Sun Cang couldn't resist Lin Fan's fierce attack, and at the same time, his body flashed a few times, and he finally got out of close combat, and he already had a little fear in his heart, this person in front of him, he used to stand in front of him, how high he was, and now he has surpassed himself. This made his strong strong heart irritated again.

"Hmph! How could I lose at your hands. Sun Cang scolded angrily, only to see him flip with one hand, and a talisman with silver light appeared.

"Fu Bao!" Lin Fan was slightly surprised when he saw this, and at the same time, he had quietly summoned a purple jade gourd in the palm of his hand.

A rune is a type of offensive or defensive rune with great power. It can be refined by a Jindan monk or above. For the monks of the foundation period, its power was undoubtedly enormous. However, runes are one-time consumables.

"Burst Talisman" Sun Cang shouted in his mouth, and at the same time threw it towards Lin Fan.

Lin Fan didn't dare to be careless about the power of this talisman, so he hurriedly moved it and rose into the air. At the same time, he separated Chixiao. And poured the spiritual power of the whole body and the five Chixiao, and suddenly the whole body of Chixiao exuded dazzling brilliance, and it was stirred towards the talisman seal.

The five Chixiao exuded bursts of spiritual pressure, and the fierce sword qi also stabbed towards the talisman seal. After doing this series of actions, Lin Fan's figure flashed a few times in the air again.

Sun Cang secretly said in his heart: "It's not good", and hurriedly used the escape technique to leave.

But unexpectedly, at this moment, a burst of purple light suddenly shone down in mid-air, and he only felt that the spiritual power of his whole body could not be lifted at all. My heart suddenly panicked. At the same time, the body shape is also like a rock, heavy and immobile.

And after the spirit rune made another move with Chixiao, the surrounding void suddenly burst into flames, accompanied by a burst of fire!

"The rune treasure is really powerful. But you've been caught by me. At this time, Lin Fan's voice suddenly sounded in the void, and then he showed his figure and looked at Sun Cang coldly.

Qian Xue witnessed all this, but after ten minutes of fighting, Sun Cang had already been defeated. She was also even more curious about where the purple jade gourd in Lin Fan's hand came from.

"Hmph, it's just a sneak attack!" Sun Cang argued without admitting defeat, in order to express his disdain for Lin Fan's behavior. But more often than not, I don't want to lose face in front of Qianxue.

Lin Fan no longer paid attention to him, his fingers froze, and a spiritual light shot towards Sun Cang.

Sun Cang's pupils contracted suddenly, and he watched a cyan aura hit his dantian. But he was powerless to stop it, and the arrogance in his heart was finally completely crushed at this moment.

The next moment, he only felt a heat in his belly, a sweetness in his throat, and a stream of hot blood spurted out.

He couldn't believe that he had been defeated. And even more so without the slightest ability to fight back. In anger, his chest was hot, and he snorted again, and spit out a mouthful of blood.

"The spiritual power in your dantian has been completely blocked by me, and now your body shape is also fixed by me. Lin Fan put away the gourd and floated down in front of Sun Cang. He looked at him with a gloomy face.

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It's not pretty

What to say?′19:30:55

Well

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You go and look at Jin Yong's writing

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Tell me what's going on, I'll speculate a thing or two, and then I'll go and see what other people are learning

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"It's this treasure. Qianxue was sure of herself, her voice trembling slightly with excitement.

Lin Fan's heart was shocked, he opened his mouth, and was speechless for a while.

Next, the two of them groaned separately for a while, and they both pondered the whole thing in their hearts, and slowly the cause and effect became clear.

101st rejection 19:34:55

The characters you write don't have the demeanor and reaction to match

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！！！！！！

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It's too dry

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En

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And the narrative is lacking in cause and effect, and it doesn't read smoothly

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You're alone every time, babbling a lot of words and ending up with a simple look, which is too fake

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I didn't really realize that!

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Thank you!!I'm going to study more,,, alas

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"It is rumored that when I sent the ancestor to establish the Xuanqing Gate, it was because there was a valley of life and death in this mountain range!" After a pause, Qianxue's voice trembled more and more, "Could it be ...... Could it be that tens of thousands of years ago, the patriarch had insight into the place where Jiuding Zhenren suppressed the demon cultivation back then, but he never found the location of the sealing array?" Speaking of this, her expression became extremely solemn, and her big eyes were firmly fixed on Lin Fan, revealing confusion and helplessness.

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After a pause, Qianxue's voice trembled more and more----- character's mood changed with the content of the speech

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I think it's very interesting to see your change!

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Don't...... Don't...... (This is just right to match the tremor of the voice, and the content of the speech can also be changed)

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Or I'm not good enough!

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The content of the speech is okay -

"Well, got it! What else do you want to say?"

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"Hehe, I know, what do you say, well, just do it!"

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"Hmph! Got it! No nonsense!"

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These sentences vividly show the personality of the person who speaks!

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Speaking is to be able to reflect the emotions of the characters, and then match them with appropriate demeanor and movements

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It is also necessary to use some scenery to set off the atmosphere

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Well

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Let's talk about it

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"It's this treasure. Qianxue was sure of herself, her voice trembling slightly with excitement.

Lin Fan's heart was shocked, he opened his mouth, and was speechless for a while.

Next, the two of them groaned separately for a while, and they both thought about the whole thing in their hearts.

Lin Fan mechanically swung the oars, making a squeaky sound, and the boat made several ripples in the quiet lake water, slowly spreading out, just like his mood at this time.

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The ripples in the water are used to compare the mood of the protagonist

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The picture is very strong and realistic

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Uh-huh!

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You're awesome

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Alas, if you read more books, you will

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Would you recommend a few books for me?

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Jin Yong's martial arts novels

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All??

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Your narrative is too dry now, it's really not vivid enough

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Well, read them all over a few times

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I'm now reading through it for the 4th time

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What are the ones you see?

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He writes so much

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You're currently writing character dialogue badly

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You focus on character dialogue

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Well

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I've been watching Tenryu Babu lately

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Which one do you recommend me to read?

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To be honest, I haven't read his books, I've only watched TV series... Verbs. I'm 18 years old, but I don't know much about him.

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Duan Yu said in a low voice: "Are you also from the Shennong Gang?" The girl said angrily: "Phew, I'm not, what nonsense are you talking about?" Duan Yu said: "Then how do you know that the letter is poisonous?" The girl smiled: "This poisoning kung fu is so shallow that you can see it at a glance." These foolish methods can only harm the ignorant. Everyone in the hall heard her words, and they all raised their heads, only to see her biting melon seeds, and her feet in flower shoes couldn't stop swaying back and forth.

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This paragraph, you see, lively, isn't it?

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The girl spoke with disgust

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lively

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Paired with: Phew!

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Then he bites the melon seeds and sways back and forth in the flower shoes

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And Duan Yu didn't have many expressions, which made her even more vivid

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The girl suddenly asked, "Do you eat melon seeds?"

Zuo Zimu's face turned slightly purple, if it weren't for the great enemy outside, he would have already attacked, so he held back his anger and said, "Don't eat!"

Duan Yu interjected: "What kind of melon seeds are you, osmanthus, roses, or pine nut flavors?" The girl said, "Ahh My melon seeds are fried by my mother with snake gall bladder, and I often eat them with bright eyes, you can try it. As he spoke, he grabbed a handful, stuffed it in Duan Yu's hand, and said, "People who are not used to eating it feel a little bitter, but it is actually delicious." Duan Yu was inconvenient to brush her off, so he took a melon seed and put it in his mouth, the fruit in the mouth felt spicy, but with a little taste, it seemed to be sweet and sweet, and the bottom of the tongue was full of relish, and he ate it one after another. He put the shells of the melon seeds he had eaten on the beam one by one, but the girl was unscrupulous and spit it out. Melon seed shells flew over everyone's heads, and many frowned and avoided them.

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This paragraph is even more wonderful

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Melon seed shells fly overhead

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http://ds./Jinyong.asp

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Thank you!! I'll check it out!

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I am still learning to figure out Jin Yong's brushwork

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Well, Jin Yong is a bull

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You have to keep your mind down, don't rush to get results

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Well

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What you're writing now, to be honest, is just too bad

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Alas, yes

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When you write, the biggest problem is that you can't get into the play

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How so?

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If you really get into the play, your mind can connect, that story world

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You can see the people and things there

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I write when I think of it

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You just paraphrase what the eyes see and what the ears hear

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High realm

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I can't do this, I think of not writing it first, and imagine the story world more

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Qianxue is a girl, and Lin Fan is the male protagonist

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Think about it over and over again? and then write?

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The two talk about things, a man and a woman, what kind of atmosphere is it?

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Well

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The woman sat on a small boat and spoke in a low voice, and her voice was gentle and pleasant

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Ahem, is it a little shy?

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The man swayed his sculls, his eyes on the woman's face, listening intently to her

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The sound of the water rattled

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Immerse yourself in the world of the book!

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Right?

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Well, you have to think about an environment and put two more people in it

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What if it's a windy and snowy day? The north wind is howling, and you need to shout loudly

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Benefit!!!

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Inspiring!

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The north wind struck the face with snow particles, and the hair and eyebrows were frosty

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The wind was biting cold and howling.

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The environment and the characters interact and merge, and the characters and the characters interact and merge

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Well!

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Okay, you can learn it yourself

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I'll see you next time!