In recent months, 101 has been in retreat and cultivation, writing this street book while reading various online articles to prepare for the new book. Pen × fun × Pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 ｉｎｆｏ

I didn't want to post anything.,Because what should be said and summarized is basically said.,Some new insights.,It's too detailed.,It's good to communicate in the small circle of the author group.,I didn't plan to post.。

But recently, there are always some people who read 101's posts and come to ask for advice, and I found that these people have a very bad mentality, or they are touting, what 101 I heard that the author of the loser is your registered disciple? What 101 You are a boutique god, right?

101 Here is a solemn statement: I am an old fighter, and I have never had a book of fine works! In addition, the author of the loser once gave a lecture in one of my groups, and his success is his personal effort, and has nothing to do with me.

Either it's a pure newcomer who hasn't written a book, catch you and talk about it, and when it comes to the specific details, you won't be bullshit, if I say that you read more books, ponder more, and write 1 million words yourself, you will naturally understand a lot, and that person will say: You have written so much, isn't it unsuccessful?

I'll it, it's you who came to ask me for advice, and when you came, you were very respectful, and you couldn't say a few words and you were so awesome, I really don't know what these people think?

In short, these people have a very shallow understanding of online texts, and their mentality is very impetuous, so they think that they have a golden finger that became famous overnight, find someone to ignite it, and then succeed as soon as they write, they don't know that the so-called successful people are written in millions of words, and they have read hundreds of millions of words of novels, so they boil it out little by little.

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Okay, this post is for those impetuous newcomers, you see what the self-cultivation of becoming a god is like?

Take 101 himself as an example, I have pounced on so many books before, and in summary, there are deficiencies in the following aspects-

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Online Writing Direction

2. Layout control

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Rhythm and detail

This 101 has been summarized before, and now as the old saying goes, the so-called "direction of online writing" is to avoid writing deviations.

This is expanded, ever-changing, some of them start with grinding, and many characters appear, squeezing out the protagonist's role; Some get the golden finger to write cumbersomely, not with the main line of cheating and cooling; and some fall into the trap of male and female **, instead of writing around the struggle of the protagonist and the main line of struggle......

In short, now readers read online articles, it is a kind of cheating psychology, wanting to see how an unlucky protagonist cheats with a golden finger and gets a bumper harvest in life. If you don't write it according to this, it's called deviation.

Another situation, such as the book written by 101, when the protagonist was facing a three-year small competition, and was bullied and murdered by his senior brother, who was the first and who came after the two plots at that time?

101 mistakenly put being bullied and murdered by his senior brother in the front, and the three-year Xiaobi delayed many chapters, which is the relationship between foreshadowing and outbreak.

has been paving the protagonist's bad luck, and he has to let his senior brother bully him again, but he has been delaying it again and again for three years, which is off track, because the reader's expectation is that the three years of Xiaobi will do it hard, raise his eyebrows and exhale a little, turn back to his brother and remember his hatred, pull new hatred, and then come to a new battle.

This kind of deviation is more difficult to detect, the so-called cut off the reader's sense of expectation, and writes the plot that the reader does not want to see.

All in all, the direction of online writing

If you don't grasp it accurately, there will be deviations in the book from time to time, which will naturally cause readers to pass, and it is the number one killer on the street!

How to break it? Without it, read more online articles, and be more familiar with the direction of online writing.

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Another big killer is "layout control".

101 has been in contact with a lot of online authors, and they start writing as soon as they pat their heads, and they don't have any outlines, they write wonderfully at the beginning, but they are weak and weak on the shelves, and they are not passionate about their updates.

There are many people who can mix a collection of 10,000 or 20,000 on the shelves, subscribe to a few hundred, in fact, the results are not bad, and they will slowly get up if they stay up, but the author is impetuous, and he has no control over the long story, and he has no passion to write down.

I've encountered this problem 101 before.,I don't know how to do an outline at all.,There's no detailed outline control.,The writing is off track.,It's often written to collapse.,There are a lot of characters on the line.,The protagonist is like a headless fly.,I can't hold it back if I want to.。

This is a big difficulty, even if many authors with good grades can't necessarily figure it out, there is a stupid way, which is to imitate a routine, such as practicing after getting a gold finger, slapping the face after practice, and then getting resources to refine medicine, and after practicing to sell medicine and pretend to be forced, and then beat the small one to the old one, after a few waves of family fights or sect fights, after a big **, I changed the map and went out to practice.

Although the routine is old, there will always be good results, in fact, it is also a kind of layout, it is a routine layout, which is more rigid, lacks flexible understanding, and the integration between the characters' own emotions and struggles, as well as the contradictions and conflicts of the story background, is more blunt.

How to lay out, how to make an outline and a detailed outline, 101 has been analyzed in previous posts, and I will not repeat it here.

Anyway hold

Break the bucket

If you read a book like this, you will naturally understand how to make the layout of potatoes, and each book is analyzed like this, and there are enough books to read, and the layout is nothing unusual.

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Finally, let's talk about it

Rhythm and detail.

This is probably the most difficult to master, the rhythm is the plot arrangement and detailed disposal, and the details are the ability to show the scene, including character portrayal, accentuation rendering, and narrative skills, etc., which is commonly known as pen power.

It is really difficult to break the bottleneck, because it is not that you can grasp it well by understanding the truth, but you need to continue to read books and comprehend, and you have to insist on writing, and only after summarizing the lessons can you form an experience and a feeling.

101 has some general experience, that is, yes

Guide the reader to anticipation

Writing a book is a good rhythm.

For example, a scene is written within three days, and the scene connection depends on what the current expectation is, and one must be arranged within the first seven chapters, 3 small**, 1 large** in 40 chapters, and so on.

As for the details, it is the unique taste of the characters, for example, the protagonists written by the great gods are all high-pressing, forced when the wind is downwind, and pretending to be forced when the wind is headwind, and the emotions between the characters are sincere and touching, and the author can't write about it.

For example, Jin Yong's Yang Guo was bullied so much with the Quanzhen Sect on Peach Blossom Island in the early days, it stands to reason that he should be regarded as an abusive, but Yang Guo did not pretend to be forced at all, and he looked very passionate.

In addition, the scene is accentuated and rendered, as well as the concise and smooth narrative penmanship, which is considered a detail skill, and it can be said for several months when you break it down in detail, not to mention how long it takes to practice and improve!

In a word, read more, write more, ponder more, and you will naturally be able to improve.

The control of rhythm and details is a long-term and arduous work, and it takes a lifetime of writing and cultivation.

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Having said so much, 101 just wants to express a meaning, there are no skills and theories that turn stones into gold, don't look at 101 wrote more than 100 posts, and it is just to help new authors sort out their understanding of online articles, if you really want to master it and turn it into results, you have to follow what this post says, insist on writing, insist on reading, and insist on pondering.

It is impossible to succeed without less than three or five years of hard work!

Some people will exclaim: Oops, the Supreme of the Ages

Or immortal martial arts, routines, high imitations!

101 very much agrees that newcomers should start with high imitation, even if you don't know any bullshit theory, if you imitate the successful way of others, you will have good results.

For example, chocolate, famous

Pure Yang True Immortal, that is, the beginning of the high imitation fight, and the inside is also mixed

The plot of some books such as Zifu Xianyuan, but he also has his own innovations, and as a result, the book earned 400,000.

In this way, imitating one is equal to learning, and the next imitation is based on innovation, and the third book is what is the face slap bridge, the rhythm layout or something, all of which are in good hands, and they can completely innovate themselves.

To put it bluntly, writing a book is a practical craft, a summary of theories and skills, but it only allows people to avoid detours and understand more thoroughly in their hearts. However, without a lot of intensive reading and imitation, it is impossible to transform it into one's own ability. Even if you know more, it is completely possible that it will be messy as soon as you put pen to paper.

It's like a person who knows the skill of driving well, but when he gets on the road, he panics, mistakes the accelerator for the brake, and even runs the red light sidewalk, isn't it the same reason?

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Finally, to answer some people's questions: Is this set of theories of 101 useful?

I replied: very useful, very useful, but ...... You also have to read a lot of books, write a lot of books, and insist on self-cultivation to be effective!

p.s.

When "Demon Dao Extreme Venerable" was on the shelves

3 are ordered, and the collection is more than 500. Now the collection is 1,000, the average order is more than 20, and it has more than 800,000 words, and the Xianxia book has passed 1 million words, and it will rise a lot of collection subscriptions. This is still the result of a little effort under the premise that the first two volumes were written down.

What does this mean, you have to endure loneliness when writing a book, no matter what others say, what you practice in each book, you will practice well, practice well, practice clearly, start from scratch in the next book, and the results will always rise!