Legend] 101st rejection (630268437) 14:12:32

Damn, today's insights are enough to become enlightened

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:12:37

It's so awesome!

【Active】Free Miro (10000163) 14:12:53 Say quickly

[Tucao] changed its name (1648996887) 14:13:16

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:13:17

I just wrote my own book, and I didn't feel very attractive before, there was conflict, there was pretense, but there was no excitement, no big fun

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:13:31

Today, when I wrote that Goldfinger came out, suddenly I was excited

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:14:00

I wondered, why is this? Some books are also slow to come out, why is it so exciting in the first place?

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:14:10

Why is Goldfinger a turning point?

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:14:19

A ponder, an epiphany, haha!

【Active】Free Miro (10000163) 14:14:29

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:14:33

It turns out that what readers are looking forward to is seeing the uniqueness of the main character

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:14:54

For example, if you go to the grassland and see a herd of white sheep with a black sheep in it, you are curious

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:15:08

Go and ask the herders, how did it come about? How did it go

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:15:22

illustrate

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:15:34

In Panlong, the protagonist is different from other children as soon as he appears

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:15:44

The others are tired and tired, and he cultivates very fiercely

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:16:00

That's the uniqueness, and then the secret is revealed, he's a descendant of the Dragon's Blood family

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:16:45

The mystery of uniqueness is out.,Next, the reader will think.,The dragon's blood family is naturally powerful.,Then the protagonist is naturally powerful.,It's foreseeable that the protagonist will pretend to be forced.

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:17:16

But as soon as the pen turned, my father said that the bloodline inheritance should be awakened, and you still have to test the protagonist!

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:17:23

All of a sudden, the uniqueness came out again

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:17:35

The descendants of the dragon blood family are different from ordinary people

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:17:51

A bloodline test is required, and the protagonist is different from the regular dragon's blood family

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:17:58

He's not the same on either side now

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:18:15

Later, when he failed the test, his father told him that he couldn't cultivate high-level cheats, so he could only refine his body

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:18:37

In this way, the protagonist is a bit awesome, but it's not a big awesome, it belongs to both sides and doesn't rely on it, which is very peculiar

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:18:58

The plot goes further down, showing how rare the magician is and how powerful the magician is

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:19:09

Then the protagonist gets the golden finger and can start practicing magic

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:19:23

This is unique again, he is a warrior and a double cultivator of magic

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:19:30

There is also the support of millennium teachers

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:19:43

A series of uniqueness, people look forward to him to develop a different splendor

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:20:14

Let's talk about a very important question, how did the uniqueness come out?

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:20:28

1. The coolness of uniqueness comes from contrast

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:20:56

Others are refining their bodies, a hundred people, a thousand people are refining their bodies, this is the background tone, as a foil

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:21:07

The protagonist practices magic, and this uniqueness is particularly distinct

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:21:38

The protagonist does whatever he wants, and he is different from others, which naturally arouses other people's amazement, doubt, questioning, hatred, etc

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:21:47

The greater the contrast, the greater the refreshment

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:22:22

Many people's books give the protagonist a golden finger at the beginning, but they forget to set off the background, the kind of ordinary people who are not set off well, resulting in the protagonist taking the golden finger as if it is nothing

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:22:38

2. The uniqueness of the cool comes from solving its own difficulties

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:23:08

This one is also very important, the protagonist's current uniqueness must be closely centered around solving his current troubles

【Active】Free Miro (10000163) 14:23:18

This makes sense, but it is impossible to say that he is a god

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:23:22

Because the reader is attracted because he is unique

【Active】Free Miro (10000163) 14:23:43

It's just a better technique,,Many people understand,It's just that the degree of use is different,,

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:23:47

It can also be said that the protagonist has some kind of special ability

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:24:14

As a result of his uniqueness, not closely centered on solving the current troubles, the reader will think that this is garbage ability, the protagonist S...

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:24:26

For example:

【Active】Free Miro (10000163) 14:24:29

The author wants to give the protagonist a difference, it's just a matter of whether it's done well or not.

It's not something that can be done by understanding, I believe most people understand,,

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:24:34

Breaking through the sky, he is a fallen genius when he appears

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:24:43

Wrong, many people don't understand

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:25:01

At this time, many people hurriedly gave the protagonist a golden finger to solve the difficulty

【Active】Free Miro (10000163) 14:25:03

I should have understood, but I didn't really take it seriously.

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:25:17

That's what you said, some people think they understand, but they actually do it wrong

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:25:37

But to see Dou Po, the protagonist quit the marriage before taking the golden finger

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:25:45

After getting married, he got a golden finger

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:25:53

Why is that?

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:26:07

According to ordinary people's thinking, since the protagonist is wasted, then hurry up and slap your face

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:26:17

Divorce has written 7 chapters, isn't this a drag play?

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:26:31

Because these people don't understand the use of the uniqueness of the protagonist

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:26:54

The protagonist appears to be arrogant, confident, hot-blooded, and forbearing

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:27:03

This is the first line of uniqueness that attracts readers

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:27:12

Well, we have to start the story around this

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:27:27

If it seems to be golden, the protagonist's arrogance, self-confidence, and forbearance are all diluted

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:27:40

Also, the fall of genius is a uniqueness in itself

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:27:55

The reader wants to see how the fallen genius faces the ridicule of others and how he stands up on his own

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:28:00

And not by external forces

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:28:22

Under this unique idea, the most terrible humiliation was designed, which was to withdraw from marriage

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:28:32

What should a fallen genius do when he faces a divorce?

【Legend】101st rejection (630268437) 14:28:50

This scene is completed in a brilliant way, and the first uniqueness is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:29:03

The medicine is old below, which is the second uniqueness, which is another plot

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:29:38

Therefore, many people may understand uniqueness, but few people understand the story along the uniqueness

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:29:48

To put it bluntly, this uniqueness can make the protagonist pretend

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:30:14

At the same time, we have to keep creating a feeling of uniqueness that will be very powerful and awesome in the future

【Active】Free Miro (10000163) 14:31:02

yes

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:31:04

In my book, for example, the protagonist is familiar with Qi Min's techniques, which is the first uniqueness

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:31:15

But in terms of my plot advancement, I didn't always stick to this one

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:31:23

As a result, the protagonist doesn't seem to be awesome

[Tucao] changed its name (1648996887) 14:31:32

It's also a skill for the people

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:31:40

It doesn't always feel exciting

【Bubbling】Cool cool (976625246) 14:31:54

1. Write out this epiphany!

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:32:09

On the other hand, the legend of mortal cultivation of immortals is also a slow-burning book

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:32:25

What Han Li got was the Changchun Technique

【Legend】The 101st Rejection (630268437) 14:32:34

Mo Lao let him cultivate at the earliest

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:32:57

Moreover, other disciples practice martial arts, and he and Ah Tie are medicine refining boys and cultivate some strange things

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:33:27

Others can cut stones and break trees, but he can only practice this technique to increase the amount of food

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:33:47

Others want to participate in the second assessment, he doesn't need it, and he still has silver every month

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:33:55

That's the first uniqueness

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:34:15

Because of his unique identity as a disciple of Mo Lao, because of his unique exercises, he is different from others

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:34:25

This one is a bit unique, a little pretended

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:34:43

Although it may not be cool, readers will be curious, what the hell is going on?

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:34:58

Then, Mo Lao looked at the protagonist with the wrong eyes, very greedy and scary

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:35:05

This in turn reinforces this uniqueness

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:35:22

In other words, forgetting words in this episode, all the pen and ink is to enhance this first uniqueness

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:35:29

He didn't go too far

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:35:38

Wait until the small bottle comes out, which is the second uniqueness

【Tucao】Changed its name (1648996887) 14:35:39

In the final analysis, it is the combination of character creation and story

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:35:52

Let's take a look at its emergence to solve the protagonist of the current crisis

[Tucao] changed its name (1648996887) 14:35:55

As long as the writing skills are reached, it will be written naturally

【Tucao】Changed its name (1648996887) 14:36:07

Without good writing, even if you know it, it's useless

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:36:08

Because he accelerated his cultivation and resisted Mo Lao's plot, Mo Lao didn't know it yet

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:36:29

This refreshing feeling comes out all of a sudden, and you don't have to pretend to slap your face

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:36:52

This is in line with what I said, the emergence of uniqueness, we must solve the current crisis and make the protagonist profitable

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:37:30

I didn't understand this before, and although I also set up the uniqueness of the protagonist at the beginning, I couldn't always develop the story around uniqueness, and sometimes it would fall apart

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:37:49

In fact, although Goldfinger is a twist, that thing is not as important as the uniqueness of the protagonist

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:38:57

I now wrote that the protagonist Goldfinger appeared, and I suddenly found that the protagonist can be transferred, he is not on the same level as others, and he can cheat and make it cool

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:39:08

That's when I realized the importance of uniqueness

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:39:44

Miro, why is it upset that the protagonist has a golden finger in the book you wrote, you just lack uniqueness and contrast

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:39:59

The treasure that the protagonist obtains doesn't know how different it is compared to ordinary people

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:40:06

You lack this foreshadowing

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:40:38

And in order to make the golden finger contrast, the great god is not the first time to get the golden finger

【Active】Free Miro (10000163) 14:40:51

Well

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:40:59

Instead, use the uniqueness of personality and identity first, lay the background first, and make some good starts

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:41:35

Then after chapter 7, give Goldfinger, because the background comes first, the reader knows the state of ordinary people in this world, and the protagonist gets Goldfinger, only then does he feel unique and cool

【Active】Free Miro (10000163) 14:41:35

That's the truth

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:41:50

For example, Douluo Continent, Tang San's twin martial spirits

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:42:03

This golden finger was revealed after seven or eight chapters

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:42:31

Why didn't Sanshao give him the protagonist after he crossed over? Because the background was not paved, the reader didn't know what was going on

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:42:45

However, if you want to drag on seven or eight chapters, what do you rely on to attract readers?

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:43:33

San Shao used other uniqueness, giving Tang San the identity of a genius of the Tang Sect, and giving him the innate uniqueness of the Master of Secret Weapons, the Xuanyu Hand and the Purple Pole Demon Pupil

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:43:55

This is not triggered, because this is to slap the reader's expectations, not to slap the face through the crossing

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:44:27

Because Tang San unjustly killed Mingzhi in his previous life, if he wants to rise in this life, he has to build a secret weapon and cultivate

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:44:48

This anticipation led him to ask his father where there was fine iron and that he wanted to build a secret weapon

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:45:17

This follows the first uniqueness of the plot, so the reader will feel that he is looking forward to it, so it is logical to introduce his father and the environment in which he lives

【Legend】The 101st Rejection (630268437) 14:45:49

Readers will expect the protagonist to get his father, create the secret weapon of the Tang Gate, and then start pretending

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:46:21

Unconsciously accepted the background foreshadowing, and then let the protagonist participate in the martial soul test, which led to the double martial soul

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:46:35

Second, uniqueness emerged

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:46:44

This is the main plot

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:47:06

Therefore, some people think that the great god does not issue the golden finger for the first time, as if it is the patent of the great god

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:47:22

In fact, people are just to pave the background and make a contrast for the golden finger

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:47:48

As for urban fantasy novels, the protagonist is very simple to point a little bit of identity, and then he has to pretend to be forced by a golden finger

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:48:17

This is different, because the background is ready-made, campus, company, white-collar workers, students, these lives are familiar to everyone

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:48:37

You don't need to lay the background, just make the gold finger and you will feel different from everyone

【Tucao】Changed its name (1648996887) 14:49:14

This is one of the three elements of the novel, the environment

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:49:17

If you change it to a fantasy background, a protagonist gets the PS function and can change the picture, the reader will be inexplicable, what is the use of this in the world of force?

[Tucao] changed its name (1648996887) 14:49:32

You're talking about the basics

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:50:05

It is the most basic, but the understanding is not deep enough, and the pen and ink are not used by ordinary people

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:52:31

For example, if I revise my book now, I will see the farming regulations of the sect after the protagonist gets started, and I feel that it is a little outdated and backward, and the Qi Min skills he has mastered are more advanced than this, and he plans to make some innovations

【Active】Free Miro (10000163) 14:52:59

This is where the protagonist takes the initiative

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:53:02

In this way, the reader will feel that the protagonist is unique and will make changes, so the forced style will come out

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:53:31

Then the following plot has to be written along the way, how he changed, how others were not optimistic and ridiculed him

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:53:55

But as soon as the results came out, the protagonist won, and others were dumbfounded

【Bubbling】Oak (1143770540) 14:54:17

@第101次退稿中途还应该引起与反派的利益冲突

【Bubbling】Oak (1143770540) 14:54:34

In this way, the reader will actively hope that the protagonist will turn on the golden finger

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:54:38

Well, so that the first uniqueness is displayed, and the gold finger is on the bottom, and the second uniqueness is entered

【Bubbling】Oak (1143770540) 14:54:45

The protagonist can justifiably counterattack and slap his face

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:54:56

That's right, the conflict of interest suppresses the protagonist, he needs new strength, and it just so happens that Goldfinger comes out

[Active] Free Miro (10000163) 14:54:56

The protagonist is too passive and really boring

【Bubbling】Oak (1143770540) 14:55:20

The opening was originally intended to create a protagonist that readers would be willing to substitute

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:55:31

It's not passive, the protagonist acts actively, but the uniqueness doesn't give him hole cards, so it looks like a cowardice

【Bubbling】Oak (1143770540) 14:55:49

Therefore, it should show the difference of the main character. Pen × fun × Pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 info and it should also be a daily time, so that it is easy to substitute.

【Bubbling】Oak (1143770540) 14:56:05

event

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:56:08

Thinking about it carefully, Han Li was forced to cultivate by Mo Lao

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:56:24

He is also passive, but his uniqueness makes him profitable, which is different from others, which is cool

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:56:40

So it's not about being active or passive, it's about whether uniqueness can make the protagonist different

【Active】Free Miro (10000163) 14:56:58

Well, yes

【Bubbling】Oak (1143770540) 14:57:04

It took so long for a mortal to enter the world of cultivating immortals, but he was still able to become popular, because his opening successfully created a protagonist that readers were willing to bring in

【Legend】The 101st Rejection (630268437) 14:57:26

Look, this thing is very mysterious, isn't it? It's hard to appreciate the mystery

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:58:08

I've sent 40,000 words now, and it's hard to change it, so I have to take the paragraph where the protagonist is instigated as oppression

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:58:22

It's just that 20,000 words after going up the mountain is not very good

【Bubbling】Oak (1143770540) 14:58:35

@第101次退稿你设计的主角革新种田技术, this matter should focus on showing the characteristics that can allow readers to see the hope of the protagonist's rise. In this way, there will be a sense of long-term anticipation.

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:58:55

I flipped through it carefully just now, and it looks a little boring, but the characters and plot are quite interesting, so let's not change it

【Active】Old Han Pulling Car (2483406060) 14:58:59

One is really an analytical wizard... I usually only analyze from the content, but I can focus on the underlying skills that are difficult for ordinary people to notice.

【Active】Old Han Pulling Car (2483406060) 14:59:35

Those techniques, I guess the author himself does not necessarily know, but just wrote them naturally. But you've found the pattern.

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:59:36

deviated by 20,000 words, so dangerous

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 14:59:56

They feel right, they feel that they are right

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 15:00:09

I also feel that the last 20,000 words are not quite right, but I don't know why

【Legend】The 101st rejection (630268437) 15:00:33

Today, when I write about the appearance of Goldfinger, I suddenly understand what is wrong