Chapter One Hundred and Two
Zhang Che lay obediently at home until mid-September before being released by Li Cailin, although Zhang Che thought that he would be able to go out to work in early September, but he was suppressed by two big and one small girl. Pen "Fun" Pavilion www.biquge.info
Although he was lying down, it wasn't that he couldn't do anything, and Jang Che brought back the script that he had given to Park Ji-young before, revised it again, and deleted something that didn't conform to Korean society.
For example, in the workplace in South Korea, whether it is a civil servant or an ordinary white-collar worker, the senior and senior system is very strict, which is different from Japan.
For another example, Nakata Rongko, played by Shida Miku, can fall in love openly at school and discuss perverts, even in South Korea. Don't look at "My Little Bride" a few years ago, it was very popular, but if you really discuss the topics of dating and sex openly on TV, it is estimated that you can be sprayed to death.
So Zhang Che has to change, since her sister can't be strong, she can only go in the direction of selling cuteness, and her sister can't fall in love openly, so she can only go to her young first love. But these are problems again, if my sister is not a strong sister, how can she "suppress and bully" my sister, and how can my sister be "bullied" by my sister without resistance.
Therefore, Zhang Che had to change the setting and set the family as a strict patriarchal family, with an old-fashioned father, a spoiled mother, a smart sister, and an ordinary sister, a proper Korean family drama.
It took more than half a month to revise and revise it like this. The two big ones and one small one in the middle helped a lot, especially Park Shin Hye, who reinterpreted the script from the perspective of an actor, although sometimes it was very unusual, but it still made Zhang Che change a lot of unreasonable passages in the eyes of Koreans.
Therefore, after Zhang Che was allowed to be released, he immediately took the script to his teacher.
"Your newly written script?" Kim Yinglan flipped through the script while drinking Zhang Che's filial piety coffee.
"Well, I have to trouble the teacher to help me take a look!" Zhang Che asked sincerely, he knew too well that he had changed so much, there would be some unsmoothness, and the two big and one small, who had a concept of the script, were only 15 years old, Zhang Che was not at ease.
"Okay, I'll show you this. Jin Yinglan closed the script, looked at the number of scripts, and said, "However, why do you write a full set of scripts every time you write them? Don't you know that our TV dramas are filmed and broadcast at the same time, so you are so confident that you don't need to change the script?"
Korean TV dramas have changed their scripts a lot because of the audience's opinions, and the second male lead may become the male lead in the finale, just because the audience likes it. These are still unknown to the audience, and because the audience knows the ending, there are TV series that are forced to change the ending, such as "Love at Harvard", the original ending of this TV series is a tragedy, but the audience was abused too badly, and resolutely resisted the original ending, and in the end, the writer was not forced to change the ending, and the lover finally became a family, and even the original author couldn't say anything.
"Of course not, it's just that I just have inspiration, if the audience really doesn't like it, can you change it!" Zhang Che naturally won't say a word without changing a word, the audience of TV dramas is God these days, no matter how good your script is, the audience doesn't like to watch it, it's the same as losing money, what's the use.
"Then don't come with so many scripts next time, I'm already very busy when you're not in the program team, don't increase my workload. Jin Yinglan said angrily.
Zhang Che is very embarrassed to say this, since the beginning of the Lunar New Year this year, Zhang Che has not been serious to the Xman program group for a few days, first filming TV series and squatting in the crew, finally came back and squatted for a few months, and then rested for a month because of a "serious illness", which made Zhang Che really embarrassed.
But fortunately, the current Xman is not as good as last year's start-up period, as an ace variety show with an average rating of more than 30%, its process, its form, and its audience have all been fixed, and Jin Yinglan no longer has to rack her brains to think about what game links and what guest lines as before. With a lot of things in the way, things are easier to do.
"Do I want to help you deliver it after reading it? The leader of the station is very satisfied with your script last time, and I don't need to look for a relationship this time. ”
"Well, thank you, teacher!"
"That's it! Don't be late for Xman's meeting next week!"
"Okay, teacher!"
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Before the regular meeting next week, on the fourth day after delivering the script, Jang Che received a call from Kim Young-lan asking him to wait for her at the café downstairs at SBS.
Zhang Che hung up the phone and went out, went to the café as agreed, and just after ordering coffee, Jin Yinglan arrived.
"Teacher, your coffee!"
"Well, don't worry!" Jin Yinglan sat down, took out the script from her bag, and returned it to Zhang Che, while saying, "I'm afraid you can't do this script." ”
"Why, teacher?" Zhang Che was surprised, this TV series is still very good in Japan.
"First of all, the biggest problem is that the emotional line is too thin, this Park Ji-young is too smooth sailing, and it makes the actor fall in love with it in a few clicks, which is incredible. Kim Yinglan said, puzzled, "By the way, isn't Park Ji-young the little girl who was with you when I went to see you last time?"
"Teacher, that's not the point, I can't think of a name, so I wrote it casually!" Zhang Che explained.
"Ha, just write it casually and use someone's name? to tell the teacher, what is your relationship, I was too anxious to ask that day. "Jin Yinglan's eyes are so bright.
"Teacher, script, script!" Zhang Che complained, women are really gossipy.
"Cut! coward. Jin Yinglan complained about Zhang Che, and then said: "Second, you are not bold, first sarcastic in the Korean workplace, and then encourage young people to fall in love, you are really not afraid of being scolded?"
"Teacher, I've changed a lot, and the first draft is more serious. Zhang Che looked like he had known it for a long time.
"What did you do when you wrote the first version, it's a waste of energy. Or put yourself in the hospital?"
Zhang Che can't say that the first version is the Japanese version, I am a copyist, so I can only explain it from the side, saying: "Actually, this Park Ji-young's character is just an upgraded version of Choi Mi-na, and Park Shin-hye's emotional dramas are mostly ignorant adolescent love, which is not unacceptable in society." ”
Korean parents encourage their families to fall in love once when they were students, don't think I'm Chinese and bully me I don't know.
"Okay, even if this is your attempt, I'll go back and help you change it, the emotional drama you wrote is too bad, it's not as good as "Bad Housewives". Kim Yinglan complained mercilessly, and then continued: "However, the emotional drama about the two heroines is indeed too single, Park Shin Hye can't write more at a young age, this Park Ji-young's emotional drama is so smooth, who will watch it." ”
"What's going on?,Didn't you find a way to pursue it.,Trying to attract the attention of the male protagonist.,In the end, I changed myself and was ready to chase to Africa.。 Zhang Che protested.
Jin Yinglan just watched Zhang Che protest there, and finally silently closed the script, and then said to Zhang Che: "Che, do you know why there are so many male directors in the Republic of Korea, and writers are generally women, especially middle-aged women?"
"Because it's the housewives who have the remote control.,And these housewives are mostly middle-aged.,These writers know these housewives.。。。 Zhang Che knew he was wrong.
"Got it, do you think writers are willing to write about the emotional entanglements of three, four, or even five people? I don't know that the entanglement of emotional lines is the most difficult to solve? But why do even sitcoms have emotional entanglement lines? It's not because of such ratings!" Kim Yinglan said hatefully, she felt that Zhang Che should not make such a mistake.
"Then what should I do, teacher, is this script finished?" Zhang Che asked in a small voice, he really didn't expect that he would fail to copy it himself.
"Not yet!" Jin Yinglan said, pointing to the names of the people in the play, and said: "Increase this person's role, let her also pursue the male protagonist, and then accidentally discover the character of the female protagonist, and try her best to debunk it, but in the end it always falls short for some funny reasons, but it also attracts the attention of the male protagonist." This is a comedy after all, and it doesn't require a four-corner relationship, at least a triangular relationship. ”
"Teacher, then it's really a woman's play. And in this way, the role of the male protagonist must also be increased. Zhang Che felt that the workload was a bit heavy, and Jin Yinglan was referring to no one else, but the colleague who always went against the heroine's sister, and the name in the play was "Li Cailin"
"So I got it back, let you go back and change it!" Jin Yinglan finished saying what she was going to say, and she didn't care about Zhang Che, who had a sad face, and drank coffee calmly.
Zhang Che was forced to do so, then packed up, drank coffee, said goodbye and left SBS, and went home to continue writing.
Fortunately, Jin Yinglan also gave direction, what Zhang Che has to do is to design the plot, dialogue, and then strengthen the presence of the two characters who can be said to be supporting characters. It's okay to design the plot or something, although it's just a copy of a TV series, but I've been in the crew for a few months, and some of the usual tricks and bridges Zhang Che also knows in his heart, plus the plot design ability that he has exercised in Xman in the past two years, this is not a problem, the problem is, emotional drama!
If Zhang Che is good at writing emotional dramas, he will be helpless against several girls now, this guy has low emotional intelligence, especially in terms of getting along with men and women, he is basically negative. So it's easy for Zhang Che to design funny plots, engage in romance, and play with feelings, he is not good at it.
Fortunately, the names of several leading actors don't need to change, and the right ones are seated to help act, rehearse, write down the lines that they think are good, and rehearse the scenes that they think are good, Zhang Che is the actor who originally didn't have a strong sense of existence, and now he is like a playboy, and he "looks at each other affectionately" with Park Ji-young under the gaze of Lee Chae-young for a while, and "romantically hugs" with Lee Chae-rim under the gaze of Park Ji-young for a while.
"If this drama is really filmed, you can rethink the name for me, otherwise I will think of the current situation after watching it every minute. Li Cailin said this to Zhang Che after the rehearsal, and Park Ji-young and Park Shin Hye on the side also nodded, especially Park Shin Hye, who said in a hearty way, "If you don't change your name, you will play in minutes."
"Cut, it seems that your name is so important, just change it!" Zhang Che said arrogantly, just thinking in his heart, what to change, Park Suzhen, Park Suyan or Park Hyomin, in other words, am I an incompetent star?