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As the author's first formal brainchild,The Eastern Westbound Demon Change (Westbound Demon Change) was signed at a very early stage.,However, the painstaking writing of nearly 40W words is still dismal (it's normal.,I would like to warn my peers.,Unless it's a genius.,The strength of the rookie author is really not good.)。

I want to open the pit from April.,The author Jun changed the content of the first volume more than 20 times.,I'm still not satisfied with the reading.,The same is true of the later chapters.,When I studied the works of the great gods today.,The author finally realized (although it's still a pit),Found that his article was really a failure.,There are fatal mistakes from beginning to end.。

1、The perspective is inappropriate.,Because it's the first time the author writes the same person.,It's still very rusty about the role arrangement.,From beginning to end, the sense of existence of the Gensokyo girls has pressed Fujiwara Nori's head.,It also leads to the article's often God's perspective.,There's no sense of substitution.。

Second, the details are not appropriate, a lot of useless things are written, which slows down the pace, resulting in the plot not being cool, and feeling cumbersome and repetitive when reading.

3. Of course, this is my mistake, bringing my familiarity with the girls into the protagonist, and as a result, there is no freshness in facing strangers, and I believe that old readers understand the coolness of meeting new characters in the novel.

Fourth, I didn't think about it......

The author is also a person who pursues perfection.,So if you find a mistake, you're going to change it (almost the kind that outlines the previous chapters.),I haven't experienced writing new chapters these days.,If there's true love, then wait a few days to see you.,Anyway, there's no expectation to come.。 （T-T）

In short,This is not a eunuch's testimonial.,The author didn't think about putting it on the shelves.,I just want to write a good picture of the Oriental fandom.,After all, Oriental love.,If you have suggestions.,Welcome to leave a message in the book review area.,The author must reply.。