Compared with some martial arts lovers in Xiangjiang, for martial arts lovers in the mainland, they read Tianyi Shoubai's latest martial arts "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" for the first time. It's just a pity, maybe the beginning of the Legend of the Condor Heroes is really ordinary, or maybe the Legend of the Condor Heroes is really not innovative, even those fans who have been supporting Huang Yifan, when they see the first three chapters of the Legend of the Condor Heroes, they can't help but feel a little lost.

Niujiazhuang, Guo Xiaotian, Yang Tiexin, a Taoist priest of the Quanzhen Sect, and a Hong Lie who was hunted down and killed for no reason.

This is the plot involved in the first three chapters of the Legend of the Condor Heroes.

Compared with many of the previous martial arts works that were the first white in the world, the beginning of the Legend of the Condor Heroes is too ordinary.

He doesn't have the domineering spirit of "Ten steps to kill a person" at the beginning of "Chivalrous Journey".

There is no magic of the Yue female sword A Qing breaking through the three thousand Yue armor with a bamboo pole.

There is also no divine turn in the mandarin duck knife like "May all lovers in the world be long-lost brothers and sisters".

There is no high pattern of the integration of rivers and lakes and temples in the book of swords and enmity.

The Legend of the Condor Heroes seems to be an ordinary martial arts work.

Such a martial arts work may be able to be written even if it is an ordinary martial arts author.

Of course, it can't be said how bad the Legend of the Condor Heroes is. In terms of merits, the writing of the Legend of the Condor Heroes is more refined, and the whole style is not verbose at all. At the same time, the portrayal of characters is also more profound than before. In just a few words, Guo Xiaotian, Yang Tiexin, and Qiu Chuji were portrayed.

However, no matter how good these advantages are, for readers, they will only read the story as good or not.

Obviously, the story of the Legend of the Condor Heroes is not as good as expected.

If it's a martial arts written by an average author, that's fine. However, for a reputation like the world's first white, especially before the world's first white was regarded as the first person in the mainland martial arts, when seeing this such an ordinary legend of the Condor Heroes, a group of martial arts fans who support the world's first white are really unacceptable.

On the contrary, it is Gong Baiyu's flying sword that breaks the armor, although in this martial arts PK, mainland readers do not support him. However, when I saw the first three chapters of the flying sword armor breaking, a group of mainland martial arts fans also lit up like a group of Xiangjiang fans.

"Damn, this martial artist of Gong Baiyu can actually write like this. ”

"Can flying swords be added to martial arts novels, but I like it. ”

"The martial arts in the flying sword and armor breaking are very mysterious, and they really explode the martial arts in many martial arts novels. ”

"It's over, the first white in the world is going to be PK by Gong Baiyu. ”

I have to say that the flying sword armor is indeed very well written.

At least, his beginning is much better than the Legend of the Condor Heroes.

Although mainland readers support the world's first white, when the two works began to compare, they knew that Gong Baiyu's works were better and more attractive than the world's first white Condor Hero biography.

"It seems that the world's first white is still too crazy, and this time I am going to lose. ”

"Yes, the first white in the world is still too young, Bai Yu is in his 60s, and he has been writing martial arts for decades. How old is the first white in the world, only in his 20s, although he is very talented, but the background is still not enough. ”

"I feel a little embarrassed. I also scolded Xiangjiang readers before, and I have always supported the world's first white, but now look at it, the flying sword armor of Bai Yu in the palace has exploded the three streets of the Legend of the Condor Heroes, and I am embarrassed to bubble. ”

"In fact, the world's first white is too arrogant, otherwise, it would not have caused such a thing. ”

The sedan chair is carried by everyone, and the wall is pushed by everyone.

At the beginning, under Huang Yifan's fame, no one would point to Huang Yifan's mold, and even various media were enthusiastic about Huang Yifan. However, what happened to Huang Yifan. Some of the things that were hidden in the shadows, some of which had not been said before, slowly erupted at this time.

At first, it was just an attack by a small number of martial arts fans, and slowly, some of the media that originally supported Huang Yifan couldn't sit still.

I think Huang Yifan should take back the words "Xiangjiang martial arts, but that's it". ”

This is the news published by a media outlet called "Beijing News".

At that time, when the controversy broke out between Xiangjiang and the mainland, the Beijing News had been using all kinds of eye-catching words to attract the attention of many people with a warm attitude of praising Huang Yifan. However, no one expected that a few days later, this media turned around and began a comprehensive criticism of Huang Yifan.

"On the innovation of flying swords and armor piercing, and the conservatism of the Condor heroes. ”

Similarly, in addition to the Beijing News, New City Daily also expressed its position by comparing the two works. In addition, there are several other media that have supported Huang Yifan before, and they also euphemistically retracted what they said before.

All of a sudden, about the martial arts PK debate between the world's first white and Gong Baiyu, everyone thought that the world's first white had lost.

"The mainland media reaped the consequences. ”

"The world's first Bai Jianglang is exhausted. ”

"The martial arts master has returned. ”

On the other hand, as the victors, the Xiangjiang martial arts circle, Xiangjiang media, and hundreds of media have issued articles to celebrate.

This is the victory of Gong Baiyu.

This is also the victory of Xiangjiang martial arts.

This is a victory for Hong Kong culture.

But, is this really?

……

"Mr. Huang, I've been very busy lately. ”

In the lecturer office of the Chinese Department of Mizuki, Pei Jin looked at Huang Yifan meaningfully and asked.

"It's a bit busy. ”

Huang Yifan nodded.

"That's right. ”

Pei Jin also nodded, and said with a smile: "Teacher Huang is about to go to class, and he has to work so hard to write the legend of the Condor Heroes, he is indeed very busy." ”

Pei Jin deliberately accentuated the sound of the words "The Legend of the Condor Heroes".

"Oh, Teacher Pei, you have something to say. ”

Huang Yifan stopped and looked at Peijin.

"Hehe, Mr. Huang, don't see outside, it's not that I have something to say, I just speak so straight. ”

Pei Jin replied with a smile: "Recently, I have also read your biography of the Condor Heroes, and it is actually quite well written. It's just that compared to Master Gong, there is still a relatively large gap. Of course, novels are inevitably high and low. It's just that Mr. Huang, as a lecturer in Mizuki, still has to pay attention to some images. What you said before about Xiangjiang martial arts is nothing more than that, isn't it too undeserved?"

"Peijin, what do you mean, do you think the novel you wrote is comparable to Mr. Huang's Legend of the Condor Heroes?"

Liu Ye, who was sitting on the side, glared at Pei Jin.

"Mr. Liu, I didn't say that my writing was better than Mr. Huang. It's just that I have a reputation for self-knowledge than some people, and I don't want to be ashamed if I know that I can't write well. ”

"Teacher Pei, the condor shooting I wrote is not over yet, so you think it can't compare to Gong Baiyu's flying sword armor piercing?"

Thanking Liu Ye for his words, Huang Yifan said.

"Don't you think that the beginning of the eagle shooting is mediocre, without a trace of bright spots. But on the other hand, Gong Bai Yu's flying sword armor piercing is innovative and very exciting. ”

"Hehe, it turns out that Mr. Pei just read the beginning and knew how a book was. ”

"Although I only read the beginning, I know everything in the previous article, and I don't need to read it later. ”

"If that's the case, I'm really skeptical about how Mr. Pei came to be a Mizuki instructor. ”

"Cut, you're taking my words. Although the beginning does not determine the whole of a book, I also believe that there are some famous works that are indeed written at the beginning of the book, but the more they are written, the better they become. However, I don't have much hope for Mr. Huang. ”

probably felt that there were some loopholes in what he said just now, and Pei Jin hurriedly added.

"It's okay, since Teacher Pei doubts my strength so much, how about we enjoy a poem?"

Huang Yifan was tepid or angry, and he picked up the pen to write poetry. However, seeing that Pei Jin didn't seem to understand, Huang Yifan explained: "Since Teacher Pei doubts my writing ability so much, I also doubt Teacher Pei's literary appreciation ability. ”

"Huang Yifan, do you want to test me?"

"I don't dare, I just want to ask Teacher Pei to enjoy a poem. ”

"A poem?"

Pei Jin snorted coldly: "Very good, then let's enjoy it together." ”

Seeing Huang Yifan looking at himself suspiciously, Pei Jin was also angry. Do you still doubt your ability to appreciate literature, do you think that I am a fool in Mizuki, and think that I can become a lecturer in Mizuki? There are so many people in the office this time, we must extinguish the prestige of this kid, lest this guy think how famous he is, and even look down on them as a lecturer in Mizuki.

"Yinxue. ”

Seeing Peijin agree, Huang Yifan wrote the title of a poem directly on a blank piece of paper.

At this time, five or six lecturers in the office also looked over.

"Yin Xue, Teacher Huang, did you write this poem?"

"Yes. ”

Huang Yifan nodded.

Several other lecturers sighed, remembering that Huang Yifan did have the talent to compose poetry, so they stopped talking.

After writing the title of this poem, Huang Yifan began to write the first sentence of the poem.

"One piece, two pieces, three or four pieces. ”

As soon as the first sentence came out, the teacher Liu Ye on the side clapped his hands and said, "Good sentence, one piece, two pieces, three or four pieces." ”

This poem is called Yinxue, and it is obviously written about a snow scene.

Since it is a snow scene, then, one piece, two pieces, three or four pieces undoubtedly write down the characteristics of snow.

"Teacher Pei, what do you think of my writing?"

After writing the first sentence, Huang Yifan asked about Peijin.

"It's ok. ”

Peijin snorted again. He felt a little regretful, but he knew that this guy was a good poet. The Condor Hero who should have caught him just now didn't let go, so why did he agree to enjoy the poems with him? However, he also agreed, and Pei Jin would not say anything remorseful. Moreover, Peijin is not a person without ink. Although I can't create many ancient poems, my ability to appreciate ancient poems is still very good.

Even if this Huang Yifan can create an ancient poem, he can analyze this poem to the fullest.

"That's good. ”

Nodding, Huang Yifan wrote the second sentence: "Five, six, seven, eight." ”

As soon as the sentence "five, six, seven, or eight" came out, there were already several lecturers in the office who wanted to laugh but didn't dare to laugh, and they endured a little uncomfortable.

"You ...... Poetry"

Even Liu Ye, who has a good relationship with Huang Yifan, has a little hard to look at when he sees the second line of the poem.

If the first sentence does describe the characteristics of snow, then the second sentence seems too ordinary and too repetitive.

You say it's fine to have two pieces in one piece, but you can't count the snowflakes there all the time.

Although there is no complete format for writing poetry, this kind of repetition is taboo in writing poetry.

What else is "five, six, seven, eight", if it weren't for Liu Ye's endurance, she would have to laugh out loud when she almost saw the second sentence of this poem.

It's just that it seems that Huang Yifan didn't hear anyone else speak at all, and after writing the second sentence, Huang Yifan asked Pei Jin: "Teacher Pei, how is my second sentence?"

"One word, rotten. ”

Pei Jin almost laughed and fell down.

When he first saw the first verse, he thought that this boy was going to make another good poem.

But unexpectedly, when he saw the second sentence, Peijin's whole body trembled with laughter.

Five, six, seven, eight.

This kid probably went crazy.

Not only did the condor shooting he wrote before lose his original level, but even the poems he had always been good at were so rotten.

"Good analysis. ”

Huang Yifan kept smiling and continued to write the third sentence: "Nine pieces, ten pieces, eleven pieces." ”

And when the third sentence came out, some lecturers who had not laughed before laughed completely laughed out loud at this time.

Hahaha.

Hahaha.

This poem is truly stunning.

One piece, two pieces, three or four pieces

Five, six, seven, eight

Nine slices, ten slices, eleven slices.

Seeing this, several lecturers had already broken down in their hearts.

Nima, how else is this poem written?

This completely subverts their three views as Mizuki lecturers.

"Huang Yifan, I should enjoy this poem in the future. ”

Liu Ye, who was also thundered by this poem on the side, gently pulled Huang Yifan, ready to interrupt him to continue writing.

If this is written again, I am afraid that when this poem is written, Huang Yifan will become a joke.

"Sister Liu, wait a minute. ”

Huang Yifan was unmoved, and after writing the third sentence, he asked Peijin again.

"Peijin, what do you think of this poem?"

"Huang Yifan, do you still have the courage to ask me?"

Pei Jin looked at Huang Yifan extremely strangely.

In his heart, he was completely sure that this guy was absolutely brain-dead.

"If I were to judge it now, I would say, it's bad, it's bad, it's bad. ”

After saying these words, Pei Jin was extremely happy in his heart.

He knew that Huang Yifan, who seemed to be a genius, had disappeared, and it was not certain whether this guy would be a lecturer in Mizuki in the future.

"Rotten, very rotten, very rotten, the worst in the world. ”

After repeating Pei Jin's evaluation of the poems he wrote, Huang Yifan shook his head helplessly, and said seriously: "It turns out that this is your appreciation level of Teacher Pei." ”

"What, Huang Yifan, doesn't your poem deserve my evaluation just now?"

Pei Jin's face changed. Seeing Huang Yifan's "appearance of educating people", Peijin is a little uncomfortable.

Mom, this pretending to be a coercive goods, why can you pretend to be forced all the time.

Even now, this guy he meows thinks he's very powerful.

It's just that just when Pei Jin wanted to laugh at Huang Yifan again, Huang Yifan wrote another sentence: I didn't see anything when I flew into the reeds.

This is also the last line of this poem.

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