Chapter 742: The Hall of Elegance

"Hahaha, everyone, I finally understand the meaning of the poem written by Professor Huang?"

Some fans laughed and said. Pen Fun Pavilion wWw. biquge。 info

"What do you mean, isn't this just a poem?"

On the face of it, this is indeed a poem. ”

The fan said: "Moreover, this is a beautifully written poem with a very long artistic conception. However, this is only the surface of him. Take a look, the format of this poem is very distinctive. Clouds against rain, snow against wind, evening against clear skies. Haven't you ever thought that Professor Huang is not only writing poetry, but also teaching us how to write poetry? ”

"Teach us to write poetry?" when you say it, it seems to be true. ”

As soon as the fan said, the others patted their heads and suddenly came to their senses: "Lai Hong is against the swallow, and the bird is against the songworm." I said, how can such a strong duality technique be just a poem. ”

Looking at it again, this poem not only uses a relatively obvious duality technique, but also has strict requirements for vocal rhythm. Have you seen it, this title is written Yidong, what is Dong? Dong actually has no other meaning, he takes the vowel sound of Dong, that is to say, the rhyme of this poem ends with ong. ”

"So that's what this Yidong means, is there anything else?"

And, of course, let's talk about formatting. We know that our poetic couplets are generally very formative, one word is for one word, two words for two words, and three words for three words. If the format is not the same, then the beauty of the poem will be lost. Before, it was difficult for us to learn the format of poetry, and even if we knew the format, we couldn't write such verses. However, this poem is written for us one by one, from single-word pairs to double-word pairs, to three-character pairs, seven-character pairs, and even eleven-character pairs, as if holding our hands and teaching us personally. ”

"This, this, this...... This poem is simply stunning. ”

Some listeners were already amazed.

"It's more than that. This poem not only teaches us poetry, but also teaches us a series of incomparable allusions in the poem. ”

"Allusions, why didn't I see it, is there an allusion in this poem, it doesn't seem to be, this poem is like singing, and I didn't find any allusions. ?”

"Hehe, take a closer look. Take the three-foot sword in this sentence as an example, this is an allusion. The allusion of the three-foot sword comes out of the Han Gaozu Liu Gang, when Liu Bang cut the white snake, he said, I use cloth to mention the three-foot sword to take the world, this is the origin of the three-foot sword. Also, the back of the six Jun bow is also an allusion, the Spring and Autumn Biography records, Yan Gao's bow six Jun, one Jun is equivalent to the current 30 catties, six Jun is equivalent to 180 hands, you can think, 180 catties of the bow is what kind of concept, which means to describe the bow is very powerful, and corresponds to the three-foot sword. Let's talk about the Guanghan Palace......"

"Okay, don't say it, I took it, my ancestors have served it for eighteen generations. ”

A poem is not only written amazingly, but what is even more rare is that he also uses it as an example to teach everyone to write.

Such a poem has long surpassed the status of an ordinary poem.

Such a poem can no longer be said to be a poem.

This is learning.

This is a university question that has been passed down through the ages.

And those who have the eye to see the extraordinaryness of this poem are not only fans of Huang Yifan.

For many parents of students, when they read this poem written by Huang Yifan, they were speechless with excitement.

Second Winter:

Spring to summer, autumn to winter, dusk drums to morning bells. Watching the mountains is to play with the water, and the green bamboo is to the pine. Feng Nuhu, Ye Gonglong, dancing butterflies against Ming. Double purple swallow in mud, a few wasps in honey. The warbler in the garden in spring is just right, and the wild goose is Yongyong outside the plug in autumn. The Qinling Mountains are crossed by clouds, and the road is 8,000 miles away; Wushan is washed by rain, and there are 12 dangerous peaks in Saga.

Sanjiang: building to pavilion, household to window, giant sea to Yangtze River. Rong Shang to Hui Tent, Jade Shu to Yinjiao. Green cloth curtains, green oil buildings, swords against gold jars. Loyal to the community, the mouth of the country. The ancestor of the world Xing extended Ma Wu, and the king of Ji lost his way and killed the dragon. The autumn rain is dashing, the yellow flowers are full of paths, the spring breeze is curling, and the green bamboo is sparse in the window.

Looking at the words and sentences written on Huang Yifan's Weibo, the parents muttered to themselves.

After the first east, the second winter, and the three rivers were connected, they found that this poem was no longer a poem at all, and the poem had already covered everything. Astronomy, geography, flowers and trees, birds and beasts, people, utensils, allusions...... Reading such poems, even if you don't learn anything, even if you don't do anything, you just read, memorize, and recite...... After a certain period of time, my writing and writing can improve by leaps and bounds.

When this was discovered, some parents were ecstatic, as if they had seen a book from heaven. That night, he directly copied a series of poems written by Huang Yifan and asked his children to recite them.

As the day passed, nothing changed.

Two days have passed, and nothing has changed.

Three days have passed, and still nothing has changed.

Seven days later, the situation changed slightly, and the children of many parents suddenly became able to use rhetorical usages such as duality, comparison, and so on. Even, some of the words occasionally used when writing essays seem to be eye-catching, like a gust of fresh wind.

Half a month has passed, and many parents' children can already quote a lot of allusions, and the whole article has become clear and brisk. For those who have a strong comprehension ability, even the whole article is like music, and it is very pleasant to read.

Over the past month, some parents have found that they already have some of them who don't know how to evaluate their children's writing.

It's not badly written.

Instead, it was written beyond their imagination, making them feel like they were dreaming.

However, all this has an impact on a small scale.

And what really made countless people pay attention to "Sound Rhythm Enlightenment" came from a composition exam from 30 famous schools.

In normal times, such an exam is important, but in fact, it is just that.

Every year, various prestigious schools will hold joint examinations, especially essays like this that can reflect students' comprehensive language ability. Generally speaking, even if such an essay exam is held every year, there are relatively few excellent essays. After all, I am a junior high school student, although I have mastered a certain vocabulary and a certain number of allusions, but how to use these words and allusions, as well as various writing skills, is not an easy task.

However, this time, the essay exams of 30 prestigious schools surprised a group of readers. Not only did they find that the composition level of students in each school this year was higher than in previous years, but they also found that there were several essays that they were all amazed by.

For example, this "Heavenly Family" is simply written with majestic atmosphere and momentum.

Another example is this "Peach Blossom River", which uses a series of comparisons to write the special taste of the hometown mother river.

There is also this "I love your mother", the whole article reveals the endless longing of children for their mothers, and tears flowed down their eyes when they read it.

Seeing these articles, some grading teachers said incredulously: "Where is this essay written by junior high school students, even college students don't have such aura." ”

Under the influence of this, a group of lecturers from famous schools personally investigated the matter.

After finding more than a dozen seeded players and talking to them, the book "Sound Rhythm Enlightenment" appeared in the hall of elegance. (To be continued.) )