Chapter 398: In the Name of the Demon Tail

"Only when you understand your weakness will you have the courage to become strong. ”

"In the magical world of Aslante, in the kingdom of Fiore there is a guild of powerful magicians, whose name is Fairy Tail. ”

The reason why Wang Ming chose this comic is purely because it is a comic that was scrapped by Hiroshi Mashima. After copying so many comics and ideas, he hopes to draw something of his own, although he is not yet able to create a world, so he starts by changing a world.

"Fairy Tail" has an amazing start, but if you look at the beginning and end, you will find that it does not create a deep problem that can be thought about and discussed, and this is also the missing part of several migrant manga such as "The Seven Deadly Sins" and "The Food Captive". Especially in "Fairy Tail", the manga copy is almost from beginning to end, and the process is basically impossible to beat - think of the companion guild - win.

In addition to the two core concepts of partners and unions, "Fairy Tail" has almost nothing worth digging into, and in the later stage, it has been transformed into a meat-selling style, and from time to time Lucy is beaten into a naked T to impact the sight of the boss...... Majima is simply poisonous.

The four major migrant workers are different.

The longevity of pirates is due to the fact that there are many things worth exploring, from the world system to social issues such as racial discrimination. Although the Hokage doesn't talk as much as the pirates, it also discusses war and peace, which has plagued the world for thousands of years, which is grandiose. The Grim Reaper is about the contradiction and fusion between the ego, the id, and the superego, which was originally an extremely large subject, but it was abolished by Kubo's belt. As for Conan...... Maybe it's about time and space......

The recognized four major migrant workers can be distinguished from the core concept of the work itself, the pirates> Hokage> Conan, > the god of death.

Next comes the Seven Deadly Sins of the second echelon, the gourmet captive, the fairy tail, the gintama, the hunter, etc.

In the second echelon, there is no doubt that Gintama is the first.

This comic is full of gags and humor, revealing the question "what is survival", which everyone will encounter.

This is a work that focuses on people, not some false morality, and as long as you see the man who has picked out more boogers than a normal person in his life, he will cry and laugh. It's also a hot-blooded funny comic where the protagonists who have lost their dreams are trying to survive in a world that is as bitter as the end of the world for them.

As for why he didn't choose this comic, the reason was that he felt that he couldn't give the ending of the comic.

Gintama from the first episode, this is a manga with more daily life than the main line. He doesn't know what kind of world Yinsang will face in the future, what kind of enemies he will face, what Yinsang has done in the past, what has happened, what changes have been brought about by alien technology, and why the aliens invaded him...... I can only say sorry for the time being.

There is nothing to say about comics such as the Seven Deadly Sins and the Food Captive, which is not the genre that Wang Ming likes, and he basically doesn't know about it.

The hunter could have been number one...... Who called the old thief like to play mahjong?

Fairy Tail is similar to a pirate because of its art style, and for a long time, it was always compared to a pirate. However, this comic has three major shortcomings, which affect the audience's sense of substitution and overall evaluation.

First, the male lead.

Judging from the length and type of demon tails, the protagonist should belong to the cultivation category, so that readers can gain more surprises and expectations in the process of following the footsteps of the comics. Only in this way can the story have more room to play.

The main thing that the protagonist develops in the manga story is character and strength. At the very beginning, the demon tail shows all the characteristics of Natsu, personality, skills (mostly), aura, combat style, attitude towards people, etc. Natsu has many similarities with Luffy in terms of personality, and they both belong to the lord with high IQ and low emotional intelligence. This setting itself is fine, but a work has been serialized for seven or eight years, and the protagonist has hardly changed at all, although there are more moves against the enemy, more gorgeous, but I don't feel that Natsu's mind and experience have grown, which is equivalent to driving the reader away, if it weren't for the obvious changes in those soy sauces, the comics would have become a running account.

So if you want to serialize Demon Tail on the Internet, what Wang Ming has to do is to give the protagonist Naz a space to grow.

Second, the heroine.

The first female character to appear in the demon tail is Lucy, and the identity of the heroine is non-negotiable. But it is this extremely important female lead, but it almost fails to reflect the role of promoting the progress of the story, and is more reflected in the third-person narration, which is also an important loss point for Demon Tail.

First of all, from the point of view of the Demon Tail Guild, most of the people with names and surnames here have their own characteristics, and their shortcomings are also clear at a glance, which makes each character angular and angular, so it can often cause all kinds of jokes in daily conversations. Lucy can be said to be the only good girl in the guild who has no bad habits and only weaker shortcomings, but she is such an ordinary heroine who can only complain, but she is incompatible with the demon tail everyone. There is nothing worth digging in the world, and her appearance is also at the level of the heroine, and she is completely a "normal person".

Originally, this setting didn't matter, as long as the heroine could play her role. But in fact, the heroine has not changed much in the union or not, and even Lucy's strength is not strong. In the Gate of Hades chapter, it seems that Mashima deliberately gave Lucy a chance to show her face, although she is hot, she also has a stomachache.

Ignoring these, let's just talk about Lucy's role. Lucy, who didn't exert her strength until the middle and late stages, was worthy of the name of the hot-blooded footcloth, and it was only in the reunion chapter that her role was revealed. Therefore, in the treatment of the heroine, it is also necessary to add more connections between the setting and the story.

Third, the ability system is disordered.

This problem can be said to be a common problem of migrant workers, and it is reflected in the demon tail is the disorder of the magic system. The incomplete setting of the holding system and the ability system is also a big failure of the demon tail.

Although other hot-blooded comics are also talking nonsense, at least they are complete and can justify themselves in the work, which is why the pirates' "Devil Fruit + Domineering System" is more interesting.

Revising these three points of the comic is Wang Ming's work for the next period of time. The comic will be uploaded after it has been modified.

But before that, he has to talk about the general plot of these comics and the comic assistants under him.

On the 11th, Wang Ming gathered all his assistants and held a three-day face-to-face class.

According to an unknown Oriental public, the situation of this lecture can be called tragic, everyone is standing in, covering their buttocks and coming out, their faces are shiny, their eyes are bloodshot but their spirits are extremely excited, which is very worth pondering.