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Almost anyone who has read Gu Long's novels knows at a glance whether this was written by Gu Long or not.

Compared with Jin Yong's half-literate and half-white style, the ancient style of writing is simply naked vernacular.

Well, if it is placed in modern times, it can also be called a typical Xiaobai literary style.

It's just that everyone writes Xiaobaiwen, but there is only one person in this world who can write Xiaobaiwen as beautiful as poetry.

This one is Gu Long.

The legend of Lu Xiaofeng is not the best-looking ancient dragon novel, nor is it the most classic ancient dragon novel series. However, the legend of Lu Xiaofeng is a very distinctive work in Gu Long's novels. His characteristic, like this novel, is eye-catching at the beginning.

However, at this moment, when the legend of Lu Xiaofeng was officially serialized, readers who did not have a good impression of Fanchen set up a complaining team.

"Brothers, that guy Fanchen is so shameless that he actually complained about our sister Huang Rong as a royal sister. If we don't say something to him, how can we be worthy of the eagle archery that has been chasing him for so many days. ”

An ID named "Big Jiang Dilong" in the Tucao team started a general mobilization in the Tucao group: "Therefore, as long as Fanchen updates the latest chapters in the future, we will do our best to improve." Of course, going all out is not to make everyone a fan of Fanchen, but to find out all the faults of all Fanchen's martial arts novels. No matter if it's big or small, even if it's fine, you have to find fault with him. ”

"Captain, don't worry, with me, the little prince who complains, Lu Xiaofeng is not dead or disabled. ”

"Well said, then, now everyone is in place, one together. ”

With an order, more than 100 spit experts in the group went out in an instant, and read the legend of Lu Xiaofeng for the first time.

"The legend of Lu Xiaofeng, this broken name, almost reminds me of the Xiangjiang martial arts novels of the 80s. ”

The first to stand up and complain was the little prince of the Tucao team who "tied a sword with wood": "It can be said that this name is worse than the name chosen by a primary school student." Besides, the legend of Lu Xiaofeng, is this the name of the protagonist, and if so, is the protagonist a woman? If it is a woman, I'm sorry, I definitely won't read this novel. Because, I don't like to watch works with women as the protagonists, especially martial arts works. If it's a man, I'm sorry, I wouldn't read a novel like this. Because, I don't like a big man to take a woman-like name. ”

"The sword tied to the wood" is worthy of the little prince of the Tucao detachment, I haven't read this novel yet, just from a name, he spit out a few hundred words. Moreover, it seems that the complaint is really reasonable.

"Wood, give up. However, we can't completely dismiss his work just because the name of a novel is just that. In the past, those brainless fans of Gong Baiyu also said that the name of the legend of the Great White Condor Hero was very earthy. ”

"Okay, then I'll continue. ”

"Sword tied to wood" nodded and continued reading.

In his mind, if he wants to complain about a book, with his reading age of more than ten years, it is a matter of minutes.

No, after reading the name, I only read the first sentence in Lu Xiaofeng's legend, and the sword tied to the wood had a new complaint.

"Lu Xiaofeng is a person. A person you will never forget...... I'm grass, what kind of style is this, completely vernacular. Mortal dust, mortal dust, your style of writing has completely blinded my dog's eyes. When did the style of martial arts novels be written so white, didn't you write very good ancient Chinese before? Now I understand that compared with Huang Yifan, you are the whitest in the world. ”

"A sword tied to wood" complained while watching, without a half-minute pause in between.

Immediately, continue to read the story.

The first chapter of Lu Xiaofeng's legend is written that "Grandma Xiong" killed two people.

Maybe you have to ask, why did Grandma Xiong kill these two people, and did he have a grudge against these two people?

No.

Grandma Xiong and these two people not only have no enmity, but they don't even recognize each other.

So, the question arises, why did Grandma Xiong kill two people who didn't even recognize him.

Finally, at the end of the first chapter of the novel, Grandma Xiong tells us the answer. Everything is actually very simple: "Whenever the moon is full, I want to kill." ”

A sentence that seems brainless.

A sickly-looking answer.

However, it was such a sick person, but at this time, it suddenly stimulated the little prince.

Murder is often written in martial arts novels.

Or if someone wants to achieve something, he wants to kill someone.

Or maybe this person is very bad, and I'm going to kill him.

Or, if someone simply looks at others as unhappy, they want to kill people.

However, no matter how they kill, they will find a reason, whether that reason is good or bad.

However, in the legend of Lu Xiaofeng, this Grandma Xiong didn't even have a reason to kill.

Of course, if there is one reason to say, it is that when the moon is full, she just wants to kill.

Although this seems to be a valid reason, it is precisely this unbelievable reason that makes people feel a kind of horror exuding from their whole body at first glance.

This kind of morbid human character who is about to kill people in the full moon has never appeared in other martial arts novels.

Even if it is the Legend of the Condor Heroes, which can be called a strange person, there has never been a pervert like Grandma Bear.

Looking at the plot of the latest chapter, the little prince was a little depressed, and I wanted to continue to complain, but after reading the latest chapter, I found that I didn't know how to complain. On the contrary, there is a faint appreciation of such a way of writing in my heart. At the very least, he piqued a hint of interest.

"Everyone, that's all for the time being, and I'll continue to complain tomorrow. ”

After thinking about it, there is really nothing to complain about, and "Sword Tied to Wood" decided to see if there are any new complaints in Chapter 2 tomorrow.

The next day, after a sleepless night, the sword tied to the wood got up early. After combing through the Lu Xiaofeng I saw yesterday, the "sword tied to wood" felt that his head was clearer than yesterday. Yesterday, I seemed to be a little attracted by Lu Xiaofeng's first chapter, but now that I think about it, the first chapter is just a little creative, and it is not very powerful.

Putting aside yesterday's thoughts in his heart, he watched the second chapter of Lu Xiaofeng's legend "tied to a wooden sword".

Chapter 2: The Honest Monk.

This plot is also very simple, the honest monk and a group of people in the same boat encountered a robbery. It's just that the honest monk, like everyone, obediently gave all the money on his body to the robbers.

And just as the robbers were about to leave, the honest monk grabbed a wooden plank and patted it lightly, and the three-inch-thick plank shattered into five or six pieces. The people on the boat were immediately stunned. The honest monk threw the first plank out, and as soon as the plank landed on the water, his man had already flown up, and his toes touched on the plank, and the second plank had been thrown out. It was as if his man had suddenly turned into a dragonfly that had touched the water, and had taken up and landed four or five times in succession on the water, and had caught up with the speedboat of the Water Serpents.

The sword tied to the wood sneered in his heart: "He has seen a lot of such a plot, isn't it just pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger." ”

However, just when "the sword tied to the wood" thought that it was just a plot of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, a dramatic scene appeared.

[It turns out that this monk is a real person and does not show his face, and after our belongings are in hand, he will come to erect a beam.

Everyone's palms were pinched in a cold sweat, and they only hoped that this monk only needed their money and didn't want their lives.

No one could have imagined that this monk would kneel down straight in front of them, and said respectfully: "I still have four taels of silver on me, and I was originally going to buy a new dress and a new pair of straw sandals, which is already a greedy thought." 】

"Damn, this, this, what's going on?"

What about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger?

What about pretending to be a slap in the face?

Seeing this, the whole person with the sword tied to the wood was a little blind.

It's just that what makes the "sword tied to wood" even more clouded is: [The honest monk has taken out this ingot of silver from his body, placed it at their feet, and then said: "What's more, the monks shouldn't have spoken, but I lied in front of the masters just now, and now I only ask the uncles for forgiveness, and I will definitely think about it in front of my Buddha for three months after I go back.]

Everyone was stunned, and no one dared to speak.

The honest monk hung his head and said, "If the uncle refuses to forgive, I can only kneel here and not leave." ”

Who wants to be left alone on a ship like this?

Finally, someone plucked up the courage and said, "Okay, I'm ...... We're ...... I forgive you. ”

This sentence should have been said by a person who is right, but when this person spoke, even his voice changed.

The honest monk's face immediately showed joy, "Knock, knock, knock" kowtowed three times on the deck, slowly stood up, and suddenly swept sideways, and when he reached the shore, suddenly even the figure was no longer visible. 】

"I, I, I...... My IQ, where did my IQ go?"

Wiping his eyes, the "sword tied to the wood" wondered if he was dazzled just now, how could there be such nerves in this world.

Of course, what made him even more nervous was how that mortal he came up with the idea of writing such a nervous character.

It's just that just when the sword tied to the wood couldn't figure it out, the plot reversed again:

[Everyone was stunned at the bow of the boat, you looked at me, I looked at you, and then looked at the ingot of silver together, and I don't know how long it took before someone let out a long breath and expressed his own opinion: "Do you really think he is a monk?"

"What is not a monk?"

"It's a living bodhisattva, it's a living bodhisattva in every way. ”

The next morning, someone found eight heroes up and down the Water Serpent Gang, and suddenly all of them died in their den.

Everyone seemed to die peacefully, neither injured nor poisoned, and no one could tell how they died!]

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ps: It's 3000 words again, full of sincerity. Thanks to "Jiang Di" for rewarding another alliance leader, and he will make up for it later. (To be continued.) )