"Heh, everyone, don't get excited, forget about apprenticeship or something, everyone can get together, it can be regarded as fate. I promised you before that I would share some thoughts with you. However, let me ask Jiangshan first, which station are you going to post your next book on? ”

The reason why the cabbage group is called the cabbage group originated from a big god group in the network author group in the previous life, and those who can enter the cabbage group are some god-level authors. The reason why it is called cabbage, in addition to the fact that the novels written by these great gods are relatively white, there is also a sense of pretending. Just imagine, who would have thought that in this group that looks like dirt and scum, there will be thousands of fans if an author comes out at random.

Huang Yifan created this cabbage group in the hope that one day, this cabbage group will become the top author group in the industry.

"Bai Da, I'm ready to go back to the beginning."

Jiang Shan posted a message on the public frequency and said.

"It's strange, didn't Phantom Moon dig you?"

"Hey, Bai Da, how do you know that Phantom Moon is poaching me?"

"There's nothing strange about this, Phantom Moon is not a fool, he can be the first in the industry, and he naturally has his vision. If there was still a lot of controversy about Xiaobaiwen before, but I am a hooligan when you continue to write, which has made Xiaobaiwen's path gradually obvious. If I were Phantom Moon, I would dig you too. ”

"But the problem is, Phantom Moon deleted the novel you wrote for me, and I was very unhappy, and I didn't want to stay in Phantom Moon."

"Then you think that if your book is at the starting point, he will not delete it?"

"This ......"

Jiang Shan was speechless all of a sudden, and said with some embarrassment, "Actually, Bai Da, Phantom Moon is indeed ready to dig me up after deleting my book, and gave me a price of 30 thousand words." ”

"A newcomer has opened a price of 30 thousand words, which is not bad, and if you work hard, you can earn 10,000 yuan a month."

"Yes, it's just that I'm a little unconfident. Bai Da, you know it too. I'm a Rogue This novel is not written by me, I am a continuation of your work, without your beginning, I think, I can't write this novel well. Now that I'm a hooligan has been deleted, I also want to open a second work, and I want to see if I can actually write a novel. So, I rejected the buyout of Phantom Moon and was ready to test the waters on a relatively fair website. ”

"Yes, you have a good idea."

couldn't help but glance at Jiang Shangao, "I can refuse to buy out and go to the starting point to write a share, I have ambition, I wish you success." ”

"Thank you."

"Okay, now I'm going to talk to you about the so-called writing experience."

After chatting with Jiang Shan, Huang Yifan said to everyone in the group.

"Great, Bai Da, say it quickly, listen to me."

"Move the bench and listen carefully to the class."

"Bai Da speaks, everyone is quiet."

For new authors, those who have achieved a certain level of achievement, in their eyes, are successes.

They are eager for these successful people to teach them the secrets of writing.

The same is true of Huang Yifan, who was an author of street fighting, and he knows the psychology of these authors.

After thinking about it, Huang Yifan said, "Actually, I don't have much writing experience, so let's talk about the difference between traditional writing and online writing."

Traditional writing is generally divided into pure literature and genre literature, and most online novels are genre literature.

The so-called pure literature is a work that has no genre and takes the propagation of ideas as its own responsibility.

Genre literature, that is, martial arts, science fiction, fantasy, supernatural or something.

I call the writing technique of traditional literature the abusive writing technique.

This kind of writing technique pays the most attention to abuse, whether it is for the protagonist, or for the supporting role, or even for the plot, it is all abuse. As you can see, the heroes and heroines in the TV series are representatives of abuse culture. This kind of abuse culture is very popular, whether it is a novel, a script, or a drama, it has always promoted the abuse culture.

They like to see the rainbow after suffering, or they enjoy the process of suffering. Just like the novel Ordinary Years, they treat the ordinary, the suffering, and the hardship as a fortune.

Although, I also think that there is nothing wrong with this, on the contrary, it is more educational to be able to write about this abusive culture well.

However, I would like to say but......

Our online novels, our online writing techniques, don't have to follow this abusive culture.

It's like a bad guy, like I'm a hooligan, to the end of the whole article, there is no trace of abuse, and there is just cool.

Therefore, I believe that online novels can not only have abusive cultural writing techniques, but also cool cultural writing techniques.

Moreover, in terms of the reading experience on the online platform, cool is undoubtedly more eye-catching than abuse.

Especially, judging by the feelings at first sight. ”

In fact, writing is a profound topic, and talking about the so-called writing experience may not necessarily help the author much. Sure enough, after Huang Yifan said the difference between the so-called abuse culture and cool culture, only Jiangshan in the group still had some understanding, but in fact, everyone felt that they didn't understand.

Rulu: "Bai Da, I agree with what you said is cool, writing online articles is to be cool, but the novels I wrote before are also very cool." Why is no one reading such a cool novel? ”

The world's first white: "Then you give an example." ”

Rulu: "The novel I wrote before was a fantasy, and the protagonist had been bullied before, and then, he was determined that after ten years, he must fight the enemy." As a result, with his hard work and talent, ten years later, the protagonist took revenge. Bai Da, isn't this kind of novel still cool? ”

The world's first white: "I ......"

Hearing this story, Huang Yifan almost cried.

The world's first white: "Ten years later, revenge will be avenged, cool is cool, but why, don't you try to take revenge after a year?" ”

Rutsu: "A year later? ”

The world's first white: "Don't you think it's more enjoyable to take revenge after a year than to take revenge ten years later?" ”

Rutsu: "It seems to be." ”

The world's first white: "No, you didn't understand what I meant. Why a year, don't you think a year is too long? Do you think that readers are patient and wait for you to take revenge a year later? Why don't you take revenge a month later? Why, you don't take revenge a week later. Or, you take revenge the next day. No, no, no, whether it's ten years, a year, a month, the next day, I think it's too long. Why can't you take revenge on the same day? The so-called revenge does not stay overnight, this is the truth. ”

Rulaw: "I will take revenge on the same day, Bai Da, will this be too exaggerated." ”

The world's first white: "Exaggeration? Readers can even accept a plot without a little scientific basis like crossing rebirth, and take revenge that night, do you think it's an exaggeration? ”

Bulu: "Okay, I seem to understand what Bai Da said about cool, what the hell is it." ”

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PS: It's going to be on the shelves on March 1st, and I'm a little nervous and a little uneasy. Xiaobai is afraid of bad grades, and he is afraid that no one will subscribe. Writing has always been trembling, afraid that readers will abandon the article if they are not careful, and if they are not careful, everyone will come to scold Xiaobai if they are not happy. Fortunately, as the backstage collection continues to rise one by one, and there are more and more comments in the book review area, Xiaobai gradually regained the feeling of writing at the starting point. Brothers, the foreshadowing is almost over, and the next few chapters will begin the protagonist's second novel. As for what novel the protagonist will write in the second part, let's guess together. Well, you can also use the #Book Review Contest# to participate in the guess, and report all the novels you like, and the novels that you feel the protagonist Huang Yifan will choose.