Chapter 391: Qingbai's characters are never perfect

In the early stages of the Raiders Arne Grant World, Kirito can be said to be a tragic character.

On the first day of the game, he was betrayed by his idol.,And because of the hesitation and fear in my heart, I left my newborn friends and ran away.,Survive alone in a strange world.,Fight monsters every time the sun rises.,In order to maintain an advantage, you have to fight until late at night......

This is too much pressure for a child who is just fifteen years old! So he takes the world as a reality and enjoys everything this world has to offer, so that he will not get lost in this world and not go crazy.

It's not so much that Kirito cares about Asuna because she's a girl, but because Asuna is similar to Kirito who just left the town of Beginnings. To put it simply, if Kirito's mind hasn't changed, then sooner or later he will die on the Raiders, and it's not ** but spirit here.

Loneliness is a child's worst enemy for a child who is just beginning to get in touch with society. The source of all the sins committed by minors is the word loneliness.,Kirito's entry into the game has also experienced this loneliness.,That's why he rented a house in the game world.,Find a "home".,With a home comes responsibility.,There's the motivation to persevere.,And it won't feel so lonely.。

Originally, at this stage, he only needed to find his "family" in this world, and then work hard to break through the cage. Then he encounters the first thing that changes his personality in this world: the death of Diaberu.

There is no doubt that Diabelu died of jealousy and greed, but at this time, Kirito was pushed to the forefront, and his caution, and the way he still coped with it after the boss changed his attack method, became an outlet for Diaberu's relatives and friends.

This is a truth from the doctor-patient dispute in the real world, those patients who are ineffective in critical rescue, as long as they die on the operating table, those patients will naturally feel that the doctor is not doing their best, or where there is a mistake, just like a friend of Wang Ming used to work as a nurse in the hospital, it was a small county hospital, the equipment was not perfect, and suddenly a patient in his 80s with cerebral artery hemorrhage was sent a day, in this case, the patient's family only had two options, the first was craniotomy and decompression and ligation of the affected area at the same time, and the second was to wait for death. However, even if the first option is chosen, the hope of saving it is very slim, the patient is pushed onto the operating table, and dies just after the operation, and then the doctor is fined more than 200,000 yuan, and the hospital also pays hundreds of thousands, even so, in the end, the doctor was killed by the patient's family.

Kirito's current situation is the same as this doctor.,I didn't kill Beren, but I died because of me.,He was forced to the opposite side of the player step by step.,Under the entrustment of Diaberu.,He took the responsibility and became the most aggrieved one in this incident.。

"You're going to get stronger! So, if you meet a trusted person who invites you to join the union...... Don't refuse, there are absolute limits to the lone wanderer. ”

Kirito's words represent his deep understanding of this, and it means that he wants to integrate into the collective, but he is stillborn due to various accidents, so he said this handsome word to Asuna, who may follow his old path.

In the animation, the grievances suffered by the protagonist are diluted by playing handsome, but it doesn't mean that no one sees it.

Qin Chuan is one of them.

From "Demon Forbidden" at the beginning of the year to "Gundam Seed" in the middle of the year, and then to the nationally renowned "EVA", the prelude, development, and ** are only short of the ending. "Sword Art Online" as the finale, judging from the plot of the first episode, is not qualified.

Although Qingbai's choice of angle can be described as earth-shattering, the angle cannot be used as a criterion for judging the quality of a work.

Stories are in the service of the characters.

The protagonist in the first episode is an ordinary person, this kind of person is common in reality, and his only difference is that he enters the world of Ayn Grant, but in the story he is only one of 10,000 people, so the first episode is not successful in creating characters.

It is this paradoxical that makes the protagonist feel real. He's not brainless and hot-blooded from the start, he's smart, he's thinking, he's got the foundation for success, but he's missing a few things.

So the whole anime is not so much the struggle of the protagonist to break away from the game world, but rather a journey to complete his character. To paraphrase the explanation in "Eva", Kirito has wisdom, but he does not have a strong body and the courage and responsibility to support a strong body.

This is the reason why Qin Chuan likes Qingbai works. The characters in his pen have their own flaws, and watching an animation is equivalent to a baptism of the soul, especially the works he focuses on, each one will not disappoint.

This is something that many creators in today's market have not yet understood, and the perfect protagonists they write will be desirable, but there will be no sense of substitution, which is why those works are obviously not bad in production, but they are always overwhelmed by the blue and white works.

Looking at the evaluation of "Sword Art Online" on the official website of animation appreciation, Qin Chuan shook his head with a smile: "In terms of the quality of the previous two episodes, although it is not in the first grade, it is also worth being in the first and second in the first...... Too selfish. ”

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The comments sparked in this episode are not small, but they are mostly focused on Duck King and Kirito.

As the first harlequin in this play, the Duck King's performance can be described as hard, and he is also hated by most people.

"This duck king is so annoying. The beta test personnel are willing to share the information they get for free, which is already responsible for all players, and the Duck King actually used this to attack the beta players, which is simply brainless. ”

"yes, and he also blamed Kirito for Diaberu's death, which is just vexatious. ”

With red eyes and white results, of course, there will be no fewer people who pick thorns, and they also use the person of the Duck King to attack "Sword Art Online".

"The level of Qingbai teachers is getting worse and worse. The protagonist is infinitely tall, and the supporting characters have no lower limit for brain damage, which is simply disgusting. ”

"That's right, the IQ of this supporting character is too low, and the way of eliciting is too low-level, as if it is deliberately set like this, like xxx and xxx, the villains of their works are not so brainless. ”

"And this protagonist, obviously he doesn't need to put himself on the bright side to fight against all the players, but he just stood up brainlessly, it's just cool for the sake of coolness, it's too unnatural, and at a glance, a strong atmosphere of last century online literature comes to his face. ”

In addition to these, it has been found that Diaberu has two discordant places.

I don't know if everyone has noticed, when Diaberu announced the dissolution of the meeting, he glanced angrily in a certain direction, and then when he attacked the boss to grab the final blow, he smiled proudly in a certain direction. ”

"yes, I saw it too!"

"It should be the protagonist, after all, the only people who really show their faces in these two directions are the protagonist and Asuna. ”

"Then why did he target Kirito?"

"Go to the version of Sword Art Online, so you know. ”