The picture of a young man giving a lesson to a mature man is a bit funny, but the two people in it don't think so. Pen "Fun" Pavilion www.biquge.info

"One Punch Man" is a hot-blooded and funny comic, the style is very simple, and it only needs the author to skillfully switch back and forth between rough and funny.

"First of all, let's talk about the characters, your biggest weakness is the characters, and you are too weak in the creation of the characters. ”

Fu Jian's painting style is too exaggerated, although the fight part of the picture looks more gorgeous, but there is less sense of blowing, but it falls into place. The handling of shadows is too rusty, the proportions of the figures are a little unbalanced, and some lines are unnatural, which can clearly show that Fu Jian is struggling when painting...... These are his shortcomings.

As for the advantages, there are also advantages, probably due to the fact that he studied architecture in college, his background drawings are very good, the proportions and lines are at his fingertips, and the characters are obviously not at the same level, this situation makes Wang Ming not know what to say.

For most cartoonists, learning to draw at the beginning must be to draw people, which is the easiest to learn and the most difficult to master, and the difficulty lies in the face, the proportion and position of facial features, the style of the face, and the ...... of the hair How many are difficult to master, so there is a cult in the comic book industry - the Round-faced Divine Cult. Her masterpiece is "Madoka Magical Girl".

Wang Ming enjoyed the pleasure of this kind of teaching, especially the education of this extremely famous JUMP Four Heavenly Kings in his previous life, that comfortable energy. Not to mention how cool it is: "There are four characters in the first episode, a vaccine man who looks like a piccolo, a big bald protagonist, a little girl who was saved by the protagonist, and a host who appeared on TV, these four people, each of them has a different way of drawing." And the way you draw changes according to the angle you choose......"

Seeing that Teacher Qingbai stopped suddenly, the intoxicated Fujian Yoshihiro reminded in a low voice: "And then?"

Yoshihiro Fujian is not afraid of being scolded, what he is afraid of is that he doesn't even have a chance to be scolded.

I finally mustered up the courage and rushed all the way here, not to get ahead. I had been worried before this, and the moment I saw the teacher, I took the time to clean up the room to organize my thoughts and cheer for myself, what I was afraid of was hearing the word too bad from the mouth of Teacher Qingbai, so it would be so unbearable.

Wang Ming turned the sketch to the last page, pointed to the protagonist's face, and said, "Do you know why I arranged for the protagonist to say this?"

"It's supposed to be a suspense. After Wang Ming finished speaking, he heard Fu Jian Yibo say this. This comic with only 16 pages,It's almost ruined by him.,Every page he's studied.,This sentence is in line with the previous content.,There should be two purposes.,The first is to point to the topic.,The second is to leave an invincible image in the reader's heart.。 And the starting point of these two purposes is only one, and that is to attract the reader's attention. Comics are drawn for people to see, and comics that can't attract the audience are definitely not good comics, which is an eternal truth in the comics industry.

Wang Ming nodded: "Since you know, then look at the characters in your pen, do you feel this way? The author should have the most say in this work. You look at the characters you draw, you look carefully at the eyes, the eyes are the windows of the soul, I can't see any expression on this window, even if it's a child casually clicked twice, it's better than you draw. So my answer is no. ”

Wang Ming's words made Yoshihiro Fujian's mood low. How did I become a cartoonist? Why might I go back and find a construction company and spend a few decades......

"Did you give up?"

"What?"

The sudden voice interrupted Yoshihiro Tomiyatsu's self-abandonment. looked at the young man sitting opposite and drinking tea calmly, revealing a sense of confusion. You've already judged me to be unqualified, doesn't that mean I've failed? I don't have a talent for comics, and I have failed my family's expectations. Those handsome words when I left home,Now it's all a joke.,It seems that I can't get the single book with my own signature that I promised my sister.,It's only been a week since the cartoonist's career.,It's over in a hurry.,Sure enough, I can only be an ordinary person......

"I said, did you give up?"

This time Wang Ming's voice was very loud, and Yoshihiro Fujian heard it completely clearly. But even if you hear it clearly, what can you do, a failure is a failure.

"I've all failed, I've lost my qualifications to be a cartoonist, what else is there to say?"

Seeing Fujian Yoshihiro's self-exiled appearance, Wang Ming couldn't help but be angry. The tone was a little heavy: "I didn't expect that you would be such a person who gave up lightly, obviously there was still a week, and you didn't even dare to try, a little blow, you couldn't raise your head, and you directly judged yourself to be a failure." With your kind of character, you won't succeed in anything, and you're doomed to be a loser......"

Wang Ming's words, Fu Jian Yibo couldn't hear it at all, he was just turning a thought in his heart again and again - yes, last week, Teacher Qingbai personally said that he would give him two weeks to familiarize himself with this comic and draw the first sentence, and now it has only been a week, but it has only been denied once, and it is not really exhaustive, why did he suddenly give up? Fu Jian Yibo suddenly thought of something, his expression was a little shocked, with a little uncertainty on his face, could it be that Teacher Qingbai did it on purpose?

If it's intentional...... Shaking his head, this kind of thing is not something that needs to be considered now, what needs to be considered now is the issue of comics.

The whole plot of the first episode has been stored in my mind.,If you're going all out.,Three days can definitely get out.,Then ask the teacher to come and see.,If it doesn't work.,The rest of the time can be revised again.,That is to say:It's not a desperate situation yet.。

"Thank you, teacher. Saying that, Fujian Yoshihiro took three steps back on his knees, sat on his heels with his hips, his waist was straight, his hands were pressed to the ground on both sides, shoulder-width apart, and he leaned forward and bowed deeply, "I understand!"

Seeing that Yoshihiro Fujian made a big gift to himself, Wang Ming showed a little fox-like smile, but immediately tightened his expression and asked, "Did I say anything?"

Yoshihiro Fujian looked up with a smile on his face. He had just figured out what Teacher Qingbai had taught him in the first lesson.

Mr. Qingbai pointed out his shortcomings but did not give a way to correct them, and he did not criticize the omissions in the painting, which does not mean that he has no way to correct them, but he does not have the intention of correcting them, he hopes to solve the problem by himself, and the teacher is cultivating my ability.

Summarizing the meaning of the teacher's words, you can understand that what the other party wants to really teach himself this time is actually one sentence: persistence is the most basic quality of a cartoonist.

For a cartoonist,Failure in the middle is not important.,What really values is the result.,And serialization is the result.,No matter how much the manuscript was scrapped before.,As long as it's serialized in the end.,Then the result is good.,If you're depressed after just one failure.,It's really ugly.。

"Thank you teacher for this lesson, I will definitely keep it up until you are satisfied. After saying that, Yoshihiro Fujian picked up the storyboard and ran away.

Wang Ming got up from the ground, glanced at the sketch placed in the middle of the square table, and said to himself: Old thief, in fact, as a newcomer, you are already qualified.