Chapter 124: A big discussion on the coercion of school flowers

"Kneel down and beg Longkong to analyze the first three chapters of the school flower. 8w=w·w.”

"Ladies and gentlemen, the first three chapters of the school flower are really written 6, what kind of writing technique is this?"

"Is it true that writing is also a kind of technology, and that writing can also attract readers through technology?"

The first three chapters of the seemingly bland school flower have aroused the interest of countless book friends and authors.

It's just that there is still some people who don't understand the magic of the first three chapters of the school flower.

It's not that I didn't understand the novel of the school flower, but that I didn't understand the writing technique of the first three chapters of the school flower.

For this, soon Longyou started and gave his own reading experience.

"Everyone, tell me about my reading experience of the school flower, I don't know if it's right or wrong, don't blame me."

A dragon friend with a vest called "Gift" opened a new post and commented, "Actually, before starting, I was not optimistic about the world's first white. Even if his badass is well written, I think the villain's success is only because he writes black. Dao, everyone out of black. The curiosity of the Tao became popular. Until, the sticker of this school flower appeared.

When I first saw the school flower, I was like everyone else, I was shocked by these three short chapters, and I didn't understand why such a simple plot could keep attracting me. I don't understand why there is no innovative setting, but it still makes me look forward to it. Speaking of which, such novels grab a lot at the starting point, but why don't I feel this way when I read novels written by other people? Later, after watching the school flower ten times, I slowly had a little bit of my own understanding. This kind of perception is what I call the main line clear.

What is the main line, the main line in the novel is what the protagonist will eventually do. For example, if the novel tells a story of revenge, then the protagonist in the novel has to work hard for revenge. No matter what plot he encounters later, it is related to revenge. However, if you suddenly run to pick up girls on the way to revenge, then, this main line will be crooked. As soon as the main line is crooked, readers naturally do not follow up. Before that, many authors didn't realize the importance of a clear main line, including me. However, the book of the school flower made me understand thoroughly, in fact, the most important thing in the novel is the main line, the main line is unclear, even if you have a big idea, no matter how good the storyline, but a hammer in the east, a mallet in the west, the reader will definitely abandon the book. ”

This friend called "Gift" in the vest was full of joy and wrote a thousand words.

Just when some spectators thought it made sense, another friend in Longkong Jianghu also opened a post.

"The main line is clear, and it is indeed one of the reasons why the school flower attracts everyone. However, in addition to the clarity of the main line, I think that the school flower can show his charm in just three chapters, and it has to do with the rhythm of the novel.

What is the rhythm of a novel, the rhythm of a novel is actually about the same as the speed of music. Whether a song is fast or slow, when it should be fast and when it should be slow, there is his own rules. Similarly, fiction should follow the rhythm of writing. Of course, this is also what I realized after reading the school flower. >>8w=w`w`.· In the first three chapters of y-a-w-e=n'8-.'c'om, the novel follows the protagonist on a mission, descending the mountain, and then meeting a crook on the train. The plot is simple, but the rhythm is very well adjusted. The place where it should be fast is directly fast, and it is said to go down the mountain in a few words. Where it should be slow, it is also important to slow down. For example, in these three chapters, the protagonist and the little beauty, as well as the psychological description of the liar, can be described as a cool explosion. Through the rhythm of writing, adjusting the plot ** and trough, and then pulling the reader's expectations through the rhythm, the world's first white is simply a master-level character, worship ...... again"

As soon as the post came out, it attracted the attention of a lot of people, and many of them continued to study the so-called writing rhythm while reading the first three chapters of the school flower.

"Hahaha, let's let me, as a professional author, talk about the power of the school flower."

The popularity of the school flower has constantly shocked a lot of people, and at the same time, it has also ignited everyone's research on the writing techniques of the school flower.

Even a professional author called "Nine Lights" joined the commentary camp at this time and began to analyze the school flower.

"In my opinion, there is only one success of the school flower, and that is simple and rude.

Let's start with the simple.

What does it mean to be simple? The story of the school flower is simple, just going down the mountain to be the schoolgirl's bodyguard, everyone can understand it at a glance.

Don't think that this has no connotations, it's too white. It is because everyone has this kind of thinking that makes the novel more and more incomprehensible. Just like some authors, who can finish in three or two sentences, write thousands of words one by one, no matter how good the writing of such a novel is, will you read it? If you want me to say, it's just watering.

There is another one that many authors think that they have to write a novel that is different from others and has a story with complex twists and turns that makes people cry. Of course, this idea is good, but you don't look at it, what is different from others, your complex twists and turns, how many words do you have to spend to fully understand it? See why Hollywood movies are appealing and when Hollywood movies have ever been complicated. Take last year's Academy Awards Earth Crisis as an example, in fact, it is just a story about protecting nature, how simple.

Knowing the simplicity, let's talk about the roughness.

What does it mean to be rough? This one is a little bit harder to understand. If you want to make a comparison, take the island country education film as an example. Whether the island country education film is good or not, of course it is good. The direct reason why he is good-looking is his rudeness. When a man and a woman touch each other, their pants are taken off, then be rough and go directly. What do you say, don't go on after you take off your pants, talk about love first, talk about the next day, get out of your sister, who watches such an educational film?

The same is true for writing essays, and the school flower book is deep in the essence of roughness. The protagonist is very powerful, and the following directly relies on his own strength to successfully play three liars. The protagonist was introduced above and was very sexy, and when he met a little beauty below, he directly started the idea of picking up a girl. Although the girl is not soaked for the time being, this is just the protagonist's way of casting a long line to catch a big fish.

How simple this is, how rough it is, how cool it is. Compared to that, I have practiced peerless martial arts for decades, but I have to be reasonable in everything I do, and I have to find an explanation for revenge, and after writing tens of thousands of words, I began to fight with the opposite corner. With this kung fu, people don't know how many times they spend a book.

Well, in fact, I said so much above, but I only came out to pretend to be forced after seeing the school flower.

In fact, the book I wrote is not comparable to the world's first white. ”

The professional author "Nine Lights" commented wittily and humorously, and the post attracted a lot of viewers to click on it.

It's just that the school flower book is destined to become the most eye-catching existence of the day. After a series of comments from visitors, readers, authors, and so on, some of the editors of the station actually put on vests and talked about their research on school flowers.

"Well, I'll also talk about a few points, the writing technique of the school flower ......"

"Everyone said it.,It seems that I don't want to say a few words about the school flower.,It seems to be out.,Here's what I see of the school flower.。

"This is the research experience that I have spent more than ten hours on the school flower, please take a look."

"The school flower is so powerful, try to evaluate the forced style of the "double **" writing technique. ”

"After looking at the school flower, I knew how to pretend to be "forced". The first three chapters of the school flower are as follows......"

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PS: This is the public version of the last chapter of the book, and the last free chapter. After this chapter, tonight's o'clock will be officially on the shelves. I don't know if Xiaobai can be like the protagonist, shouting loudly before putting it on the shelves, where are the three thousand Bai Yutang disciples? Publish the QQ group of this book again: 3121o1252. At 8:3o tonight, a small book club will be held in the QQ group, and if you like it, you can join the group to have a good time.