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"Thirty-two giants, come out and analyze the latest work of the white gods, Heaven and Dragon Slayer."

The struggle writer group "Xiao Chao" bubbled in the group and said: "Recently, the sky and dragon slaying have been so popular that a large number of readers who read online novels have gone to watch martial arts. I really didn't expect martial arts to be so popular. ”

"There are quite a few such phenomena on my side."

South of Jiangcheng also said.

"Come on, come on, since Xiao Chao has asked, Thirty-two Giants, you can analyze why the Heaven and Dragon Slayer are so popular, and also attract some of our Internet readers."

The bean paste bun also appeared and chatted.

"I'm still researching this, but I haven't fully studied it yet."

Everyone in the group talked from time to time, and Thirty-two typed back: "Let's say it first, why do you think Yitian is so popular?" ”

"I don't know, I just feel that Yitian writes well, more than some of our online novels. Therefore, such a cool novel, even if it is a martial arts novel, our online readers will read it. ”

"On the surface, this is the case, but where does Yitian reflect the coolness?"

The Struggle Writers Group is a group of authors who not only like to read a novel when they read it, but also study the writing techniques of the novel after reading it. After Xiao Chao finished speaking, "South of Jiangcheng" had already thrown out the discussion of Yitian's writing technique.

"It should be that the golden finger is strong, so the writing is cool."

Xiao Chao is a rookie author, thought about it and said.

"It's useless to have a golden finger alone, it's not just about writing traditional martial arts, even in online novels, it's not all about having a golden finger. If your writing technique is not good, even if you become the best in the world, you don't feel much cool. ”

The old author "South of Jiangcheng" gave a lesson to Xiaochao.

"Xiaochao is right, just having a golden finger will definitely not work, I think Yitian's excitement is a 300,000-word super long layout."

Doushabao thought for a while and said: "Everyone knows that writing a novel has to foreshadow, especially if the climax is not enough, then the climax will not come effectively, or it will not last, and the evaluation of an author's skills depends on whether he foreshadows and writes well." Before, many people thought that the foreshadowing in front of the white god's Yitian was irrigation. Now that I think about it, if it weren't for these 300,000 words of foreshadowing, I'm afraid we wouldn't be so cool after reading it now. ”

"I agree with that."

Thirty-two gave a thumbs up: "Because of the 300,000-word foreshadowing, a series of things have been introduced." The protagonist's foreshadowing in the early stage is so miserable, and once the protagonist obtains divine skills, the intensity of the refreshing feeling after the counterattack is not ordinary. Especially the 24 words in Yitian, the sword slaying the dragon, the supreme martial arts, commanding the world, don't dare to disobey. Leaning on the sky, who competes. If we just shout these 24 words, we may never be able to appreciate the power of these 24 words. But as soon as the 300,000-word foreshadowing came out, these 24 words have become classics. ”

"The sword slays the dragon, the supreme martial arts, commands the world, don't dare to disobey. Relying on the sky, who competes, I think, this sentence will become a classic sentence in martial arts novels in the future. Alas, when will I be able to write something like this? ”

Xiao Chao said with emotion.

"Alas, it's just a pity that I can't write this kind of extra-long layout." Thirty-two shook his head: "One is that the online novel writing model cannot produce a long foreshadowing, because the reader's patience is not enough. Of course, this is only secondary, and more importantly, we simply don't have the pen power to control such a long foreshadowing. ”

"Thirty-two is right, so, I think we can learn the trick of pretending to slap the face in the Heaven and Dragon Slayer."

"Yitian also pretends to be forced to slap his face, isn't this a routine used in online novels?"

Xiao Chao asked with a confused face.

"Hehe, Xiaochao, you have forgotten that Bai Shen is the ancestor of pretending to be forced to slap his face, and he can use pretending to slap his face in online novels, and the same can be done in traditional martial arts. Moreover, Yitianzhong's pretending to slap his face is probably the highest level of writing techniques in China so far. ”

"Oh, Jiang Nanju, it seems that you have studied it specially, let me tell you."

Xiao Chao looks like he is learning.

"Of course you can, I'll just be a brick thrower, you can add."

The atmosphere of the struggle writer group has always been very good, this group was a group of street writers, and now a few years have passed, and the struggle writer group has become a big god group. And even so, the authors in the group still maintain the same learning posture as when they were new to the group. That is, there is no great god on the shelf, and he will not give up learning.

"I have done a special study, from the beginning to the present, Yitian has written dozens of plots of pretending to be forced to slap his face. Let's take the more distinct pretending to be a slap in the face. In the first place, the protagonist went down the mountain and broke his leg and sat there after obtaining the Jiuyang Divine Skill, and because he stayed in the valley for a few years and didn't take care of himself, the protagonist when he first came out was simply a dirt bun, and even because he didn't shave off his beard, he was said to be ugly by Ah Li. But who knew that this ugly monster had profound internal strength, and he used his peerless internal strength to help Ah Li ......several times."

"I'm also impressed here, but it seems that some other novels also have similar scenes of pretending to be slapped in the face."

Xiao Chao took over and said.

"No, although the pretending to be a slap in the face in other novels has written similar plots, but if you study carefully, you will find that there is a world of difference. In general online novels, the villain meets the protagonist, and the villain looks down on the protagonist, and then the protagonist pretends to be slapped in the face and successfully counterattacks. This is to say that there are some "pretending to be forced for the sake of pretending", although it is cool, but it is not necessarily clever.

But this is not the case in Yitian, the protagonist didn't want to pretend to be forced, and there was a good reason, the leg was broken, and the appearance was not intentional by the protagonist, so it was underestimated. In short, it's all incredibly natural. Even if he helped Ah Li, it was because he didn't want to reveal his identity for the time being. In my opinion, this is called invisible pretense. Because there is no trace of pretending to be forced, there is no trace of it, and it has reached the peak of the realm of pretending to be forced.

Tangible pretense is already extremely cool, can you think about what kind of concept "invisible pretend" is. So, even if the protagonist just picks up a few stones from the ground and gently injures those people, such a plot has already ignited us. ”

"Invisible pretending, no wonder watching Yitian is better than reading other novels, it turns out that this is it."

Xiao Chao nodded, it was very useful.

In addition, this invisible mode of pretending to be forced was also used by the white god in the plot of the Guangming Ding War against the Six Major Sects, an ordinary yellow-haired boy faced the major masters of the Six Major Sects, at first he was despised, and finally showed his martial arts, pretending to be forced to slap his face successfully. Of course, this is not the most classic. The most classic is that the protagonist was injured by the Heavenly Sword and has no strength. At this time, Song Qingshu came over, and the protagonist was not only not defeated by Song Qingshu. On the contrary, under the serious injury, he still relied on the strength of four or two daughters to knock Song Qingshu to the ground...... Although this is not pretending, it is more pretending than pretending. ”

Of course, the protagonist returned to Wudang Mountain to pretend to be a Taoist boy, and finally used Tai Chi Boxing and Tai Chi Sword, and he was forced to slap his face again. The plot is not revealed, and there are no flaws at all. Although it is a pretending to be slapped in the face, you can't feel the taste of pretending to be slapped in the face at all. Therefore, invisible pretending is the most deadly. ”

After Jiangcheng finished his research, everyone in the group was greatly benefited. One by one, they picked up the newspaper and read it, and seized the time to study the writing techniques.

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ps: Come on, come on, here's another chapter, although these chapters are later, although they are also supplemented, but Xiaobai has not been lazy. It's 2:40 a.m., and I wish you all a good mood when you wake up tomorrow and see the update of this book. Ask for a commuter pass. (To be continued.) )