Chapter Twenty-Four: Composition: My Dream

Ye Fei, the Chinese teacher of Class 2 of the third year of junior high school, held a stack of test papers and said very depressedly.

Ye Fei worked overtime last night to make corrections, but he still didn't finish correcting them.

I had to take advantage of the morning self-study time and get off work early the next morning.

However, fortunately, there are not many, only the essay questions of the test paper have not been changed.

"This school time is okay. ”

Holding a test paper, Ye Fei nodded.

"Jiang Weiwei is more intelligent, his writing is delicate, and his writing is also delicate, so he can give 54 points. ”

The essay has a score of 60, and a score of 54 is already quite a good score.

"Zhang Hua's motherland, I love you, it's okay, 50 points. ”

"Xia Hui, this kid is more interesting to write, alas, this kid is biased. ”

gave Xia Hui's essay a score of 53, and Ye Fei continued to correct the composition.

It's just that after correcting Jiang Wei, Xia Hui ...... After the composition of others, the composition of some other students left made Ye Fei extremely headache. What kind of essay is this?,I wrote a few hundred words.,I don't know what it's about.。 It's just that Ye Fei has seen a lot of this situation. Composition has always been a difficult part of the language, and now there are several junior high school students who write well. Not to mention junior high school students, even high school students, there are few essays that are well written.

In fact, like Jiang comfort, Xia Hui ...... Ye Fei also felt that their compositions were too naΓ―ve. But the age is there, how can a junior high school student write an essay that shocks everyone?

It's just that Ye Fei teaches these junior high school students, no matter how bad their writing is, they have to read them one by one.

Call...... There is one last one left.

After reading dozens of essays in a row, Ye Fei felt a little tired. However, Ye Fei did not rest, and there was the last one.

After the correction is completed, the test paper can be sent down after a while, and then the content of the test paper will be explained to the students.

There is not much time left before the high school entrance examination, and at this time, most of the review methods are either to review the previous content, or to take the exam, and after the exam, explain these test papers. Obviously, it is more effective and accurate to explain the test paper than to review the previous content. Therefore, whenever there is a high school entrance examination, the school will have a big exam from time to time.

"Huang Yifan. ”

The last test paper is Huang Yifan's.

Thankfully, this guy didn't get a score of 0.

I couldn't help but think of the discussion between Teacher Lin and Teacher Huang last night, Ye Fei couldn't help but laugh, and felt incredible, how could that kid get a 0 score in the English test? You know, a score of 0 in the English test is more difficult than a full score in the English test.

Fortunately, fortunately, the language is not English, and there are not so many multiple-choice questions. In addition, there is an essay, even if he scribbles on it, he can give points. didn't have much idea about Huang Yifan's composition, Ye Fei just wanted to finish the last test paper quickly.

"Hey, this essay. ”

was about to finish the test paper quickly, but Ye Fei only read the beginning, and all of a sudden, he was attracted by this essay.

The essay questions in this exam are open-ended, and there are no propositions, so you can write whatever you want. The title of Huang Yifan's essay is called My Dream.

The name is not much surprising, but at the beginning, it surprised Ye Fei.

Here's how the essay is written:

Maybe people should have some dreams.

In my early years, I didn't have any dreams. But when I saw others dreaming of becoming a scientist, a star, and a principal, I wondered if I should have a dream. That's all I think, if someone asks me what I dream, if I say no, is it ruining the conversation?

Well, in order to maintain friendship with classmates and friends, people like me, who have no dreams, also have a dream.

The opening was written very humorously, Ye Fei just glanced at it, and he was a little stunned.

Is this still an essay written by a junior high school student?

continued to watch, and after more than ten minutes, Ye Fei was completely stunned all of a sudden.

If the opening made Ye Fei's eyes light up, or surprised, then, after reading the entire composition, Ye Fei was completely shocked by this composition.

This essay uses the humorous style of the opening to quickly move from my dream to a more serious topic. Subsequently, he took an allusion and put forward "always aspiring" and "establishing permanent aspiration". In the end, an extremely shocking sentence appeared, those who have no ambition often aspire, and those who have ambitions have ambition.

People who have no ambition often aspire, and those who have ambitions always aspire, this is the main purpose of the composition, and it is also a sentence that occurs in the voice of the province.

What's even more incredible is that Ye Fei found that he had never seen such a classic sentence.

Yes, don't underestimate this sentence. Graduated from Ye Fei's Chinese Department and has more than ten years of experience in teaching Chinese. He completely believes that this sentence can definitely be compared with some classic sayings that have been passed down for thousands of years. However, Ye Fei was very strange, why he had never seen such a classic sentence.

Well, in the end, there is only one explanation, this classic quote, is original.

However, Ye Fei couldn't believe it.

Not to mention this classic sentence, even if it is the style of this essay, it does not look like it was written by a junior high school student.

How could a junior high school student write such a sophisticated essay.

Could it be that this is copied?

With a suspicion, Ye Fei copied this essay to the search engine, but the search engine did not find the same sentence.

did not give up, Ye Fei put the aspiration of those who have no ambition and the aspiration of those who have ambition to search in the search engine.

Similarly, this classic quote that Ye Fei thinks has not been searched for.

Seeing that the search engine could not find the content, Ye Fei was thoughtful.

Could it be that this essay is not copied, but Huang Yifan's original.

Extremely shocked in his heart, Ye Fei once again read this My Dream.

That's right, it is indeed Huang Yifan's original.

After reading it again, Ye Fei stood up and said in shock.

Although the style of this essay is extremely sophisticated, it is not written by junior high school students, but like college students and even students who have graduated from the Chinese department of the university. However, the dreams, people, and events mentioned in this essay all point to Tieshikou Middle School, which is an essay with Tieshikou Middle School as the background.

This essay may really be written by Huang Yifan.

At this moment, Ye Fei's heart was turbulent.

On the one hand, he sensed there was something unbelievable about it.

According to common sense, it is impossible for a junior high school student to write such an article.

However, on the other side, Ye Fei faintly looked forward to it.

Perhaps, this little guy seems to have been hiding all along?

Thinking of this, Ye Fei couldn't help but think of Huang Yifan's English score of 0 last night.

Could it be that Huang Yifan really scored a 0 in the test?

Although Ye Fei does not teach English, he also understands English.

Just now he was still joking that a score of 0 in the English test is even more difficult than a full score in the English test.

A clever man, when this sentence came to mind, Ye Fei seemed to think of something.