Chapter 162: Don't bully the poor boy (the third more asks for a monthly pass)
Although most of the Longkong Shennong group are readers, these readers have also been authors before, or have written works before. Although I don't write books anymore, there are many people who have insights into writing. At the same time, there are also some people who have some experience in writing. Of course, it is enough for them to write their own books, but it is really not difficult to get them to review the books.
At this time, they were scolded by Longkong for a while, shouting to drive them out of Longkong. Suddenly, the Longkong Shennong Group also burst out with unprecedented strength, and then wrote a long comment.
"Authors of Longkong, I apologize for casually evaluating your work as a poisonous weed, but this is just our personal evaluation, and you don't have to take it seriously. Just like you have been scolding us now, we may not be able to do anything to you. However, for the sword breaking through the sky, you think it is a poisonous weed, and our Youkong Shennong Group resolutely disagrees.
First of all, from the name, who told you that the name Sword Breaking and Covering the Sky is very low, although this is not the mainstream, but it is not necessarily that bad. Take a look at the novels of the 9-star god "Crazy Cat", he wrote "Seeing Guests" and "No Coming", do you know what it means? Don't tell me that this is his literary youth, since everyone doesn't know what it means, then, the sword should not become your laughing stock.
Besides, whether the novel is well written or not has a hairy relationship with the name of the novel, don't you professional writers know it?
Let's talk about your so-called 500-word protagonist theory, I don't know where you heard about this halfway theory. Why does it have to be within 500 words, why can't it be after 500 words, or even after a chapter. The theory of the first white in the world is not omnipotent, and besides, his theory also has a premise, and everything is based on attracting readers. If you can attract readers, let alone 500 words without the protagonist, even if it is 5000 words without the protagonist?
In addition, the same is true for the three golds. The unattractive Golden Three Chapters are not called the Golden Three Chapters, no matter how well you use the technology in them. No matter how subtle the writing is, it's nonsense. I think you haven't learned Xiaobaiwen writing at all, and you think you have fully understood Xiaobaiwen, which is really a joke.
In addition, although Bai Da defines online articles as cool articles, cool articles may not be able to abuse the protagonist. The reason why the novels are the same now is because you misunderstood Bai Da's words. I always thought. Writing should not abuse the protagonist at all, and the reader will run away when he is unhappy. The more you do this. The more you can't write a peerless story.
Some of Niucha's works have gone through countless ups and downs, and the protagonist has also gone through countless difficulties, which has only reached the highest peak of his life. If it is from the beginning to the end, it is always smooth, without any pressure, without any opponents, without any stumbling on the protagonist. Then, no matter how well such an article is written, it will not surpass the school flower of Bai University.
At last. Let's talk about divorce again. This is also the most heated debate among all authors so far, whether the protagonist can be divorced by others. Theoretically, of course. It's just that why no author wrote it before? It's because the divorce is too big a blow to the protagonist and too much to the reader. But what if this divorce setting is handled well?
For example, it's like a sword that breaks through the sky. Although the protagonist was divorced, the protagonist was determined and was not affected in the slightest, but worked harder under the influence of the divorce. At this time, what do we see? What we see is a protagonist who is not afraid of difficulties and dangers. What we see is a stoic and courageous protagonist.
Why can't we accept such a perfect protagonist?
With such a perfect plot, why don't we look forward to it?
I don't believe that all readers have glass hearts, and they abandon books as soon as they see something they are not satisfied with.
Not to mention, in the midst of the sword breaking through the sky, in addition to the expectation of divorce. There is also a more touching support for female characters. At a time when everyone doubts the protagonist, when everyone doesn't believe the protagonist, when everyone thinks that the protagonist is a scrap. The appearance of this female protagonist, how precious he is, and how attractive he is to us. This is simply a flower in the hollow valley, I don't know how many times stronger than those incomparably beautiful vases.
How can such a work that is affectionate, righteous, strong, struggled, and affectionate not look good?
In addition, there is also a gold-fingered sword elder hidden in the protagonist's body, under strong pressure, aren't we looking forward to the protagonist breaking out with the goldfinger?
The sword breaks through the sky, and we will put down the cruel words here, my fairy grass is definitely not your poisonous weed, and I will distinguish it if I don't accept it. ”
The counterattack of the Longkong Shennong comment group cannot be described as lacking in strength.
Many onlookers couldn't help but click on the sword to break the sky in this post.
Yes, whether this book is good or not, how do you know if you don't read it, and then you will talk about it after reading it.
Even if he had attacked Sword Breaker before, he had to take a look at it now.
If you don't look at it, you can't find a reason even to fight back.
It's just that when they saw it, they were also attracted at once.
Just like what the Longkong Shennong Tuan said, although the divorce is a divorce, but in the sword breaking through the sky, the divorce in this one has completely ignited countless cool points. Because of the divorce, the future plot is worth looking forward to. Because of the divorce, the reader is more convinced that the protagonist will become stronger and stronger. Because of the divorce, the female character next to the protagonist who seems to be the heroine is eye-catching and fresh in my memory. Because of the divorce, this is to transform all the accumulated contradictions and conflicts into expectations, looking forward to the emergence of miracles.
Will a miracle happen?
Of course, when I saw Jian Lao appear, almost all the readers couldn't stop shouting.
It's so exciting, it's so exciting.
This kind of writing technique, this kind of repressive and then explosive feeling, how can ordinary works compare?
At this time, many people who had attacked the sword to break through the sky also blushed a little at this time.
Whether this book is popular in the future or not, at least now that they have read a few chapters, this novel has attracted them.
Subsequently, they also changed from routes to fans, and they followed one after another.
666, this time I am the top dragon sky Shennong group, this novel may really be fairy grass.
It's not easy, the Longkong Shennong Tuan didn't look away this time, and the sword broke through the sky and looked good.
It's very well written, so let's go and see it if you're also the author.
All of a sudden, most of the crowd that had attacked the Longkong Shennong Regiment and once sarcastically broke through the sky disappeared in an instant.
However, there are still some unconvinced. Even if they watched the sword break and cover the sky, they were a little attracted by the plot of divorce, and they thought about how the protagonist would deal with it next. However, how can you admit defeat lightly. Moreover, they did not lose. Immediately, they organized their speech.
"No matter what you say, the book Sword Breaking the Sky will definitely not be popular, and it will definitely not be a fairy grass."
"Yes, although it is not a poisonous weed for the time being, it is definitely not a fairy grass. ”
"Maybe it won't hit the streets, but at most it's half popular, and it can't be compared with those works on the best-selling list. ”
It's just that just as they were constantly explaining what they had said before, the fourth chapter of Sword Breaking was officially uploaded.
In the fourth chapter, a sentence of "Thirty years in Hedong, thirty years in Hexi, don't bully the poor youth" broke out, but it detonated the entire Longkong rivers and lakes, and also detonated the entire website. (To be continued.) )