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So far in the novel, many friends feel that there are two points in the book that are uncomfortable, the first is the names of the stars. Some friends feel that it is too embarrassing to use the name of a real star, and it is easy to play when it affects the plot; Some friends also feel that using homophony is more immersive, and they feel that there is no problem with the name.

The first thing Ah Jiu asked was the name issue, and everyone thought that they should change the name and replace it with some other names.

The second is the problem of intrigue, some friends think that the style of the novel is better to be warm and plain, not so much intrigue, too embarrassing and too tiring to read. Similarly, some friends feel that adding some intrigue is more real and has more to see.

Ah Jiu's second question is the overall style of the novel, whether it is mainly warm, or whether the warmth of the family and the intrigue in the career are carried out simultaneously. Of course, even if it is carried out simultaneously, the overall style of the novel is still warm.

The above is a question that many friends often discuss, each point of view has supporters, Ah Jiu can't make up his mind for a while, I don't know whether to change it, so come and consult with friends, do you think you want to change.

Ah Jiu will open a special opinion building in the comment area, everyone can leave a message if they have any comments or suggestions, and Ah Jiu will make corresponding changes according to everyone's choice.

At the same time, thank you for always leaving a message to Ah Jiu, supporting and reminding Ah Jiu's friends, Ah Jiu has done it to you.

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"Teacher Tian He, the song hasn't finished yet, you can't be so excited!" Finding that Tian He's face was flushed with excitement, Xiaoxi couldn't help but quip.

Tian He waved his hand violently: "No, no, no, you must be excited, this song is amazing, it's amazing!" ”

He was so excited, but it made Xiaoxi a little strange: "Teacher Tian, although I am not a professional musician, but I have also studied music, in my opinion, this song is indeed a good song, but the quality is not to mention that compared with "The Story of Time", even compared with "Ordinary Road", the emotional aspect seems to be a little thinner. When you listened to the first two songs, you weren't so excited, what's wrong today? ”

"The Outside World" is indeed a good song, although it is not up to the level of a classic, at least it is a first-class song. On Earth, many singers have covered it many times.

However, this song is just a small song, and compared with "Ordinary Road", the idea is much worse in the first place. Not to mention "The Story of Time", which is almost seamless with the combination of lyrics and songs, the gap is obvious.

Tian He was not too excited to listen to the first two songs, is it a little too radical now?

Tian He also found that he was a little abnormal, and after exhaling lightly, he explained: "Indeed, I am a little out of shape. But there really aren't strict standards for songs. It's hard for you to come up with a standard that convinces everyone, as long as you meet those standards, it's a good song, and if you don't meet those standards, it's not a good song, it's impossible. So how do you evaluate whether a song is a good song or not? It depends on whether there is emotional resonance. ”

After a pause, he continued: "Some audiences like pop music, they think pop music is good songs, and some audiences like rock, they think rock is a classic. There are also some audiences who like niche music, which may not be liked by many people, but they regard it as a treasure. This is the audience's appeal to emotion, a song that gives you the emotional needs you want, or causes some resonance, you will feel that it is a good song. Why am I so excited just now, it is precisely because "The Outside World" sings to my heart, so I am a little out of shape! ”

Sure enough, he is a musician, and he can pull out the big truth casually, Xiaoxi accepts this explanation: "That's right, we can't distinguish between the high and low of the song, because a song can resonate, and he is a classic in your heart." So in everyone's heart, there are their own classic songs, maybe those songs are rarely heard, this is the charm of music, it will find everyone who appreciates it! ”

Tian He nodded again and again and continued to listen to Qi Chu's singing.

Is it the same as he says? Of course not, the truth is at odds with what he said. He didn't resonate with "The Outside World" at all, and the reason why he was excited was to see how Liang Dong broke the game.

Gang also said that Liang Dong's act of writing songs for Qi Chu was thankless. If it is well written, the audience will complain that he did not continue to help Qi Chu, making him withdraw from the competition. The quality of the song is not good, and the audience will vent their anger on Liang Dong, thinking that he caused Qi Chu to withdraw from the competition.

And as soon as "The Outside World" comes out, Tian He must give Liang Dong a thumbs up.

From the beginning of the song title, Liang Dong helped Qi Chu show his willingness not to stay on the stage.

"The Outside World", Qi Chu is looking forward to the outside world, he doesn't want to stay on the stage, he wants to go outside to see. Subconsciously, Liang Dong pulled himself out of the whirlpool of Qi Chu's withdrawal.

In particular, the four lyrics of 'The outside world is very exciting, the outside world is very helpless, when you feel that the outside world is very exciting, I will sincerely wish you ...... here', which is tantamount to the finishing touch.

In Tian He's view, Liang Dong sent blessings to Qi Chu, the outside world is very exciting, and he also named the essence of the outside world: helplessness. At the same time, there are blessings, just four lines of lyrics, picking yourself cleanly, how can Tian He not admire and be excited?

Not only Tian He, but the singers couldn't help but applaud.

"It's really powerful, Dongzi's hand is really powerful!" In the singer's lounge, Sha Yongliang, who was about to leave, couldn't help but applaud when he heard the song singing.

They are all industry insiders, and they know how much turmoil Qi Chu's withdrawal will cause, and when they are involved in the last game, Sha Yongliang is definitely a little irrational for Liang Dong. But after hearing this song, he was left with admiration.

wrote blessings, worries, and Qi Chu's own thoughts in just four lyrics, and his talent in creation is indeed extraordinary.

"Brother Bao, why do I think this song is not as good as "Ordinary Road"?"

Sha Yongliang's host Yaoyao asked, since she was sung and cried, she felt that all songs could not be compared with "Ordinary Road".

Sha Yongliang smiled slightly: "It doesn't matter if the song is good or not, the important thing is whether it is suitable or not." "The Outer World" is suitable for the little brother! After a pause, he deepened his tone again: "It's very suitable for the little brother!" ”

"Fuyuko's creative level is really good, I really want to go over and ask for advice in a few days!" Sha Yongliang put on his coat and said with a little expectation.

Yaoyao's eyes lit up: "Okay, Brother Bao, if you work with Teacher Liang, it will definitely cause a big sensation!" ”

With the popularity of Liang Dong and Sha Yongliang, the sensation caused by the cooperation will definitely not be much less than that of Qi Chu. The program group has increased its popularity, and Sha Yongliang may also get a good ranking.

Sha Yongliang smiled slightly and waved his hand: "I'll talk about those later, let's go, it's time for us to perform!" ”

Not only Sha Yongliang, but other singers also looked at Liang Dong's lounge and cast a meaningful look.

"The little brother sings very well, it seems that there is no problem!" Leaning on the sofa, Liang Dong said lightly.

He didn't know what turmoil Qi Chu's withdrawal would cause? Of course he does.

In his previous life on Earth, he knew exactly what Qi Qin was scolded by the audience when he withdrew from the competition halfway, even after the show went on for four seasons, most of Qi Qin's attitude was not very good. I feel that he is a coward, afraid of losing, unable to abide by the principles of the singer, etc.

With the lessons of the past, isn't Liang Dong worried that Qi Chu will affect him?

He is indeed a little worried, but it is not serious, because he has a killer feature, and the song "The Outer World" is too suitable for Qi Chu.

After participating in "I Am a Singer", for Qi Chu, it was tantamount to falling into a whirlpool, and he was reluctant to escape, seeing that the whirlpool was getting bigger and bigger, if he didn't escape, he would be torn apart, so he chose to escape.

However, there is also a strategy for escaping, and he can't rush forward hard, so he will be seriously injured even if he doesn't die. So he needed to use some reason, Qi Qin on the earth used his physical condition to escape from the whirlpool, and this time, Liang Dong gave him an excellent reason.

With songs, he used "The Outside World" to express that he wanted to get out of the show and find a new world in the outside world. This reason is much better than retiring from the game if you are not feeling well, although it is a bit empty, but the audience is more acceptable.

If you don't feel well, you will quit the game, and the audience will say that you are running away. used the outside world as a wonderful reason to withdraw from the competition, and the audience still felt that this was the pursuit of art by literary and artistic workers, but it would not be full of hostility.

While thinking, Qi Chu spit out the last note and bowed deeply to the audience, the end of this song not only represents the end of his performance, but also means that he officially called the curtain call on the road of "I Am a Singer".