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"It's a pity. ”

"It's a pity. ”

In the finale of the Water Margin, countless readers are secretly sighing for pity.

Of course, it's a pity that it's not the work, the work has reached an incomparably high height, and even if you want to descend, there are some difficulties. It's a pity here, it's a pity that it's the tragic fate of the 108 generals of the Water Margin finale.

It can be said that among the 108 generals, except for a few who only got a good death, the other heroes are all dead and unfatal.

Think about it, though. Although the finale of the Water Margin is a little bitter, after research, you will find that in fact, from the day the Water Margin appeared, he was doomed to failure.

Among the 108 generals of the Water Margin, although they have been under the banner of doing things for the sky, sharing the domain of all directions, and having different surnames. But in the final analysis, these generals are in awe of the court and the monarch. Moreover, many heroes joined Liangshan not entirely out of their own wishes. Some were forced, some were deceived by tricks, and some were temporarily settled in Liangshan, especially those led by Song Jiang who were thinking about Zhao'an from the beginning of the mountain to the end, how could such a Water Margin Liangshan uprising succeed?

On the other hand, this shows why the peasant uprisings failed for thousands of years.

It's not that they don't have the ability.

It's not that they don't have a chance.

It's not that they don't have power.

It's that their thinking is very limited.

You never thought about opposing the court, but in the end, did you win the court?

Even if it is an occasional rebellion, it is just to be able to put forward more conditions when recruiting security in the future.

When also?

Fate?

No one can tell. But no matter what. The book of Water Margin really plays the height that a famous book should have, not to mention that compared with the Fangla Uprising, even if it is compared with the four famous novels "The Legend of Wagang", it is faintly higher. Even if there are many regrets in the ending, there are no regrets when I can see such a strange book.

There's nothing more to say.

The wonderfulness of the Water Margin may not be enough.

Now we should express our most heartfelt gratitude to Fanchen.

"Thank you Water Margin, thank you for presenting us with 108 heroes with full personality. ”

"Thank you, Mr. Fanchen, for bringing us a masterpiece of the world. ”

"Thank you ......"

A water margin gave birth to endless topics.

At the end of the Water Margin, these topics slowly returned to blandness.

However, these topics have not disappeared, even if they have been flattened.

If you want, as long as you go to open a discussion post there, the topic around the Water Margin will sound like a thunderstorm.

……

"Professor Huang, how do you think you can cultivate students' writing skills?"

After the Water Margin ended, Huang Yifan went to a junior high school to investigate.

Although Huang Yifan didn't particularly want to go, he also went there in order to educate Huaguo students.

After a review, many teachers who taught Chinese classes in the first year of junior high school surrounded Huang Yifan and kept asking questions.

Although everyone's questions are different, more people still ask essay questions.

That's understandable.

Huang Yifan himself is a teacher of Chinese and a great writer, so he naturally has a deep understanding of writing. In addition, more and more attention is paid to composition in Chinese exams, and 50 points in the 120-point test paper are essay scores, accounting for almost half. If you want to get a high score in Chinese, if you don't write a good essay, you will basically miss a high score.

"Professor Huang, I heard that you got a full score in your essay in the college entrance examination, can you tell us about it? ”

"Yes, Professor Huang, you don't know. Now these children in the first year of junior high school, we all have some headaches. They don't understand the deeper knowledge, they teach it too shallowly, and the compositions they write seem to be no different from those of elementary school students. ”

Many Chinese teachers who teach the first year of junior high school have headaches and don't know how to teach. With their original teachings, it would have been up to the talents of the students. Anyway, that's how I teach, and as for how everyone writes, it depends on enlightenment. This is not a question like mathematics with formulas and correct answers, and there seems to be no particularly good way to write essays in Chinese textbooks.

"Khan, teachers, who said that I got a perfect score in the college entrance examination. ”

Huang Yifan has one head and two big, who spread the rumors of this full-score essay?

Teachers said, "That's what it says on the Internet. ”

"It's all a lie on the Internet, don't believe it. ”

Huang Yifan shook his head: "Actually, I don't have a particularly good way to write an essay." ”

Although Huang Yifan is also a teacher, he teaches Chinese. However, Huang Yifan does not teach primary language, but higher language education. Besides, the people who entered Mizuki were the best of the best, so things like how to write weren't for him to teach at all. On the contrary, in the Department of Chinese, there is really no "writing department", some majors are literary criticism, ancient Chinese studies, Chinese language and literature and other majors. According to the original experience, generally speaking, as long as you master these language knowledge, it is impossible for you to write your essay badly.

However, for the first year of junior high school students who have just been promoted from elementary school to junior high school, how do they know what literary appreciation and literary criticism are? Not to mention appreciation, even if the teachers analyze their appreciation to everyone, the students may not be able to understand all of them. Therefore, in the case of not being able to understand, the composition naturally written is similar to that of elementary school students, and there is not much improvement.

Actually, it's not just the first year of junior high school.

Even from the first to the third year of junior high school, how to teach composition is a long-standing problem.

A gifted student may not need to be taught, and he writes well on his own.

And those who don't have talent don't have much to teach well.

Does composition really need to be talented?

Huang Yifan shook his head and said, "You should recommend some more meaningful extracurricular books for students to read." ”

"Professor Huang, we also have recommendations. The four famous novels, foreign masterpieces, these are all recommended. However, the effect is mediocre. Many students responded that the teacher, the four famous books could not be understood, how could they speak the same as classical Chinese. As for foreign masterpieces, some students also responded, although I know all these words, but I don't understand the meaning of what they say. ”

This translation made everyone happy.

Even Huang Yifan was amused by this remark at this time.

Truly.

Although the four famous works are written in the vernacular, they are actually half-literate and half-white. Not to mention junior high school students, there are some high school students who may not be able to fully understand it. As for foreign masterpieces, because they are translated. Therefore, the whole plot and the logical relationship between the writing are also in a translated style, which is completely different from the Chinese-style article, so a group of students look strange and bluntly say that they can't understand it.

"In this way, we can only let everyone go to the sound rhythm enlightenment. ”

After thinking about it, Huang Yifan said: "I am familiar with 300 Tang poems, and I can't compose poems and chant them." Although the enlightenment of sound rhythm is about the content of sound rhythm, it is only for the purpose of composing poems and writing pairs, but in fact, "poems" and "couplets" have a deep relationship with composition. It doesn't matter if the child can't understand it now, then memorize it, memorize it, and the meaning of the word will be slowly understood. ”

This is also the truth of "read a book a hundred times, and its meaning will be seen by itself".

Huang Yifan feels that his suggestion should be good, as long as the children memorize "Sound Rhythm Enlightenment" well. Not to mention that everyone can become a great writer, but at least the ability to write can be improved by at least 30%. Moreover, this can also be promoted. It's just that just when Huang Yifan was feeling good, several Chinese teachers who taught the first year of junior high school asked: "Professor Huang, what kind of book is the sound rhythm enlightenment you are talking about, and where is it sold, I'll take a look." (To be continued.) )