I used to like watching Naruto a lot, and I started reading novels after I was done. Pen, fun, pavilion www. biquge。 info looked at it and wanted to write. For the Hokage's characters, my favorite is Kaguya. So I wanted to write something about her.

Last night, I re-read the novel I wrote, and there are a lot of deficiencies in it. It's my first time writing a book, and there are a lot of deficiencies in it, please include it.

As a reasonable party, I hate bugs. So I want to write things down in detail. For example, the exodus of the three ninjas, the cultivation of ninjutsu, the development of history, immortal arts, the god of death, and so on.

According to the last three wars, I have used a lot of pen and ink to describe the course of the third ninja war. The historical origins of countries with each other, political positions, and so on. As a result, I wrote a lot and found that readers didn't like to read it.

It's true that if you think about it, we don't even care about the politics of reality, and we still care about the politics of the Hokage world. Try to cover as little as possible in the future.

There is also ninjutsu cultivation, as a reasonable party, of course, there must be a system, describing the construction of a ninjutsu system. Make ninjutsu seem reasonable.

But when I write it, it says that I am water, and I don't really want water. It's really a problem with obsessive-compulsive disorder. It's really hard for me to write that kind of unconscionable. In the future, I will try to correct this point as much as possible, and I will not write about those cultivation problems. More plots.

Finally, on the issue of style, I would like to depict a world of feelings. The relationship between Akibara and Kaguya, the relationship between Tsunade and Akibara, the relationship between Tsunade and Broken, the relationship between Obito, the relationship of Hakura, and so on.

If this touches everyone, it proves that my efforts have not been in vain. It is also the greatest comfort to me.

You are not deeply touched by the readers, but as authors, you can hear your work being praised. It is a great pleasure. If you think that paragraph is wonderful in the future, you can leave a message to encourage me. Maybe the code word will be much faster.

If you feel that something is not well written, it is verbose, too much pen and ink, and unreasonable. You can leave a message to say it. I looked at it and corrected it as the situation depends. (For example, cultivation, if you don't say it, I really don't know that people don't like it.) So welcome to complain)

Of course, you have to give reasons for complaining, and point out where it is not well written. I'll find out when I write.

I was going to write a Sanjiang testimonial before I put it on the shelf, but I found that there was no hope at all. No recommendation, comfort on the shelves. I knew I didn't write well, there were a lot of flaws in it. Even I was embarrassed when I watched it last night. Hahahaha.

Finally, thank you for your support. Thank you so much! Everyone's comments, a little recommendation vote, a little reward, a little subscription. It's all the best support for me.

Thank you all, really, thank you!