Chapter 203: Overkill

Lin Han's hands exploded, and he wrote a short story of more than 20,000 words at ten o'clock in the evening, and his wrists and fingers were a little painful at this time, and he didn't think about it so much just now. Pen Fun Pavilion wWw. biquge。 info

Chen Jiaxuan has already sent him several messages on WeChat, and now he has time to open it and reply slowly, fortunately, neither of them is the kind of person who is extremely entangled, and they were urged to rest early after agreeing to meet tomorrow.

Twisting his wrist to do the exercise, Lin Han began to proofread the novel line by line. If "The Wandering Earth" is not hard science fiction in the strict sense, it focuses more on human nature.

When Lin Han first read this novel, he was attracted by the title full of literary and artistic style, how can the earth wander? As a result, after reading it, he was out of control, and completely fell into the big pit of science fiction and did not climb out again, nor did he want to come out.

If from Lin Han's own point of view, he actually doesn't understand the human escape in the novel, maybe he will also become a standard spaceship school.

Packing the entire Earth into the universe for wandering, most of the energy that propels the Earth forward is consumed on useless loads, that is, the internal materials of the earth's crust that make up the planets, and the greatest significance of these materials is to generate gravity, but gravity can also be simulated by the rotation of the spacecraft.

From a literary point of view, Lin Han can understand the original intention of the novel's writing, the aesthetic core of "The Wandering Earth" is the image of science promoting the world to wander in the universe, and escaping in a spaceship is a completely different escape from the world, and the beauty of science fiction is of course higher than the former.

Lin Han knew that most of the stories would cause discussion after they were released, and in the face of the imminent explosion of the sun, human beings could only survive by flying out of the solar system, and space navigation was very necessary.

It can take the whole earth away, this may be a form of space travel, and the momentum is very grand, which is a scene that most authors and readers dare not imagine. It's not that humans don't build spaceships, but they directly treat the Earth as a super-large spaceship.

If you dig too deep, "The Wandering Earth" seems to have a lot of scientific loopholes, even if so many engines look extremely grandiose, even if it is launched at full power, it can only bring 0.0001 acceleration to the earth, not to mention space travel, and it is impossible to even change the orbit of the revolution.

There is no way to modify these loopholes, what Lin Han can do is to make simple language modifications, and the text expression of the novel is a little immature and lacks artistic carving.

At this time, Lin Han was trying to replace these descriptions with his own words, and modified the places where the simplicity and complexity were inappropriate and the meaning of the text was ambiguous, so that even if he did not succeed, he could learn something and return to the basics in art.

The analogy between the plains and the pillars of light emitted by the earth's engines was a bit unnatural, and he changed the analogy to "If the plains are compared to the pedestal of a Greek temple, then the pillar of light that reaches into the clouds is the pillar stone that supports the temple, and the small human beings are just a speck of dust from the supergods." ”

The novel also has some face-painting problems in the creation of characters, there are very few impressive characters in the characters written in the whole text, and there are not many highlights, Lin Han can't reach the point where the famous artists use more than ten words to show a flesh-and-blood character image, he can only try to let each character take on the storyline as much as possible, so that there are fewer people and more plays, and the focus is highlighted, so as to create a plump character image.

At first, it was just a full text, and the job was very easy, and it was just a piece of cake for Lin Han. It's just that the editing and revisions that follow are quite time-consuming.

He was so excited that even if he didn't use coffee or Red Bull to refresh himself, he almost stayed up all night, finished "The Wandering Earth" with red eyes, and then sent it to the secretariat of the China Science Writers Association, so that they could gather and sort it out and send it to "Science Illustrated" as a supplement.

After doing all this, Lin Han didn't even have the spirit to take a bath, he went to the bedroom to close the curtains, fell directly on the bed, and fell asleep.

This sleep was dark, and I didn't know what was going on in the outside world, and I completely forgot that I made an appointment with Chen Jiaxuan to go to the suburbs to play together today.

Chen Jiaxuan waited left and right, and didn't see Lin Han drive to pick him up, usually he was relatively punctual, what happened?

"Why don't you even answer the phone? What the hell is going on!"

She sent QQ, WeChat and text messages all over again, but she couldn't contact Lin Han, so she had to grab her car keys and rush directly to Lin Han's community.

Fortunately, since falling in love now, Chen Jiaxuan has the key to Lin Han's house and opened the door directly, only to find that the light in the living room is still on in broad daylight, the mobile phone in the study is flashing with a red light that needs to be charged, and the computer screen is a receipt from an email address at six o'clock in the morning.

And the great writer was lying on the bed without an image at all, sleeping with the air conditioner on his stomach.

"I was scared to death, I actually stayed up all night writing novels. Chen Jiaxuan was relieved at this time, she was really worried about what happened to Lin Han, and now she wanted to scold.

However, Chen Jiaxuan quietly closed the bedroom door for the sake of staying up all night, and then walked lightly into the living room.

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At about the same time, Xia Xiao, the secretary of the China Science Writers Association, sorted out her work mailbox as usual, her daily work is relatively leisurely, and there are not many things in this association, and most of the time can be spent drinking coffee in the office.

After yesterday's science fiction lecture salon, there will probably be quite a few authors who will send their novels, and it is unrealistic to really ask everyone to write them immediately, and many people have a stock of one or two articles that have not been published to the public.

Sure enough, Xia Xiao saw that in addition to a few spam advertising emails in the mailbox, the remaining eight unread emails were all from science fiction and popular science writers in the association.

She downloaded the attachments one by one, she was not responsible for reading the book, only for summarizing, so after briefly scanning some of these titles at this time, she didn't want to read it at all, until she saw "The Wandering Earth".

This name is too attractive, there is a sense of literature and art, grandeur and vicissitudes, it just so happened that the leader had not yet come, Xia Xiao clicked on this word document and read it carefully.

The description at the beginning made her wonder a little, she hadn't seen the rest of the seasons, could it be that she lived in the equatorial region, but she couldn't say it if she hadn't seen the stars and the moon.

When she saw that the earth had entered the era of brakes and stopped rotating, she was directly frightened, and she wrote too much and shocked!

When the protagonist "I" told the principle of the earth's engine in a self-described tone, Xia Xiao was shocked again, no wonder he wanted to call the wandering earth, and directly escaped the earth to Proxima Centauri, domestic science fiction writers can write such magnificent science fiction novels, and the majestic and majestic are not enough to describe.

When she saw the Earth turn into the largest spaceship flying around the sun and crashing head-on into the asteroid belt, her heart became nervous, and antimatter bombs bombarded these asteroids, trying to blow up the Earth to make a way out.

Some fragments of the asteroid still passed through the atmosphere, dragging a dazzling tail to hit the ground and the sea, stirring up huge waves hundreds of meters high to wash the earth, and such bombardment lasted for a week!

The earth was shrouded in a thick layer of dust from the bombardment, there was not a trace of light, the mood of the people was gloomy, the vulnerable almost committed suicide, the engine of the Western Hemisphere was destroyed by a third, and humanity relied on the engine of the Eastern Hemisphere to complete the Age of Escape.

Xia Xiao's heart was completely attracted by this novel, she saw that the earth and Jupiter were passing by at an almost collision distance, she couldn't control her mood at all, and directly exclaimed in a low voice.

Large-scale and detailed depictions of all sorts of grandiose human beings have even put planetary engines on the moon to propel it away from Earth's orbit, which has caused huge waves on the surface of the sea and the thaw of frozen oceans.

This happens to be the topic discussed yesterday, what kind of impact will it have when the moon suddenly disappears, but in "The Wandering Earth", humans took the initiative to send the moon away.

Xia Xiao, who was immersed in the novel, didn't notice that her boss had been standing next to her for a while, and her colleague's desperate coughing didn't attract her attention.

"Xiao Xia, it seems that you don't like science fiction, it's not something you can watch with relish. But for now, send me these articles first, and then you can continue to read them. ”

The vice president said with a pleasant face, he didn't mean to blame, it was actually normal to work here and read science fiction.

Xia Xiao was taken aback after coming back to her senses, she quickly stood up and said, "President, I'll send it to you right away, this "The Wandering Earth" is very good-looking and attractive!"

Xiao Nuo, the vice president of the Science Writers Association, asked in surprise: "Is it really that good? Which writer wrote it?"

"Lin Han. Xia Xiao continued to add, "It's Lin Han who won the Hugo Award." ”

"He, it's not strange that it was written by Lin Han, send me a copy quickly. After saying that, Shano couldn't wait to go back to his office, he wanted a sneak peek.

Chaob is also a science fiction writer, but he hasn't continued to write most of the time, focusing on officialdom, but he can't clean it up at first glance!

In addition to the magnificent description and tragedy in the novel, the novel also has a feminine side, Lin Han discussed the human culture and psychology of this special era, the threat of death and the desire to escape overwhelmed everything, and gradually changed the psychological state and spiritual life of human beings in essence, and human beings have taken love that is not related to life and death very lightly.

From the writer's point of view, this book is a fusion of the literary nature of the novel and science fantasy, and the two have reached a balance in "The Wandering Earth".

"This idea is so surprising, it's obviously the subject of a long novel, why should it be written as a short story, it's just overkill, it's a pity!" (To be continued.) )