But Tong Zhao didn't rush to post it, he felt that he either didn't explain, or the people who explained the black "Star Change" had nothing to say.

After reading this post carefully, Tong Zhao summarized several flaws raised by people in the Nine Heavens for "Star Change", thinking that this is a failure.

First, the writing is not crepe, it is not deep and introverted, it is too simple.

The second is that the protagonist's strength in training is too fast.

The third is that the depiction of supporting roles does not have much strength.

Tong Zhao's eyes swept slightly, and his mind fell into deep thought.

clicked on the post about "To the Oak Tree": A certain male star read the poem "To the Oak Tree" on a variety show, which caused heated discussions among literary critics on Weibo.

Is it a flash in the pan or a sensationalism or a display of a rising literary star?

Tong Zhao looked at it and found that this post was torn even worse than his own post of "Star Change". After all, his "Star Change" is not so widely known, and "To the Oak Tree" has caused a lot of discussion on Weibo, and there must be fans of the two people in this Weibo in Nine Days.

Tear it up, and no one wants to spare anyone.

Looking, Tong Zhao smiled, "To the Oak Tree" will definitely become popular, and he can guarantee it with his life. He didn't need to explain anything for "To the Oak Tree", for time would prove it all for the poem, and those who had satirized it would have blushed.

After registering the number of the Nine Heavens Forum, Tong Zhao took his pen name "Idler" on Mengyao's Chinese website, but found that he had already been registered.

So I reluctantly hit one: "I'm an idler" to go up.

Posted: "Doubts about "Star Change" are solved. ”

"I just wanted to write a book quietly, but I found that the discussion about the contemptible book was very lively, and it was very torn here. ”

"I felt that I needed to write something, after all, some people are book friends who support "Star Change", and as the author of this book, I can't watch my book friends being torn apart in vain. ”

"But what exactly is written, the contemptible people don't know too well. I carefully read everyone's comments about the book of contemptible people, and summarized three questions, which I will express for you one by one. ”

"One: The stylistic and writing problems of "The Changing Stars". The style I gave to "Star Change" is called a kind of "little white text". The plot should be good, and the writing should serve the plot, but it must also have its own brilliance. The contemptible people think that online literature is a representative of the rise of fragmented time reading, and if it is written too philosophical and too profound, everyone may look dull. ”

Therefore, I think that online literature needs to be not confined to style and language, but must have enough personality. I want to give you a book that looks comfortable, looks at the book you like, and looks at a book that has an absolute sense of substitution. ”

"Two: About the rapid improvement of the protagonist's strength during training. All I can say is that you think this strength has really improved rapidly? This book has just begun, and the good things are still to come, so we will stay tuned. ”

"Three: Why do I not describe some supporting characters enough? My answer is, why do some useless supporting characters need so much pen and ink? Is the number of words in water? The length of the online article is so long, if each character is vivid and flexible, I am afraid that it will have a longer extension on the basis of the original length. ”

To answer these three points, please read them in the book. ”

Tong Zhao felt that he only needed to express the word Xiaobaiwen, and that online literature appeared in a fast-paced life, and what it needed was the greatest satisfaction.

A little warmth, a little pretending.

Stretching his waist, Tong Zhao's fingers clicked the send button little by little.

Tong Zhao doesn't know how much discussion this article can cause in nine days, but whether he agrees with his own views or denies himself.

Waiting and seeing is the best way to go.

After all, Tong Zhao believes that "Star Change" has such an ability.

looked at his Weibo, and Tong Zhao's updated "Passing by Your World" also received a lot of comments. These stories are also very suitable for fragmented reading, and Tong Zhao performed the poem "To the Oak Tree" in the variety show, so he has to continue his literary talent.

Everything about Mao 18 and Lychee is not yet clear, because Tong Zhao has not finished writing. But the things that inadvertently touch people's hearts are always moving, and many people are urging Tong Zhao to hurry up and be happy.

"No, no. Tong Zhao wrote his manuscript and updated it, and then stood up.

What's the point of reading it all at once, good things need to come little by little.

"Wenwen, take a bath. Tong Zhao walked to the bathroom, put hot water in the bathtub, reached into it and measured the temperature of the water, and felt just right.

Then he took out a few little yellow ducks from the storage cabinet above and put them on the water, and placed the shower gel and shampoo next to the bathtub one by one.

Tong Wenwen, who was watching TV, was picked up by Tong Zhao and taken to the bathroom.

"Dad, I haven't finished watching the anime yet. Tong Wenwen said dissatisfiedly, the anime just now was the time to be wonderful, and it was definitely not beautiful to be suddenly brought here by Tong Zhao.

"Be punctual. Tong Zhao carefully took off Tong Wenwen's clothes, revealing her petite body. Then put it into the bathtub, and Tong Wenwen poured water from the bathtub on Tong Zhao's hand, as if to vent her dissatisfaction.

"Take a shower and look again. Tong Wenwen turned her head after splashing the water, and her little mouth was eager to pout to the sky. Tong Zhao, who was watching, was a little distressed, slightly sprinkled hot water on his body and rubbed it again, removed the tied pigtails for him, and then washed them with water.

"Dad. ”

"Huh?"

"When will we be able to live with Mommy?"

"Wenwen wants to?"

"Wenwen really wants to be able to live with her father and mother, to be able to play with Wenwen, to be able to take care of Wenwen, and to be able to send Wenwen to school together. ”

Tong Wenwen is innocent, and her words don't need to be disguised at all.

Tong Zhao's body was stunned, and the hand that was washing Tong Wenwen's hair also stopped.

"It's not far off. ”

"Really?" Tong Wenwen was playing with the little yellow duck on the water, but when she heard Tong Zhao's words, she hurriedly turned her head, and her big eyes were full of hope.

"Really, trust Dad. Tong Zhao said.

"Dad promised me to take me to KFC before, but he hasn't taken me to eat it yet. When Tong Zhao patted his chest and made a promise, Tong Wenwen silently dismantled Tong Zhao's platform.