Testimonials at the end of the volume
About the plot:
The two obvious lines of the first volume are intertwined from "Storm and Storm", then collide little by little, and finally explode.
Needless to say, the growth of Xu Xiaoshou in the bright line is mainly about the dark line: the development of the world plot.
Take Xu Xiaoshou away, the development of this world is the "battle for hegemony" when Sang Lao suddenly returned to the palace, prepared with the giants of the Spirit Palace, and laid a big net to wait for the invasion of the "holy slave".
The "Holy Slave" came, and what the people came to their surprise was the first seat of the "Holy Slave", and he couldn't take it at all with the power of the Spirit Palace alone, so he had no choice but to let it go.
With the lessons of the past, taking advantage of the turmoil in the White Grotto, and grasping the information that the "Holy Slave" might come to take away the Black Falling Sword Scabbard in advance, Ye Xiaotian sent a letter to the Holy Spirit Temple, but the Holy Spirit Temple was careless.
There was only one riverside goose, and even the masked man couldn't take it, not to mention that this time the "holy slave" was also prepared and brought Cenchov.
After missing again, the famous sword was also taken, and the dignity was also ruined, and the only thing that the Spirit Palace could keep was a black scabbard.
Yes, without Xu Xiaoshou appearing, I'm afraid that even the scabbard will have to be given to Luo Leilei.
This is an indisputable fact, that is, the most primitive attitude that the first volume wants to express, in the face of absolute strength, all struggles are vain and powerless.
And Sang Lao, with an almost outsider identity and way of acting, has become the only chess player in the first volume.
The formation of the structure from the bottom to the top is actually Sang Lao's "cage theory".
Tiansang Spirit Palace is like a cage, whether it is Ye Xiaotian, Xiao Qixiu, or Housewarming, who are trapped, they are all weak in the face of real strength.
This kind of gray color is not only vaguely reflected in such a large environment, but also has small descriptions.
For example, Lan Xinzi's unwillingness to servility, everyone's incomprehension of Sang Lao's wanton and reckless character, and even the apprenticeship with Xu Xiaoshou who was helpless.
After all, at this time, even if he has a golden finger, Xu Xiaoshou can only be a chess piece, at best, he will jump a little.
It's really powerless!
The overall style of the first volume is not cool, and it actually makes people feel powerless when they read it, even if Xu Xiaoshou has frequent wisdom and can carry the tripod, this kind of gloom is real.
It can be said that if it weren't for the characterization of the protagonist's out-of-character character, the whole of Volume 1 would have been an even greater tragedy.
Some people say why Xu Xiaoshou is so crazy, can't he write in a normal way?
Ahem, I dare to write, do you dare to read it?
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About Trolls:
The idea of the plot never fell, those trolls or something, to be honest, I really enjoyed it while writing the book.
When he killed Feng Kong and Shao Yi, he squirted a lot, saying that no one saw or heard such a big movement.
Use your brains, Xu Xiaoshou swallowed an ember in Goose Lake and the fire was just like that, and the man in black immediately came, but Sang Lao stopped him.
This previous plot has been reminded, how can it not be discovered?
Playing chess, this is!
It's long overdue to realize that something is wrong!
There is also the innate characteristic "Sharp Light" for the passive skill "Sharp", which was restrained by the power of Mo Mo's seal, and it was a big spray.
Brother,Have you only masturbated lol?
Some passives can also be sealed.,The setting of this book.,Passive skills are also leveled.,Acquired、Innate,It's bright and dangling!
No matter how strong the passive is, you take an acquired level against an innate spiritual skill, even if you barely resist it, what about the grandmaster spiritual skill?
What's more, these are not the point at all, a person who can restrain the protagonist's golden finger a little, even Sang Lao and the masked man failed to do it, and deliberately emphasized the small copper furnace and the small copper furnace......
Foreshadowing, this is!
It's long overdue to spot the blind spots!
To be honest, I was really angry at the time, and I almost went out to explain, but I couldn't help it, after all, it was irresponsible to later readers.
It's okay to spray something else, but it's a plot foreshadowing, I really can't explain it!
Of course, saying so much is not for everyone not to say, everyone should spray or spray, but pay attention to the tone;
Delete and ban one-stop, after all, among my options, there is only one permanent ban!
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About Passives:
Compared to the idea of a long, long plot, to be honest, the concept of passive skills is really just a flash of inspiration before the book is released.
Its only role is to make the plot fun and good-looking, well, that's all.
However, the first volume is only at a superficial stage when it comes to presenting the various developments that I have in mind.
Basic, Extended, Mastery, Special Passive...... There will be more than just a few categories, and there will be more interesting ones to come.
Not only the width is expanded, but the depth is also, and every passive skill can basically develop something very strong in the future.
For this, the awakening pool said that it can't wait.
Xu Xiaoshou has the ability to make money, but there are really few people in the Spirit Palace, and the general environment leads to his inability to get a large number of passive values, so he can only put it on hold temporarily.
Damn it.
But the next volume will be out of the palace, Xiao Shou is out of the palace, think about it, it's worth looking forward to!
...... Huh?
Phew, out of the Spirit Palace!
Looking forward to it, right?
There are a lot of holes that haven't been filled, remember to remind me if you forget, thank you, thank you, although it should not be forgotten.
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About the results:
The book hit the shelves on May 22, and it's been two months now.
The average order on the first day is more than 500, and now the average order is almost 2,000, I hope to make a boutique as soon as possible!
Woo woo, it's going up so slowly, it's obviously a lot of spicy collections, and the daily harvest is not bad, someone must have run to see it secretly.
The starting point of the first release of this book, ask for genuine subscriptions!
It's really not easy to write a new book, and it's not popular, so ask for more support!
Recommended tickets, monthly passes, rewards or whatever, all come and go!
Keep rushing !!
mua~
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