Compared with the urban girls Zhang Yu saw, Zhan Xiaotong can be regarded as a special case, she does not have any discomfort with the rural environment, and even enjoys it, tanning is inevitable. Pen | fun | pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 ｉｎｆｏ

Zhan Xiaotong brought a SLR from Haizhou City, and often went out to take pictures of the scenery of the countryside, fields, blue sky, white clouds, old houses, the photos taken by the skilled Zhan Xiaotong have a unique artistic conception, Zhang Yu was also pulled out by Zhan Xiaotong to take photos a few times, and there is a feeling of youth idol drama.

Zhan Xiaotong occasionally does things that make Zhang Yu angry and helpless, such as usurping the right to use the computer and fixing the photos in the camera.

Once again, Zhan Xiaotong occupied the computer, and what was even more excessive was that the bed that Zhang Yu had just laid out the mat was also occupied by Miss Zhan cross-legged, holding snacks in her arms, and the computer was playing a costume TV series "Miss Zhan, you take other people's things for granted, okay?"

After taking a bite of the snack, Zhan Xiaotong said vaguely, "You have nothing to do except play games, I will watch TV series to cultivate and cultivate sentiment." ”

Glancing at Zhan Xiaotong's wheat-colored legs exposed outside her skirt, Zhang Yu remembered the scene that happened between Su Can and Lin Luoran at the home of Wang Bo Municipal Party Committee compound in the Great Nirvana.

The first thing Zhan Bei did when he came back from the county seat was to take Zhan Xiaotong to the town, and Zhan Xiaotong's mother Ou Yue also came from Haizhou to live for a while, and she would take Zhan Xiaotong with her when she went back.

The chicken farm has been written on the Zhang family's schedule, and after Zhan Bei came forward, a large number of cumbersome approval procedures have become surprisingly efficient, and it has been determined that the area across the road adjacent to the sand pit has become the location of Zhang Yu's new chicken farm.

Code words, chat with readers in the group, consult the planning of the new chicken farm, and by the way, flip through the novels of your own taste in the starting point library.

Although it is written according to the model of the great nirvana in the previous life, Zhang Yu will also incorporate some of his own ideas, and there will also be times when the code word has no state, just like in the previous life, Zhang Yu likes to listen to the song and slowly find the state, and today he met Kak again.

After closing his eyes and resting for a while, Zhang Yu was awakened by the sound of QQ's Didi, it was an unfamiliar message to add friends, from the readership, it was a person with a nickname Z, click to agree.

After a few minutes, the friend who had just added himself sent the first message, "It's Keda, hello!", which sounded very reserved.

Zhang Yu recalled the active people in the group, but there was no "Hello" called Z. ”

"That's right, it's Keda, after I read the Great Nirvana, I also had the idea of writing a novel, I wrote a little bit recently, but I always feel a lot worse, so I want you to help me take a look, where is it not written well, are you free?"

This is another person who has been affected by the Great Nirvana, Zhang Yu suddenly became interested, "Then you send it over, I'll take a look." ”

Z quickly sent the document "Reborn Super Student", wrote more than 30,000 words, before the text, is a short introduction, a young man named Wang Chao, just dismissed by the company, because of a sudden car accident, through time and space, back to ten years ago, with similar ability to teleportation.

Very novel subject matter, but it can be seen from the content of the chapter that the author is just a novice who has just come into contact with the Internet "I read this novel, the theme is very good, enough to attract readers, and there is no problem with the introduction, but the text is very problematic, the plot drags on, the first chapter is very serious, more than 3,000 words, all of which are describing how Wang Chao took the blame for his boss, but was abandoned by his boss, and it was not until the end of the chapter that Wang Chao was written to be mentally stimulated and drove at speed, and there was a car accident, and the previous content can be removed.

The first chapter can start like this, "Why are you doing this, Mr. Liu, others don't know what's going on, don't you know?" Wang Chao slammed on the desk angrily, until this moment, he finally saw the true face of the fat man in front of him.

Just a day ago, the man who was his boss had sworn that he would protect himself, but at today's meeting, he put all the blame on himself.

"Xiao Wang, listen to me......" Liu Qingnan wanted to say something, but Wang Chao smashed his face with a folder, "Say your motherfucker, Lao Tzu will kill you sooner or later!"

The anger was suppressed in Wang Chao's heart, and the foot that stepped on the accelerator unconsciously exerted force, and the car accident happened in this situation......

Next, you can get to the point, the protagonist is reborn back ten years ago, and then slowly leads to the ability of teleportation obtained by Wang Chao.

Zhang Yu savored the content in the document, and the text was very beautiful, "Your writing skills are very good, but you got one thing wrong, the online text is not prose, so the first thing you do is to write an outline, and transform your idea into a general story framework, the relationship between the outline and the content of the text is the skeleton and flesh and blood, only by doing a good job of the skeleton, can the story be smoother, the plot is more compact, and the characters are more distinct." ”

made his own comments on Z's novel, and Zhang Yu sent another sample outline he made and sent it over.

"Thank you, it's Keda, I was very nervous, but I suddenly found you, I didn't expect you to look so carefully and give me so much help. ”

"You're welcome, if you have any questions, you can continue to ask me. Zhang Yu opened his bookshelf and clicked into the urban novel "My Youth Reborn", which had been put on the bookshelf two months ago.

"Okay. ”

In two months, "My Youth Reborn" has only been updated with more than 100,000 words, and there are only more than 100,000 clicks, the last update was three days ago, and like most online writers in this era, this is called Zhi Shi is just writing novels as a part-time job.

Click to enter the author's background, Zhang Yu created a new volume, named those novels that feel good, "Recommend a novel, "My Youth Reborn", the same theme as the Great Nirvana, the following is the introduction 'Facing unemployment after graduation, Lin Hao was very unlucky, and even more unlucky was struck by a sudden lightning, fortunately he did not die, crossed time and space, returned to the era of high school, reincarnated as a person, studied hard, and went up every day. It's been nearly three months, only updated more than 100,000 words, although the speed is slow, but the content is very exciting, is the guest thinks it is good, has been added to the bookshelf, here to recommend it, statement: just recommend this novel, any force majeure consequences, is not responsible for the guest. ”

After revising the content of the chapters and making the outline, Z found Zhang Yu again, asked for opinions, looked at the revised content, Zhang Yu had a feeling of amazement, the one sitting opposite his computer had a high talent, compared to the previous prose novel that couldn't even get forty points, the revised content can be scored to eighty-five points, the outline has more than 10,000 words, the main characters, the main plot, each volume is written very clearly.

"If it's really your first time writing an online article, I have to say that you are really a genius, I can't believe that the previous and current content was written by you, and the current content can get eighty-five points, there is no big problem. ”

Z's mood was very excited, "Really, it's Keda, then I can upload chapters?"

Zhang Yu closed the document and replied, "I suggest you save a little chapter and then upload it to the website, otherwise when your thinking is stuck, you will be blind, send me the link after the review is passed, and then go to the show." ”

"Okay. ”

Click to enter "My Youth Reborn", the author has updated the latest chapter, Zhang Yu's recommendation is effective, the data is not skyrocketing, but it is also a geometric increase.

The idea in his heart gradually became clear, and Zhang Yu's heart was also very excited, the ten years of experience helped him a lot, and it was not just a step ahead in the online article.

Zhangjiaxin's chicken farm project has begun to be implemented, Zhang's father has been contacting the town's bank for loans, and has also begun to look for the location of the chicken farm, and finally chose the place in the previous life, which is the intersection of several nearby villages, and in a few years there will be a provincial road running through.