He Tingting's stomach was growling with hunger, he didn't feel anything at first, but when he was urged by Lin Lingling, he was really hungry, so he hurriedly put down his pen, took a book to cover what he had written, and got up to go out to eat. Pen | fun | pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 ｉｎｆｏ

After eating, He Tingting immediately entered the study again and continued to write.

After writing this article, He Tingting felt that he was still unsatisfied, and wrote about Shen Guoqing and Shen Qilao'er, the father and son, and she also wrote what Shen Guoqing once said that his mother went to the doctor with his bare feet on his back in the cold moonlight in the winter.

When it was time for dinner, He Tingting came out to finish dinner, and hurriedly went into the study to continue writing.

He Xue, who came back from the countryside with the leader, already knew from Lin Lingling that his daughter was abnormal today, and he was afraid that his daughter would feel uncomfortable in her previous life because of the little girl's incident, so he planned to go into the study to enlighten his daughter.

When I entered the study, I saw my daughter looking fanatical, holding a pen and writing something quickly, her eyes were red, and she seemed to be deeply moved.

He Xue could see at a glance that it was the feelings that arose with the characters' encounters during the creation, not simply sadness, so he stood for a while, retreated, and did not come forward to disturb.

At ten o'clock that night, He Tingting vented all his feelings in words, and with a little excitement, he took the two manuscripts to He Xue, "Dad, look at how I write, whether it is true enough." If I can, I'll follow my second brother's example. ”

He Xue took a stack of manuscript paper with a little surprise and nodded, "Dad, let's look at it now, Tingting will take a bath first." ”

He Tingting nodded, went back to the room to find clothes, went to take a shower, and couldn't wait to go into the study to find He Xue, waiting for He Xue's comments.

"The truth is very good, this section is very exciting with music and sadness, and it is also very good to set off the side of the environment here. However, the sense of heaviness of the text needs to be strengthened, and there are still these paragraphs, which need to be described from the side with some characters...... There's foreshadowing in front of this, and it's a waste that you didn't write later, and in the end, the whole emotional tone should be coherent......"

Although He Xue himself does not write, he has a very good set of comments, and he said the advantages and disadvantages of He Tingting's writing, which not only encouraged He Tingting, but also pointed out her shortcomings.

He Tingting took the pen and quickly wrote down what He Xue said, and then he was eager to revise the draft immediately.

He Xue looked at the time and said, "Let's revise it tomorrow, and think about how to change it tonight." ”

Although He Tingting was eager to revise it immediately, she would never disobey He Xue, so she nodded and went back to sleep with a head full of revisions.

The next morning, she woke up early, went to water the flowers after washing, and watered the flowers and plants in the Hakka house and the back mountain before coming back for breakfast. After breakfast, I hurried into the study to revise yesterday's two manuscripts.

When revising, He Tingting also went to the study to turn over a number of books, including classical masterpieces, modern literature, and contemporary literature in the new period, as well as various scar literature and reflective literature that are now popular.

After all, the lack of heaviness in the text is her weakness, which cannot be made up for in a short period of time, and she can only plan to look at similar works when revising, to see how others have written, and to take advantage of it for the time being.

Of course, she didn't copy it, nor did she modify the sentence for her own use, but referred to how the famous artist narrated, what techniques were used, and how to write a sentence wonderfully. Fortunately, she has a very good memory, and she remembers all the books she has read very well, and it is not difficult to find and refer to them.

He Xue was at home today, and He Tingting didn't revise it until the evening, showed it to He Xue, and then wrote down the revisions proposed by He Xue again, and planned to revise it according to He Xue's opinions the next day.

In this way, it took four or five revisions, and after a week, it was finally finalized.

He Xue took the manuscript that He Tingting had revised many times, looked at the writing that still looked a little immature, and nodded with satisfaction. In fact, he can help He Tingting change it very well, his writing is sophisticated, and his rhetoric is gorgeous, but after all, that is his level, not He Tingting's, so he did not modify it in the end, but allowed such obvious shortcomings to exist.

"Dad, I'm ready to contribute." He Tingting, who had devoted himself to a week's hard work, clenched his fists and said.

He Xue nodded, "Try it, our Tingting is very good." ”

He Tingting nodded happily, took out the manuscript paper, and carefully copied the two short stories on the manuscript paper, and copied it for most of Saturday and Sunday, plus three more nights, and then copied it.

After the novel was copied, He Tingting took out the envelope and stamps from his home, put the written manuscript into it, calculated it, wrote the mailing address as He Xue's unit, glued the stamps and envelopes, sandwiched them in the language book, carefully put them in his schoolbag, and planned to throw the letter into the green mailbox by the way when he went to school tomorrow.

Early the next morning, He Tingting stood in front of the green mailbox, solemnly pinched the letter, touched the green mailbox again and again, and then carefully threw the letter with high hopes into it.

Seeing her solemn appearance, Liu Jun couldn't help asking, "Tingting, what did you send?" ”

"It's a secret, I'll tell you later." He Tingting's face turned red and he was a little embarrassed. It's too shy to submit such a thing.

Seeing her blushing, Liu Jun suddenly became curious, "You tell me, I promise not to tell others." ”

He Tingting shook his head, "No, I can't say it now." "If you do, it will be humiliating if the submission fails.

Before Liu Junxi could say more, a girl passed by He Tingting and sneered, "Hmph, it's definitely not a good thing, it must be written for a man." ”

He Tingting was furious, and recognized that the female classmate Fu Ya was in his class, and she usually looked like she was not used to wearing beautiful clothes, and she muttered secretly, very annoying, and at this time, seeing that she was still slandering herself like this, he shouted at her, "You only write to other men every day, shameless!" ”

This is the school gate, and it is the peak time for school, many people pass by, He Tingting shouted in his voice, and everyone looked over.

The female classmate Fu Ya was ashamed and angry, and her face turned red, "You are talking nonsense, I don't have ......"

"If you don't, why do you say I'm writing to a man when you see me sending a letter? You must be writing to men every day, and when you see others writing it, you think that others are ......doing the same" He Tingting was angry in his heart, and he was very justified when he said it.

She actually doesn't quarrel, this time is the same as the last time she quarreled with Zhang Dandan, it's all a way, very old-fashioned.

It's a pity that the current people are simple, and girls are generally thin-skinned, Fu Ya didn't know how to refute, so she just blushed and said with red eyes, "You talk nonsense, I don't have ......"

Liu Jun saw her bullying He Tingting, and he had long looked at her unpleasantly, and when he saw her, he said, "I saw it, you wrote a letter to a man." ”

"Wow......" Fu Ya saw that she couldn't tell clearly, so she cried with a wow.

He Tingting saw her crying, and he didn't have much sympathy in his heart, this female classmate was so annoying, she should be bullied like this.

This matter went to the head teacher Teacher Li, and He Tingting went to Teacher Li to explain the matter and the matter, and finally said,

"Teacher Li, I didn't mean to wronged her, I just wanted her to know what it was like to be wronged. I only sent a letter, and she didn't know anything, so she wronged me for sending it to a man and ruined my reputation. Moreover, she usually likes to speak ill of me behind my back, which is more annoying than the long-tongued woman in the village. ”

Fu Ya hated it very much in her heart, but when she saw that He Tingting was willing to say that she had wronged her, she didn't dare to refute it much, but just explained aggrievedly why she said that, "She usually likes to play with male classmates, and she takes Liu Jun's car to and from school every day, and I saw her send a letter, so I said that......"

"Uncle Liu, my brother's uncle, is a good friend of my father, and when he saw that my house was big, he rented my house. Brother Jun and his uncle live in my house, like my brother, why can't I take his car to and from school? Don't you usually talk to your brother? ”

He Tingting glanced at the female classmate and said solemnly.

Teacher Li figured out the reason, criticized Fu Ya, and asked Fu Ya to apologize to He Tingting, so the two went back.

He Tingting thought that this matter was over, but he didn't expect Liu Junxi to beat up several male classmates one after another, and also reported several female classmates who wrote love letters to boys, including the annoying Fu Ya.

Fu Ya's several female classmates cried and shouted, saying that they had never written love letters, and the head teacher, Mr. Li, took a pair of handwriting, knowing that several female classmates were framed, so he checked the handwriting in the class.

As a result, I checked it out, but I didn't find the murderer.

However, the reputation of those girls has been damaged to a certain extent, because people only pay attention to the big news that broke out at the beginning, and rarely pay attention to the subsequent development.

Fu Ya's several girls were wronged, and they wanted to cramp and tear apart the bones of the person who framed them, and after a little discussion, they all sadly decided that Liu Junchu, who reported it, was the one who framed them, and after a violent dispute, they reported it to the head teacher, Mr. Li.

But when it comes to identifying the handwriting, Liu Junchu's handwriting doesn't match. And this move also annoyed Liu Junxi, he was particularly angry and said that he asked Fu Ya and a few girls to be careful after school, so scared that Fu Ya and the others didn't dare to say anything, and the heart that was a little hazy and good was broken into scum, and they all took a detour when they saw him.

It was at this time that He Tingting knew that the dispute with Fu Ya had changed as it was rumored, and it became that she was wrong, but because the family had money, Mr. Li deliberately helped her in order to please her family!

Even Zhou Youlan, who was good friends with her, and other female classmates thought so in their hearts!

He Tingting knew the truth, a mouthful of blood almost didn't spurt out, and he really understood what it meant to be terrible, and he couldn't say anything about suffering.

It's obviously the fault of that female classmate Fu Ya, but because Fu Ya is a vulnerable group and her family conditions are good, it becomes her family who is forced by power!

(To be continued.) )