Old Man Liu saw that He Tingting kept his head down and drank milk tea, and couldn't help but tease her again, "Is Tingting very thirsty?" Let's go and order another cup of milk tea......"

"Tingting doesn't have a big appetite, one cup is enough......" Liu Jun was afraid that He Tingting would be really annoyed, so he opened his mouth to relieve the siege, and at the same time pinched He Tingting's hand, signaling her not to be nervous, and then changed the topic, "Grandpa, didn't you say that you wanted to ask Tingting Xiaozhen?" It's the right time. Pen ~ Fun ~ Pavilion www.biquge.info"

Old man Liu saw that his future granddaughter-in-law was bullied by himself, and his grandson helped to relieve the siege, so he nodded with a smile, "Then grandpa will ask for advice......

Speaking of the area she was familiar with, He Tingting's nervousness disappeared, she sat up straight, raised her head, and said with a smile, "Grandpa is too polite to talk about asking for advice." Grandpa asked me, if I knew, I would have answered my grandfather's question honestly. ”

Xie Wanqing saw the three of them chatting happily, only sat on the side and didn't speak, and then saw that she was drinking coffee, and the three of them were all milk tea, as if she had really been squeezed out, and her heart was even more uncomfortable.

Old Man Liu asked He Tingting a few questions, chatted for a while, and then said with a smile, "What a good boy, his knowledge is very solid." When you have time, come to the house to play with you, and grandpa has a few tablets waiting for you to solve together. ”

"If you have time, you must bother ......" He Tingting agreed with a smile, but he made up his mind that he would never go. Seeing that this old man was already so nervous and went to his house, she probably couldn't even speak.

After checking out, He Tingting wanted to go to the bathroom a little, so he excused himself and went to the bathroom with his bag.

When I came out to wash my hands, I saw that Xie Wanqing was also washing her hands.

He Tingting hesitated for a moment, didn't say hello, and washed his hands.

But I heard Xie Wanqing say unhappily, "I really think highly of you, you actually notified Jun Chu and asked him to bring the old man." ”

"I didn't." He Tingting shook his head and retorted, "I can win against you myself, where do I need to find help." ”

Although she is not an expert in quarreling, she is reasonable and well-founded, and she can definitely overpower Xie Wanqing!

Xie Wanqing looked at her smug little appearance, her heart was unhappy, and she sneered and said, "Can you win me?" I don't know who it is, I was so nervous that I couldn't speak, and I kicked the wrong person. ”

"You-" He Tingting was angry.

Xie Wanqing suddenly had the illusion of recovering a city, and her heart was extremely comfortable, so she turned around and went out.

He Tingting stared at her back, thought back to her face, and muttered in his heart, why do you look at it now, and feel that Brother Jun Chu is a bit similar to her......

Out of the café, Old Man Liu proposed to let Liu Jun send He Tingting, He Tingting remembered that He Xuanlian was not far away, so he hurriedly excused himself, saying that his third brother would come to pick him up.

Liu Junxi was not worried that He Tingting would go alone, so he said, "I'll send you to find the third brother." ”

He Tingting nodded, said goodbye to Old Man Liu and Xie Wanqing, and went to find He Xuanlian with Liu Junxi. After finding it, she was worried that Old Man Liu and Xie Wanqing were in a hurry, so she didn't stick too much, and hurriedly urged Liu Jun to go back.

After arriving at the hotel, He Tingting didn't dare to say that he was choking up with Xie Wanqing, but only said that he had fully exchanged opinions, and then Old Man Liu came.

When He Xuanqing and He Xuanlian saw He Tingting's face, they knew that she definitely didn't suffer a loss, so they didn't ask more.

At around seven o'clock in the evening, He Tingting received a call from the fourth uncle.

After the routine greetings, the fourth uncle said with a smile,

"Tingting, Xiufang and Xiumei told me, I followed you to see the world this time and learned a lot. They said they wanted to stay with you in the future and learn more. The fourth uncle thought that with your status in the literary world, this is not a difficult thing, so I hope that you can take two more sisters out to see the world in the future. ”

He Tingting wanted to laugh on the spot, listening to what the fourth uncle said so lightly, she thought she was calling her sister to take her two younger sisters to increase her knowledge. But the fact is that it is impossible to ask her cousin to take her cousin to learn more.

This clearly made her take He Xiufang and He Xiumei, who didn't know anything, into the circle of literati, but she would calculate.

Thinking so, He Tingting cleared his throat, "Fourth uncle, it's not that I don't want to, but my family is in the south, so it's basically impossible to come to the capital often to participate in this." I thought that instead of wasting my time waiting for my two cousins, I should let them find something suitable to do. ”

"You can often come to the capital to play, the fourth uncle told you that although Pengcheng has also developed now, compared to the capital, the gap is still obvious. If you want to develop in the future, you need to be active in the capital, after all, it is also the capital of the country, which is different from other places. Besides, the eldest and second are also here, and you are here, which is equivalent to visiting them. The fourth uncle continued to persuade.

He Tingting didn't bother to persuade again, so he just said, "Let's talk about it." But I won't come to the capital anytime soon, so the fourth uncle will help the two cousins think of another plan for him, so as to save the last time. ”

The fourth uncle sighed, "Then you are here, try to bring your two sisters with you." Our two families are very close and have to support each other. ”

He Tingting wanted to laugh even more when she heard it, when she and her parents came to the capital, the fourth uncle didn't think that it was a family, but tried every possible way to deceive her family's things. It's hilarious that such a person is now talking to him about his family.

Hearing He Tingting's silence, the fourth uncle changed the topic again, "I heard that you are very familiar with Liu Junchu of the younger generation of the Liu family?" It's okay tomorrow, bring him to our house to sit down. Your parents are not here, the fourth uncle is your elder, and he can help you greet him. ”

He Tingting couldn't listen anymore, "Fourth uncle, I made an appointment with the second brother and the third brother to go to the northeast tomorrow to see the snow, and I don't have time." ”

"What? What are you doing running that far? It is also snowing in the capital, so I am optimistic about it in the capital. The fourth uncle persuaded that he was very eager to entertain Liu Junchu and then get on the relationship with the Liu family.

He Tingting didn't want to talk nonsense at all, and said urgently, "Hey...... My second brother called me, fourth uncle, I'll call you again when I'm free. Goodbye-" After saying that, he hung up the phone immediately.

Putting the eldest brother aside, He Tingting went to He Xuanlian and He Xuanqing, and told the two of them the words of the fourth uncle.

"Leave him alone, just deal with it now." He Xuanlian didn't even want to entangle with the fourth uncle's family, so he immediately ordered so.

He Tingting nodded, put the matter aside, and began to ask about tomorrow's preparations.

Early in the morning of the second day, He Tingting, He Xuanqing, He Xuanlian and Liu Junxi set off north together and went to a small town in the northeast to see the snow.

He Tingting and He Xuanlian saw such a thick layer of snow for the first time, and they were so happy that they rolled on it, and they also built a lot of snowmen. As for the birch forest covered with snow, it was also walked by the two of them.

Liu Junxi and He Xuanqing are both photography enthusiasts, and they brought a lot of film, but they actually finished shooting all the film here, and they heard He Tingting say that they still wanted to shoot, so you can imagine how much the scenery makes them linger.

In the Northeast, He Tingting received several phone calls, one from the eastern neighbor, saying that he was discussing the script with her.

In this regard, He Tingting was very surprised, she thought that Donglin was just polite when she said that, but she didn't expect him to call, obviously he really had this thought.

He Tingting knew that he was not good at the script, and he was once told by He Xuanlian that the plot was very poor, so he politely refused, "I don't have much research on the script, and I guess it will disturb your work if I go, so I thought, I still don't go." ”

"What's that, we couldn't even write when we were kids, and now we can't write poems and publish books? As long as you are willing to learn, there is nothing that you will not do. You're so young, it's good to learn more, and my script has something to do with Pengcheng, so you can give me reference when you come. "The east neighbor continues to invite.

When He Tingting heard him talk about Pengcheng, it was difficult to refuse, and he made an appointment to contact him when she returned to the capital.

Most of the other calls were also to meet with her, including two screenwriters and directors, both of whom said that they had a good book in their hands, and asked her to refer to it to see if they could make a movie and find someone to invest.

He Tingting didn't understand this, and he politely refused, but he couldn't stand the other party's attitude was very sincere and enthusiastic, so he had to say that he was free to meet them when the time came.

After playing for a few days, He Tingting and his party returned to the capital.

The day after arriving in the capital, He Tingting made an appointment to meet Donglin and read his script.

After reading the script, He Tingting exclaimed, "It's so well written, you still said that you asked me for advice, which made me so embarrassed that I didn't dare to meet people." "She really has no talent in screenwriting, although she bought the book in advance and read it, but this time she saw the script of Donglin, and she was still very amazing.

Donglin waved his hand, "Don't be arrogant, you grew up in Pengcheng, which is reforming and opening up, and you have seen all kinds of people, as long as you are willing, you can write a lot of good books." In fact, writing is to tell your own life experience and describe the joys, sorrows and sorrows of the people around you, and you are uniquely blessed in this regard. ”

After he finished speaking, he handed over a few more pieces of manuscript paper and said with a smile, "But today, you will do me a favor first." I want to add a plot in Pengcheng in this script, here's a framework, you help me see if it's appropriate, mainly to see if people's thoughts and behaviors are in line with the thoughts and behaviors of Pengcheng people in the reform and opening up. ”

He Tingting said as he took it, "I don't understand very well, I can't say why I came then, don't be disappointed." ”

"Don't be disappointed, just watch it first." Donglin said with a smile.

He Tingting looked down and finished reading it in about twenty minutes, and then picked up the script that was almost finalized and read it again, so it was dark soon.

He Tingting put down the manuscript paper, "I don't think there is any need to add this plot, the original plot is full enough, and something can be added." But I don't recommend adding the plot in Pengcheng, because it seems too deliberate, and it seems to be deliberately mixed with various elements. It's too comprehensive, but it seems distorted and blurred to the point. ”

Donglin nodded thoughtfully, and asked again, "Then what do you think is better if you don't add the plot of Pengcheng?" ”

"You can add another side of the protagonist's humanity, at present, I think the image of the protagonist is a bit thin, and he has not completely gotten rid of the image of tall, big and complete in the past. In my opinion, the revolutionary predecessors of the past were tall, big, and complete, but for the sake of dramatic tension and character image, we should set up more humane characters. He Tingting said his understanding.

People are complex, and many people around her have good sides and bad sides. For example, Xie Qingqing, who she doesn't like very much, also has a shining point like filial piety. Like Wang Yamei, she has all kinds of shortcomings, but she is not a negative character. is as kind as Li Zhenzhen, she also has shortcomings, that is, protecting her shortcomings.

Donglin nodded, and said with a deep smile, "I originally wanted to write a positive character, and you have a point in saying that." So let's do it, I'll add some harmless shortcomings to him and design a wonderful plot. ”

Seeing that his opinion was adopted, He Tingting nodded happily, "Then I'll wait to read your masterpiece in the east." ”

"Hahaha, what a masterpiece, you're too good at talking." Donglin finished laughing, and said, "You said that you are not good at the script, you see, your opinion now is very good." ”

"That's what I said......" He Tingting said modestly. She is not modest when talking to her about perfumes, flowers, and interior design, and she has to be modest when talking about scripts.

Donglin laughed and discussed with her the addition of the plot.

When discussing this link, Donglin finally found out why He Tingting always said that she couldn't write a script, she did have a big deficiency in the design of the plot, and the most important thing is that she would add a plot that does not serve the story for the sake of the character image or writing.

Knowing this, Donglin specially explained this to He Tingting.

By the time He Tingting had roughly digested it, it was already ten o'clock in the evening, and He Tingting received several urging calls, and she had to thank Donglin again and again, and then went home.

He Xuanqing drove the car to pick her up, and trained her for a long time on the road, saying that she shouldn't stay so late, especially when a single woman is in a man's house.

He Tingting enjoyed He Xuan's avoidance of the lecture, and took advantage of He Xuanqing's breath to quickly explain, "It's not just Donglin who is at home, his wife is also ...... Also, I don't want to be so late, but before I know it, it's too late to discuss. You also know that it takes a lot of time to read a script. ”

He Xuanqing doesn't care about anything else, his sister is young and beautiful, but she can't stay late in someone else's house, especially with Liu Jun's constant advice when she went home, she said immediately, "In short, if you go out to meet people during the day in the future, you will have to come back at night." ”

He Tingting had no choice but to respond.

On the second day, she met with three people in one go, two screenwriters and one director, all of whom had scripts in their hands.

He Tingting knew that these people wanted to find Liu Junci to invest through her, so he didn't plan to be too polite, and said that he would take the script back to read, and if he thought it was appropriate, he would help them recommend investors, and then go back.

In the next two days, she met several writers and poets one after another, chatted and went back.

On the day of returning to Pengcheng, the weather in the capital was rarely clear, He Tingting, Liu Junchu and He Xuanlian flew back to the south by plane, got off the plane from Yangcheng, and then took a car back to Pengcheng.