Chapter 350 Can't Stop

Sun Yuanjie looked at Liu Changtian and said impatiently: "What are you coughing about! Don't affect me to read the manuscript!"

When Liu Changtian heard Sun Yuanjie's words, he was really angry. Pen @ fun @ pavilion wWw. ｂｉｑUｇE。 info But he also knows that Sun Yuanjie is a great writer, and he and he are grasshoppers on the same rope, if he falls out with this person, it will not be good for anyone.

Thinking of this, Liu Changtian let out a sigh of relief, suppressed the anger in his heart and said: "Teacher Sun, you have been watching it for almost two hours, can you take a break, tell me first, what do you think of this work, how do you feel about the writing of "Sanmao Wanderings". ”

Hearing Liu Changtian's words, Sun Yuanjie couldn't help but gasp. I thought to myself, how can I have been reading it for so long, how do I feel like I have just watched it for a while! This work is really well written, yes, compared with this author, my level is really far behind.

If this work is published, then I am afraid that no one will read my own "Robot Adventure" anymore, and everyone will definitely rush to buy this copy of "Sanmao Wanderings"! It would be a pity that such a good work would not be published. But if it is published, then my good days will be over.

Now the sales of "Robot Adventure" have declined a bit compared to the previous two years. If this "Sanmao Wanderings" is published, then my "Robot Adventure" will probably withdraw from the stage of history.

Thinking of this, Sun Changtian felt very nervous, he knew that the work in his hand was the opponent who drove him out of the children's literature stage. If he promised Liu Changtian to publish this "Sanmao Wanderings", it would be tantamount to ruining his future. I must not do this myself, I should not be a fool, and I must not make wedding clothes for others.

"Well, whose work is this, how can it be written so well! If only I had one-tenth of this person's talent. ”

Thinking of this, Sun Yuanjie looked at Liu Changtian and sighed and said, "Oh, I'm reading the manuscript too seriously! I'm sorry, I'll tell you now what I think of this manuscript." ”

"Okay, then you can say it quickly!" Liu Changtian hurriedly listened.

Sun Yuanjie put aside the manuscript in his hand, lifted his glasses and said: "President Liu, this "Sanmao Wanderings" is okay, this writing is not to say. The story is also very well arranged, and it is the best manuscript I have ever seen. ”

"Really, that's great, so we can publish this one right away. As soon as he heard Sun Yuanjie's words, Liu Changtian was relieved, and immediately said that he would publish this work!

"Wait!" Sun Yuanjie looked at Liu Changtian's smiling face, and immediately said: "President Liu, although this work is well written, I feel that it is better not to publish it." ”

As soon as he heard Sun Yuanjie's words, Liu Changtian's happy mood just now suddenly disappeared again.

"What do you say, it's good not to be published, then what did you just say that this work is very good, it's the best manuscript you've ever seen, what does that mean?"

At this time, Liu Changtian was a little angry again, I don't know what this Sun Yuanjie said about this work, while saying that this work is good, but on the other hand, he is not allowed to publish, you Wang Ba Lamb, what kind of medicine is sold in the gourd.

"I just said that this work is good, but there is a hard flaw in this work that cannot be ignored!" Sun Yuanjie said, and picked up the manuscript next to him again.

"What a hard injury, what a hard injury, such a good manuscript, what kind of hard injury. ”

Hearing Sun Yuanjie say this, Liu Changtian was even more confused.

"The background of this work is not very good. Sun Yuanjie suddenly said such a sentence.

When Liu Changtian heard this, he was very puzzled: "What do you mean, the background of the story is not very good, what's not good!"

At this time, Sun Yuanjie looked up at Liu Changtian again and said: "The background of the story of this work is to describe the affairs of the sea in old China. The biggest problem with the background of this story is that this era is far away from us. Not to mention the children of today, even our generation doesn't know much about that era!

But this "Sanmao Wanderings" tells the story of an orphan with the old society as the background, you say, how attractive is this kind of story! Children have no interest in the old society, they like some new things. Just like my famous work "The Adventures of Robots", the background of the story is completely placed on the high-tech foundation of the future, so that it will attract the attention of children even more! Like this "Sanmao Wanderings", does it not take into account the feelings of children at all! Such a work, no matter how well it is written, I am afraid that it will not be liked by children!"

Sun Yuanjie said his opinion. Of course, his opinion is just the result of his malicious slander of the work, and it can also be said that he is nitpicky and nitpicking, which is nothing to do!

"Oh, that's the case! Could it be that Mr. Sun feels that the background of this story will definitely affect the sales of this work!" President Liu felt that there was some truth when he heard Sun Yuanjie's words.

Of course, this kind of story background obliterates all the advantages of this work! If this work is not a work of children's literature, but a work of people and people, then it may be okay.

But the problem is that this work is a work of children's literature, and with such a story background, it is obviously a bit thankless.

I feel that from the perspective of writing, the author of this work is a person with writing skills. There's nothing to say about writing skills. But one of the key problems with this work is that the background of this story, if the background of the story can be replaced with modern rural life, it may also attract the attention of some children. After all, most children live in rural areas!"

This is Sun Yuanjie's evaluation of this excellent work "Sanmao Wanderings". It can be said that people did not criticize this work for being useless, but still gave a certain amount of praise. I just feel that if this work is published, it will be very risky.

"Mr. Sun, in this way, if this work is set in a different story, it will definitely be a good work of children's literature. As long as it is published, it will definitely be very popular in the market. ”

For Sun Yuanjie, Liu Changtian still respects him very much. How to say, Mr. Sun is an authority on children's literature, and if people feel that there are problematic works, if they are forced to publish, I am afraid that they will fall on their heels, so it is better to listen to Mr. Sun.

Now Liu Changtian thinks that although there are some problems with this work, if the author can revise it, it will not be a good work, as long as he publishes it, then there are two works that can make him a lot of money.

Sun Yuanjie listened to Liu Changtian's words, and said again: "It stands to reason that this is the case. It's just that after the author has revised it, I have to see whether this work can be published or not! If the revision is very good and there is nothing wrong with it, it can naturally be published. If there are still problems, then I'm sorry, I think it's better not to publish it. You have to know that modifying the story background of a work is a 'major operation'. Whether this 'major surgery' can be done well or not is related to the key to the success of this work. After all, changing the story background of a work is almost the same as writing a new one. It's not a show on stage, it's easy to change the background. ”

Listening to Sun Yuanjie's words, Liu Changtian felt unhappy again. Listening to Sun Yuanjie's words, even if this work is revised, I am afraid that there is no need to publish it!

Thinking of this, Liu Changtian looked at Sun Yuanjie with some unhappiness and said, "Then you mean that this work doesn't need to be modified, you just deny it." ”

Sun Yuanjie saw that Liu Changtian seemed to be a little unhappy, so he quickly changed his words: "President Liu, it's not what you think, I mean that although there may be some problems with this work after the revision, as long as it is not a big problem, I think it can still be published." ”

As soon as he heard Sun Yuanjie's words, Liu Changtian was happy again, he picked up the manuscript next to Sun Yuanjie and said to Sun Yuanjie: "Okay, I'll take this manuscript to the author and let him revise it again." ”

"Okay, then so be it! It's just that can you let me finish reading this manuscript first! I haven't finished reading it yet!" Sun Yuanjie looked at it, and Liu Changtian took away the manuscript beside him. Thinking of the plot he just saw, at a critical moment, he felt that there was still something unfinished!

"Teacher Sun, didn't you say that the background of this work is not very good? Why don't you let the author revise this work and then you can read it! In this way, you will look more comfortable. ”

As soon as he heard Sun Yuanjie's words, Liu Changtian scolded this guy in his heart again.

"Grass, Sun Yuanjie, Sun Yuanjie, your grandson, it's really bad! You guy is really, while saying that this work is not good, he is reluctant to take it away, what kind of person is this!"

"Hey, President Liu, don't say that, I want to know whether the author's revised work is good or not, then at least I have to finish reading the original work! If I haven't finished reading the original work, you can directly show me the author's revised 'new work', then how can I refer to the original work for comparison!"

Sun Yuanjie is not only a writer, but also a person with excellent eloquence, as soon as he said this, Liu Changtian had nothing to say.

"Come on, your grandson is very good-mouthed, I'm afraid of you. Thinking of this, Liu Changtian gave the manuscript in his hand to Sun Yuanjie again.

Sun Yuanjie looked at the manuscript that Liu Changtian had taken back into his hands, and he felt like a treasure.

"Okay, President Liu, that's it, I'll read the manuscript first! Tomorrow, I'll come back to you. ”

After Sun Yuanjie finished speaking, he quickly stood up. With the manuscript in hand, he walked out of Liu Changtian's office. It seems that he is afraid that Liu Changtian will regret it again, and he will have to return his manuscript.

"Okay, then you can read it quickly, and let the author revise it! Don't delay too long. Looking at Sun Yuanjie's hurried background, Liu Changtian also confessed again.

"Okay, I got it. Sun Yuanjie walked towards the staircase in the distance, and agreed without looking back.

Looking at Sun Yuanjie's distant background, Liu Changtian shook his head.

"What's going on, what's going on with this grandson, while saying that Xu Hong's work is not very good, but he really wants to read other people's manuscripts, he is really a guy who can't be understood. ”

Liu Changtian scolded Sun Yuanjie in his heart and returned to the office. It's just that he doesn't have the heart to do anything else, just thinking about Sun Yuanjie's expression when he saw "Sanmao Wanderings" just now!

"Well, it seems that this "Sanmao Wanderings" is really well written, even Sun Yuanjie himself only wants to read it in one go! Now, I don't have to worry, this work will definitely be published. Sun Yuanjie will definitely agree, when the time comes, he will wait to make a lot of money!"

Thinking about the scene when Sun Yuanjie watched "Sanmao Wanderings" just now. Liu Changtian was still very happy, and thought that sooner or later this work would be published in his own publishing house, which was something that no one could stop.

Besides, Sun Yuanjie now took Xu Hong's work "Sanmao Wandering" back to his home, and then went into his study and closed the door. Doing nothing, this is watching this work of children's literature with relish.

For a whole afternoon, Sun Yuanjie was watching this work, and it wasn't until dinner in the evening that his wife asked him to eat, and he reacted.

Just thinking about the affection in the work, he didn't have the heart to eat at all. So let his wife eat by himself first, and he had to continue to conceive the plot!

Because Sun Yuanjie didn't want his wife to know the truth, after all, if he let his wife know that he was so fascinated by other people's works, wouldn't he laugh at him, a great writer, and the works he wrote were not written by a newcomer!

Sun Yuanjie's wife didn't think much about it. Because Sun Yuanjie really has such a problem! Often when he is eating, he has some plots in his head, so he doesn't want to eat, he just wants to write down this plot first, and after eating, he can write these plots into the content of several chapters in the work.

In this way, Sun Yuanjie didn't even eat dinner, and he didn't see it until eight or nine o'clock in the evening, and then he finished reading the whole story of "Sanmao Wanderings".

After reading it, Sun Yuanjie half lay on the bed, and then picked up a box of cigarettes from the bedside table next to him, and took out one of them and put it in his mouth. I picked up the lighter again and lit it, only then did I take a deep breath, and then spit out the smoke. (To be continued.) )