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The font of this volume belongs to the kind that makes him shine, and the block letters have a bit of the style of the book, and the combination is quite pleasing to the eye.

Especially compared to other students' fonts, there are not necessarily a few junior high school students who can write such good characters. Wang Yao appreciated it in his heart, so he had a bit of preconceived good feelings.

Just rush this font, even if the content of the essay is not well written, as long as it meets the point of the topic, more than 40 points will not be able to run.

But even if the font is written well, it is impossible for him to waste much time on this volume, Wang Yao began to look at the contents.

The title is "Juvenile China Says", there is nothing wrong with the idea of the composition, and then look at the content.

………… Or is it written in ancient texts?! A junior high school student has such a high level of literary literacy?!

However, the meaning is very easy to understand, Wang Yao suddenly felt that the way of only reading the beginning and the end was not suitable for this article, and he was ready to read it carefully.

"Today is over, let alone another day; This year is over, let alone next year. There is no short-hearted thing in the world that is more discouraged than the boss. In this person, too, and the desire to use the means of pulling the clouds, the work of returning to the sky, and the spirit of the mountains and the sea, can it be possible? ”

The more I read, the more excited I felt, Wang Yao unconsciously read it out in a whisper, this is clearly written by a literary master, how can it appear on a junior high school student's volume?!

However, this thought only flashed in Wang Yao's mind, and he wanted to continue to look down.

“…… If China dominates the universe and dominates the earth, it will command the honor of Gu Pan, but my youth enjoys it, and he is dying and ghosts are neighbors! He is indifferent to it, and it is still to be said; I didn't care about it, and I couldn't say anything. If the youth of the whole country is a teenager, then China will be the country of the future, and its progress will be immeasurable; If the youth of the whole country is also the boss, then China is the country of the past, and its demise can be waited for. ”

The more Wang Yao reads, the more serious he becomes, and his voice gets louder and louder.

"Wang ........." A teacher wanted to blame him for being too loud, but was quietly stopped by the team leader. Motioned not to disturb Wang Yao.

Free, hot-blooded, sonorous, domineering.

Although he is close to his age and is no longer a teenager, this article still excites his enthusiasm, who has no teenager?!

Wang Yao didn't notice that his room had been strangely quiet at some point, and the other teachers listened to him reciting this article with different eyes.

As Wang Yao's voice became louder and louder, the room became quieter, and even the old professor, who was the most knowledgeable and qualified to be the team leader, looked at him with brighter and brighter eyes, and his expression became more and more solemn.

"Therefore the responsibility today is not for others, but for my youth.

The wisdom of the youth is the wisdom of the country, and the wealth of the youth is the wealth of the country.

If the youth is strong, the country will be strong, and if the youth is independent, the country will be independent.

The freedom of the youth is the freedom of the country, and the progress of the youth is the progress of the country.

If the youth is better than Europe, the country is better than Europe, and if the youth is stronger than the earth, the country is stronger than the earth. ”

They were all unconsciously immersed in Wang Yao's excitement and fanaticism.

You don't need a warm tone, because it reads warm, it doesn't need too much skill, it doesn't need to be contextually rendered, and it is sonorous when you read it.

Since China is the leader of the earth, it will stand firm for thousands of years, this is the expectation and reality, and it is also the goal that their generation, the next generation, and the young people will always strive to achieve.

“。 The red sun is rising, and its way is bright; The river flows out of the subterranean flow, and the ocean is poured out; The hidden dragon soars into the abyss, and the scales and claws are flying; The milk tiger roars in the valley, and the beasts are terrified; The eagle falcon tries its wings, and the wind and dust are sucked up; Strange flower firstborn, the emperor; The cadres will be hairy, and there will be their mangs; The sky wears its blue, and the earth wears its yellow; Throughout the ages, there are eight wildernesses, the future is like the sea, and the future is long. I am young in China, and I am not old with the sky; I am a Chinese teenager, and there is no boundary with the country! ”

I am a young man in China, and I will never grow old with the sky.

I am a young man in China, and I think there is no border with the country!

"Good, well written!"

The loud volume of excitement almost scared Wang Yao into trembling, and there was also the sound of slapping the table.

When I looked back, it turned out to be the leader of the composition group, Yuan Zhenming, and I didn't dare to say anything.

This is an old qualification, not only is he the oldest among them and the most knowledgeable, but he is also one of the examiners of the exam papers in Beijing this time.

This person doesn't go to class very often, and if he hadn't been in a hurry to take the exam paper this time, he wouldn't have asked him to change the paper.

"Xiao Wang, what kind of article are you reading, which student's high school entrance examination essay failed?!"

As he spoke, he took the lead and came over, and the other teachers also put down the papers they were correcting and came over to take a look. Even the teacher who was not correcting the essay on the side attracted a lot, and before Wang Yao came back to his senses, there were a lot of people around him.

Professor Yuan took the lead, and he didn't seem to have the meaning of listening to him, so he directly picked up the test paper on the table and looked at it.

"Tianzhong talent, good words, good articles, good articles!" Yuan Zhenming nodded in admiration.

The others also nodded yes, not because they should follow the words of the original Zhenming, but because they also felt that this was indeed a good article.

Not to mention anything else, just this writing, a junior high school student writes in ancient Chinese, the sentences are smooth, the sentences are substantial, and the idea is also excellent, and the font has nothing to say, how can it not be praised?!

I'm afraid that the most learned teacher of them may not be able to write this article. But they didn't say anything else, they only admired the content of the article, and the rest naturally had to be spoken.

Yuan Zhenming admired it for a moment before he continued to speak.

"This article, I think the perfect score should be fine, right?!"

In fact, he still feels a little regretful, because he feels that this article is not complete, and many places are just a brushstroke, but it should be the word limit or the exam time is not enough, so this little author didn't write it completely, right?!

If it is written completely, I am afraid that the idea of this article can go up two levels, what a pity!

Yin Jiuxin said

Chapter ...... I haven't had much motivation lately. It is estimated that it is because of the fact that it is not at school at home. Ay.