Sitting silently in the activity classroom, Streamer and a few other people quietly waited for the arrival of the timber seat.

"I'm tired!" the timber didn't even knock on the door, so he opened the door and walked in.

Probably due to Hiratsuka Shizuna, seeing the timber seat coming in this way, the snow just sighed slightly, and didn't say anything.

Of course, it could also be because she couldn't say anything about it anymore.

"So, let me hear what you think?" After entering the classroom, he sat down directly on the vacant chair and looked at the others with a confident expression.

It's just that I don't know if it's deliberately arranged, but the chair he made is placed in a position that is just opposite under the snow.

Streamer couldn't help but start sympathizing with him.

I'm afraid that proud face will soon turn earthy.

"I'm sorry, I don't know much about that. Xue Xia suddenly looked at the wood seat apologetically and said.

Streamer suddenly had a bad premonition.

"No problem. I'd also like to refer to the opinions of mortals, just say it!"

Streamer wanted to know where his confidence came from.

"It's boring. It even makes people feel painful to read. It's boring beyond imagination. Under the snow, he suddenly began to say to the wood with a cold face.

Now the streamer finally understands the reason why he said that sentence under the snow just now.

I don't know what this thing you wrote looks like in the eyes of other people, and I don't understand the meaning of this kind of literature, so what I said afterwards is only my personal opinion.

That's probably what I wanted to say under the snow just now.

"Poof!"

The timber seat was hit hard by the sudden attack of the truth, and fell directly from the chair to the ground.

Using the chair as a support point, the timber seat staggered to his feet and struggled to sit back.

"Uh-huh. As a reference, please advise on what is boring. ”

Is this guy shaking M?

Streamer couldn't help but think so.

"First of all, grammar is a mess. Why is it always an inverted sentence?Do you use prepositions?Didn't your elementary school teacher teach it?" Xue Xia looked at the timber seat with a look of embarrassment, and his eyes were full of pity.

"Uh, ahem...... Well, that's because it's easier questions that make the reader feel relatable. "The timber seat is dead.

"No, I didn't feel at all kind, but I felt a pain in my stomach. "The streamer made a touch-up.

"Ahem!" Timber suddenly received a new wave of blows to his heart.

"At the very least, you have to write in Japanese, right? Also, there are a lot of misuses of those kana labels. And the following plot is nothing new and interesting at all, and the plot development is inexplicable, which is simply incomprehensible. There are also expository essays that are too long, too many verbose words, and so tiring to read. Also, can you stop reading the unfinished story to others? Let's learn common sense before writing about it. ”

Although there are a few points, the streamer feels very agreeable, but about the common sense, the streamer disagrees.

After all, common sense is also subject to change due to different people, circumstances, and worldviews.

"Wow——! "Wow" The timber seat leaned back directly, and let out a mournful sound with his feet facing the sky.

If you add some foam to the corners of his mouth, and then the spasm of his body is a little smaller, he will be like a person who is about to die.

"Isn't it about the same, such blind criticism is a bit of something. Biqigu suddenly persuaded Xue Xia to say.

However, in the eyes of the streamer, this is like saying to Xuexia, don't play him bad alone, I'm still waiting to make up for him.

"Although there is still a lot to be said. Hawkers, okay. Next it's Yubihama's turn. "It seems that under the snow, this is really a public trial.

Poor timber was probably used by her as a sacrifice for public execution.

Think about it...... Streamer found himself a little excited.

Let yourself see such a stomachache, this is the first part, and the streamer doesn't want to easily forgive the wood wood seat for this kind of 'pain'.

"Hey...... I......" Yubihama was a little nervous.

There's no way, last night she was the same as usual, she went to sleep after finishing her homework and watching TV, and she didn't watch that at all.

When I took it out before, the manuscript was as new as if it hadn't been turned over.

With tears in his eyes, he looked pitifully at Yubihama.

Yubihama awkwardly moved his gaze to the ceiling, and his mouth looked like he was thinking about what kind of language he would use.

"That's, that'...... You know a lot of obscure words. Yuhihama looked at the timber seat with an admiring expression.

God knows how much brains she had to put into coming up with it.

"Poof-" The timber seat was directly depressed.

After all, Yubihama's words were the same as telling him directly, 'I can't understand what you're writing at all, it's super boring.'"

"Hey, don't give him a fatal blow. Hikiya looked at Yubihama helplessly.

"Then, then, small business, you come!" Yubihama stood up directly, and jumped behind Hikiya as if he had to escape.

"Whew, huh. Ha, Hachiman. You can understand your words? You understand the world I described, the realm of lightness, right? This is a profound story that stupid people can't understand at all. He looked at his best friend expectantly, hoping that he could be affirmed by his best friend.

"Which work are you copying?" said in a super gentle voice what was the most terrifying thing in the world for Kizuza, which was tantamount to betraying his expectations.

"Poof!! Puff...... Poof. As if mad, the timber seat began to roll on the ground, and then after hitting the wall, he lay there motionless.

"You're really unsparing, meaner than me. Under the snow, he glared at Biqigu with a look of disgust.

"Well, then, the next thing is not to know the fire. Bikiya ignored the words under the snow and looked at the streamer.

Streamer nodded, then walked slowly to the side of the timber seat and smiled at him.

"I did read it, and I saw your determination and ...... Love ......" said the last word, and the streamer's face was slightly distorted.

"However, I don't think the content is important, the important interjection ......" Streamer smiled and said the most serious blow to the person in front of him who wanted to become a family.

"Tsk...... Ga ——!" Timber covered his head with a broken face.

For the timber seat, the place he is in now is tantamount to a hell of despair!