Zheng Ya nodded: "I have read it, there is a level, and I am very moved." ”

Yi He said softly: "I wrote five drafts of this long review and revised it eight times. ”

Zheng Ya was stunned for a moment, and said in his mouth: "Thank you, He He, you have a heart." ”

Yi He smiled and said: "Don't thank me, because I think that your book is a responsibility and dedication to history, and I must use one hundred and twenty efforts to protect you." ”

Zheng Ya was stunned, and after half a ring, he snapped his fingers in his right hand and said in his mouth: "I understand, I will work harder to write books in the future, but, lady, you don't know anything, once I work too hard, the book I write is not careful, and it will be really bad if I become a classic, I don't want to become a superstar in a low-key way, so on, lady, I dare to promise that I will use 100 points of effort to complete the creation of "Iron Harrier" in the future......"

Yi He snorted, blinked his eyes, and said, "My little husband is really good, so he is a good student." ”

It was not until this time that Yi He's body revealed the temperament of a university scholar, Zheng Ya instantly felt that he was in class, being taught by a professor, shaking his head, Zheng Ya said: "I have always been very well-behaved, people love me, cars see cars, beer see open bottle caps......"

Yi He smiled and nodded, still having the temperament of a great professor, not affected by Zheng Ya's gag at all, and said softly: "Actually, I also read the single chapter you wrote, and I was deeply touched by the statement in your torture heart, but now, after I saw you write a book, I found that you still didn't do your best, it seems that even if you torture yourself, the effect is limited!"

Zheng Ya suddenly felt sweaty, touched his nose and said: "This, in fact, you can't blame me, in the past, I have always written like this, and I feel that I write much better than other authors, so I developed this habit." ”

Yi He sighed and said: "A good book is often not written, but revised, and a good history needs to be carefully studied and carefully laid out, so that it can become a big tool, in my opinion, you don't have a detailed outline for writing "Iron Harrier", and there are not too many plot settings, you can write like this, it completely depends on your talent." ”

Zheng Ya said in a low voice: "That, lady, can you not be so serious, I suddenly felt a cold sweat on my back, my heart seemed to be beating a drum, and I felt like I had made a big mistake." ”

Yi He glanced at Zheng Ya, the expression on his face improved slightly, but he still said in his mouth: "You can write a good book, and you have a strong talent, but it may be because you have more studies, this book, you just want to write it wherever you want, in this way, the overall structure in the future may be really enough, or, I'll help you?"

Zheng Ya perked up, and said in his mouth: "Okay, you have a lady to help me, and suddenly, I felt the power of the whole body, and I felt that this book would definitely be able to break through the sky and become a peerless divine book." ”

Yi He smiled and said: ""Iron Harrier" from the beginning to the present, I have seen all the drafts, the part of the ancient tomb in front, we can not talk about it, because it is our real experience, you just recorded it with a pen, so, this part, there is no problem, there is no need to modify, but soon you are about to enter the Western Xia, so the era of this entry point, the story of the past, we have to seriously conceive, and finally need to be linked to the ancient tomb, which is called before and after the ......."

After Yi He spoke, Zheng Ya suddenly found a huge problem.

"Tang Dynasty Champion" was written very successfully, which made Zheng Ya full of confidence, but Zheng Ya ignored the fact that "Tang Dynasty Champion" does not need an outline, nor does it need to be seriously conceived, the reason is that the life and experience of the ancestors are hidden in their own Xingyue Bodhi, and they only need to write the story of the ancestor Jin Ge Iron Horse step by step.

But when this experience comes to "Iron Harrier", it is really not suitable.

The plot in the ancient tomb in front of me has not been thought about yet, because after all, it is also what Zheng Ya has personally experienced, and it only needs to be written.

However, after Yi He pointed out Zheng Ya's shortcomings and weaknesses, Zheng Ya suddenly discovered the fact that he really hadn't considered the layout and general story direction of "Iron Harrier" as a whole.

Thinking about this truth, Zheng Ya couldn't help but sweat all over, feeling extremely ashamed in her heart, she opened a single chapter to torture her heart, and she tortured it, but as Yihe said, she was not sincere enough and her intentions were not enough, in fact, her sense of responsibility needs to be further improved.

Sincerely, Zheng Ya stood up from the chair, faced Yi He, respectfully saluted an ancient scholar, and said aloud: "Thank you for the teachings of the lady, the lady's words and words, like the evening drum and morning bell, make Xiaosheng feel deeply ashamed and uneasy, and ask the lady to help me to jointly write "Iron Harrier" into a peerless masterpiece." ”

Some people say that they are like-minded, and some people say that they are confidants, and sometimes, only two people who have reached a certain level of cultural level can form a spiritual resonance and beauty on a specific occasion.

Zheng Ya's ancient rites suddenly made Yi He's eyes light up, Yi He's body took a few steps back, and according to Zheng Ya's scholarly ceremony, he bowed slightly, dragged out his voice, and said softly: "Husband, ......"

The two saluted each other and respected each other like guests, and suddenly, a heartfelt warmth and poetic feeling surged in their hearts.

After saluting, they looked at each other and smiled, and there was a special taste in their hearts.

Zheng Ya waved his hand at the computer and said, "Lady, please grind ink for me." ”

Yi He smiled and said, "Husband, please." ”

Zheng Ya came to the computer and created a new document, which was remarked as the outline of "Iron Harrier".

In the past, Zheng Ya didn't think about the problem seriously, but now, with Yihe on the side, compared with the major historical events and some history of the Tang and Song dynasties, he began to seriously lay out "Iron Harrier".

Soon, Zheng Ya and Yi He were caught in the plot, quickly pondering the outline, and getting carried away, the two discussed while constructing the structure, almost a whole day, the door did not come out, the second door did not step, before and after, four volumes were supplemented, and the outline of more than 10,000 words was added, in which a lot of foreshadowing was buried and a lot of history was expanded.

By the time everything was completely done, it was already the beginning of the day.

Zheng Ya and Yi He glanced at each other, laughed together, and by this time, the two had completed the outline, and then they suddenly realized that they hadn't eaten lunch yet.

The stomachs of both of them made a "cooing" sound at the same time, as if protesting to their respective owners: "I'm hungry and I'm going to eat." ”

The two couldn't help but smile at each other.

Zheng Ya exhaled a long breath in front of the computer, stretched her hands back, and said with a smile: "I'm hungry and growling, let's go cook." ”

Yi He stuck out his tongue and ran to work, and Zheng Ya also ran to the kitchen to help out.

Yihe didn't have a lot of ingredients at home, and both of them were hungry, so they came to have the fastest egg fried rice for dinner.

Maybe it's because I'm hungry, or maybe it's because I feel very good today, this simple dinner tastes particularly sweet, a big bowl of fried rice, Zheng Ya eats it all the way.

Yi He saw that Zheng Ya was eating very well, and his eyes showed a happy light.

After dinner, Yi He said in a low voice: "Zheng Ya, you have class tomorrow, you can go back tonight." ”

Zheng Ya laughed twice, and said in his mouth: "It's rare to come over once, how can I leave tonight, I'll go to school early tomorrow morning, hehe, I came in too much hurry yesterday, I didn't have time to take a mandarin duck bath, lady, I have to help me rub my back." ”

Yi He's face turned red instantly, he glanced at Zheng Ya, and ran to wash the dishes, but he acquiesced to Zheng Yalai's stay here.

Zheng Ya turned his head sideways, looked at Yi He who was washing dishes in the kitchen, smiled, sat in front of the computer again, clicked on the manuscript of "Iron Harrier" that he had written, and began to revise.

Today, Zheng Ya and Yi He fleshed out the outline together, so that Zheng Ya found that he could dig more pits and bury more foreshadowing in the previous storyline.

Yi He is right, since you want to write a book, you must use 120 points of effort to write better. Soon, Zheng Ya sank into the plot, went all out, and made the manuscript more streamlined, and, according to the plot, buried more highlights and foreshadowing.