Chapter 340: A Big Lesson

Lin Qiuyu looked at Xu Hong, just pointing out that the lyrics in the songs he wrote were not very good. Pen, fun, pavilion www. biquge。 info I want to hear what Xu Hong will say!

After Xu Hong looked at the song written by Lin Qiuyu, he said: "There is something wrong with your lyrics, but it just blindly shows Sanmao's miserable life, and does not show Sanmao's optimistic side."

My "Sanmao Wanderings" is by no means just a history of Sanmao's life's suffering, I am writing about a person in a special war environment, a person in order to survive, showing a fearless heroic optimism.

Although your lyrics are well written, they only show Sanmao's hard life, and do not show his confident and optimistic side, so it is naturally a little inappropriate for the story theme of "Sanmao's Wanderings" that I told. ”

Xu Hong read it once, and Lin Qiuyu's "Song of Sanmao" pointed out some problems to her.

"Xu Hong, what you said is so good, I said, how do I feel that I have sung it a few times, I just feel that there is something wrong with this lyrics, and now it is pointed out to the point. Okay, can you help me revise it again, I feel that no one knows Sanmao better than you. Only you can write Sanmao's most real joys, sorrows, and sorrows. ”

Lin Qiuyu seized this opportunity and wanted Xu Hong to help her revise the lyrics she wrote.

"Haha, okay, since you can afford me, I'll help you change it, but if you don't think it's appropriate, use your own original lyrics. So, I'll write you a song lyrics alone! ”

Xu Hong looked at the beautiful teacher, and looked up to him so much, he didn't shirk much, picked up a pen, and wrote on a piece of manuscript paper.

It may be that Xu Hong really knows too much about 'Sanmao'. In the past few days, he has been writing the story of "Sanmao's Wanderings", and he has already had an idea in his heart to write a poem to show Sanmao's life!

Before, he would be lying in bed at night, thinking about such a poem! It's just that he just thought about it for a while, typed the draft, and didn't write this poem.

Now, as soon as he heard Lin Qiuyu's words, he was also immediately interested, picked up a pen on the manuscript paper, and soon wrote a poem about 'Sanmao'.

After writing it, he read this poem to Lin Qiuyu.

When Lin Qiuyu heard this, she immediately sang happily. This singing, she feels that the lyrics and the music she arranged really match very well, it can be said that it is seamless, it is simply the work of a certain music master.

"Teacher Lin, you sing so well, at your level, I think it's about the same as a big singer!" Xu Hong has never heard Lin Qiuyu's singing! Before, he just felt that she was beautiful, but now as soon as he sings, he knows that this is really a stunner with a good voice.

"Haha, Mr. Xu, you are really joking, when will I become a big singer! I can't even dream of it! After Lin Qiuyu finished drinking, he listened to Xu Hong's words and smiled modestly.

"Hey, Mr. Lin, don't say that, as the saying goes, 'Where there's a will, there's a way'! It's man-made, and I dream of becoming a great painter! Why can't you dream of becoming a big pop star! Xu Hong said as he handed the manuscript of the poem to Lin Qiuyu and asked her to read it.

"Yes! People should have dreams! Now that I've listened to you, I'm going to have this dream too. I hope I can become a big singer in my life, and at that time, I will definitely help you and make you a great painter. ”

Lin Qiuyu was excited for a while, so she said such a sentence, but after she said it, she felt that there was something wrong with this, how could she assert that she would become famous earlier than Xu Hong! Perhaps, someone else succeeded before her!

After Xu Hong heard this, he didn't care, so he also said modestly: "Well, okay, I'll wait for your support." ”

Lin Qiuyu listened, and hurriedly corrected again: "Xu Hong, am I wrong, I should say that after you become a great painter, you want to help me, I feel that you are smarter than me, and you should succeed earlier than me." Lin Qiuyu looked at Xu Hong and added modestly.

"Okay, let's not talk about that, I hope we can succeed together." Xu Hong said, then leaned down in front of the desk again and began to write.

Lin Qiuyu also felt that if she was here, she would disturb Xu Hong, so she said embarrassedly: "Teacher Xu, thank you for helping me revise the lyrics, then I won't bother you." ”

Xu Hong joked again: "Teacher Lin, why do you want to leave!" As you sit here, I feel like I'm inspired to create! ”

Lin Qiuyu smiled again: "Don't talk nonsense, when creating, only one person can be inspired!" I'm here to distract you! ”

Lin Qiuyu said and stood up.

Xu Hong had no choice but to stand up.

"Alright, I'll send you out." Xu Hong said politely.

"No need, you can write a story quickly!" Lin Qiuyu also said politely. With that, he turned and walked towards the door.

Xu Hong also followed, looking at Qiu Yu walking away, and then returned to his office.

"Hey, what kind of person is this Lin Qiuyu, does he like me! No, it can't be, how can people take a fancy to me! People can't even look down on the director's son, so how can they fall in love with me, a wandering painter. ”

Now, Lin Qiuyu really said it right, even if Lin Qiuyu left, Xu Hong couldn't be quiet for a while, and he was still thinking about Lin Qiuyu's affairs.

"Hey, forget it, it doesn't matter what she thinks in her heart! I like Wen Sisi, can't I see one love one! I, Xu Hong, how can I be such a person! ”

Xu Hong held a pen in his hand, but he couldn't let himself enter the state of writing a story again.

There was no way, Xu Hong took out a box of cigarettes from the drawer of his desk, took out one and put it in his mouth, found a lighter and lit it.

To say that Xu Hong does not have any addiction to smoking, he does not smoke a cigarette. When he encounters something upset, he will also light a cigarette to calm his mood slowly.

This is a kind of skill, Xu Hong has developed such a 'good' habit when he was in high school and the Central Academy of Fine Arts before his death.

Now that Xu Hong has a cigarette in his mouth, after swallowing the clouds and spitting out the fog, he feels that his mood is much calmer, and he immediately enters the state of writing again. It seems that the inspiration that springs up of talent has burst out again.

Soon Xu Hong entered an excellent state of writing, and in just three hours, he actually wrote a manuscript of nearly 10,000 words. And after reading it, I feel that the writing is very good, almost in one go, and there is no need to revise it at all.

After writing the manuscript, he lay down on the bed and rested for a while, and when he looked at his watch, it was already time for dinner, so he got up and went to the cafeteria to eat.

While eating, I ran into Lin Qiuyu again. Only this time, she didn't take the initiative to sit with Xu Hong again, but just sat with Zheng Liming, it seems that she doesn't want to make this kid angry all the time.

Xu Hong also knew the relationship between Zheng Liming's kid and Lin Qiuyu, so he didn't want to have any unpleasant things between himself and him because of Lin Qiuyu, so he just sat in a corner after eating, and after eating quickly, he returned to the dormitory.

Thinking that there was a big class tomorrow, Xu Hong also went to bed very early.

Early the next morning, he got up, read the manuscript first, and then went to the classroom.

Today's class is not ordinary, not only the students of the first (first) class listen to his story, but also the other two students of the first grade will also come to listen to his story, as for the teachers, of course, there will be a lot of people coming. After all, there are already many teachers who also know that Xu Hong can tell stories, which has fascinated the students.

Therefore, many teachers also spontaneously came to listen to Xu Hong's story! As for which teachers will come, Xu Hong himself doesn't know. Because, he has just come to this school, and he doesn't know much about the teachers here, that is, he knows Lin Qiuyu and Zheng Liming, and even other teachers are not very familiar with them.

It's not class time yet, and the teachers and students haven't come yet. Xu Hong himself had already 'prepared' in the classroom first. After all, to tell the story of a lesson, he also has to prepare.

If you want to tell a story that is engaging, it is best to tell it off script. If you keep holding the manuscript, what is the difference between reading a textbook, and how can it be attractive!

The reason why Xu Hong's story is attractive is that when he tells the story, he basically doesn't read the manuscript, but sometimes when he thinks of some plots and feels that he can't get it right, he will meow at the manuscript.

Xu Hong liked stories like "Sanmao Wanderings" very much during his lifetime, and at that time, he could already tell such stories to the children of some relatives in his family.

Now reborn in this parallel world, he has not lost anything in his memory. In this parallel world, there is no story of "Sanmao Wandering". He is now recreating such a story, which can be said to be his own original work, and no one will fight with him for any copyright issues.

However, now that Xu Hong wants to tell this story to everyone, he must not only be familiar with it, but also be able to tell it at a level that can be told out of it.

This requires Xu Hong to be very familiar with the manuscript before speaking, and can almost memorize it, so as to ensure that when he speaks, there will be no situation where he cannot speak.

Now Xu Hong is looking at the manuscript in class, familiar with the plot inside, and he has some of the main storylines and scenes in mind.

Soon, the bell rang for class, and the students happily walked into the classroom, and they were also cheering when they saw Xu Hong.

"Great, I can listen to Mr. Xu's story again. Last night, I dreamed of playing with Sanmao! ”

The little fat man and Xu Hong are relatively familiar, and when they saw Xu Hong, they laughed again.

When the other children heard the little fat man's words, they also echoed: "I also dreamed, I also dreamed of catching hares on the prairie with Sanmao!" ”

Children are like that, they listen to what others say, and they all say it.

"Okay, everyone be quiet and listen to me." Xu Hong quieted everyone down, and then said: "Today's class is a little different, today is a big class, wait a while, there will be children from other two classes who will listen to my story with you, and teachers from other classes, you all have to cooperate with others, don't grab seats with the children, and when you see other children coming, take the initiative to ask them to sit with you." If you hear no, don't make a fuss in class, and be sure to maintain good classroom discipline. ”

When the students heard this, they all said loudly in unison, "Teacher Xu, we know." ”

"Well, we welcome other students and teachers." Just as Xu Hong was talking, he heard a lot of footsteps, and he knew that it was other classmates and teachers who were coming, so he asked the children to clap their hands to welcome them.

"Smack!" The children obediently began to clap their hands.

Now the children from the other two classes have also come to Class 1 (1). Now, this classroom was suddenly crowded with people. Fortunately, there are not too many students in this primary school, and there are only twenty or thirty children in one class. Otherwise, this classroom will not be able to hold it!

When the students entered the classroom, they saw that some of the teachers had also come in.

In the end, Xu Hong actually saw Zheng Liming and Lin Qiuyu walking into the classroom one after the other.

"Oh, Mr. Zheng is here too! It's a blessing to meet you, please sit in the back. Xu Hong saw that it was Zheng Liming, and said politely.

Zheng Liming looked at Xu Hong and smiled reluctantly, didn't say anything, just walked to the back of the classroom.

Xu Hong didn't care, looked at Lin Qiuyu again and said with a smile: "Teacher Lin, come to listen to my lecture again!" It's really giving me face. ”

"Teacher Xu, you're welcome, your class is good, we are naturally willing to listen." Lin Qiuyu also looked at Xu Hong and smiled.

"Okay, please sit in the back." Xu Hong made a gesture of please.

"Teacher Lin, you sit here, I have reserved a seat for you here."

Lin Qiuyu just wanted to sit in the back, but the little fat man immediately stood up again and grabbed Lin Qiuyu's jade hand.

"You kid, why did you me!" Lin Qiuyu saw that she was a little fat again, which made her very embarrassed.

"Teacher Lin, because I like you! You are the most beautiful female teacher in our school, and all the boys in our class like you. You sit beside me and make them envious. The little fat man said, just took Lin Qiuyu's hand, walked to his seat, and let Lin Qiuyu sit on it.

"Okay, okay, I'll just sit here!" Lin Qiuyu didn't want to worry about anything with this little fat man, after all, she was a child, and she couldn't be angry.

"Little fat man, why do you --- always make fun of Teacher Lin! I'm going to criticize you. Xu Hong glared at the little fat man and said. (To be continued.) )